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Editing for Errors Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common errors.

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Page 1: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors

Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common errors.

Page 2: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors

The errors range from majorto serious to minor.

Page 3: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors

A single major error will undermine your credibility.

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Editing for Errors

A single major error will undermine your credibility.

Major errors are relatively easy to find.

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Editing for Errors

One or two serious errors will undermine your credibility.

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Editing for Errors

One or two serious errors will undermine your credibility.

Serious errors are somewhat more difficult to find.

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Editing for Errors

Two or three minor errors will undermine your credibility.

Page 8: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors

Two or three minor errors will undermine your credibility.

Minor errors are the most difficult to find.

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Editing for Errors

Ready?

Page 10: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Major Errors

Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer – in fact, one of the best writer‟s I‟ve ever seen. So one day he told me the errors I was making were effecting our company‟s image and hurting it‟s reputation. He told me I needed to make less errors. So I‟ve decided to work on my writing skills, however, I know I have a long way to go.

Page 11: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Major Errors

Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer – in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s I‟ve ever seen. So one day he told me the errors I was making were effecting our company‟s image and hurting it‟s reputation. He told me I needed to make less errors. So I‟ve decided to work on my writing skills, however, I know I have a long way to go.

Page 12: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Major Errors

Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer – in fact, one of the best writer[ ]s I‟ve ever seen. So one day he told me the errors I was making were effecting our company‟s image and hurting it‟s reputation. He told me I needed to make less errors. So I‟ve decided to work on my writing skills, however, I know I have a long way to go.

Page 13: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Major Errors

Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer – in fact, one of the best writer[ ]s I‟ve ever seen. So one day he told me the errors I was making were [e]ffecting our company‟s image and hurting it‟s reputation. He told me I needed to make less errors. So I‟ve decided to work on my writing skills, however, I know I have a long way to go.

Page 14: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Major Errors

Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer – in fact, one of the best writer[ ]s I‟ve ever seen. So one day he told me the errors I was making were [a]ffecting our company‟s image and hurting it‟s reputation. He told me I needed to make less errors. So I‟ve decided to work on my writing skills, however, I know I have a long way to go.

Page 15: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Major Errors

Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer – in fact, one of the best writer[ ]s I‟ve ever seen. So one day he told me the errors I was making were [a]ffecting our company‟s image and hurting it[‟]s reputation. He told me I needed to make less errors. So I‟ve decided to work on my writing skills, however, I know I have a long way to go.

Page 16: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Major Errors

Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer – in fact, one of the best writer[ ]s I‟ve ever seen. So one day he told me the errors I was making were [a]ffecting our company‟s image and hurting it[ ]s reputation. He told me I needed to make less errors. So I‟ve decided to work on my writing skills, however, I know I have a long way to go.

Page 17: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Major Errors

Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer – in fact, one of the best writer[ ]s I‟ve ever seen. So one day he told me the errors I was making were [a]ffecting our company‟s image and hurting it[ ]s reputation. He told me I needed to make [less] errors. So I‟ve decided to work on my writing skills, however, I know I have a long way to go.

Page 18: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Major Errors

Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer – in fact, one of the best writer[ ]s I‟ve ever seen. So one day he told me the errors I was making were [a]ffecting our company‟s image and hurting it[ ]s reputation. He told me I needed to make [fewer] errors. So I‟ve decided to work on my writing skills, however, I know I have a long way to go.

Page 19: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Major Errors

Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer – in fact, one of the best writer[ ]s I‟ve ever seen. So one day he told me the errors I was making were [a]ffecting our company‟s image and hurting it[ ]s reputation. He told me I needed to make [fewer] errors. So I‟ve decided to work on my writing skills[,]however, I know I have a long way to go.

Page 20: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Major Errors

Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer – in fact, one of the best writer[ ]s I‟ve ever seen. So one day he told me the errors I was making were [a]ffecting our company‟s image and hurting it[ ]s reputation. He told me I needed to make [fewer] errors. So I‟ve decided to work on my writing skills[;]however, I know I have a long way to go.

Page 21: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Serious Errors

Although, I realize a person who works hard, eventually will succeed, sometimes I feel overwhelmed, disheartened, and I am discouraged. Between you and I, my boss, who is vice president of marketing makes an occasional error himself.

Page 22: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Serious Errors

Although[,] I realize a person who works hard, eventually will succeed, sometimes I feel overwhelmed, disheartened, and I am discouraged. Between you and I, my boss, who is vice president of marketing makes an occasional error himself.

Page 23: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Serious Errors

Although[ ] I realize a person who works hard, eventually will succeed, sometimes I feel overwhelmed, disheartened, and I am discouraged. Between you and I, my boss, who is vice president of marketing makes an occasional error himself.

Page 24: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Serious Errors

Although[ ] I realize a person who works hard[,] eventually will succeed, sometimes I feel overwhelmed, disheartened, and I am discouraged. Between you and I, my boss, who is vice president of marketing makes an occasional error himself.

Page 25: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Serious Errors

Although[ ] I realize a person who works hard[ ] eventually will succeed, sometimes I feel overwhelmed, disheartened, and I am discouraged. Between you and I, my boss, who is vice president of marketing makes an occasional error himself.

Page 26: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Serious Errors

Although[ ] I realize a person who works hard[ ] eventually will succeed, sometimes I feel overwhelmed, disheartened, and [I am] discouraged. Between you and I, my boss, who is vice president of marketing makes an occasional error himself.

Page 27: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Serious Errors

Although[ ] I realize a person who works hard[ ] eventually will succeed, sometimes I feel overwhelmed, disheartened, and [ ] discouraged. Between you and I, my boss, who is vice president of marketing makes an occasional error himself.

Page 28: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Serious Errors

Although[ ] I realize a person who works hard[ ] eventually will succeed, sometimes I feel overwhelmed, disheartened, and [ ] discouraged. Between you and [I], my boss, who is vice president of marketing makes an occasional error himself.

Page 29: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Serious Errors

Although[ ] I realize a person who works hard[ ] eventually will succeed, sometimes I feel overwhelmed, disheartened, and [ ] discouraged. Between you and [me], my boss, who is vice president of marketing makes an occasional error himself.

Page 30: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Serious Errors

Although[ ] I realize a person who works hard[ ] eventually will succeed, sometimes I feel overwhelmed, disheartened, and [ ] discouraged. Between you and [me], my boss, who is vice president of marketing[ ] makes an occasional error himself.

Page 31: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Serious Errors

Although[ ] I realize a person who works hard[ ] eventually will succeed, sometimes I feel overwhelmed, disheartened, and [ ] discouraged. Between you and [me], my boss, who is vice president of marketing[,] makes an occasional error himself.

Page 32: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Minor Errors

I went to college in the „70s. When I graduated on June 3, 1979 I thought I knew it all, but just yesterday my boss said, “Here‟s a style manual. Use it to do a first rate job on this report”. His approach is somewhat different than mine.

Page 33: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Minor Errors

I went to college in the [„]70s. When I graduated on June 3, 1979 I thought I knew it all, but just yesterday my boss said, “Here‟s a style manual. Use it to do a first rate job on this report”. His approach is somewhat different than mine.

Page 34: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Minor Errors

I went to college in the [‟]70s. When I graduated on June 3, 1979 I thought I knew it all, but just yesterday my boss said, “Here‟s a style manual. Use it to do a first rate job on this report”. His approach is somewhat different than mine.

Page 35: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Minor Errors

I went to college in the [‟]70s. When I graduated on June 3, 1979[ ] I thought I knew it all, but just yesterday my boss said, “Here‟s a style manual. Use it to do a first rate job on this report”. His approach is somewhat different than mine.

Page 36: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Minor Errors

I went to college in the [‟]70s. When I graduated on June 3, 1979[,] I thought I knew it all, but just yesterday my boss said, “Here‟s a style manual. Use it to do a first rate job on this report”. His approach is somewhat different than mine.

Page 37: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Minor Errors

I went to college in the [‟]70s. When I graduated on June 3, 1979[,] I thought I knew it all, but just yesterday my boss said, “Here‟s a style manual. Use it to do a first[ ]rate job on this report”. His approach is somewhat different than mine.

Page 38: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Minor Errors

I went to college in the [‟]70s. When I graduated on June 3, 1979[,] I thought I knew it all, but just yesterday my boss said, “Here‟s a style manual. Use it to do a first[-]rate job on this report”. His approach is somewhat different than mine.

Page 39: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Minor Errors

I went to college in the [‟]70s. When I graduated on June 3, 1979[,] I thought I knew it all, but just yesterday my boss said, “Here‟s a style manual. Use it to do a first[-]rate job on this report[”.]His approach is somewhat different than mine.

Page 40: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Minor Errors

I went to college in the [‟]70s. When I graduated on June 3, 1979[,] I thought I knew it all, but just yesterday my boss said, “Here‟s a style manual. Use it to do a first[-]rate job on this report[.”]His approach is somewhat different than mine.

Page 41: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Minor Errors

I went to college in the [‟]70s. When I graduated on June 3, 1979[,] I thought I knew it all, but just yesterday my boss said, “Here‟s a style manual. Use it to do a first[-]rate job on this report[.”]His approach is somewhat different[than] mine.

Page 42: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors:Minor Errors

I went to college in the [‟]70s. When I graduated on June 3, 1979[,] I thought I knew it all, but just yesterday my boss said, “Here‟s a style manual. Use it to do a first[-]rate job on this report[.”]His approach is somewhat different[from] mine.

Page 43: Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common ...Editing for Errors: Major Errors Here‟s the problem: My boss is a terrific writer –in fact, one of the best writer[‟]s

Editing for Errors

If you found all 15 errors,

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Editing for Errors

Congratulations!

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Editing for Errors

If you did not find all 15 errors,

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Editing for Errors

If you did not find all 15 errors,

keep working!