What have you learned from your audience
feedback?
From the video pitch we received mixed feedback The idea people thought could be potentially
good However, people thought as it would be produced
on a low budget They also thought that the storyline may be hard
to portray in the hybrid genre of rock and rap We also placed the video pitch on slideshare. This
allowed more people to view our video pitch and leave feedback on it
Video Pitch
We used Youtube and the social networking site Facebook
Youtube and Facebook is associated with a youth generation. The target market for our artist was the youth generation so it made sense to place the video in these areas
Youtube allowed us to receive feedback from anywhere in the world
By using Facebook, the feedback could be seen as biased as people who are friends with us were only able to see the video on Facebook
Youtube/social networks
The video is similar to others as it has a narrative as well as live performance in the video. Rap and some rock videos have flashing lights and existing rap artists video is shown below as well as our own interpretation of it
In what ways does my video remind you of other videos
Taio Cruz - Higher Own video
It is similar to other rap videos by the clothing the artist was wearing throughout the video
Snoop Dogg – A major rap artist
Own Video
The narrative could also been seen as similar to rap videos as it makes an association to violence
Eminem-Like Toy Soldiers shows a drive by shooting
Own video showing a fight
I feel the flashing lights and strobe lights used in the live performance was very effective
I feel the end sequence where the artist disappears also works well
The CCTV aspect of the video I thought worked very well. This was also an area the audience thought worked well
What are the strengths of the music video
Some scenes the performs were smiling and partially laughing. The song was serious so the smiling does not fit the song
The narrative of the song did not fully work as well as we had imagined
The camera and computer programs we used could be seen as a weakness as the equipment was not the was up to date or most expensive. This could be seen as effecting the quality of the production
What are the weaknesses of the music video
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