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FANTASY
I wrote this being i n the shoes of my bestie rummy(r amesh) coz
he is the one
who dream of gir ls all the time and didn' t just stop dreaming
but does something more
than that. I took enough care of producing it very near to
practical happening, so I
have no choi ce but to use few Telugu words. I randomly used my
fri end' s names
without any intr oduction of them. I thank my fri end santhosh f
or narrating thi s
experience; though I was not always a part of these happenings
but could be able to
complete thi s with very small imagination.
The moment I saw her, my senses tingled. I don't know why but
for unknown reason I
felt a sudden urge to look at her face and when I did I was
stunned by her prettiness. she
was very fair in complexion and was wearing white chudi seemed
to be new. Some
gorgeous stuff was hanging to her ears which caught my
attention. Her beauty spot being
her nevus on her left cheek was eyecandy. She curled her lips
against her teeth leavingthem wet, rolled her fingers over her hair
folding them around her right ear. I almost lost
in my senses but came back to this world when satti yelled
suddenly "hey! It's her
birthday". It wasn't an intelligent guess but she was holding a
sweet box which was
matching her dress. Girls take utmost care of their attire; it
is said that they don't even
care their husbands as much as they do about their garb. We were
standing out of our
lecturer's room, she to share sweets and we to fill the
remaining quota of our chidings
from our most strict lec.
I wished her. It went in vain. She didn't care me.... She was
nervous, her stature shows
that. She was trying to escape from our staring if not at least
acting like that, same time
taking enough care of not losing our attention. But yes she is
enjoying it as all girls do but
never show.
Vasu from nowhere alarmed us to stop making her embarrassed. We
all together gave our
trademark buzz to vasu's kindness to her and raju almost kicked
vasu but I was not caring
all these happenings around me and it's like I was almost
floating. She went in leaving me
in pickled state.
I forced all my friends into staff room but we recalled the
purpose what we came for
(actually we went to beg attendance...: p) and we foresaw what
sir gonna say and stoppeddaring to go in.
After long wait she came to me smiling and offered me a sweet. I
was speechless and still
not in a state to believe my luck. She waved her hand on my face
and was still smiling. I
came to this world when santhu slapped me. Then I realized that
the last two sentences
were just my fantasy.
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In the evening we luckily found her coming out of canteen with
her friends. They were
giggling around her may be to get hold of our attention. Without
any delay me and santhu
started chasing them. Though its universal truth that girls love
to have attention of boys,
they never show that, but this time she failed to hold her
nerves. We were sure she
noticed us following them but never stopped humming a new number
from movie
jabardast.
ninnilaane chusthu vunna,
rojilage kalusukunna.. gundelo ee alajadento kottaga.....
enduko kalavaram, teliyade anukshanam inthalone emitoo ee
paravasham...
We almost stepped to Girl's hostel gate; she gave a gentle smile
turning back and went
through the gate. We gave a helpless look and cursed our
fate.
My friends were laughing all the way from campus until we
reached our hostel. I was in
no mood to have a fight with them. I was floating in her dreams;
the lyrics of the songwere still roving in my mind.
The very next day I was in library reading news paper. It was
late in the evening and felt
more beautiful then ever. I always thought the entire stuff
happened was another passing
cloud but to my surprise she came here too. What was she doing
to me? Was it me
following her or the reverse? I was in confusion. But boys would
never lose any
opportunity to impress a girl. I was back in my business. You
can dig down earth to its
core, u can cross MARINA, u can climb EVEREST but you just can't
guess what a girl
would be thinking and she was not different from many. They will
leave no clue to you
and they hardly need any reason to do so. To my surprise she
gave a sore look for the firsttime. Her eyes reflected unhappiness
and went away from library.
Santhu asked me why dint you leave her when she is not caring
you... after a small pause
I said "veelaithe premiddam dude... Poyedemundi
I always had a fantasy of loving a girl who's name doesn't end
with 'A' or 'I', but I
changed my opinion after gaping her coz her name is starting
with 'S' and ending with 'A'.
My Debut story- Rakesh Yadav G
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