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    Chapter 4: Revising and Editing

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    Revising and Editing: One and the Same?

    Although many writers and instructors use the terms interchangeably, it is helpful to see revising and editing as two different activities. For our purposes, revising is an ongoing process and occurs throughout the writing of the essay when a writer attempts to make the changes. These changes may be ones suggested in a peer review but also ones you decide on as you write. Think of revising as “re- visioning” your writing to make the content clear, focused, descriptive, and detailed. Editing happens after you are satisfied with the overall content of the writing. Editing means going through a piece of writing and making comments and suggestions about how it could be better—or even whether it’s appropriate at all. Editing also includes proofreading for grammar, punctuation and spelling errors. Editing identifies the changes needed, and revising incorporates the changes needed. For example, a reviewer might suggest that you tweak your introduction to make it better fit the rest of the paper. The actual process of changing the introduction is called revising.

    “Substitute ‘damn’ every time you’re inclined to write ‘very’; your editor will delete it and the writing will be just as it should be.” —Mark Twain

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    Differences between Revising, Editing, and Proofreading It is important to note that revising, editing, and proofreading are very different processes. Despite the differences, however, they often overlap. They are being separated here for ease of explanation. Revising

    • Revising is done throughout the writing process, with special emphasis on the first few drafts. • Focus = big issues • Audience • Organization • Content • Evidence • Conclusion

    Editing • Editing is done throughout the writing process, with special emphasis on the middle and final

    drafts. • Focus = technical issues • Flow • Word choice • Grammar • Transitions • Textual inconsistencies

    Proofreading

    • Proofreading is reserved for the final draft. • Focus = mechanics and presentation • Spelling • Punctuation • Format • Typographical errors

    Overview of Revising

    Successful writers understand that revising is an integral part of the writing process. It is important for authors to spend the majority of their time revising their texts. That revising is a time-consuming and practiced skill surprises many beginning writers because they often describe revision as changing particular words in a sentence or scanning a text for misspelled words or grammatical errors. Such changes correspond more appropriately to the term proofreading. To revise, however, is to significantly alter a piece of writing. Revising and editing are two separate processes. Revising requires a significant alteration in a piece of writing, such as enriching the content or giving the piece clarity. Although editing can be a part of

    “Rewriting is when writing really gets to be fun…. In baseball you only get three swings and you’re out. In rewriting, you get almost as many swings as you want and you know, sooner or later, you'll hit the ball.” —Neil Simon

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    this process, revising generally involves changes that concern bigger issues, such as content and organization. While revising, a writer might notice that one idea needs to be developed more thoroughly and another idea omitted. The writer might decide that rearranging paragraphs will provide clarity and support for the essay, strengthening the paper as a whole. Granted, writers should also change grammar and punctuation while revising, but if that is all they are doing, then they are simply editing. A Change for the Better

    Writing is an intellectually challenging, and draining, activity—writing well, that is. Putting ideas on paper is a good start, but revising those ideas so that they are persuasive, cogent, and form a solid argument is the real work of writing. As you review what you have written, you will undoubtedly see holes in your logic, sentences that confuse rather than clarify, and sentences and paragraphs out of place. Below are some helpful hints to consider as you analyze and transform your paper.

    • Take a break. Looking at your paper later will help you see it from the point of view of the audience. A good rule of thumb is to wait at least a day before revising. Often, writers look at their prose a day later and recognize significant flaws they would not have noticed had they written their paper in one night.

    • Be your own critic. You are obviously your own best critic. When writing, most people do not (and should not) turn in their first drafts. So take advantage of your first, second, and third drafts to write your opinions in the margins. Highlight the things you really like and circle the things you would like to change.

    • Read and re-read your paper. In the first read-through consider the clarity of both the focus and the purpose of the paper. Does every supporting statement agree with the thesis? In the second read-through analyze organization, logical development, and correctness. Often, reading your text aloud reveals awkward phrasing, missing information, weak points, and illogical reasoning.

    • Put yourself in the shoes of your reader. Look at your work through their eyes. Keep in mind that while you may know something about a topic and write about it with supported research, your audience may be new to the topic. Being specific in your writing helps clarify your message to audiences. Do not assume that your audience already knows what you know.

    • Understand that revising your paper should not be the last thing you do—revision should be ongoing throughout the creation of a document.

    Overview of Editing Editing is a technical process and includes proofreading to fix typos and grammatical errors. You can (and should) edit your own work in addition to relying on a peer review or trip to the writing center. This means going back over what you’ve written and finding ways to improve it. Most writers frequently switch between drafting new sentences and paragraphs and editing ones they’ve already written. As previously mentioned, revision concerns large sections of text, while editing concerns individual sentences. Below is a list of potential errors to consider while editing.

    • Fragments • Run-on sentences

    “I write one page of masterpiece to ninety-one pages of sh*t. I try to put the sh*t in the wastebasket.” —Ernest Hemingway

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    • Dangling or misplaced modifiers • Adjective and adverb use • Verb usage and tense • Subject/verb agreement • Pronoun/antecedent agreement • Sentence balance • Comma use • Spelling • Word choice (connotation vs. denotation) • Format/presentation

    Sentence Structure Use active verbs.

    Be-verbs (is, am, are, was, were, be, has/have been) indicate condition and often require an extra sentence or clause to be sound. Active verbs allow you to compose sharply without numbing the rhythm of your writing. Read your writing with an objective eye and think: “How can I make every sentence and paragraph straightforward and simple?” Below are examples in italics of wordy and confusing verbiage. Below the italics are the same sentences that have been simplified.

    The sharp rise in fuel prices is a serious challenge to trucking firms. It makes it hard for them to provide timely service to customers and to meet payroll expenses. Sharply rising fuel prices challenge trucking firms by causing delays in customer service and payroll. Primary causes of the rise in fuel prices are an issue of confusion for many citizens. They don’t know how to fight the rise because they don’t know its cause. Primary causes of rising fuel prices elude many citizens, making them unaware of how to fight the increase.

    Name the people. Directly state who or what group is acting in your sentences. Note the contrast in power and clarity among the sentences below.

    Without people: A citywide ban on indoor smoking in Duluth originally caused a marked drop in bar patronage. With people: When the Duluth City Council passed a citywide ban on indoor smoking, many people stopped going to bars.

    Eliminate wordy phrases. Certain stock phrases are weak and wordy. They can make you sound stuffy or as though you’re just trying to fill up space. Use the simple bolded words below instead of the empty and cumbersome language in italics.

    Because, Since, Why: the reason for, for the reason that, owing/due to the fact that, in light of the fact that, considering the fact that, on the grounds that, this is why When: on the occasion of, in a situation in which, under circumstances in which About, Regarding: as regards, in reference to, with regard to, concerning the matter of, where ABC is concerned Must, Should: it is crucial that, it is necessary that, there is a need/necessity for, it is important that, it cannot be avoided that Can: is able to, has the opportunity to, has the capacity for, has the ability to May, Might, Could: it is possible that, there is a chance that, it could happen that, the possibility exists for

    Luckily, Internet users can find numerous websites about how to eliminate wordiness.

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