Evidence Continued CheckTone, attitude, style, avoid clich, word choice, avoid redundancy, wordiness, avoid slang! Use complex sentences
TRANSITIONS! -additonal signals, first of all furthermore -space signals, next, below, -change direction, but, however, yet, in contrast -illustration- for example, for instance Conlusion- therfore, consequently, thus, as a result, finally
Think about Have an Editors Mindset Revising Editing Proofreading
An Editors Mindset Polishing rather than creating
Self Editing Issues Give yourself some space......But not too much Learn your tendencies What are your goals?
Peer Editing Issues Degree of help needed Have enough time before submission Balance criticisms with compliments
Procuring Peer Editors Writers need readers Good editors are worth their weight in gold Dont abuse them; give them your best work