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THE EFFECT OF GRAPHIC AND SEMANTIC ORGANIZERSTRATEGY TOWARDS STUDENTS’ ACHIEVEMENT IN
WRITING DESCRIPTIVE TEXTA Pre-Experimental Research at the Second Year Students of SMP
Islam Darul Hikmah Makassar
A Thesis
Submitted to the Faculty of Teachers Training and EducationMakassar Muhammadiyah University in Partial Fulfillment
of the Requirement for the Degree of EducationIn English Department
NENGA WIDYASTUTI10535 5205 12
ENGLISH EDUCATION DEPARTMENTFACULTY OF TEACHERS TRAINING AND EDUCATION
MAKASSAR MUHAMMADIYAH UNIVERSITY2018
UNIVERSITAS MUHAMMADIYAH MAKASSARFAKULTAS KEGURUAN DAN ILMU PENDIDIKANPRODI PENDIDIKAN BAHASA INGGRIS
بســــــم اللـھ الرحـمن الرحیــــم
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Jalan Sultan Alauddin No. 259MakassarTelp : 0411-860837/860132 (Fax)Email : [email protected] : www.fkip.unismuh.ac.id
SURAT PERNYATAAN
Saya yang bertanda tangan di bawah ini:
Nama : NENGA WIDYASTUTI
NIM : 10535 5205 12
Jurusan : Pendidikan Bahasa Inggris
Judul Skripsi : The Effect of Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy
towards Students’ Achievement in Writing Descriptive Text
(a Pre-Experimental Research at the Second Year Students
of SMP Islam Darul Hikmah Makassar).
Dengan ini menyatakan:
Skripsi yang saya ajukan di depan tim penguji adalah hasil karya saya
sendiri bukan hasil ciplakan dan tidak dibuatkan oleh siapapun.
Demikian pernyataan ini saya buat dengan sebenar-benarnya dan bersedia
menerima sanksi apabila pernyataan saya tidak benar.
Makassar, 17 April 2017
Yang membuat pernyataan
NENGA WIDYASTUTI
UNIVERSITAS MUHAMMADIYAH MAKASSARFAKULTAS KEGURUAN DAN ILMU PENDIDIKANPRODI PENDIDIKAN BAHASA INGGRIS
بســــــم اللـھ الرحـمن الرحیــــم
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Jalan Sultan Alauddin No. 259MakassarTelp : 0411-860837/860132 (Fax)Email : [email protected] : www.fkip.unismuh.ac.id
SURAT PERJANJIAN
Saya yang bertanda tangan di bawah ini:
Nama : NENGA WIDYASTUTI
NIM : 10535 5205 12
Jurusan : Pendidikan Bahasa Inggris
Judul Skripsi : The Effect of Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy
towards Students’ Achievement in Writing Descriptive Text
(a Pre-Experimental Research at the Second Year Students
of SMP Islam Darul Hikmah Makassar).
Dengan ini menyatakan perjanjian sebagai berikut:
1. Mulai dari penyusunan proposal sampai dengan selesainya skripsi saya,
saya akan menyusun sendiri skripsi saya, tidak dibuatkan oleh siapapun.
2. Dalam menyusun skripsi, saya akan selalu melakukan konsultasi dengan
pembimbing.
3. Saya tidak akan melakukan penjiplakan (plagiat) dalam menyusun skripsi
ini.
4. Apabila saya melanggar perjanjian saya seperti yang tertera pada butir 1, 2
dan 3 maka saya bersedia menerima sanksi sesuai dengan aturan yang
berlaku.
Demikian perjanjian ini saya buat dengan penuh kesadaran.
Makassar, 17 April 2017
Yang membuat perjanjian
NENGA WIDYASTUTI
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MOTTO AND DEDICATION
“ALLAH DOES NOT BURDEN A SOUL BEYOND THAT IT CAN BEAR”
[QS.AL BAQARAH:286]
Don't give up when your prayers haven't been answered. If you can be patient,
Allah Azza Wa Jalla can give you more than what you ask.
This thesis is dedicated to:
My beloved parents Bapak Haris L and Mama Hayati, who always care, love,give me inspiration, and endless prayer to reach my dreams. They are my true
motivation through joy and pain.
My beloved sister and brothers, kaka Cici, ade’ Rahmat, ade’ Ibnu, ade’ Kipli,and ade’ Adi, who always support and take care of me.
My beloved English tutor, Mr. Adam A. Warren, who always gives me assistance,guidance, support and motivation in completing my thesis, he is the best tutor that
I ever had.
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ABSTRACT
NENGA WIDYASTUTI, 2017. The Effect of Graphic and Semantic OrganizerStrategy towards Students’ Achievement in Writing Descriptive Text (A Pre-Experimental Research at the Second Year Students of SMP Islam DarulHikmah Makassar). Supervised by Andi Tenri Ampa, and Awalia Azis. A Thesisof English Department, the Faculty of Teacher Training and Education,Muhammadiyah University of Makassar.
The purpose of this research was to investigate the effectiveness of graphicand semantic organizer strategy towards students’ achievement in writingdescriptive text, especially in terms of content and grammar at the second yearstudents of SMP Islam Darul Hikmah Makassar in the 2017/2018 Academic Year.
The researcher used a pre-experimental method. The data was collected bysubjecting a group of students to written tests, in this case a pre-test and a post-test. The pre-test and post-test was given to measure the students’ level ofachievement in the writing process before and after the treatment. The populationof this research consisted of 150 second year students of SMP Islam DarulHikmah Makassar. Meanwhile, the research’s sample was taken by using apurposive sampling technique which consisted of 34 students or class VIII-A asan experimental group.
The research findings indicated that graphic and semantic organizerstrategy was able to improve the second year students’ mean score in writing. Itwas proven, in terms of content, by comparing the mean score of students’ pre-testand post-test results which were 56.62 and 87.50. Also while comparing thestudents mean score of pre-test and post-test results in terms of grammar, whichwere 41.17 and 74.26. In conclusion, based on this data, graphic and semanticorganizer strategy is an effective strategy in improving students’ writingachievement with concern to a descriptive text and especially in terms of contentand grammar.
Keywords: Graphic and Semantic Organizer, writing skill, experimentalresearch
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ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS
Alhamdulillahi Rabbil Alamin. The researcher expresses her highest
gratituded to the almighty Allah SWT, who has given his guidance, blessing and
mercy to her in completing this thesis. And also her regards and dragged to
Prophet Muhammad SAW, his family and followers until the end of this world.
In preparing complicating this thesis, the researcher found many problems
that could not be solved the writer by herself. However, the great help and support
from the people ground him made everything was running well. She deeply
expresses many thanks to those who had given their help. Guidance, support,
advices and open constructive criticism. She really knows without them, she
would be unable to finish this thesis, so she would like to express her deepest
gratitude to them. They are:
1. DR. H. Abd. Rahman Rahim, S.E. MM. The Rector Muhammadiyah
University of Makassar for his advices during her study at the university.
2. Erwin Akib, M. Pd., Ph.D. The Dean of FKIP Muhammadiyah University
of Makassar and
3. Ummi Khaerati Syam, S.pd., M.Pd. The Head of English Department of
FKIP Muhammadiyah University of Makassar.
4. Dr. Hj. Andi Tenri Ampa, M.Hum. As consultant I that always gives the
motivation, support, advices and also some ideas in writing this thesis.
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5. Awalia Azis, S.Pd.,M.Pd. As consultant II who has given the researcher
guidance, correction and support since the preliminary state of manuscript
until the completion of this thesis.
6. The researcher also would say special appreciation to her beloved father
and mother; Haris. L and St. Hayati, her sister Hilda Farista, S.Pd, her
brothers; Rahmat Haris, Ibnu Haris, Zulkifli, Hariadi, her aunti Hamdani,
and all of her families for an endless support with prayer and love.
7. Mr. Adam A. Warren as the English tutor who has given the researcher
advises, correction, and support in making the writers’ English to be
perfect.
8. Wangisa, S.Pd.,MM. The headmaster of SMP Islam Darul Hikmah
Makassar, who helped the researcher during conducting the research.
9. Ita Pratiwi, S,Pd. The English teacher for second year students of SMP
Islam Darul Hikmah Makassar, for her good cooperation.
10. The researcher never forget to express thanks all lectures of English
department who have taught her good education for many so she could
complete her study and staff of FKIP Muhammadiyah University of
Makassar.
11. The researcher’s best friends; Nuren, Inchi, Nita, Fitri, Astira, Joni wolf,
Harmia, and all of her friends in English Department in academic year
2012, and for many people who help the researcher whose name cannot be
mentioned one by one, she can only say ‘thanks a million’ for the love,
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cares, support and advises. For being good friends in any kind of condition
and always share their joyful to her.
Finally, the researcher realized that this thesis is still far from perfection
and still needs suggestion and critics. Therefore, she expects some corrections,
suggestions and criticism for this thesis. Hopefully, this thesis will be useful for
many people who needed. May Allah the almighty bless us. Amin.
Billahi Fi Sabillil Haq fastabiqul khaerat
Makassar, February 2018
Nenga Widyastuti
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TABLE OF CONTENTS
Pages
TITTLE PAGE............................................................................................... i
LEMBAR PENGESAHAN ........................................................................... ii
APPROVAL SHEET ..................................................................................... iii
COUNSELING SHEET ................................................................................ iv
STATEMENT LETTER ............................................................................... vii
SURAT PERJANJIAN .................................................................................. viii
MOTTO AND DEDICATION...................................................................... ix
ABSTRACT .................................................................................................... x
ACKNOWLEDGMENTS ............................................................................. xi
TABLE OF CONTENTS............................................................................... xiv
LIST OF TABLES ......................................................................................... xvi
LIST OF FIGURES ....................................................................................... xvii
CHAPTER I INTRODUCTION................................................................... 1
A. Background .................................................................................... 1
B. Problem Statement ......................................................................... 3
C. Objectives of the Study .................................................................. 3
D. Significance of the Study ............................................................... 4
E. Scope of the Study ......................................................................... 4
CHAPTER II REVIEW OF RELATED LITERATURE .......................... 5
A. The Concept of Graphic and Semantic Organizer ......................... 5
B. The Concept of Writing ................................................................. 13
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C. Conceptual Framework of The Study ............................................ 24
D. Hypotheses .................................................................................... 25
CHAPTER III RESEARCH METHOD ...................................................... 26
A. Research Design............................................................................. 26
B. Research Variable and Indicator .................................................... 28
C. Population and Sample................................................................... 29
D. Research Instrument....................................................................... 29
E. Procedure of Data Collection ......................................................... 29
F. Technique of Data Analysis ........................................................... 30
CHAPTER IV FINDINGS AND DISCUSSION ......................................... 35
A. Findings ......................................................................................... 35
B. Discussion ...................................................................................... 41
CHAPTER V CONCLUSIONS AND SUGGESTIONS............................. 46
A. Conclusions .................................................................................... 46
B. Suggestions .................................................................................... 47
BIBLIOGRAPHY
APPENDICES
CURRICULUM VITAE
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LIST OF TABLES
Pages
Table 3.1 Analytical Scoring Rubric by Weigle .............................................. 30
Table 3.2 Classification of Scoring Grade ....................................................... 31
Table 3.1 Criteria of Accepted and Rejected Hypothesis ................................ 34
Table 4.1 The Students’ Classification Score in Terms of Content ................. 36
Table 4.2 The Students’ Writing Achievement in Terms of Content .............. 37
Table 4.3. The Students’ Classification Score in Terms of grammar .............. 38
Table 4.4 The Students’ Achievement in Terms of Grammar......................... 39
Table 4.5 The t-Test Analysis of the Students’ Gain Difference ..................... 41
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LIST OF FIGURES
Pages
Figure 2.1 Descriptive or Semantic Map ......................................................... 7
Figure 2.2 Network Tree .................................................................................. 7
Figure 2.3 Spider Map ..................................................................................... 8
Figure 2.4 Cause and Effect Map..................................................................... 9
Figure 2.5 Compare and Contrast Map ............................................................ 9
Figure 2.6 Series of Events Chain.................................................................... 10
Figure 2.7 Cycle Map....................................................................................... 10
Figure 2.8 Descriptive Text.............................................................................. 23
Figure 2.9 Conceptual Framework................................................................... 24
Figure 3.1 One Group Pre-Test and Post-Test Design..................................... 26
Graphic 4.1 The students’ Achievement in Terms of Content......................... 37
Graphic 4.2 The Students’ Achievement in Terms of Grammar ..................... 40
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CHAPTER I
INTRODUCTION
A. Background
English is one of the foreign languages which becomes compulsory
subject in junior and senior high schools in Indonesia. In learning English, there
are four skills that have to be mastered, namely, speaking, listening, reading and
writing. In this research, the researcher is focusing on writing because writing is
one of the four language skills that play a very important role. Since writing is an
effective way to communicate and express our thoughts, feelings, and opinions to
others also writing has function to entertaining and making fun.
Furthermore, writing can help the students learn and develop their
English by expressing their knowledge, experience and the way of thinking.
Writing is one of the activities deal with how to write idea, information,
knowledge, or experience and understand the writing to acquire knowledge or
some information to share and learn.Writing activities motivate students to engage
their ability in learning English.
In teaching writing is expecting as a communicative activity between the
teacher and his or her students. In learning English writing is the same as learning
other skills (reading, speaking, and listening). The students should practice and
doing many drills of exercise, continually and seriously. Studying writing for
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students means that he or she learns how to communicate with another by using
language.
Yet, based on the researcher’s experience when she did PPL and P2K, in
reality she found that most of students always get trouble when they are asked to
write English, they think that writing is a difficult task: therefore, they are not
interested in writing. Another problem is the students have low motivation and are
not interested in doing the task since the writing activities are not interesting.
Usually, the students are told to write sentences and paragraphs without being
given some clue so that it is difficult for them to express their ideas on a piece of
paper. This phenomena of the students’ ability in writing need intensive guidance.
Therefore, the English teachers are expected to think and make some
efforts in helping the students to solve those students’ problem above, the teacher
has to apply an innovative strategy in the class. By using the innovative strategies,
the teacher improves the student’s ability in writing a good paragraph. There are
many innovative strategies can be applied in the class one of them is graphic and
semantic organizers. In this case, the researcher would like to apply the strategy in
order to find out the effect of the strategy and to solve the students’ difficulties in
writing and also to enhance their writing ability.
Relating to the background above, the researcher is interested in
conducting research entitled “The Effect of Graphic and Semantic Organizer
towards Students’ Achievement in Writing Descriptive Text (A Pre-Experimental
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Research at the Second Year Students of SMP Islam Darul Hikmah Makassar) in
academic year 2017/2018.
B. Problems Statement
Based on the explanation expressed on the background above, the
researcher formulated research questions as follow:
1. How is the effect of Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy towards
students’ achievement in writing descriptive text in terms of content at the
second year students of SMP Islam Darul Hikmah Makassar?
2. How is the effect of Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy towards
students’ achievement in writing descriptive text in terms of grammar at
the second year students of SMP Islam Darul Hikmah Makassar?
C. Objective of the Study
The objectives of this study were as follows:
1. To find out the effect of graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy
towards students’ achievement in writing descriptive text in terms of
content at the second year students of SMP Islam Darul Hikmah
Makassar.
2. To find out the effect Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy towards
students’ achievement in writing descriptive text in terms of content and
grammar at the second year students of SMP Islam Darul Hikmah
Makassar.
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D. Significance of the Study
The researcher expected that this study was useful for teachers, students
and also further researchers who concern in the same field of research.
1. The result of this study is expected to be useful in the English teaching
especially in teaching English writing.
2. The researcher expects the students are able to write a text by using
Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy.
3. This research is expected to be useful for other researchers and readers
who want to conduct more complex research especially in experimental
research.
E. Scope of the Study
The study was limited to find out the effect of Graphic and Semantic
Organizer Strategy towards students’ writing achievement at the second year
students of SMP Islam Darul Hikmah Makassar. The researcher applied two
different types of the strategy namely spider map and semantic map. The teaching
material in this study was descriptive text, which focussing on two components of
writing namely content and grammar.
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CHAPTER II
REVIEW OF RELATED LITERATURE
A. The Concept of Graphic and Semantic Organizer
According to Olsazak (2015:8) Graphic and Semantic Organizer are
visual and graphic display that depicts the relationships between facts, terms, and
or ideas within a learning task. Graphic organizers are also sometimes referred to
as knowledge maps, concept maps, story maps, cognitive organizers, advance
organizers, or concept diagrams.
According to Bishop (2013) Graphic Organizers are as visual displays of
key content information designed to guide learners and to enhance their
comprehension. They are sometimes referred to as concept maps, cognitive
maps, or content maps, but they are all used to serve one purpose. They are
meant, says Baxendell (2003) to help students clearly see how ideas are
organized within a text or surrounding a concept. Through the use of organizers,
learners acquire the structure of abstract concepts.
A graphic organizer is a visual graphic display that shows the relation
between facts, terms or ideas within a learning task (Hall & Strangman, 2002).
The visual representation of graphic organizers provides learners with a
structural framework of information to be learned. This helps to direct the
learners' attention to key concepts and conceptual relationships. The use of such
organizers, thus promotes understanding, and enhances organization and long
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term retention of information. It stresses meaningful learning which serves to
facilitate learning and minimize boredom (Janssen, et al, 1993).
1. Types of Graphic and Semantic Organizer
Graphic and Semantic Organizer comes in many different forms, each
one best suited to organize a particular type of information. Types of Graphic and
Semantic Organizers come in many different forms; each one is designed to suit a
particular type of information. Following are a few samples of organizers and
their uses as suggested by Hall and Strangman (2002).
a. Descriptive or Semantic Map
This map is commonly used for mapping generic information; it
particularly works well for mapping hierarchical relationships. A typical use of a
graphic organizer involves introducing the organizer to the students in a teacher-
led discussion that encourages students to think through the various components
of the organizer and their relationship to each other. When students already
understand aspects of the organizer, teachers sometimes have students create or
fill in that part of the organizer during class discussion.
Semantic Map is another way to help students assimilate information.
This map can be used to take notes about the key concept, about the subtopics in
the outer circles, and about the details on the lines. The simulation map is a visual
display among words or concepts in text. Semantic map is sometimes used as a
substitute for vocabulary building activities that focus on the meaning of
individual words out of context. Semantic Map emphasizes meaning in context
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and helps students organize new learning and relate it to their prior knowledge
(Maddux, C. D., Johnson, D. L., & Willis, J.W, 1997).
Figure 2.1 Descriptive or Semantic Maps
Taken from www.enchantedlearning.com
b. Network Tree
Constructing network tree make easier in organizing a hierarchical set of
information subordinate or super ordinate elements. If the topic involves a chain
of events with a beginning and with multiple out comes at each node (like a
family tree), use a tree as graphic organizer. Example: displaying the probabilistic
results of tossing coins.
Figure 2.2 Network Tree
Taken from www.enchantedlearning.com
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c. Spider Map
Spider map is used when the information relating to the main idea cannot
be organized hierarchically, if the topic involves investigating attributes
associated with a single topic, and then obtaining more details on each of these
ideas, use a spider diagram as graphic organizer. This is like the star graphic
organizer with one more level of detail. Example: finding methods that help your
study skills (like taking notes, reading, memorizing, etc.), and investigating the
factors involved in performing each of the methods.
Figure 2.3 Spider Map
d. Cause and Effect Map (Fishbone Map)
This is widely used to assist the students identify the major causes of
certain events and their effects on surrounding atmospheres.
Main idea
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Figure 2.4 Cause and Effect Map (Fishbone Map)
Taken from www.teacherscholistic.com
e. Compare and Contrast Map
This map is commonly used to assist students compare and contrast
concepts according to their main features or quality. A relevant method to
compare concepts' features is to design a compare/contrast matrix. The concept
chart can be used to record information about two groups of people, place, or
things that are being compared and contrasted.
Figure 2.5 Compare and Contrast Map
Taken from www.teacherscholistic.com
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f. Series of Events Chain
This map is quite useful in helping students organize information or
events according to the stages or steps of their occurrence.
Figure 2.6 Series of Events Chain
Taken from www.teacherscholistic.com
g. Cycle Map
Cycle map is more effective for organizing information that is circular
with no specific beginning or ending.
Figure 2.7 Cycle Map
Taken from www.zoomschool.com
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2. Constructing Graphic organizers
Jo Anne L and Vacca, Richard (Baron 1998: 323) suggests the following
steps for developing the graphic organizer:
a. Analyze the vocabulary of the learning tasks, and list all the words
that you feel are important for the students to understand.
b. Arrange the list of words until you have a scheme that shows the
interrelationships among the concepts particular to the learning task.
c. Add the scheme vocabulary terms that you believe the students
understand in order to show relationship between the learning task
and the discipline as a whole.
d. Evaluate the organizer. Have you clearly shown major relationship?
Can the organizer be simplified and still effectively communicate the
idea you consider crucial?
e. Introduce the students to the learning tasks by showing them scheme;
encourage them to contribute as much information as possible to the
discussion of the organizer.
f. As you complete the learning task, relate new information to the
organizer where it seems appropriate.
3. The advantages of Graphic and Semantic Organizers
A graphic organizer is a graphic representation of information; examples
of graphic organizers include tables and sequence chains. Nikolai and Doug Buehl
(2009) says there are advantages and disadvantages to using this teaching tool to
supplement lectures and presentations, they are:
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a. Comprehension
Graphic organizers can help students to understand the relationship
between various pieces of information that they may have otherwise failed to
identify. Such organizers are particularly useful in helping students grasp abstract
concepts.
b. Knowledge evaluation
Asking students to complete graphic organizers allows instructors to
evaluate the student's prior knowledge of a subject. As a result, teachers can make
strategic decisions regarding how to most effectively present to students
additional information relating to the subject at hand.
c. Motivation
Graphic organizers represent information in pattern and graphic form,
which can enhance learning by stimulating a student's interest and retaining his
attention,
d. Impact on note taking
In some cases, note taking decreases when students learn material with
the help of graphic representations. As a result, the lack of a comprehensive guide
those students can refer to when revising material may affect their performance.
e. Impact on feedback
Some instructors find creating an answer key for a graphic organizer to be
time consuming. They use organizers to encourage discussion but do not correct
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each student's organizer upon completion; as a result, students may miss out on
receiving valuable feedback.
B. The Concept of Writing
Writing is one of the language skills, as a process of communication,
which requires an entirely different set of competencies and uses rhetorical
conventions. Byrne (1988) states that writing is clearly much more than the
production of graphic symbol as speech it is more than the production of sounds.
The symbols have been arranged according to certain conventions, to forms
words, and words have to be arranged to form sentences. However, we do not
write just one sentences or a number of sentences arranged in particular order and
linked together in certain ways. Writing involves the encoding of message of
some kind that is to translate through into language.
According to Nunan (2003: 88), writing can be defined by a series of
contrast. The first, writing is both a physical and a mental act. At the most basic
level, writing is the physical act of committing words or ideas to some medium.
On the other hand, writing is the mental work of investing ideas, thinking about
how to express them, and organizing them into statements and paragraphs that
will be clear to a reader. The second, its purpose is both to express and impress.
Writers typically serve two masters: themselves, and their own desires to express
an idea or feeling, and readers also called the audience, who need to have ideas
expressed in certain ways. Writers must then choose the best form for their
writing, depending on its purpose. The third, it is both a process and a product.
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The writer imagines, organizes, drafts, edits, reads, and rereads. This process of
writing is often cyclical, and sometimes disorderly. Ultimately, what the audience
sees, whether it is an instructor or a wider audience is a product.
Writing is how to produce a written product. The process involves a
series of thinking activities in which the writers have to transform their ideas
coherently and cohesively into written text. According to Elbow (in Brown 2001:
337), writing is a transaction with words whereby you free yourself from what
you presently think, feel, and perceive. Writers are not only required to transmit a
message but also to grow and cook a message.
Writing is a complex process that allows writers to explore thoughts and
ideas, and make them visible and concrete (Ghaith, 2002). It is an activity that
encourages thinking and learning for it motivates communication and makes
thought available for reflection. When thought is written down, ideas can be
examined, reconsidered, added to, rearranged, and changed.
From the descriptions above, it can be concluded that writing is a process
of organizing ideas in which the writer is demanded to perform creativity in using
the language skills to produce a written text.
1. Writing Process
Writing is a process that involves several steps. At least, there are three
steps in the writing process mentioned by Karen Blanchard, and Christine Root in
their book; Ready to Write: A first Composition Text.
Step one: Prewriting
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Thinking about your topic and organizing your ideas.
Step two: Writing
Using your ideas to write a first draft.
Step Three: Revising
Improving what you have written.
If the writers follow the steps, and practice by writing often, they will find
it easier to write paragraphs and to improve their writing.
In another source stated that writing is a process that involves the following steps:
Discovering a point-often through prewriting.
Developing solid support for the point-often through more
prewriting.
Organizing the supporting material and writing it out in a first
draft.
Revising and then editing carefully to ensure an effective, error-
free paper.
2. Purpose of Writing
Meyer cited in Wangisa (1998) categorizes the purpose of writing into
three categories:
a. To inform
The writer generally explains or describes an idea, a process, an even, a
belief, a person, a place or a thing to give information. The writer also gives the
facts and explains its causes.
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b. To persuade
A writer tries to change or behave differently. In this case, the writer
appeals to the readers' logic and emotion.
c. To entertain
The writer give some efforts to make the reader laughed, smiled,
fascinated, surprised or even angry.
3. Necessity of Writing
Margaretha cited in Hairston (1996:2), cited in Supriandi (2004) states
that there are some reasons why writing is important. Those reasons are:
a. Writing is a tool for discovery. We stimulate our thought process by
the act of writing and into information and image we have in our
unconscious mind.
b. Writing generates new ideas by helping to make connection and see
the relationship with other aspect.
c. Writing helps us to organize our ideas and clarify concept by writing
down ideas into coherent form.
d. Writing helps us to absorb and process information. When we write
about the topic, we learn it butter.
e. Writing down ideas allows us to distance ourselves from them and
evaluate them.
f. Writing on a subject make us active learners then passive learners of
information.
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Raimes (1983:3) also states some reasons about the importance of
writing. According to him, writing is used to help students in learning process.
The reasons for that are as follows:
a. Writing reinforces the grammatical structure idiom and vocabulary
that have been teaching to the students.
b. When students write, they also have a chance to adventure with the
language, to go beyond what they have learned to say, to take risks.
c. When the students write, they necessarily become very involved
with the new language the effort to express ideas or thinking on
papers.
4. Types of Writing Taught in Junior High School
Based on the competencies standard and basic competencies
recommended by the government, there are some types of writing which have to
be taught in junior high school, they are; procedure, descriptive, recount, and
narrative.
a. Procedure
A procedure is a piece of text that tells the reader or listener how to do
something. Its purpose is to provide instruction for making something, doing
something or getting somewhere. Example of procedure texts include: recipes,
itineraries, instruction manuals, directions.
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b. Descriptive
Descriptive presents the appearance of things that occupy space, whether
they are object, people, buildings, or cities. The purpose of descriptive is to
convey to the reader what something looks like. It attempts to gain a picture with
words. The explanation about this term will be presented in the next session.
c. Recount
Recount is a piece of text that retells past events, usually in the order
which they happened. The aim of a recount is to give the audience a description of
what occurred and when it occurred. Some example of recount text types are;
newspaper, reports, conversation, speeches, television interviews, etc.
d. Narrative
Narrative text is type of written text that tells a story of one character or
more who face certain situation. Its purpose is to present a view of the world that
entertains or informs the reader or listener. It is related to the recount type.
5. The Characteristics of Good Writing
The characteristics of a good writing will be presented as follows:
a. Significance
Writing is significance if the readers enjoy it. In order to produce a
significant writing, the author has to under estimate his own resources and have
valuable information about some activity or interest that someone.
b. Clarity
One thing is very important in writing is clarity. A piece of writing that
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lack clarity able to annoy reader.
c. Unity and Organization
A piece of writing is called united if each sentence in a paragraph
develops or supports the main idea of the paragraph, and connects each sentence.
d. Adequate Development
In writing the author establishes a contract with the reader, that contract
can take variance from such as a title that predict, an opening question that must
be answered, a thesis statement to be developed, or an anecdote.
6. Components of Writing
Five significant components in writing are content, organization,
vocabulary, language usage and mechanics.
a. Content
There are at least four things that can be measured in connecting with
content; the composition should contain one central purpose only, should have
unity, should have coherence and continuity and 'should be adequately developed.
b. Organization
When writing is done, the learner should arrange their writing
chronologically. They should present their ideas based in the order of which
happened from the beginning to the end.
c. Vocabulary
The affective used of words will always result good writing. The lack of
vocabulary makes the learner difficult to express ideas.
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d. Language Use
Language use in writing description and other form of writing involves
correct languages and point of grammar can help me learner improve the use of
formal language.
e. Mechanics
There are two parts of mechanic in writing namely punctuation and
capitalization. Punctuation is important as the way to clarify meaning. In English
writing, capital letters have two principles. First, is used to distinguish between
particulars and things. Second, is used as first word in quotation, a formal
statement and proper adjectives.
7. Descriptive Writing
Descriptive writing described on object, place or person in a way that
creates a vivid impression in the readers’ mind, enabling the reader to visualize
the being described, and to feel that he or she is very much parts of the writer’s
experience. Descriptive writing appears almost everywhere, from cook books to
poems. A writer might use a description to introduce a character in a narrative or
to create a strong closing to a persuasive essay. Whatever the form, it is purpose
is to describe.
Coulthard cited in Rita (2012:11) stated that the controlling idea of a
descriptive essay should be the special quality of the subjective. You are
describing since the success of descriptive theme depends upon your making your
subject vivid to the reader, it is obviously to your advantages if you choose a
topic with inherent interest. This doesn’t mean, however that the subject of a
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description must be exotic. The most important principle of descriptive writing is
show, don’t tell, don’t merely discuss the dominant impression of your subject
make the reader see and feel it.
Writing description can joy us experiences as recreate in words as what
we have experienced through sense. Descriptive writing is character sized by the
following:
a. Elaborate use of sensory details (often those that others make
overlook) that enrich or defined the central impression.
b. Details which go beyond the general.
c. Details which enable the reader to picture or relief what the writer is
telling.
Good description is specific and concentrate, use words that are pieces
and accurate. There are two types of descriptions namely:
a. Objective Description
Objective description is based purely on observable detail; it is not
colored by the writers’ emotion or likes and dislikes. Objective description
records exactly see from the writers’ vantage points.
b. Subjective Description
Subjective description can be defined as that which has objective details
color by personal impression. The usual goal of subjective description is to create
a mood or share feeling. Most of descriptive writing usually includes observable,
fact and personal impression.
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a. The Generic Structure of Descriptive Text According to Bamanti and
Oktaviani
1) Identification
It is generic part of paragraph which introduces or identifies the
character.
2) Description
It is a part of paragraph which describes the character.
b. Language Features of Descriptive Text
1) Descriptive often uses adjectives, numbering, and, classifying.
For example; is really cool, it has very thick fur, etc.
2) Tense which is often used is simple present tense. However,
sometimes it uses past tense if the thing to be described doesn’t
exist anymore for example; go, fly, cook, etc.
3) Descriptive text uses thinking verbs (believe, think, etc.) and
feeling verbs (feel).
4) Descriptive text also uses adverbs to give information about
character or adjective that explained. Example; it is extremely
high, it runs definitely past, etc.
c. The Purpose of Descriptive Text
Fink et al said that the purpose of description is to imagine the reader by
using a picture of a person, subject, or setting. It is allowed by using picture, so
that the reader can visualize it. According to Febriani the purpose of the
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descriptive text is to get the reader imagine within the story to get pleasure and
information. Generally, the purpose of descriptive text is to describe something,
someone, a place, animal, or plants specifically.
Below is an example of a descriptive text:
Figure 2.8 Descriptive Text
My Mother
Every people certainly have a mother. Because peoplewas born from her. The existence of her among us isdefinitely important.That is why I love her so much. Iowe great debt to what she has been doing to me untilright now. I love you, mom.
My mother's name is Khodijah. She was born 58 yearsago. She is short, but not too short. She is slim. And sheis old. She has got short white straight hair. She has gotbrown skin. She is beautiful. Her hand is so soft, thehand that have taught me to be kind person.
She never stops to support me. She always tells me tonot give up so easily.She always gives me some finesolutions when I have some problems.The importance ofher is never denied. That is why I never reject herwilling.
Title
Identification
Description
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C. Conceptual Framework
The conceptual framework underline in this research is described in the
following diagram:
Figure 2.9 Conceptual Framework
GRAPHIC AND SEMANTICORGANIZER STRATEGY
SPIDERMAP
SEMANTICMAP
THE EFFECT OF GRAPHIC ANDSEMANTIC ORGANIZER
STRATEGY
DESCRIPTIVE TEXT
WRITING DESCRIPTIVE TEXT
CONTENT GRAMMAR
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Based on the previous figure 2.1 explains how the researcher examines
the effects of Graphic and Semantic Organizers Strategy which the types of the
strategy are Spider Map and Semantic Map. In this study, the researcher uses
descriptive text as writing material. Firstly, in this study the students will receive a
writing test as a pretest to examine the students’ ability in writing descriptive text.
This step is taken by researcher before she gives treatment to the students. After
pretest, the researcher gives treatment to the students by using two types of
Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy namely Spider Map and Semantic Map
in teaching writing skill to the students. Finally, after she applies the strategy she
gives post-test in order to know the effects of the strategy towards students’
achievement in writing descriptive test as well as to find out the significant
difference of the students’ achievement in writing before and after given the
treatment.
D. Hypothesis
The alternative hypothesis ( ) = The use of Graphic and Semantic Organizer
Strategy improved students’ achievement in
writing descriptive text.
The alternative hypothesis ( ) = The use of Graphic and Semantic Organizer
Strategy did not improve students’
achievement in writing descriptive text.
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CHAPTER III
RESEARCH METHOD
A. Research Design
The research was pre-experimental method with one group pre-test and
post-test design, the group was given pre and post test before and after giving
treatment. The design was described as follow :
Figure 3.1 One Group Pre-test and Post-test Design
Where :
O1= Pre-test
X = Treatment
O2 = Post-test
1. Pre-test
Pre-test was given to know the students’ writing ability before
giving treatment. In this stage, the researcher used writing test by using
descriptive text as writing material to find out how well the students’
writing performance before the researcher applied the Graphic and
Semantic Organizer Strategy in the treatment furthermore the students’
ability was assessed by writing product’s scoring by Weigle.
O1 X O2
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2. Treatment
The researcher carried out the class during eight meetings. In each
meeting she gave a descriptive text as teaching materials by using Graphic
and Semantic Organizer Strategy. In first to third meeting, she applied
Spider Map while in fourth to eighth meeting; she applied Semantic Map
in teaching materials. The treatment of this research was distributed in
each meeting as follows:
a. Firstly, the researcher taught the students by using graphic and
semantic organizer strategy. She made a review of the material
about descriptive text and introduced the using of graphic and
semantic maps in developing the idea and producing written
text.
b. Secondly, the researcher gave an example of a print port folio
of Graphic and Semantic maps, and a descriptive text that
would be discussed with the students.
c. Thirdly, the researcher listed the pertinent words that have
relationship with the topic that would be discussed. After that
she arranged the vocabularies into graphic and semantic
organizer maps. Then she showed interrelationship among the
concept and explained to the students that the concept would
help them to keep inside the topic.
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d. Fourth, the researcher divided the students in pairs. After that
she gave some topics for descriptive text that would be written
by the students.
e. The last activity, the researcher evaluated the students’
organizer as well as the students’ written products and asked
the students about their difficulties in writing descriptive text
by using the maps that was given.
3. Post test
In this stage, the researcher examined the students’ by giving post
test in order to find out the students’ achievement after the treatment was
given to them. The test was design based on the writing material in the
students’ book for Junior High School students and descriptive text from
internet.
B. Variable and Indicators of the Research
1. The dependent variable of the research was the students writing ability in
descriptive text, while the independent variable was the application of
Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy.
2. The indicators of this research were to measure the content and the
grammar structure of the descriptive text.
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C. Population and Sample
1. Population
The population of this research was the entire the second year students of
SMP Islam Darul Hikmah Makassar in academic year 2017/2018. The
total number of population is 150 students that belong to five classes.
2. Sample
The sample was selected based on purposive sampling technique. By this
way, the researcher took VIII-A class which consists of 34 students. The
sample was taken by Ms. Ita Pratiwi, S.pd’s order as English teacher of the
school. According to her, the sample was chosen because they had low
achievement in writing English text.
D. Instrument of the Research
The writing test was given to the students to know their ability in writing.
The model of the test items was essay test.The data of the students’ pre-test and
post-test would be analyzed by using analytical scoring rubric adapted from
Weigle.
E. Procedure of Collecting Data
The data were quantitative in nature. The data analysis was dealt mostly
with numbers than with qualitative description; the data was drawn from writing
test which was given to the students in order to know their ability in writing skill.
The test was divided into two types, namely pre-test and post-test. Pre-test was
done before implementing Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy in
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preliminary research to know the students competence in writing descriptive
paragraph. In this test, the researcher asked to the students to choose and write a
descriptive text according to the topics that they had chosen. While the second test
was post-test, this test was done after implementing the Graphic and Semantic
Organizer Strategy in teaching descriptive text.
F. Technique of Analyzing Data
To analyze the data, there searcher used several stages. They were;
1. Criteria of Score Analysis
In analyzing the data related to the students’ test of writing ability, the
researcher used analytical scoring rubric adapted from Weigle. There were five
components presented in the analytical scoring rubric for writing, i.e., content,
organization, vocabulary, language use (grammar), and mechanics. The following
table was the analytical scoring rubric used by the researcher to analyze the
students’ paragraph writing.
a. The following scheme of rating scale was used to measure the students’
achievement in their written product.
Table 3.1. Analytical scoring rubric adapted from Weigle
Componentof Writing
4 3 2 1
Content Relevant tothe topic andeasy tounderstand.
Ratherrelevant to thetopic and easyto understand
Relevant to thetopic but it isnot quite easyto understand.
Relevant tothe topic butit is not quiteeasy tounderstand.
Grammar A fewgrammaticalinaccuracies.
Somegrammaticalinaccuracies.
Numerousgrammaticalinaccuracies.
Frequentgrammaticalinaccuracies.
(Weigle, 2002)
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b. Scoring the students’ correct answer of pre-test and post-test by using this
formula:
Score = 100
(Depdikbud, 2004)
2. Classifying The Students’ Score
In order for the raw scores to become more meaningful, they should be
converted to numerical data, which had been processed to the scale of 0 to 10.
Then, the processed scores could be used as a basic data to make decisions. If all
of students’ scores were arranged from the highest to the lowest, it would be
easier to know the position of a student in his/her group.
The measurement of the students’ achievement could be interpreted with the
following table.
Table 3.2 Classification of Scoring Grade
No Score Classification
1234567
96 – 10086 - 9576 - 8566 - 7556 - 6536 - 550 - 35
ExcellentVery good
GoodFairly good
FairPoor
Very poor
(Depdikbud, 1985)
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3. Knowing mean score each test, the researcher applied the formula as
follows:
=N
X
Where : = mean score
= the number of students
∑ = total score
(Gay, 2006)
4. Computing the frequency and the rate percentage of the students’ scores.
% = x 100%
Where: % = the percentage of improvement
X2 = the total of post-test
X1 = the total of pre-test
( Harmer, 1987)
5. Finding out the significant different between the pretest and posttest by
calculating the value of the test :
=N
D
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Where: D = the mean of the different score
∑D = the sum of all scores
N = number of students
(Gay, 2006)
6. To calculate the value of t-test of the hypothesis concerning the difference
between pretest and posttest using the following formula:
)1(
)(2
2
NNN
DD
Dtestt
Where:− = t significant
D = the difference between the scores of pre-test and post-test
D = the mean score of the difference between the scores of pre-test
and post- test
N = the number of students
(Gay, 2006)
After calculating the value of t-test, it was compared with the value of t-
table. When it was found that the value of t-test was greater than the value of t-
table, it meant that Null hypothesis (H0) was rejected and alternative hypothesis
(H1) was accepted because there was significant different between pre-test and
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pro-test before and after being taught by using English writing skill by using
Graphic and Semantic organizers strategies types’ Spider Map and Semantic Map.
Meanwhile, when it was found that the value of t-test was lower than the value of
t-table, it meant that Null hypothesis (H0) was accepted and alternative hypothesis
(H1) was rejected because there was no significant difference between pre-test and
post-test before and after being taught English writing skill by using Graphic and
Semantic Organizer Strategy; Spider Map and Semantic Map.
The criteria used to accept or reject the hypothesis show in the table below:
Table 3.3 Criteria of Accepted and Rejected Hypothesis
No Testing Null Hypothesis Alternative Hypothesis
1
2
t-test > t-table
t-test < t-table
Rejected
Accepted
Accepted
Rejected
(Gay, 2006)
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CHAPTER IV
FINDINGS AND DISCUSSION
This chapter presents the findings and discussion of the research. The
findings consist of data obtained from written tests for the purpose of measuring
the students’ level of achievement after utilizing the Graphic and Semantic
Organizer Strategy. Findings also include data collected through evaluation
measuring the students’ improvements and achievements in writing by comparing
results from before and after receiving the treatment.
A. Findings
1. The Effect of Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy towards
Students’ Writing Achievement in Terms of Content.
The researcher used Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy to see if
there were improvements of students’ abilities in writing. There were
improvements seen in pre-test to post- test results. It showed from the students’
classification score, mean score and also improvement percentage across two
tests. This can be seen in the table below:
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Table 4.1. The students’ classification score in terms of content
NoClassification
RangePretest Posttest
F (%) F (%)1 Excellent 96-100 3 8.82 18 52.942 Very good 86-95 0 0 0 03 Good 76-85 0 0 0 04 Fairly good 66-75 9 26.47 15 44.125 Fair 56-65 0 0 0 06 Poor 36-55 16 47.06 1 2.947 Very poor 0-35 6 17.65 0 0
Total 34 100 34 100
Based on table 4.1 above the yielded pre-test results indicate the frequency
and rate percentage of the students writing abilities in terms of content. There
were 3 students classified into the excellent category (8.82%), none of the
students classified into very good, good or fair score categories. 9 students
classified into the fairly good category (26.47%), 16 students classified into poor
score (47.06%) and finally 6 students classified into very poor with a percentage
(17.65%). From these results it can be concluded that the students’ writing ability
on average, in writing descriptive text in terms of content, was fair.
Table 4.1 also shows the students’ writing ability in writing descriptive
text in post-test results. There were 18 students categorized as excellent (52.94%),
none of them categorized as very good, good, fair, and very poor score. 15 out of
them categorized as fairly good (44.12%), and one student categorized as poor
score (2.94%). The yielded results conclude that the students’ writing ability, in
writing descriptive text, was categorized overall as fairly good. Since the post-
tests results show great improvement over the pre-test results, this research proves
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that the utilization of Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy in the learning
process is able to improve the students writing ability in terms of content.
Table 4.2. The students’ achievement in terms of content
Component Mean Score Difference Improvement%Pretest Posttest
Content 56.62 87.5 30.88 54.54
The statistical summary of pre-test and post-test in the table above shows
that the students’ mean score post-test results are greater than students’ mean
score pre-test results (87.5 < 56.62). Based on these findings with data from table
4.1 and 4.2 it can be analyzed that there is an overall improvement. Students’
achievement in writing improved overall with a difference of 30.88 or 54.54%.
Graphic 4.1. The students’ achievement of content
The graphic above shows us that there was an improvement of the students
in writing descriptive text in terms of content from pre-test with the mean score of
56.62 to post-test with the mean score of 87.5 so the improvement of pre-test to
post-test was 54.54 % with the difference mean score of 30.88.
0
20
40
60
80
100
pre test post test
mean score of content
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2. The Effect of Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy towards
Students’ Writing achievement in Terms of Grammar
The Researcher also assessed the students’ grammar while writing a
descriptive text. After the researcher again conducted a pre-test and post-test,
there was also improvements of the students’ writing achievements in terms of
grammar. It was indicated by the significant difference between students’ pre-test
and post-test score. Besides that, the researcher also had counted improvement
percentages of students. This can be seen on the following table:
Table 4.3. The students’ classification score in writing in terms of grammar
No Classification Rangepretest Posttest
F (%) F (%)1 Excellent 96-100 0 0 6 17.652 Very good 86-95 0 0 0 03 Good 76-85 0 0 0 04 Fairly good 66-75 2 5.88 21 61.765 Fair 56-65 0 0 0 06 Poor 36-55 18 52.94 7 20.597 Very poor 0-35 14 41.18 0 0
Total 34 100 34 100
Based on table 4.3 above, pre-test of the students shows that there were no
students classified into excellent, very good, good, and fair score, 2 out of 34
students classified into fairly good (5.88%), 18 out of 34 students classified into
poor (52.94%) and 14 students out of them classified into very poor (41.18%).
From these results, it can be concluded that the students’ writing ability in writing
descriptive text in terms of grammar was poor.
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Table 4.3 also shows that the students’ writing ability in writing
descriptive text in post-test. There were 6 students classified as excellent (17.65),
none of them classified as very good, good, fair, and very poor score. 21 out of
them classified as fairly good (61.76%). The results can be concluded that
students’ writing ability in writing descriptive text was categorized as fairly good.
Table 4.4. The students’ achievement in terms of grammar
Component Mean Score Difference Improvement
%Pretest Posttest
Grammar 41.17 74.26 33.09 80.35
The table above shows that the students mean score in terms of grammar
in pretest is 41.17, while students’ mean score in the post-test is 74.26. So based
on the data from the table 4.3 and 4.4 it can be analyzed that there are
improvements of the students’ achievements in writing descriptive text after the
application of Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy. The overall difference
when comparing pre-test and post-test results is 33.09 or 80.35%.
This is clearly shown in a diagram comparison between the mean score o-
pre-test and post-test results of the students’ writing achievement in writing
descriptive text in terms of grammar.
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Graphic 4.2. The students’ achievement in terms of grammar
The data in the diagram above indicates that the mean score of post-test is
greater than the mean score of pre-test or 74.26 > 41.17; it means that the
application of Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy affects and improves the
students’ writing achievement in writing descriptive text in terms of grammar.
2. The T-Test Statistical Analysis
The result of the t-test became the quantitative proof whether the
difference of the pre-test and post-test means of the experimental group was
significant or not. The researcher had used t-test analysis on the level of the
significance ( ) 0, 05 with the degree of freedom ( ) = 1, where number
of students (34 students) so ) = 33, so then the value of t-table was 1.692. The
t-test statistical analysis for independent sample was applied. From the known
data, then researcher calculated the gain of pre-test and post-test from the
experimental group. The following table showed the result of t-test calculation.
0
10
20
30
40
50
60
70
80
pre test post test
mean score ofgrammar
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Table 4.5. The t-Test analysis of the students’ gain difference
No. Components t-Test Value t-Table Value Description
1. Content 9.245 1.692 Significance
2. Grammar 10.639 1.692 Significance
The table 4.5, above shows that the t-test value of content was greater than
the t-table value (9.245 > 1.692) and also t-test value of grammar was greater than
t-table value (10.639 > 1.692). It could be concluded that there was a significant
difference among the students’ writing ability before and after the researcher used
Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy in teaching writing skills to second year
of students in SMP Islam Darul Hikmah Makassar. It was shown that the null
hypothesis (H0) was rejected and the alternative hypothesis (H1) was accepted.
Therefore, the alternative hypothesis of using graphic and semantic organizer
strategy in teaching writing was accepted.
B. Discussions
This part presents a discussion dealing with the interpretation of the research
findings derived from the results of statistical analysis to depict the students’
writing skills in the teaching and learning environment through Graphic and
Semantic Organizer Strategy, focusing on two components of writing; content and
grammar.
The description of data collected from writing achievements in terms of
content and grammar as explained in the previous section showed that the
students’ writing skills in terms of content and grammar was improved. It was
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supported by mean score and percentage of the students’ pre-test and post-test
results. Based on the findings above, the usage of Graphic and Semantic
Organizer Strategy allowed students to achieve higher mean score results in
writing descriptive text than before they knew Graphic and Semantic Organizers.
1. The Effect of Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy towards
Students’ Writing achievement in terms of content
Writing achievement in terms of content is about the skill to develop the
idea based on the topic that was given from the researcher while remaining
suitable for fulfilling students’ needs and wants. It is achieved when we have a
more interested reader with a deeper understanding of the content and who is able
to clearly gather information from it. Content is a very important aspect in writing
so it should be relevant to the topic, with good unity and completeness.
In the first meeting, when the researcher conducted the pre-test, the
researcher noticed that most of students had little vocabularies and did not know
how to develop let alone begin explaining their ideas. At this stage the writing
process for the students was an incredibly difficult one. It could be seen in the
table 4.2 that the students’ writing achievement in pre-test’s mean score was poor,
it was 56.62.
In terms of content in the pre-test, the students were lacking the necessary
vocabularies and skills so that the written content produced was not even related
to the topic they were given, it was not quite easy to understand.
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After the students had been given treatment by the researcher, the students’
mean score in post-test improved to become 87.5. It was a greater score than the
pre-test score. Observing the pre-test to post-test score results, we can see there
was a significant achievement from low to high by using graphic and semantic
organizer strategy. The improvement percentage showed 54.54%. Using GSOS
had improved students’ writing performance special in terms of content.
2. The Effect of Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy towards
Students’ writing Achievement in Terms of Grammar
In addition, the other problem was grammar, grammar was included but it
measured poorly in pre-test results with a low score specifically when applied in
the present-tense. Grammatical structure of sentences are an important component
in writing, a well written document will utilize proper grammar to emphasize the
content. While improving on their written skills students also attained greater
overall grammatical skills in terms of spoken language as well. Students were
more likely better able to express themselves in written and spoken English
language.
Based on the findings above, using GSOS in the class, the data and results
collected shows that the students’ writing skills in terms of grammar are
significantly improved. It could be seen in the mean score of pre-test and post-test
results and also the overall improvement percentage on the table 4.4 and graphic
4.2.
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The data on the table 4.4 showed that the score of grammar improved from
41.17 in pretest’s mean score to 74.26 in post-test’s score. It was a good
improvement because the students learned more about present tense’s structure
and were better able to express themselves in the present-tense.
After calculating the score between pre-test and post-test, the researcher
found that writing skills of students improved which was to be 80.35% from mean
score 41.17 in pre-test to 74.26 in post-test with a difference of 33.09. It meant
that implementation of GSOS in treatment of students’ SMP Islam Darul Hikmah
Makassar was a success. Students were better able to understand when writing in
the terms of grammar.
3. The Significant difference of Mean Score Across Two Tests
After calculating the value t-test analysis then it was compared with t-table
value so researcher found that the value of t-test was greater than the t-table value,
it meant that null hypothesis (H0) was rejected and alternative hypothesis (H1) was
accepted because there was a significant difference between the mean score of the
test that was given by the researcher before and after the researcher taught writing
skills by using Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy.
Meanwhile, when it was found that the value of t-test was lower than t-table
value, it meant that the null hypothesis (H0) was accepted and alternative
hypothesis (H1) was rejected because there was not a significant difference with
the mean score of the test that had been given by the researcher before and after
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the researcher taught writing skills by using Graphic and Semantic Organizer
Strategy.
T-test value for writing component in terms of content was greater than t-
table (9.245 > 1.692) and also t-test value of grammar was greater than t-table
(10.639 > 1.692). It meant that there was a significant difference between
students’ writing ability before and after they got GSOS from the researcher in
writing descriptive text of the second year students of SMP Islam Darul Hikmah
Makassar especially for students of VIIIA as sample in this research. Besides that,
the data showed that null hypothesis (H0) was rejected and the alternative
hypothesis (H1) was accepted.
The researcher concludes that using GSOS is one of the best strategies for
improving the students’ writing achievement of the second year of students’ SMP
Islam Darul Hikmah Makassar in academic year 2017/2018 especially in terms of
content and grammar.
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CHAPTER V
CONCLUSIONS AND SUGGESTIONS
A. Conclusions
The findings have yielded meaningful discussions and data which have
drawn obvious and conclusive results; however, conversely I will organize the
conclusive evidence and offer further suggestions for the sake of thoroughness.
The conclusions are mainly a repetition of chapter 4 but the varying results should
be explained thoroughly and in detail so the reader can clearly understand and
attain the full content of the research. Final conclusions drawn from this research
are as follows:
1. The implementation of graphic and semantic organizer strategy affected the
students’ achievement in writing descriptive text. There was significant
different of mean score from the pre-test to the post-test results. It can be
concluded that the instruction of Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy
had a positive effect on students’ achievement in writing descriptive text.
2. The improvement of the students’ writing ability in writing descriptive text
in terms of content by using graphic and semantic organizer strategy was
significant. The students’ mean score pre-test and post-test so the
improvement percentage of students was 54.54% and t-test analysis of
content was 9.245, it was greater than t-table (9.245 > 1.692).
3. The improvement of the students’ ability in writing descriptive text in terms
of grammar by using Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy was
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significant. Based on the data pre-test and post-test, the improvement
percentage of students was 80.35% and t-test analysis of grammar was
10.639, it was greater than t-table (10.639 > 1.692).
B. Suggestions
Based on the conclusion above, the researcher would like to recommend
some suggestions, which are intended for the better teaching and learning English
language. They are as follows:
1. For the teachers, the teachers are expected to know that Graphic and
Semantic Organizer Strategy can be referenced in teaching writing as one
alternatives teaching strategy, it can be used for teaching writing of several
kinds of texts for Junior High School students. The English teachers should
enhance their knowledge and their ability in teaching. They should use an
interesting strategy to attract students’ attention, and create a learning
process that is more interesting, enjoyable, and educative.
2. For the students, the students should be more attentive with the strategy
given by the teacher. If the students are not comfortable and find
themselves bored with the way of their teachers’ strategy, they should ask
their teacher to change or give them a different strategy which is more
acceptable and easier for the students to grasp.
3. For future researchers, they can use this final project as a literature to guide
them when they want to do the similar research. This research will help the
researchers or further researchers to find out the new strategy which is
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RENCANA PELAKSANAAN PEMBELAJARAN
(RPP)
SMP/MTS : SMP Islam Darul Hikmah Makassar
Kelas/Semester : VIII (Delapan) / 1
Mata Pelajaran : Bahasa Inggris
Jenisteks : Monolog descriptive/recount
Tema : Describing People, animal, and things
Aspek/Skill : Menulis
Alokasi Waktu : 4 x 40 menit (2 x pertemuan)
Pertemuan : I & II
Standar Kompetensi : 6. Mengungkapkan makna dalam teks tulis fungsional dan esei
pendek sederhana berbentuk descriptive, dan recount untuk
berinteraksi dengan lingkungan sekitar.
Kompetensi Dasar : 6.2Mengungkapkan makna dan langkah retorika dalam esei pendek
sederhana dengan menggunakan ragam bahasa tulis secara akurat,
lancar dan berterima untuk berinteraksi dengan lingkungan sekitar
dalam teks berbentuk descriptive dan recount.
Indikator
Pertemuan I
Siswa dapat:
1. Mengidentifikasi makna teks Deskriptif.
2. Mengidentifikasi langkah retorika dan ciri kebahasaan teks deskriptif.
3. Menemukan ide melalui Graphic and Semantic Organizer tipe Spider Map.
4. Memilih dan menyusun ide untuk menyusun paragraph deskriptif.
Pertemuan II
Siswa dapat:
1. Menulis draft pertama dari paragraph deskriptif sesuai dengan design Spider Map.
2. Merevisi isi dan organisasi dari draft paragraph deskriptif.
I. Tujuan Pembelajaran
Setelah menyelesaikan kegiatan pembelajaran, siswa dapat:
1. Mengetahui makna teks deskriptif.
2. Mengetahui langkah retorika dan cirri kebahasaan teks deskriptif.
3. Menemukan ide melalui Spider Map.
4. Memilih dan menyusun ide untuk menyusun paragraph deskriptif.
5. Menulis draft pertamadengan isi dan organisasi yang benar
6. Merevisi isi dan organisasi dari draft paragraph descriptif.
7. Menemukan kesalahan dalam tulisan mereka
8. Menulis draft terakhir dengan benar
.
II. Materi Pembelajaran
1. Ciri kebahasan teks descriptive.
2. Vocabulary items related to animal appearance:
Animal Parts Meaning Natural Meaning Hair, Skin Meaning
Fur
Mane
Snout
Hoof
Tail
Whiskers
Claw
Beak
Wing
Feathers
Horn
Hands
Feet
Head
Eyes
Scales
Bulu
Rambut kuda
Moncong
Kuku
Ekor
Kumis
Cakar
Paruh
Sayap
Bulu
Tanduk
Tangan
Kaki
Kepala
Mata
Sisik
Shy
Social
Tame
Territorial
Untrained
Wild
Mamma
Clever
Herbivorous
Carnivorous
Dangerous
Adorable
Agile
Poisonous
vertebrate
Malu
Ramah
Jinak
Teritorial
Tak terlatih
Liar
Beranak
Cerdas
Herbivora
Karnifora
Berbahaya
Menggemaskan
Tangkas
Beracun
Bertulang
belakang
Furry
Downy
Fluffy
Scaly
Berbuly
Lembut
Halus
Bersisik
3. Memberikan contoh teks descriptive menggunakan spider map . e.g.
Bongo the Orangutan
There is an orangutan in theBandung zoo. People call her Bongo.She comes from a dense forest on theisland of Kalimantan.
She has physical features similar to ahuman. Bongo has brownish fur, andwalks with two feet. Her feet areshorter than her hands. Her hands arelong and strong. Bongo is almost asbig as a human. She is a mammalthat means she gives birth to herchildren and breast feeds them.
Source: www.omepage.mac.com
4. Design Spider Map yang dibuat siswa.
5. Draft paragraph descriptive siswa.
Mammal
Fur Feet
Hands
Bongo
Orangutan
Kalimantan
III. Metode/Model Pembelajaran: Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy type
Spider Map/Think, Pair Share Model
IV. Langkah-langkahKegiatan
Pertemuan Pertama
Kegiatan dan Langkah Pembelajaran Waktu
A. Kegiatan Awal
Greeting ( member salam dan saling tegur sapa)
Ice Breaking (pengkondisian kelas)
Apersepsi (menyambungkan pelajaran yang sudah pernah
dipelajari sebelumnya)
Memberikan motivasi belajar
B. Kegiatan Inti
Guru menjelaskan kepada siswa tentang teks descriptive
(fungsi sosial, ciri kebahasaan, dan struktur teksnya).
Guru memberikan contoh teks descriptive kepada siswa
untuk dipelajari.
Guru bersama siswa menganalisa kosakata dan grammar
yang digunakan dari teks descriptive tersebut.
Guru memperkenalkan Spider Map dan menjelaskannya.
Memberikan contoh gambar design Spider Map dari teks
descriptive.
Guru meminta siswa untuk menyebutkan hewan
peliharaannya favoritnya.
Guru meminta siswa untuk mencari lima kata yang dapat
mewakili untuk mendeskripsikan hewan tersebut.
Guru meminta siswa untuk membuat design Spider Map
dari lima kata yang telah ditentukan oleh siswa.
Guru meminta siswa untuk mengumpulkan design spider
map yang telah dibuat siswa.
Guru mengevaluasi organizer yang dibuat oleh siswa
10 Menit
65 menit
C. Kegiatan penutup
Guru menyimpulkan materi yang telah dipelajari
Mengingatkan siswa bahwa dipertemuan selanjutnya
akan membuat paragraph descriptive
Memberikan salam perpisahan
5 menit
Pertemuan Kedua
Kegiatan dan Langkah Pembelajaran Waktu
A. Kegiatan Awal
Greeting ( member salam dan saling tegur sapa)
Ice Breaking (pengkondisian kelas)
Apersepsi (menyambungkan pelajaran yang sudah
pernah dipelajari sebelumnya)
Mereview pelajaran pada pertemuan pertama
A. Kegiatan Inti
Siswa diminta untuk membuat draft pertama dari design
Spider Map yang telah dibuat
Guru mengobservasi kegiatan siswa dengan berkeliling
kesetiap siswa
Siswa diminta untuk menukar hasil kerjanya dengan
teman disebelahnya
Siswa diminta untuk memberikan catatan terhadap
hasil kerja temannya mengenai draft beserta Spider
Mapnya
B. Kegiatan penutup
Siswa diminta untuk mengumpulkan hasil kerjanya
Guru memberikan sedikit catatan
Salam
10 Menit
65 menit
5 menit
V. Sumber dan Media belajar
a) Sumber Belajar
Buku English in Focus for Grade VIII Junior High School (SMP/MTs)
halaman 21-25
b) Media Belajar
Script text yang terlampir
Gambar orangutan
Kertas latihan
White board
VI. Penilaian
a) Untuk hasil tulisan diambil dengan cara scoring rubic dibawah ini
Component ofWriting
4 3 2 1
Content relevant to thetopic and easyto understand.
rather relevantto the topic andeasy tounderstand.
relevant to thetopic but is notquite easy tounderstand
quite relevant tothe topic but isnot quite easy tounderstand.
Grammar a fewgrammaticalinaccuracies.
somegrammaticalinaccuracies.
numerousgrammaticalinaccuracies.
frequentgrammaticalinaccuracies.
b) Instrumen:
Make a paragraph about your favorite animas or plants.
c) PedomanPenilaian
Nilai maksimal masing-masing component= 4
Nilai maksimal = 8
Nilai perolehan = 100xalSkorMaksim
hanSkorPerole
Klasifikasi nilai:
No Score Classification1234567
96 – 10086 - 9576 - 8566 - 7556 - 6536 - 550 - 35
ExcellentVery goodGoodFairly goodFairPoorVery poor
Makassar, 14 Februari 2017
Peneliti
Nenga WidyastutiNIM : 10535 5205 12
RENCANA PELAKSANAAN PEMBELAJARAN
(RPP)
SMP/MTS : SMP Islam Darul Hikmah Makassar
Kelas/Semester : VIII (Delapan) / 1
Mata Pelajaran : Bahasa Inggris
Jenisteks : Monolog descriptive/recount
Tema : Describing People, animal, and things
Aspek/Skill : Menulis
Alokasi Waktu : 4 x 40 menit (2 x pertemuan)
Pertemuan : III & IV
Standar Kompetensi : 6. Mengungkapkan makna dalam teks tulis fungsional dan esei
pendek sederhana berbentuk descriptive, dan recount untuk
berinteraksi dengan lingkungan sekitar.
Kompetensi Dasar : 6.2Mengungkapkan makna dan langkah retorika dalam esei pendek
sederhana dengan menggunakan ragam bahasa tulis secara akurat,
lancar dan berterima untuk berinteraksi dengan lingkungan sekitar
dalam teks berbentuk descriptive dan recount.
Indikator
Pertemuan III
Siswa dapat:
1. Mengedit draft pertama dalam hal grammar.
2. Proof read tulisan mereka.
Pertemuan IV
Siswa dapat;
1. Menulis draft terakhir.
2. Mempresentasikan tulisan descriptive mereka
I. Tujuan Pembelajaran
Setelah menyelesaikan kegiatan pembelajaran, siswa dapat:
1. Mengetahui makna teks deskriptif.
2. Mengetahui langkah retorika dan cirri kebahasaan teks deskriptif.
3. Menemukan ide melalui Spider Map.
4. Memilih dan menyusun ide untuk menyusun paragraph deskriptif.
5. Menulis draft pertamadengan isi dan organisasi yang benar
6. Merevisi isi dan organisasi dari draft paragraph descriptif.
7. Menemukan kesalahan dalam tulisan mereka
8. Menulis draft terakhir dengan benar
.
II. Materi Pembelajaran
1. Ciri kebahasan teks descriptive.
2. Vocabulary items related to animal appearance:
Animal Parts Meaning Natural Meaning Hair, Skin Meaning
Fur
Mane
Snout
Hoof
Tail
Whiskers
Claw
Beak
Wing
Feathers
Horn
Hands
Feet
Head
Eyes
Scales
Bulu
Rambut kuda
Moncong
Kuku
Ekor
Kumis
Cakar
Paruh
Sayap
Bulu
Tanduk
Tangan
Kaki
Kepala
Mata
Sisik
Shy
Social
Tame
Territorial
Untrained
Wild
Mamma
Clever
Herbivorous
Carnivorous
Dangerous
Adorable
Agile
Poisonous
vertebrate
Malu
Ramah
Jinak
Teritorial
Tak terlatih
Liar
Beranak
Cerdas
Herbivora
Karnifora
Berbahaya
Menggemaskan
Tangkas
Beracun
Bertulang
belakang
Furry
Downy
Fluffy
Scaly
Berbuly
Lembut
Halus
Bersisik
3. Memberikan contoh teks descriptive menggunakan spider map . e.g.
Bongo the Orangutan
There is an orangutan in the Bandungzoo. People call her Bongo. She comesfrom a dense forest on the island ofKalimantan.
She has physical features similar to ahuman. Bongo has brownish fur, andwalks with two feet. Her feet are shorterthan her hands. Her hands are long andstrong. Bongo is almost as big as ahuman. She is a mammal that meansshe gives birth to her children andbreast feeds them.
Source: www.omepage.mac.com
4. Design Spider Map yang dibuat siswa.
5. Draft paragraph descriptive siswa.
III. Metode/Model Pembelajaran: Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy type
Spider Map/Think Pair Share Model
Fur
Colour Feet
Hands
Bongo
Orangutan
Habitat
IV. Langkah-langkahKegiatan
Pertemuan III
Kegiatan dan Langkah Pembelajaran Waktu
A. Kegiatan Awal
Greeting ( member salam dan saling tegur sapa).
Ice Breaking (pengkondisian kelas).
Apersepsi (menyambungkan pelajaran yang sudah pernah
dipelajari sebelumnya).
Mereview pelajaran pada pertemuan kedua.
B. Kegiatan Inti
Guru membagikan draft tulisan siswa.
Siswa diminta untuk merevisi draft yang telah dibuat.
Guru meminta siswa untuk menukar hasil kerjanya dengan
teman disebelahnya.
Siswa diminta untuk memberikan catatan akan hasil kerja
temannya.
C. Kegiatan penutup
Siswa diminta untuk mengumpulkan hasil kerjanya
Guru memberikan sedikit catatan
Salam
10 Menit
65 Menit
5 menit
Pertemuan IV
Kegiatan dan Langkah Pembelajaran Waktu
A. Kegiatan Awal
Greeting ( member salam dan saling tegur sapa)
Ice Breaking (pengkondisian kelas)
Apersepsi (menyambungkan pelajaran yang sudah pernah
dipelajari sebelumnya)
Mereview pelajaran pada pertemuan kedua
10 Menit
B. Kegiatan Inti
Guru membagikan draft tulisan siswa
Siswa diminta untuk menyempurnakan hasil tulisannya
dengan memperhatikan grammatical dan tehnik
penulisannya
Guru meminta siswa untuk menukar hasil kerjanya dengan
teman disebelahnya.
Siswa diminta untuk memberikan komentar terhadap hasil
kerja temannya
Beberapa siswa diminta untuk membacakan hasil
tulisannya
C. Kegiatan penutup
Siswa diminta untuk mengumpulkan hasil kerjanya untuk
diambil penilaian
Guru memberikan sedikit catatan
Salam
65 menit
5 menit
V. Sumber dan Media belajar
a) Sumber Belajar
Buku English in Focus for Grade VIII Junior High School (SMP/MTs)
halaman 21-25
b) Media Belajar
Script text yang terlampir
Gambar orangutan
Kertas latihan
White board
VI. Penilaian
a) Untuk hasil tulisan diambil dengan cara scoring rubic dibawah ini
Component ofWriting
4 3 2 1
Content relevant to thetopic and easyto understand.
rather relevantto the topic andeasy to
relevant to thetopic but is notquite easy to
quite relevant tothe topic but isnot quite easy to
understand. understand understand.
Grammar a fewgrammaticalinaccuracies.
somegrammaticalinaccuracies.
numerousgrammaticalinaccuracies.
frequentgrammaticalinaccuracies.
b) Instrumen:
Make a paragraph about your favorite animas or plants.
c) PedomanPenilaian
Nilai maksimal masing-masing component= 4
Nilai maksimal = 8
Nilai perolehan = 100xalSkorMaksim
hanSkorPerole
Klasifikasi nilai:
No Score Classification1234567
96 – 10086 - 9576 - 8566 - 7556 - 6536 - 550 - 35
ExcellentVery goodGoodFairly goodFairPoorVery poor
Makassar, 21 Februari 2017
Peneliti
Nenga WidyastutiNIM : 10535 5205 12
RENCANA PELAKSANAAN PEMBELAJARAN
(RPP)
SMP/MTS : SMP Islam Darul Hikmah Makassar
Kelas/Semester : VIII (Delapan) / 1
Mata Pelajaran : Bahasa Inggris
Jenisteks : Monolog descriptive/recount
Tema : Describing People, animal, and things
Aspek/Skill : Menulis
Alokasi Waktu : 4 x 40 menit (2 x pertemuan)
Pertemuan : V & VI
Standar Kompetensi : 6. Mengungkapkan makna dalam teks tulis fungsional dan esei
pendek sederhana berbentuk descriptive, dan recount untuk
berinteraksi dengan lingkungan sekitar.
Kompetensi Dasar : 6.2Mengungkapkan makna dan langkah retorika dalam esei pendek
sederhana dengan menggunakan ragam bahasa tulis secara akurat,
lancar dan berterima untuk berinteraksi dengan lingkungan sekitar
dalam teks berbentuk descriptive dan recount.
Indikator
Pertemuan V
Siswa dapat:
1. Mengidentifikasi makna teks Deskriptif.
2. Mengidentifikasi langkah retorika dan ciri kebahasaan teks deskriptif.
3. Menemukan ide melalui Graphic and Semantic Organizer tipe Semantic Map.
4. Memilih dan menyusun ide untuk menyusun paragraph deskriptif.
Pertemuan VI
Siswa dapat:
1. Menulis draft pertama dari paragraph deskriptif sesuai dengan design Semantic Map.
2. Merevisi isi dan organisasi dari draft paragraph deskriptif.
I. Tujuan Pembelajaran
Setelah menyelesaikan kegiatan pembelajaran, siswa dapat:
1. Mengetahui makna teks deskriptif.
2. Mengetahui langkah retorika dan ciri kebahasaan teks deskriptif.
3. Menemukan ide melalui Semantic Map.
4. Memilih dan menyusun ide untuk menyusun paragraph deskriptif.
5. Menulis draft pertamadengan isi dan organisasi yang benar
6. Merevisi isi dan organisasi dari draft paragraph descriptif.
7. Menemukan kesalahan dalam tulisan mereka
8. Menulis draft terakhir dengan benar
II. Materi Pembelajaran
1. Ciri kebahasan teks descriptive.
2. Vocabulary items related to human features:
Noun Meaning Adjective Meaning
Eyes
Hair
Skin
Lips
Feet
Hand
Mata
Rambut
Kulit
Bibir
Kaki
Tangan
Kind
Patient
Diligent
Smart
Angry
Shy
Fat
Thin
Late
Early
Baik hati
Sabar
Rajin
Cerdas
Marah
Malu
Gemuk
Kurus
Terlambat
Cepat
3. Memberikan contoh teks descriptive menggunakan semantic map . e.g.
4. Design Semantic Map yang dibuat siswa.
5. Draft paragraph descriptive siswa.
III. Metode/Model Pembelajaran: Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy type
Spider Map/Think Pair Share Model
Anto
Job
Hobby
Strengths
Attitude
Diligent
On timeSMP
Student
ReadingRespectful
SwimmingObedient
IV. Langkah-langkahKegiatan
Pertemuan Kelima
Kegiatan dan Langkah Pembelajaran Waktu
A. Kegiatan Awal
Greeting ( member salam dan saling tegur sapa)
Ice Breaking (pengkondisian kelas)
Apersepsi (menyambungkan pelajaran yang sudah pernah
dipelajari sebelumnya)
Memberikan motivasi belajar
B. Kegiatan Inti
Guru menjelaskan kepada siswa tentang teks descriptive
(fungsi sosial, ciri kebahasaan, dan struktur teksnya).
Guru memberikan contoh teks descriptive kepada siswa
untuk dipelajari.
Guru bersama siswa menganalisa kosakata dan grammar
yang digunakan dari teks descriptive tersebut.
Guru memperkenalkan Semantic Map dan
menjelaskannya.
Memberikan contoh gambar design Semantic Map dari
teks descriptive.
Guru meminta siswa untuk menyebutkan kampung
halaman, sahabat, atau hobbynya.
Guru meminta siswa untuk mencari lima kata yang dapat
mewakili untuk mendeskripsikan hewan tersebut.
Guru meminta siswa untuk membuat design Semantic
Map dari lima kata yang telah ditentukan oleh siswa.
Guru meminta siswa untuk mengumpulkan design
Semantic Map yang telah dibuat siswa.
Guru mengevaluasi organizer yang dibuat oleh siswa
C. Kegiatan penutup
Guru menyimpulkan materi yang telah dipelajari
10 Menit
65 menit
5 menit
Mengingatkan siswa bahwa dipertemuan selanjutnya
akan membuat paragraph descriptive
Memberikan salam perpisahan
Pertemuan Keenam
Kegiatan dan Langkah Pembelajaran Waktu
A. Kegiatan Awal
Greeting ( member salam dan saling tegur sapa)
Ice Breaking (pengkondisian kelas)
Apersepsi (menyambungkan pelajaran yang sudah
pernah dipelajari sebelumnya)
Mereview pelajaran pada pertemuan pertama
B. Kegiatan Inti
Siswa diminta untuk membuat draft pertama dari design
Semantic Map yang telah dibuat
Guru mengobservasi kegiatan siswa dengan berkeliling
kesetiap siswa
Siswa diminta untuk menukar hasil kerjanya dengan
teman disebelahnya
Siswa diminta untuk memberikan catatan terhadap
hasil kerja temannya mengenai draft beserta Semantic
Mapnya
C. Kegiatan penutup
Siswa diminta untuk mengumpulkan hasil kerjanya
Guru memberikan sedikit catatan
Salam
10 Menit
65 menit
5 menit
V. Sumber dan Media belajar
a) Sumber Belajar
Buku English in Focus for Grade VIII Junior High School (SMP/MTs)
halaman 21-25
b) Media Belajar
Script text yang terlampir
Kertas latihan
White board
VI. Penilaian
a) Untuk hasil tulisan diambil dengan cara scoring rubic dibawah ini
Component ofWriting
4 3 2 1
Content relevant to thetopic and easyto understand.
rather relevantto the topic andeasy tounderstand.
relevant to thetopic but is notquite easy tounderstand
quite relevant tothe topic but isnot quite easy tounderstand.
Grammar a fewgrammaticalinaccuracies.
somegrammaticalinaccuracies.
numerousgrammaticalinaccuracies.
frequentgrammaticalinaccuracies.
b) Instrumen:
Make a paragraph about your friend.
c) PedomanPenilaian
Nilai maksimal masing-masing component= 4
Nilai maksimal = 8
Nilai perolehan = 100xalSkorMaksim
hanSkorPerole
Klasifikasi nilai:
No Score Classification
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
96 – 100
86 - 95
76 - 85
66 - 75
56 - 65
36 - 55
0 - 35
Excellent
Very good
Good
Fairly good
Fair
Poor
Very poor
Makassar, 3 Maret 2017
Peneliti
Nenga WidyastutiNIM : 10535 5205 12
RENCANA PELAKSANAAN PEMBELAJARAN
(RPP)
SMP/MTS : SMP Islam Darul Hikmah Makassar
Kelas/Semester : VIII (Delapan) / 1
Mata Pelajaran : Bahasa Inggris
Jenisteks : Monolog descriptive/recount
Tema : Describing People, animal, and things
Aspek/Skill : Menulis
Alokasi Waktu : 4 x 40 menit (2 x pertemuan)
Pertemuan : VII & VIII
Standar Kompetensi : 6. Mengungkapkan makna dalam teks tulis fungsional dan esei
pendek sederhana berbentuk descriptive, dan recount untuk
berinteraksi dengan lingkungan sekitar.
Kompetensi Dasar : 6.2Mengungkapkan makna dan langkah retorika dalam esei pendek
sederhana dengan menggunakan ragam bahasa tulis secara akurat,
lancar dan berterima untuk berinteraksi dengan lingkungan sekitar
dalam teks berbentuk descriptive dan recount.
Indikator
Pertemuan VII
Siswa dapat:
1. Mengedit draft pertama dalam hal grammar.
2. Proof read tulisan mereka.
Pertemuan VIII
Siswa dapat;
1. Menulis draft terakhir.
2. Mempresentasikan tulisan descriptive mereka
I. Tujuan Pembelajaran
Setelah menyelesaikan kegiatan pembelajaran, siswa dapat:
1. Mengetahui makna teks deskriptif.
2. Mengetahui langkah retorika dan cirri kebahasaan teks deskriptif.
3. Menemukan ide melalui Semantic Map.
4. Memilih dan menyusun ide untuk menyusun paragraph deskriptif.
5. Menulis draft pertamadengan isi dan organisasi yang benar
6. Merevisi isi dan organisasi dari draft paragraph descriptif.
7. Menemukan kesalahan dalam tulisan mereka
8. Menulis draft terakhir dengan benar
.
II. Materi Pembelajaran
1. Ciri kebahasan teks descriptive.
2. Vocabulary items related to people features:
Noun Meaning Adjective Meaning
Eyes
Hair
Skin
Lips
Feet
Hand
Mata
Rambut
Kulit
Bibir
Kaki
Tangan
Kind
Patient
Diligent
Smart
Angry
Shy
Fat
Thin
Late
Early
Baik hati
Sabar
Rajin
Cerdas
Marah
Malu
Gemuk
Kurus
Terlambat
Cepat
3. Memberikan contoh teks descriptive menggunakan semantic map . e.g.
4. Design Spider Map yang dibuat siswa.
5. Draft paragraph descriptive siswa.
III. Metode/Model Pembelajaran: Graphic and Semantic Organizer Strategy type
Spider Map, Think Pair Share Model
Anto
Job
Hobby
Strengths
Attitude
Diligent
On timeSMP
Student
ReadingRespectful
SwimmingObedient
IV. Langkah-langkahKegiatan
Pertemuan VII
Kegiatan dan Langkah Pembelajaran Waktu
A. Kegiatan Awal
Greeting ( member salam dan saling tegur sapa).
Ice Breaking (pengkondisian kelas).
Apersepsi (menyambungkan pelajaran yang sudah pernah
dipelajari sebelumnya).
Mereview pelajaran pada pertemuan kedua.
B. Kegiatan Inti
Guru membagikan draft tulisan siswa.
Siswa diminta untuk merevisi draft yang telah dibuat.
Guru meminta siswa untuk menukar hasil kerjanya dengan
teman disebelahnya.
Siswa diminta untuk memberikan catatan akan hasil kerja
temannya.
C. Kegiatan penutup
Siswa diminta untuk mengumpulkan hasil kerjanya
Guru memberikan sedikit catatan
Salam
10 Menit
65 Menit
5 menit
Pertemuan VIII
Kegiatan dan Langkah Pembelajaran Waktu
A. Kegiatan Awal
Greeting ( member salam dan saling tegur sapa)
Ice Breaking (pengkondisian kelas)
Apersepsi (menyambungkan pelajaran yang sudah pernah
dipelajari sebelumnya)
Mereview pelajaran pada pertemuan kedua
10 Menit
B. Kegiatan Inti
Guru membagikan draft tulisan siswa
Siswa diminta untuk menyempurnakan hasil tulisannya
dengan memperhatikan grammatical dan tehnik
penulisannya
Guru meminta siswa untuk menukar hasil kerjanya dengan
teman disebelahnya.
Siswa diminta untuk memberikan komentar terhadap hasil
kerja temannya
Beberapa siswa diminta untuk membacakan hasil
tulisannya
C. Kegiatan penutup
Siswa diminta untuk mengumpulkan hasil kerjanya untuk
diambil penilaian
Guru memberikan sedikit catatan
Salam
65 menit
5 menit
V. Sumber dan Media belajar
a) Sumber Belajar
Buku English in Focus for Grade VIII Junior High School (SMP/MTs)
halaman 21-25
b) Media Belajar
Script text yang terlampir
Kertas latihan
White board
VI. Penilaian
a) Untuk hasil tulisan diambil dengan cara scoring rubic dibawah ini
Component ofWriting
4 3 2 1
Content relevant to thetopic and easyto understand.
rather relevantto the topic andeasy tounderstand.
relevant to thetopic but is notquite easy tounderstand
quite relevant tothe topic but isnot quite easy tounderstand.
Grammar a fewgrammaticalinaccuracies.
somegrammaticalinaccuracies.
numerousgrammaticalinaccuracies.
frequentgrammaticalinaccuracies.
b) Instrumen:
Make a paragraph about your friend.
c) PedomanPenilaian
Nilai maksimal masing-masing component= 4
Nilai maksimal = 8
Nilai perolehan = 100xalSkorMaksim
hanSkorPerole
Klasifikasi nilai:
No Score Classification
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
96 – 100
86 - 95
76 - 85
66 - 75
56 - 65
36 - 55
0 - 35
Excellent
Very good
Good
Fairly good
Fair
Poor
Very poor
Makassar, 16 Maret 2017
Peneliti
Nenga WidyastutiNIM : 10535 5205 12
Materi Pokok I (Pertemuan I – IV)
Descriptive Text
1. Ciri kebahasan teks descriptive
Pengertian Descriptive Text
Descriptive berarti deskripsi (gambaran)
Descriptive text adalah sebuah tulisan atau teks yang menggambarkan sifat-
sifat yang melekat pada sesuatu, baik itu manusia, hewan, tumbuhan, atau pun
benda mati seperti rumah, mobil computer, radio dan masih banyak lagi
dengan tujuan agar dapat dimengerti oleh orang yang tidak langsung
mengalaminya sendiri.
Introduction
Description
Bongo the Orangutan
There is an orangutan in the Bandung zoo. People call her Bongo.
She comes from a dense forest on the island of Kalimantan.
She has physical features similar to a human. Bongo has brownish
fur, and walks with two feet. Her feet are shorter than her hands. Her
hands are long and strong. Bongo is almost as big as a human. She is
a mammal that means she gives birth to her children and breast feeds
them.
Source: www.omepage.mac.com
Generic Structure Descriptive Text
Berikut adalah susunan di dalam membuat sebuah Descriptive Text:
Identification:
Paragraf pertama – adalah untuk mengidentifikasi sesuatu yang ingin
dideskripsikan atau digambarkan.
Indentification berfungsi untuk memperkenalkan kepada pembaca tentang
objek atau sesuatu yang akan kita gambarkan sebelum kita beritahu tentang
sifat-sifatnya.
Description:
Paragraf kedua dan seterusnya – berisi tentang sifat-sifat yang melekat pada
sesuatu yang sudah diperkenalkan sebelumnya kepada pembaca di paragraf
pertama.
Ciri-ciri Descriptive Text
Menggunakan Simple Present Tense. Fungsi dari Simple Present adalah untuk
menggambarkan sebuah fakta atau kebenaran (contoh fakta: matahari itu
panas). Oleh karena itu kamu harus selalu menggunakan kata kerja bentuk
pertama (verb-1) dan (to be) bantu kata kerja yaitu: is/ am/ are.
contoh: Her feet are shorter than her hands
Menggunakan kata sifat (adjective). Karena fungsinya adalah untuk
menggambarkan sesuatu dengan menjelaskan sifat-sifatnya, maka dalam
descriptive text akan banyak dijumpai kata sifat (adjective), seperti: fast,
handsome, beautiful, tall, small, big.
Contoh: She is a mammal
Menggunakan bantu kata kerja (to be). Dalam descriptive text kita juga
akan sering menjumpai to be (bantu kata kerja) yaitu is/ am/ are.
2. Vocabulary items related to animal features:
Animal Parts Meaning Natural Meaning Hair, Skin Meaning
Fur
Mane
Snout
Hoof
Tail
Whiskers
Claw
Beak
Wing
Feathers
Horn
Hands
Feet
Head
Eyes
Scales
Bulu
Rambut kuda
Moncong
Kuku
Ekor
Kumis
Cakar
Paruh
Sayap
Bulu
Tanduk
Tangan
Kaki
Kepala
Mata
Sisik
Shy
Social
Tame
Territorial
Untrained
Wild
Mamma
Clever
Herbivorous
Carnivorous
Dangerous
Adorable
Agile
Poisonous
vertebrate
Malu
Ramah
Jinak
Teritorial
Tak terlatih
Liar
Beranak
Cerdas
Herbivora
Karnifora
Berbahaya
Menggemaskan
Tangkas
Beracun
Bertulang
belakang
Furry
Downy
Fluffy
Scaly
Berbuly
Lembut
Halus
Bersisik
Contoh Spider Map dari descriptive text “Bongo the Orangutan”
Bongo
Orangutan
Fur
MammalHands
FeetKalimantan
Practice
Make a paragraph about your favorite animas or plants.
These guiding questions will help you to make good descriptions and arrange the words into
Spider Map to see the interrelationship among the concept.
1. What is the name of the animal or plant?
2. Where does it live?
3. What are the physical features?
• Its legs and arms
• Its color
• Its fur or feathers
4. What is the unique about it?
Materi Pokok II (Pertemuan V – VIII)
Descriptive Text
1. Ciri kebahasan teks descriptive
Pengertian Descriptive Text
Descriptive berarti deskripsi (gambaran)
Descriptive text adalah sebuah tulisan atau teks yang menggambarkan sifat-
sifat yang melekat pada sesuatu, baik itu manusia, hewan, tumbuhan, atau pun
benda mati seperti rumah, mobil computer, radio dan masih banyak lagi
dengan tujuan agar dapat dimengerti oleh orang yang tidak langsung
mengalaminya sendiri.
Generic Structure Descriptive Text
Berikut adalah susunan di dalam membuat sebuah Descriptive Text:
Identification:
Paragraf pertama – adalah untuk mengidentifikasi sesuatu yang ingin
dideskripsikan atau digambarkan.
Indentification berfungsi untuk memperkenalkan kepada pembaca tentang
objek atau sesuatu yang akan kita gambarkan sebelum kita beritahu tentang
sifat-sifatnya.
Description:
Paragraf kedua dan seterusnya – berisi tentang sifat-sifat yang melekat pada
sesuatu yang sudah diperkenalkan sebelumnya kepada pembaca di paragraf
pertama.
Ciri-ciri Descriptive Text
Menggunakan Simple Present Tense. Fungsi dari Simple Present adalah untuk
menggambarkan sebuah fakta atau kebenaran (contoh fakta: matahari itu
panas). Oleh karena itu kamu harus selalu menggunakan kata kerja bentuk
pertama (verb-1) dan (to be) bantu kata kerja yaitu: is/ am/ are.
contoh: Anto is a junior high school student.
Menggunakan kata sifat (adjective). Karena fungsinya adalah untuk
menggambarkan sesuatu dengan menjelaskan sifat-sifatnya, maka dalam
descriptive text akan banyak dijumpai kata sifat (adjective), seperti: fast,
handsome, beautiful, tall, small, big,late
Contoh: He is diligent.
Menggunakan bantu kata kerja (to be). Dalam descriptive text kita juga
akan sering menjumpai to be (bantu kata kerja) yaitu is/ am/ are.
2. Vocabulary items related to human features:
Noun Meaning Adjective Meaning
Eyes
Hair
Skin
Lips
Feet
Hand
Mata
Rambut
Kulit
Bibir
Kaki
Tangan
Kind
Patient
Diligent
Smart
Angry
Shy
Fat
Thin
Late
Early
Baik hati
Sabar
Rajin
Cerdas
Marah
Malu
Gemuk
Kurus
Terlambat
Cepat
Contoh Semantic Map dari descriptive text “ Anto The Good Student”
Anto
Job
Hobby
Strengths
Attitude
Diligent
On timeSMP
Student
ReadingRespectful
SwimmingObedient
Practice
Make a paragraph about your friend.
These guiding questions will help you to make good descriptions and arrange the words into
Semantic Map to see the interrelationship among the concept.
1. Who is he/her?
2. Where is he/her studying?
3. How does he/she go to school?
4. What is his/her?
5. What about hi/hers attitude to his/her?
6. What is the unique about him/her?
PRE-TEST
Name :
Class :
Reg Number :
Direction
Write down a descriptive text by choosing one of the topics that are listed below.
Favorite pets
Favorite artist
Favorite plants
Score
POST-TEST
Name :
Class :
Reg Number :
Direction
Write down a descriptive text by choosing one of the topics that are listed below.
Hobby
Friendship
Hometown
Score
The List of Students’ Name and Code Samples
NO NAME GENDERCODE
SAMPLE1 Akbar M S12 Alfina Damayanti F S23 Andi Irmayana .M F S34 Andi Mili M S45 Andi Ramlah Dg. Ugi F S56 Diki M S67 Fadillah F S78 Ismail M S89 M. Ilham Syahputra M S910 Muh. Arham M S1011 Muh. Dino Akbar M S1112 Muh. Fahyudin M S1213 Muh. Taufik M S1314 Muhammad Bintang M S1415 Muhammad Rendra M S1416 Niswar M S1617 Nur Asisa Tulianna F S1718 Nur Salsa Sahriani F S1819 Nurul Asmi F S1920 Nurul Aulia F S2021 Putri Maharani Hasrul F S2122 Reka Fadilah F S2223 Renaldy F S2324 Renika Nur Hidayat Tussaleha F S2425 Rezky Amalia F S2526 Salwang M S2627 Surti F S2728 Suwarni Ananda Pratama F S2829 Syahrul Ramadhan M S2930 Tezar M S3031 Zahratul Aurelia Marzuqa F S3132 Zulastri F S3233 Sitti Hajra Anugrah F S3334 Andi Nur Resky Desy Acriani F S34
N 34
The Students’ Classification Score in Pre-Test
No CodeSample
Diagnostic Test( 1)
TotalScore
ClassificationContent Grammar
1 S1 50 25 37.5 Poor2 S2 25 25 25 Very poor3 S3 25 25 25 Very poor4 S4 50 50 50 Poor5 S5 75 25 50 Poor6 S6 100 75 87.5 Very good7 S7 75 50 62.5 Fair8 S8 50 25 37.5 Poor9 S9 75 25 50 Poor10 S10 75 25 50 Poor11 S11 50 50 50 Poor12 S12 25 25 25 Very poor13 S13 50 25 37.5 Poor14 S14 25 25 25 Very poor15 S15 50 50 50 Poor16 S16 50 50 50 Poor17 S17 25 25 25 Very poor18 S18 75 50 62.5 Fair19 S19 75 50 62.5 Fair20 S20 50 50 50 Poor21 S21 75 50 62.5 Fair22 S22 50 50 50 Poor23 S23 75 50 62.5 Fair24 S24 50 50 50 Poor25 S25 25 25 25 Very poor26 S26 50 50 50 Poor27 S27 50 50 50 Poor28 S28 75 50 62.5 Fair29 S29 50 50 50 Poor30 S30 100 75 87.5 Very good31 S31 50 25 37.5 Poor32 S32 50 25 37.5 Poor33 S33 100 50 75 Fairly good34 S34 50 50 50 Poor
1925 1400 1662.5
56.61 41.17 48.89
The Result of Student’s Writing Descriptive Text in Terms of Content
(Pre-Test)
No CodeSample
Score TotalScore
Classification4 3 2 1
1 S1 2 50 Poor2 S2 1 25 Very poor3 S3 1 25 Very poor4 S4 2 50 Poor5 S5 3 75 Fairly good6 S6 4 100 Excellent7 S7 3 75 Fairly good8 S8 2 50 Poor9 S9 3 75 Fairly good10 S10 3 75 Fairly good11 S11 2 50 Poor12 S12 1 25 Very poor13 S13 2 50 Poor14 S14 1 25 Very poor15 S15 2 50 Poor16 S16 2 50 Poor17 S17 1 25 Very poor18 S18 3 75 Fairly good19 S19 3 75 Fairly good20 S20 2 50 Poor21 S21 3 75 Fairly good22 S22 2 50 Poor23 S23 3 75 Fairly good24 S24 2 50 Poor25 S25 1 25 Very poor26 S26 2 50 Poor27 S27 2 50 Poor28 S28 3 75 Fairly good29 S29 2 50 Poor30 S30 4 100 Excellent31 S31 2 50 Poor32 S32 2 50 Poor33 S33 4 100 Excellent34 S34 2 50 Poor
1925
56.61
The Result of Student’s writing Descriptive Text in Terms of Grammar
(Pre-Test)
No CodeSample
Score TotalScore
Classification4 3 2 1
1 S1 1 25 Very poor2 S2 1 25 Very poor3 S3 1 25 Very poor4 S4 2 50 Poor5 S5 1 25 Very poor6 S6 3 75 Fairly good7 S7 2 50 Poor8 S8 1 25 Very poor9 S9 1 25 Very poor10 S10 1 25 Very poor11 S11 2 50 Poor12 S12 1 25 Very poor13 S13 1 25 Very poor14 S14 1 25 Very poor15 S15 2 50 Poor16 S16 2 50 Poor17 S17 1 25 Very poor18 S18 2 50 Poor19 S19 2 50 Poor20 S20 2 50 Poor21 S21 2 50 Poor22 S22 2 50 Poor23 S23 2 50 Poor24 S24 2 50 Poor25 S25 1 25 Very poor26 S26 2 50 Poor27 S27 2 50 Poor28 S28 2 50 Poor29 S29 2 50 Poor30 S30 3 75 Fairly good31 S31 1 25 Very poor32 S32 1 25 Very poor33 S33 2 50 Poor34 S34 2 50 Poor
1400
41.17
The Students’ Classification Score in Post-Test
No CodeSample
Diagnostic Test( 2)
TotalScore
ClassificationContent Grammar
1 S1 75 75 75 Fairly good2 S2 75 50 62.5 Fair3 S3 75 50 62.5 Fair4 S4 75 50 62.5 Fair5 S5 100 100 100 Excellent6 S6 100 100 100 Excellent7 S7 75 75 75 Fairly good8 S8 75 75 75 Fairly good9 S9 100 100 100 Excellent10 S10 75 75 75 Fairly good11 S11 100 100 100 Excellent12 S12 75 75 75 Fairly good13 S13 75 50 62.5 Fair14 S14 75 75 75 Fairly good15 S15 100 75 87.5 Very good16 S16 100 75 87.5 Very good17 S17 75 75 75 Fairly good18 S18 100 100 100 Excellent19 S19 100 75 87.5 Very good20 S20 100 75 87.5 Very good21 S21 100 75 87.5 Very good22 S22 100 75 87.5 Very good23 S23 75 75 75 Fairly good24 S24 75 75 75 Fairly good25 S25 75 50 62.5 Fair26 S26 100 75 87.5 Very good27 S27 50 50 50 Poor28 S28 100 75 87.5 Very good29 S29 100 75 87.5 Very good30 S30 100 100 100 Excellent31 S31 100 75 87.5 Very good32 S32 100 75 87.5 Very good33 S33 100 75 87.5 Very good34 S34 75 50 62.5 Fair
2975 2525 2750
87.50 74.26 80.88
The Result of Student’s Writing Descriptive Text in Terms of Content
(Post-Test)
No CodeSample
Score TotalScore
Classification4 3 2 1
1 S1 3 75 Fairly good2 S2 3 75 Fairly good3 S3 3 75 Fairly Good4 S4 3 75 Fairly Good5 S5 4 100 Excellent6 S6 4 100 Excellent7 S7 3 75 Fairly good8 S8 3 75 Fairly good9 S9 4 100 Excellent10 S10 3 75 Fairly good11 S11 4 100 Excellent12 S12 3 75 Fairly good13 S13 3 75 Fairly good14 S14 3 75 Fairly good15 S15 4 100 Excellent16 S16 4 100 Excellent17 S17 3 75 Fairly good18 S18 4 100 Excellent19 S19 4 100 Excellent20 S20 4 100 Excellent21 S21 4 100 Excellent22 S22 4 100 Excellent23 S23 3 75 Fairly good24 S24 3 75 Fairly good25 S25 3 75 Fairly good26 S26 4 100 Excellent27 S27 2 50 Poor28 S28 4 100 Excellent29 S29 4 100 Excellent30 S30 4 100 Excellent31 S31 4 100 Excellent32 S32 4 100 Excellent33 S33 4 100 Excellent34 S34 3 75 Fairly good
2975
87.50
The Result of Student’s writing Descriptive Text in Terms of Grammar
(Post-Test)
No CodeSample
Score TotalScore
Classification4 3 2 1
1 S1 3 75 Fairly good2 S2 2 50 Poor3 S3 2 50 Poor4 S4 2 50 Poor5 S5 4 100 Excellent6 S6 4 100 Excellent7 S7 3 75 Fairly good8 S8 3 75 Fairly good9 S9 4 100 Excellent10 S10 3 75 Fairly good11 S11 4 100 Excellent12 S12 3 75 Fairly good13 S13 2 50 Poor14 S14 3 75 Fairly good15 S15 3 75 Fairly good16 S16 3 75 Fairly good17 S17 3 75 Fairly good18 S18 4 100 Excellent19 S19 3 75 Fairly good20 S20 3 75 Fairly good21 S21 3 75 Fairly good22 S22 3 75 Fairly good23 S23 3 75 Fairly good24 S24 3 75 Fairly good25 S25 2 50 Poor26 S26 3 75 Fairly good27 S27 2 50 Poor28 S28 3 75 Fairly good29 S29 3 75 Fairly good30 S30 4 100 Excellent31 S31 3 75 Fairly good32 S32 3 75 Fairly good33 S33 3 75 Fairly good34 S34 2 50 Poor
2525
74.26
The students’ classification score in writing descriptive text in terms of content
(Pre-test)
No Score Classification Frequency Percentage(%)
1 96 – 100 Excellent 3 8.822 86 – 95 Very good 0 03 76 – 85 Good 0 04 66 – 75 Fairly good 9 26.475 56 – 65 Fair 0 06 36 – 55 Poor 16 47.067 0 - 35 Very poor 6 17.65
Total 34 100Classification:
= % Excellent= %= . % Fairly good
= %= . %
Poor
= %= . %
Very poor
= %= . %
The students’ classification score in writing descriptive text in terms of grammar
(Pre-test)
no Score Classification frequency Percentage(%)
1 96 – 100 Excellent 0 02 86 – 95 Very good 0 03 76 – 85 Good 0 04 66 – 75 Fairly good 2 5.885 56 – 65 Fair 0 06 36 – 55 Poor 18 52.947 0 - 35 Very poor 14 41.18
Total 34 100Classification
= % Fairly good= %= . % Poor
= %= . %
Very poor
= %= . %
The students’ classification score in writing descriptive text in terms of content
(Post-test)
no Score Classification frequency Percentage(%)
1 96 – 100 Excellent 18 52.942 86 – 95 Very good 0 03 76 – 85 Good 0 04 66 – 75 Fairly good 15 44.125 56 – 65 Fair 0 06 36 – 55 Poor 1 2.947 0 - 35 Very poor 0 0
Total 34 100Classification
= % Excellent= %= . % Fairly good
= %= . %
poor
= %= . %
The students’ classification score in writing descriptive in terms of grammar text
(Post-test)
No Score Classification Frequency Percentage(%)
1 96 – 100 Excellent 6 17.652 86 – 95 Very good 0 03 76 – 85 Good 0 04 66 – 75 Fairly good 21 61.765 56 – 65 Fair 0 06 36 – 55 Poor 7 20.597 0 - 35 Very poor 0 0
Total 34 100Classification
= % Excellent= %= . % Fairly good
= %= . %
poor
= %= . %
Row Score of the Students’ Score
No CodeSample
1 22
C G C G C G C G1 S1 50 25 75 75 25 50 625 25002 S2 25 25 75 50 50 25 2500 6253 S3 25 25 75 50 50 25 2500 6254 S4 50 50 75 50 25 0 625 05 S5 75 25 100 100 25 75 625 56256 S6 100 75 100 100 0 25 0 6257 S7 75 50 75 75 0 25 0 6258 S8 50 25 75 75 25 50 625 25009 S9 75 25 100 100 25 75 625 562510 S10 75 25 75 75 0 50 0 250011 S11 50 50 100 100 50 50 2500 250012 S12 25 25 75 75 50 50 2500 250013 S13 50 25 75 50 25 25 625 62514 S14 25 25 75 75 50 50 2500 250015 S15 50 50 100 75 50 25 2500 62516 S16 50 50 100 75 50 25 2500 62517 S17 25 25 75 75 50 50 2500 250018 S18 75 50 100 100 25 50 625 250019 S19 75 50 100 75 25 25 625 62520 S20 50 50 100 75 50 25 2500 62521 S21 75 50 100 75 25 25 625 62522 S22 50 50 100 75 50 25 2500 62523 S23 75 50 75 75 0 25 0 62524 S24 50 50 75 75 25 25 625 62525 S25 25 25 75 50 50 25 2500 62526 S26 50 50 100 75 50 25 2500 62527 S27 50 50 50 50 0 0 0 028 S28 75 50 100 75 25 25 625 62529 S29 50 50 100 75 50 25 2500 62530 S30 100 75 100 100 0 25 0 62531 S31 50 25 100 75 50 50 2500 250032 S32 50 25 100 75 50 50 2500 250033 S33 100 50 100 75 0 25 0 62534 S34 50 50 75 50 25 0 625 0
1925 1400 2975 2525 1050 1125 45000 48125
56.62 41.17 87.50 74.26 30.88 33.09 1323.52 1415.44
The Calculation of Mean Score
The mean score of the students’ pre test in terms of content
X 1C =∑
== 56.62
The mean score of the students’ pre-test in terms of grammar
X 1G =∑
== 41.17
The mean score of the students’ post test in terms of content
X 2C =∑
== 87.50
The mean score of the students’ post-test in terms of grammar
X 2G =∑
== 74.26
The mean score of gain (D) in terms of content
DC =∑
== 30.88
The mean score of gain (D) in terms of grammar
DG =∑
== 33.09
The Calculation of Students’ Improvement in Terms of Content of Writing
% = x 100%
= 100%= 54.54%
The Calculation of Students’ Improvement in Terms of Grammar of Writing
% = x 100%
= 100%= 80.35%
The Calculation of T-Test Value of Students’ in Terms of Content of Writing
=N
DC
=
= 30.88
)1(
)(2
2
NNN
DD
Dtestt
)134(3434
)1050(45000
88.302
testt
33.3434
110250045000
88.30
testt
1122
47.3242645000
88.30
testt
1122
53.12573
88.30 testt
20.11
88.30 testt
34.3
88.30 testt
245.9 testt
The Calculation of T-Test Value of Students’ in Terms of Grammar of Writing
=N
DG
=
= 33.08
)1(
)(2
2
NNN
DD
Dtestt
)134(3434
)1125(48125
09.332
testt
33.3434
126562548125
09.33
testt
1122
26.3722448125
09.33
testt
1122
74.10900
09.33 testt
71.9
09.33 testt
11.3
09.33 testt
639.10 testt
Table of the Student's t-distribution
The table gives the values of ;t where
Pr(T > t ; ) = , with degrees of freedom
0.1 0.05 0.025 0.01 0.005 0.001
1 3.078 6.314 12.076 31.821 63.657 318.3102 1.886 2.920 4.303 6.965 9.925 22.3263 1.638 2.353 3.182 4.541 5.841 10.2134 1.533 2.132 2.776 3.747 4.604 7.1735 1.476 2.015 2.571 3.365 4.032 5.893
6 1.440 1.943 2.447 3.143 3.707 5.2087 1.415 1.895 2.365 2.998 3.499 4.7858 1.397 1.860 2.306 2.896 3.355 4.5019 1.383 1.833 2.262 2.821 3.250 4.29710 1.372 1.812 2.228 2.764 3.169 4.144
11 1.363 1.796 2.201 2.718 3.106 4.02512 1.356 1.782 2.179 2.681 3.055 3.93013 1.350 1.771 2.160 2.650 3.012 3.85214 1.345 1.761 2.145 2.624 2.977 3.78715 1.341 1.753 2.131 2.602 2.947 3.733
16 1.337 1.746 2.120 2.583 2.921 3.68617 1.333 1.740 2.110 2.567 2.898 3.64618 1.330 1.734 2.101 2.552 2.878 3.61019 1.328 1.729 2.093 2.539 2.861 3.57920 1.325 1.725 2.086 2.528 2.845 3.552
21 1.323 1.721 2.080 2.518 2.831 3.52722 1.321 1.717 2.074 2.508 2.819 3.50523 1.319 1.714 2.069 2.500 2.807 3.48524 1.318 1.711 2.064 2.492 2.797 3.46725 1.316 1.708 2.060 2.485 2.787 3.450
26 1.315 1.706 2.056 2.479 2.779 3.43527 1.314 1.703 2.052 2.473 2.771 3.42128 1.313 1.701 2.048 2.467 2.763 3.40829 1.311 1.699 2.045 2.462 2.756 3.39630 1.310 1.697 2.042 2.457 2.750 3.385
31 1.309 1.696 2.040 2.453 2.744 3.37532 1.309 1.694 2.037 2.449 2.738 3.365
33 1.308 1.692 2.035 2.445 2.733 3.35634 1.307 1.691 2.032 2.441 2.728 3.34835 1.306 1.690 2.030 2.438 2.724 3.340
36 1.306 1.688 2.028 2.434 2.719 3.33337 1.305 1.687 2.026 2.431 2.715 3.32638 1.304 1.686 2.024 2.429 2.712 3.31939 1.304 1.686 2.024 2.429 2.708 3.31340 1.303 1.684 2021 2.423 2.704 3.307
60 1.296 1.671 2.000 2.390 2.660 3.232120 1.289 1.658 1.980 2.358 2.617 3.160 1.282 1.645 1.960 2.326 2.576 3.090 = , == −= −=
CURRICULUM VITAE
NENGA WIDYASTUTI is the daughter of Haris. L and
Siti Hayati. She was born on January 6th 1983 in Ujung
Pandang, Sulawesi Selatan. She is the second child from
one sister and four brothers in her family.
She began her elementary school at SD Negri Bara-baraya II in Makassar and
graduated in 1995. Then, continued her study at MTS negri Model Makassar and
graduated in 1998, in the same year she continued her study at MAN Model
Makassar in and graduated in 2001. And in 2012, she registered as one of the
students of Muhammadiyah University of Makassar at English Education
Department.