Writing Introductions and Conclusions

ObjectivesUnderstand the purpose of

introductions and conclusionsLearn how to write effective

introductions and conclusions

3-Part Structure An essay always consists of:

An Introduction Body paragraphs A Conclusion

IntroductionsThe purpose of the introduction is

to identify the topic AND make your reader want to read more.

A weak or boring introduction will make your reader lose interest. You don’t want to bore your reader

before the essay even begins.

What goes into an Introduction?

1. Catchy opening (called a “Hook”) to grab the reader’s attention

2. 2-3 sentence summary or background information of the topic

3. Thesis statementa. One sentence that says exactly what

the essay is aboutb. Usually contains 3 items

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General: Attention-grabbing hook (2-3 sentences)

More specific: Summary of topic (2-3 sentences)

Most specific: Thesis statement (1 sentence)

The Hook Anecdote (interesting story) Surprising fact Startling statement Interesting quote Question that makes the reader think

The hook MUST relate to the topic!

Let’s Practice! In your groups, you will be writing a

compare and contrast essay between the novel Island of the Blue Dolphins and the true story of the “Lone Woman of San Nicolas Island.”

We’ll start together with an introduction.

What kind of hook should we use?Here are some options:

An anecdote about being left to survive on a deserted island

An important or surprising quote from the novel or one of the articles

A thought-provoking question (related to the topic)

In your groups, choose one of these options and write a quick rough draft of your hook

Next, we need to give some background information.

What is it that we will be discussing in this essay?

How does the hook you used relate to this more specific information?

Last, you need a thesis statement You need a statement that explains

exactly what you will discuss in your essay

This is the most specific and most important sentence of the introduction

Usually includes 3 items that will be discussed in about 3 body paragraphs

In your group, identify the 3 main differences between the fiction and nonfiction story of the “Lone Woman” These 3 items will be included in your

thesis statement

ConclusionsA good conclusion will leave a

lasting impression on your readerYou want your reader to remember

WHAT you said and WHY you said it

What goes into a Conclusion?

You can think of the structure of the conclusion as the opposite of the structure of the introduction

Introductions move from general to specific

Conclusions move from specific to general

What goes into a conclusion?Restate the thesisSummarize your main points (the

3 things from your thesis statement and body paragraphs)

Make a general statement about why your reader should care

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Less specific: Summarize the main points

General: Statement about why your reader should care. Connect to your hook.

Tips for writing body paragraphs Start with a topic sentence (a sentence

that states what the paragraph will be about)

Be specific and stick to the point Even if you think you have the perfect

sentence, only include it if it has something to do with the topic of the paragraph

Use transition words to show you are changing topics

Decide on an organizational pattern before you write