PROBLEM STATEMENT ASSESSMENT RUBRIC Abdilhamid Osman G10 42% 50% 42% 47% E

PROBLEM STATEMENT ASSESSMENT RUBRIC

Abdilhamid OsmanG10

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47% E

Your name here is not the same as in the Registrar's List

Good file naming convention

Total Errors: 10Grade: F

Good use of formal writing structures

Good use of blank space to separate major parts of the letter

Conciseness: Revise to remove “of”

Use “and” only to connect equal ideas. Separate a new idea into a separate sentence..

In three weeks I will create English with 5 photos that shows 3 ways for AIU students(Gail,2013) can follow (Social learning theory,2012)how to set up study rooms(Applegate,2009 )in the campus to study effectively.

A* A B C PASS FAIL01. Logic: Easily understood and logically clear meaning A* A B C PASS FAIL02. Clarity: One complete sentence with no errors A* A B C PASS FAIL03. Difficulty: A topic that can be at college-level A* A B C PASS FAIL04. Specific Output: A clear product for grading A* A B C PASS FAIL05. Viable Output: Doable before deadline A* A B C PASS FAIL06. Beneficiary: Exactly who will benefit from proposal A* A B C PASS FAIL07. Urgency: Beneficiary need is convincingly urgent A* A B C PASS FAIL08. Specific Beneficiary: Beneficiary need is quantified A* A B C PASS FAIL09. Relevance: What beneficiaries must do to meet needs A* A B C PASS FAIL10. Objective Concepts: Measurable verbs and nouns A* A B C PASS FAIL11. Original Input: Use of elements of originality A* A B C PASS FAIL12. Proof: Use of authoritative support A* A B C PASS FAIL

G010 Complete Student Name #01 Mr. Osman 10-Nov-13

ASSESSMENT RUBRIC: STATEMENT OF THE RESEARCH PROBLEM

A* = 90 to 100 A = 80 to 90 B = 70 to 80 C = 60 to 70 D = 50 to 60 F = 0 to 49 [In drafting: PASS or FAIL grade only]

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The idea “effectively” should be quantified

There is no proof of urgency or criticality

No measurable required action

There is no measurable need

The references are not clearly connected to the statement

http://www.4faculty.org/includes/digdeeper/helpstudents/studying.jsp

http://www.alleydog.com/glossary/definition.php?term=Social%20Learning%20Theory

http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S009913330900069X


Source:Tennen,G,Hagar,k.G(2013).helping students study. Online available at http://www.4faculty.org/includes/digdeeper/helpstudents/studying.jsp

Theory:Bandura,A(1998). Social learning theory. Online available at http://www.alleydog.com/glossary/definition.php?term=Social%20Learning%20Theory

Urgency:Applegate, R. (2009). The library is for studying: student preferences for study space. The Journal of Academic Librarianship, 35(4), 341-346.


Many punctuation errors.

Title should be Helping Students to Study Effectively

Format (Online available at) is incorrect .

These yellow boxes indicate why your use of authoritative support is a FAIL grade. Please be guided accordingly.

Tenen, G. should be one of the in-text citations in your statement.










It’s a long article. State the paragraph or paragraph number of the idea that is connected to your ideas.

Write the title correctly

Write the author names correctly; follow APA examples

Paste a snapshot here to show where you got the date 2013

These yellow boxes indicate why your use of authoritative support is a FAIL grade. Please be guided accordingly.





Many punctuation errors.

Title should be Social Learning Theory

Format (Online available at) is incorrect .

Bandura, A. should be one of the in-text citations in your statement.










Write the title correctly

Who wrote this article? That’s the author.

This article is not written by Bandura. It only quotes Bandura.

Paste a snapshot here to show where you got the date 1998

I can’t see a connection. State the sentence or paragraph number of the part of the theory that explains or supports your proposal.





Title punctuation is incorrect

The website address should be in the same paragraph, not a separate entry.

I cannot see this part of the article on the link you provided.










Write the title correctly, including the punctuation

See APA rule when the article is one of many in a publication: which title is in italics, and which title is in quote marks?

I can’t see a connection. State the sentence or paragraph number of the part of the article that proves the urgency of your proposal.

It is usually a bad idea to refer to an abstract; a complete article is best.

In three weeks, I will create information poster with 5 photos from the internet in English and Somali showing Somali people(Downing,1989) three ways to set up hospitals(Silveira and Allebeck ,2001) for mentally and disability people in Somalia(Benson and Dundis,2003)

A* A B C PASS FAIL01. Logic: Easily understood and logically clear meaning A* A B C PASS FAIL02. Clarity: One complete sentence with no errors A* A B C PASS FAIL03. Difficulty: A topic that can be at college-level A* A B C PASS FAIL04. Specific Output: A clear product for grading A* A B C PASS FAIL05. Viable Output: Doable before deadline A* A B C PASS FAIL06. Beneficiary: Exactly who will benefit from proposal A* A B C PASS FAIL07. Urgency: Beneficiary need is convincingly urgent A* A B C PASS FAIL08. Specific Beneficiary: Beneficiary need is quantified A* A B C PASS FAIL09. Relevance: What beneficiaries must do to meet needs A* A B C PASS FAIL10. Objective Concepts: Measurable verbs and nouns A* A B C PASS FAIL11. Original Input: Use of elements of originality A* A B C PASS FAIL12. Proof: Use of authoritative support A* A B C PASS FAIL

G010 Complete Student Name #02 Mr.Osman 16-Nov-13



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Beneficiary should do the required action

There is no proof of urgency or criticality

See the examples provided for you.

See next few slides.

http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/0277953689903870

http://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/10.1111/1468-2397.00188/abstract




http://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/10.1046/j.1365-2834.2003.00409.x/abstract?deniedAccessCustomisedMessage=&userIsAuthenticated=false

http://www.slideshare.net/JaimeCabrera3/the-simple-thesis-statement

Source:Downing, R. (1989). A tale of two clinics—primary health care in refugee settings: lessons from Sudan and Somalia. Social Science & Medicine, 28(10), 1053-1058.


Urgency:Silveira, E., & Allebeck, P. (2001). Migration, ageing and mental health: an ethnographic study on perceptions of life satisfaction, anxiety and depression in older Somali men in east London. International Journal of Social Welfare, 10(4), 309-320.


Theory: Benson, S. G., & Dundis, S. P. (2003). Understanding and motivating health care employees: integrating Maslow's hierarchy of needs, training and technology. Journal of nursing management, 11(5), 315-320. http://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/10.1046/j.1365-2834.2003.00409.x/abstract?deniedAccessCustomisedMessage=&userIsAuthenticated=false


I can’t see a clear connection. For best results, state the sentence or paragraph number of the part of the article that relates to your ideas.











Write the title correctly, including the punctuation

See APA rule when the article is one of many in a publication: which title is in italics, and which title is in quote marks?

I can’t see a clear connection. For best results, state the sentence or paragraph number of the part of the article that relates to your ideas.








I can’t see a clear connection. For best results, state the sentence or paragraph number of the part of the article that proves the urgency of your proposal.











Write the title correctly, including the punctuationSee APA rule when the article is one of many in a publication: which title is in italics, and which title is in quote marks?

I can’t see a clear connection. For best results, state the sentence or paragraph number of the part of the article that proves the urgency of your proposal


















Write the title correctly, including the punctuationSee APA rule when the article is one of many in a publication: which title is in italics, and which title is in quote marks?

I can’t see a clear connection. For best results, state the sentence or paragraph number of the part of the article that shows the theory used in your proposal


Always use the DOI in your reference list.

In three weeks, I will create an instruction poster with 5 photos in English and Somali showing for Somali people 5 steps (Kirk, 2001) to follow to plant rice(Mullen, 1989)tree in the country(Maslow, 1943)

A* A B C PASS FAIL01. Logic: Easily understood and logically clear meaning A* A B C PASS FAIL02. Clarity: One complete sentence with no errors A* A B C PASS FAIL03. Difficulty: A topic that can be at college-level A* A B C PASS FAIL04. Specific Output: A clear product for grading A* A B C PASS FAIL05. Viable Output: Doable before deadline A* A B C PASS FAIL06. Beneficiary: Exactly who will benefit from proposal A* A B C PASS FAIL07. Urgency: Beneficiary need is convincingly urgent A* A B C PASS FAIL08. Specific Beneficiary: Beneficiary need is quantified A* A B C PASS FAIL09. Relevance: What beneficiaries must do to meet needs A* A B C PASS FAIL10. Objective Concepts: Measurable verbs and nouns A* A B C PASS FAIL11. Original Input: Use of elements of originality A* A B C PASS FAIL12. Proof (Bonus): Use of authoritative support A* A B C PASS FAIL

G010 Complete Student Name #03 Mr. Osman 16-Nov-13



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First you said “plant vegetables” but now I see “rice tree”

http://link.springer.com/article/10.1023/A:1010341116376

http://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/10.1002/jid.3380010106/abstract



http://psycnet.apa.org/journals/rev/50/4/370/

If you exactly follow instructions, checking your work can be much faster.

Resource: Kirk, G. J. D. (2001). Plant-mediated processes to acquire nutrients: nitrogen uptake by

rice plants. Plant and Soil, 232(1-2), 129-134.

http://link.springer.com/article/10.1023/A:1010341116376#page-1

Urgency:

Mullen, J. (1989). Training and visit system in Somalia: Contradictions and anomalies. Journal of International Development, 1(1), 145-167.


Theory:Maslow, A. H. (1943). A theory of human motivation. Psychological review, 50(4), 370.http://psycnet.apa.org/journals/rev/50/4/370/

One purpose of a list of references to help your reader quickly find the ideas that you borrowed to help explain, support, or add detail to your own ideas. Your reference list does not seem to do this.







I can’t see a clear connection. For best results, state the sentence or paragraph number of the part of the article that supports the ideas in your proposal

I can’t see a clear connection. For best results, state the sentence or paragraph number of the part of the article that proves the urgency of your proposal

The hyperlink in your in-text citation should open the article, not the home page

I tried this several times, but this is what I get. Take care that you input the correct information.

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