220179206 D G Tharindu(OORA200) Case study

report.pdfby Tharindu Dushyantha Dewalegama Gamacharige

Submission date: 08-Jun-2019 05:01AM (UTC+1000)Submission ID: 1141162019File name:140127_Tharindu_Dushyantha_Dewalegama_Gamacharige_220179206_D_G_Tharindu__OORA200__Case_study_report_1493901_43837586.pdf(127.39K)Word count: 2987Character count: 18379

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220179206 D G Tharindu (OORA200) Case study report.pdfGRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

Tharindu,

You have written an excellent Case Study whichapplied the OORA200 principles very well. You alsodemonstrated deep crit ical analysis in your answer.

I'm not sure if you were experiencing technicalissues, but more proof reading was necessary priorto submission. This assessment contained f ar toomany errors f or an assessment at this level.

Overall an excellent assessment containing toomany errors.

Darin

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chronic diseases and nutrit ion related health issues.

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success.

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service. A merely technical person

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risks the project

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ref lect on how the project chose the communities

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of a projects success

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For example, the project f ocus ....

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that have

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have benef ited

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need the

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and be less costly.

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changing the

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should not be a low priority in order to ensure

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sustain long-term f unding

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Use of non-Aboriginal tradespeople could also have a lower or less posit ive ef f ect on theproject overall.

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KNOWLEDGE OF TOPIC

Demonstrate knowledge of issues identified in learning outcomes LO 1-6 - 40% of total mark

ARGUMENT AND ANALYSIS

Demonstrated ability to interpret and apply knowledge in practicalcontext LO1-6 - 40% of total mark

REFERENCING

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STRUCTURE AND PRESENTATION

GRADING FORM: CASE STUDY

THARINDU DUSHYANTHADEWALEGAMA GAMACHARIGE

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Very good knowledge of the OORA200 content wasdemonstrated

Excellent analysis throughout, although some ideascontradicted others.

Referencing was of an excellent standard overall.

Structure, Presentation and clarity of expression - 10% of total mark

Numerous errors were evident throughout.