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Slug Line: INT. SHOP.DAY Slug Line: INT. CORRIDOR. DAY. Slug Line: INT. CORRIDOR. DAY.

Action: Beth buys coffee from the cashier and walks out of the shop. Action: Beth walks down the corridor with coffee in each hand. Action: Liam is upset when she arrives.

Camera: LS

Camera: WS

Camera: CU

Dialogue: BETH: Thank you. Dialogue:BETH:(Calmly) Here you go. Dialogue: LIAM: (Stammering) Th-th-thanks.

Sound (diegetic): foot steps, people walking around the college, cash register

Sound (diegetic): footsteps, people walking around the college

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Slug Line: INT. CORRIDOR. DAY. Slug Line:INT. CORRIDOR. DAY. Slug Line: INT. CORRIDOR. DAY.

Action: Beth sits down next to him. Action: Beth begins to talk to Liam. Action: Conversation

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Dialogue:BETH:No problem, so, why don’t you tell me what happened?

Dialogue:LIAM:(Stammering)We started out like any other couple. We were happy. I don’t understand what happened. She just changed. Maybe I did something. Maybe I hurt her in some way. Maybe I hurt her. I don’t know, all of this could be my fault.

Dialogue:BETH:Hey! Look at me. This isn’t your fault. You didn’t do anything wrong. So tell me the whole story.

Sound (diegetic): beth sitting down

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Action:Conversation Action:Conversation Action:Conversation

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Dialogue:LIAM:(Sighs)So it all started a few months back.

Dialogue:There was this party that we were planning on going to. We were both looking forward to it.

Dialogue:I – I went over to her house to get ready with her, everything was fine until she started doing her make up




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Slug Line: INT. CORRIDOR. DAY. Slug Line: INT. LIVING ROOM. DAY. Slug Line: INT. LIVING ROOM. DAY.

Action:Conversation Action: Jade puts on her makeup Action: Nathan walks into the room


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Camera: WS

Dialogue:LIAM (AS NARRATOR):She was sat listening to music, making a mess with her make-up all over the floor. I just walked in and was stood watching her.

Dialogue: Liam : That part always entertains me. Isn’t it strange how girls pull some ugly faces when they are applying make-up to try and look ‘perfect’?

Dialogue:JADE:This dress is really nice. I’m so happy you got it for me.

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Sound (diegetic): music, make up products rattling

Sound (diegetic):music, make up products rattling, footsteps

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Slug Line: INT. LIVING ROOM. DAY. Slug Line: INT. LIVING ROOM. DAY. Slug Line: INT. LIVING ROOM. DAY.

Action: argument begins Action: arguing Action: arguing

Camera: WS

Camera: Shot rev. shot

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Dialogue:JADE:(Angrily)Who is that?

Dialogue:JADE:(Aggressively)And who is she? I bet she’s your bit of stuff on the side is she. I see how it is here. There was bound to be someone else. That’s why you surprised me with this. Trying to buy m now, are we?

Dialogue:LIAM:(Nervously)Wow, where is this coming from? I bought you that dress because I remembered you liked it when you saw it on Facebook. Why are you getting so jealous? She’s just a friend from college.

Sound (diegetic): music




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Slug Line: INT. LIVING ROOM. DAY. Slug Line: INT. LIVING ROOM. DAY. Slug Line: INT. LIVING ROOM. DAY.

Action: arguing Action: arguing Action: jade slaps liam for the first time



Camera: two shot

Dialogue:JADE:(sarcastically)Yeah! “Just a friend” That’s what they all say.LIAM:Seriously, get a grip! She is just a friend. You’ll see her tonight and you can talk to her yourself.

Dialogue: Jade:Me? Get a grip? How dare you speak to me like that? Who on earth do you think you are?

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Sound (diegetic): music and slap


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Slug Line: INT. LIVING ROOM. DAY. Slug Line: INT. LIVING ROOM. DAY. Slug Line: INT. BLANK. NIGHT.

Action: liam looks at her in shock Action: the both look at eachother in shock Action: blank screen

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Camera: WS

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Dialogue: N/A Dialogue: N/A Dialogue: LIAM (AS NARATOR):As soon as I saw her looking, I just knew what she was thinking. She thought I was cheating on her. I don’t know why. I was always loyal to her,



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Slug Line: INT. PARTY. NIGHT. Slug Line: INT. PARTY. NIGHT. Slug Line: INT. PARTY. NIGHT.

Action:Liam talks to lauren at the party Action: liam talks to lauren at the party Action: liam talks to lauren at the party




Dialogue: Liam : I couldn’t even look at another girl. I’m that type of person. Once I’m with someone, that’s it, it’s them and me. That’s it. I thought she knew that but obviously not but I knew from that look what was coming next…

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Sound (diegetic): loud music




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Slug Line: INT. PARTY. NIGHT. Slug Line: INT. PARTY. NIGHT. Slug Line: EXT. ALLY. NIGHT.

Action: liam talks to lauren at the party Action: Jade sees them talking and decides to leave Action: They are walking home and Jade starts to get angry


Camera: two shot

Camera: Arial shot

Dialogue: N/A Dialogue: N/A Dialogue: JADE:(Angrily)If she makes you so happy, why don’t you go out with her?LIAM:Oh my God. Would you drop it? We are just friends. How many times do I have to tell you that?


Sound (diegetic): footsteps and faint thudding

Sound (diegetic): footsteps and faint thudding


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Slug Line: EXT. ALLY. NIGHT. Slug Line: EXT. ALLY. NIGHT. Slug Line: EXT. ALLY. NIGHT.

Action: Jade pushes liam against the wall Action: She looks angry as she gets jealous and paranoid and starts to hit him Action: a group of people walk past as liam is getting beaten

Camera: Arial shot

Camera: handheld

Camera: wide shot

Dialogue:LIAM (AS NARATOR):I begged her to stop but she wouldn’t. She just kept telling me that I was treating her like dirt because I was friends with another girl. She was really hurting me. I didn’t defend myself though, I wasn’t raised to hit a woman back. Then other people came along the street and…

Dialogue:LIAM: Jade, please stop!

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Sound (diegetic): Faint thudding, hitting

Sound (diegetic): faint thudding and hitting

Sound (diegetic): faint thudding and hitting


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Slug Line: EXT. ALLY. NIGHT. Slug Line: EXT. ALLY. NIGHT. Slug Line: INT. HOME. DAY.

Action: The strangers seem amused by the abuse Liam is suffering Action: Jade repeatedly beats liam Action: The couple are on the couch watching TV

Camera: wide shot

Camera: low angle

Camera: wide shot

Dialogue:STRANGER:Oh my God! Look how pathetic he is haha! He’s getting beaten up by a girl!

Dialogue:LIAM (AS NARATOR): After that night she was continuously violent towards me and I couldn’t bring myself to leave her. I still loved her. Then she started patronizing me. I felt so stupid.

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Sound (diegetic): faint thudding, hitting, footsteps

Sound (diegetic):faint thudding, hitting, footsteps

Sound (diegetic):TV


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Slug Line: INT. HOME. DAY. Slug Line: INT. HOME. DAY. Slug Line: INT. HOME. DAY.

Action: They are watching TV Action: Jade mocks a man on the TV who has been beaten by his girlfriend Action: Liam feels emasculated

Camera: over shoulder shot

Camera: low angle shot

Camera: MS

Dialogue:JADE:(Laughing)Haha, how pathetic. That’s no kind of man if he’s intimidated by a woman. A woman can’t abuse a man.

Dialogue:JADE:(Motherese tone of voice)What’s the matter with your face

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Sound (diegetic): TV




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Slug Line: INT. HOME. DAY. Slug Line:INT. HOME. DAY. Slug Line:INT. HOME. DAY.

Action: Jade patronises him Action: Liam packs his things Action: Jade is shocked and upset

Camera: MS

Camera: MS

Camera: MLS

Dialogue:JADE:(Aggressively)Oh take your tampon out, you big girl! Look at yourself. Absolutely pathetic! It’s a wonder I’m still with you!

Dialogue:LIAM:Fine! Then I’ll go!

Dialogue:JADE:(Shocked and pleading)You can’t just leave me. If you really loved me you wouldn’t just go.

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Slug Line: INT. HOME. DAY. Slug Line: INT. HOME. DAY. Slug Line: INT. HOME. DAY.

Action: Jade hits him again Action: Liam gets upset Action: Jade hits him

Camera: POV

Camera: MS

Camera: MLS

Dialogue:LIAM:(Snapping)Yeah? Well if you really loved me you wouldn’t beat me for having friends.

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Sound (diegetic): TV and hitting




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Slug Line: INT. HOME. DAY. Slug Line: INT. HOME. DAY. Slug Line: EXT. STREET. DAY.

Action: Jade gets more angry Action: Liam starts to leave Action: He walks out into the street

Camera: MCU

Camera: MLS

Camera: WS

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Sound (diegetic):TV

Sound (diegetic): footsteps Sound (diegetic): footsteps, door closing


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Slug Line: EXT. STREET. DAY. Slug Line:EXT. STREET. DAY. Slug Line: EXT. STREET. DAY.

Action: Jade watches him leave through the window Action: He continues walking down the street Action: He is crying

Camera: high angle

Camera: MLS, tracking

Camera: ECU

Dialogue: LIAM (AS NARATOR):I didn’t look but I could feel her staring holes in my back as I was walking away. I didn’t want to look back, if I did I would only have gave in and walked back in.

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Sound (diegetic): footsteps




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Slug Line: INT. BLANK. DAY. Slug Line: INT. BLANK. DAY. Slug Line: INT. CORRIDOR. DAY.

Action: blank screen Action: blank screen Action: Liam cries to beth

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Camera: ECU

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Slug Line: INT. CORRIDOR. DAY. Slug Line: INT. CORRIDOR. DAY. Slug Line: INT. CORRIDOR. DAY.

Action:Beth tries to comfort him Action: Beth tries to comfort him Action: beth tries to comfort him

Camera: two shot


Camera: CU

Dialogue:BETH:So, was that the last time you saw her?

Dialogue:LIAM:(Sighs)Yeah, good riddance to bad rubbish, ey? Saying that though, the worst part about this whole situation is that I still love her.

Dialogue:BETH:I know it’ll be hard but you’ll be fine. I’m glad you felt like you could come to me, but I think you need to remember why you left her so you won’t go back there.

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Action: He continues to cry Action: they hug Action: Beth offers him help

Camera: MLS

Camera: Two shot

Camera: LS

Dialogue:LIAM:I know, I just feel so weak right now.

Dialogue:BETH:You feel like that now but I’m going to help you get the right help so you can get your life back.

Dialogue:BETH:You’re going to be okay.




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Slug Line: INT. CORRIDOR. DAY.

Action: Beth offers him help


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Sound (non-diegetic): music

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