FROM THIS

TO THIS

What I have changed...

• First of all I have changed the layout of the feature article from 3 columns to 4 columns. I have done this as you generally see 4 columns in a magazine, and I want the article to look real in order for the audiences ideology.

• I have also changed the shape with the quote in to a circle shape from a rectangular shape as I thought the rectangle looks plain, boring and simple.

What I have changed...

• On the origional article the morphemes ‘teenage’ and ‘rock’ were in larger letters. On the new improved one the audience advised me to change it so that ‘ TEENAGE GIRL’ and ‘ROCK SUPERSTAR’ were in larger letters so that they would stand out to them more.

AUDIENCE RESEARCH

3RD PAGE ARTICLE

CHANGES

FROM THIS

TO THIS

Change I have made...

• First of all I have changed one of the pictures as I was advised by the audience as the model is not posing professionally and just pointing into mid air. I done this as I wanted my magazine article to look professional therefore I need to try my very best to do so.

• I have added a black bar along the bottom with information in as I thought I was only right as every other page had it on. This will also give the style of continuity throughout my magazine.

Changes I have made..

• As I changed the layout of the columns on my double page article I also did on my 3rd page article, as you see this in other magazines such as ‘NME’ my style model.