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Dạng : Table
Dùng để sắp xếp data theo dòng và cột.
Thường được sử dụng trong nghiên cứu, so
sánh, phân tích số liệu
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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and
make comparisons where relevant.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Write at least 150 words
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DÀN BÀI
1. Introduction (mở bài)
2. Overview (tổng quan)
3. Thân bài 1
4. Thân bài 2
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INTRODUCTION
Câu viết lại:The table shows data on the proportion of
schoolboys in 2 separate age groups who took part in playing
5 kinds of sports in the UK in 2010
Câu của đề bài: The table shows the percentage of school
aged boys in two different age groups who participated in 5
different sports in the UK in 2010
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PARAPHRASE
TỔNG QUAN
• Cố gắng so sánh tất cả hạng mục (ở các cột và dòng) với
nhau thay vì từng ô riêng lẻ ở bảng thông tin.
• Nếu bạn không thể so sánh tất cả hạng mục, hãy so sánh các
yếu tố chiếm tỷ lệ lớn nhất và nhỏ nhất.
• Nếu bảng thông tin có sự thay đổi theo thời gian, cố gắng
tìm ra những sự thay đổi lớn nhất trong khoảng thời gian
được mô tả
• Viết 2 câu cho phần tổng quan
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Overall, the figures for boys between 6 and 11 years old
are always higher than those for the older boys, with the
notable exception of swimming, which is the same.
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THÂN BÀI
• Tìm các yếu tố quan trọng trong biểu đồ
• Nếu bảng thông tin hiển thị thông tin theo năm,
hãy chú ý đến những sự thay đổi lớn nhất trong
khoảng thời gian đó
• Chia thân bài thành 2 đoạn (ví dụ 1 đoạn dành cho
các yếu tố chiếm tỷ lệ lớn nhất, 1 đoạn dành cho
các yếu tố chiếm tỷ lệ nhỏ nhât)
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BODY 1
BODY 2
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While 87% of 6-to 11-year-olds played soccer, the percentage of boys
between 12 and 16 was slightly lower, at 78%. Only 25% of the older
age group played basketball, compared to 35% of the younger boys.
The percentage of younger boys who participated in cricket was 45%
and 34% for the older group; a difference of 11%.
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In this same year, the proportion of both age groups in the UK who liked
swimming was the same, at 19%. Additionally, the UK saw a similar figure
for schoolboys aged 6-11 and 12-16 who played rugby in 2010 , at 23% and
21% respectively.
Note: If we describe something as ‘similar’we already mean that it is
“nearly/almost the same’
The table shows data on the proportion of schoolboys in 2 separate age groups who took
part in playing 5 kinds of sports in the UK in 2010.
Overall, the figures for boys between 6 and 11 years old are always higher than those for
the older boys, with the notable exception of swimming, which is the same.
While 87% of 6-to 11-year-olds played soccer, the percentage of boys between 12 and 16
was slightly lower, at 78%. Only 25% of the older age group played basketball, compared
to 35% of the younger boys. The percentage of younger boys who participated in cricket
was 45% and 34% for the older group; a difference of 11%
In this same year, the proportion of both age groups in the UK who liked swimming was
the same, at 19%. Additionally, the UK saw a similar figure for schoolboys aged 6-11 and
12-16 who played rugby in 2010 , at 23% and 21% respectively.
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IELTS EXAMINER COMMENTS
The paraphrase paragraph is band 9 level. It uses your own words and – as a description of the
table - it is clear, complete and accurate.
You identified two key features in the summary paragraph. So, this was a good overview.
Your reporting of percentages in your detail paragraphs was accurate and you made constant
comparisons between the two sets of figures.
To be honest, Bach, the report which you sent me would score band 9 and could be used as a
model answer.There are no corrections to make, because the information, grammar and
vocabulary are all accurate, many comparisons are made and the organisation of the report is
superb.
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