GOOD:BETTER:

BEST:

To make the reader feel (shock

/ empathy / pity /

anger/ etc)

To add to the sense

of (isolation /

confusion /

sorrow / joy / etc) in the

text.

To draw the

reader’s

attention to (the

contrast

between two things / the beauty

of an object / the

size of

something / etc)

To emphasise

the

importance of (an idea / a specific

theme / a character trait / a

viewpoint / etc)

Then explain why the writer might want the

reader to feel this way.

Then link to other

moments that build on this

effect.

Then explore why the writer might want to

draw the

reader’s attention to

this.

Then explore why the writer might want to

emphasise this.