Vietnam 1.1: Kết hợp viết văn bản “chính xác" và "rõ ràng“ (Đào tạo chỉnh sửa trong viết văn bản tiếng anh)

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o to chnh sa trong vit vn bn ting anh

Kt hp vit vn bn chnh xc" v "r rng

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information as valuable database for relationship maintenance. However,

the paper-based fail to present systematic and updated data, causing

inefficiency in contacting with these potential customers.

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form of customer relations management. However, paper-based

documentation is often unsystematic and inefficient when identifying and

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