SUM, Shape Ur Mind storyboard first look

SUM, Shape Ur MindSergi Petit Salas

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2

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05:00

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1

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

All of them are using a holographic PC

Slugging

They are checking his computers, lloking his mail and the calendar, so they feel comfortable.

Camera

The camera makes a large shot of the study, so we can see the 3 characters, and finishes with a close shot of one of the characters.

Scene

3

Duration

02:00

Panel

1

Duration

02:00

Action Notes

Then they realises that thay have to finish his projects by tomorrow

Slugging

When one of them saw the note on his calendar begins to feel stressed and rapidly goes to tell to his friends.

Camera

The camera will make a close shot of the note and then will open the shot to show who is looking that note and what is his reaction.

DissolveDuration

01:00

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3_A

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02:01

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1

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02:01

Action Notes

Black panel to make the transition

DissolveDuration

01:00

Scene

4

Duration

03:00

Panel

1

Duration

03:00

Action Notes

The writer is trying to write with the holographic PC.He moves a little bit to get comfortable to begin writting.

Slugging

He feels stressed because he doesn't have the inspiration he need to write a good piece.

Notes

Instead he is on the study the main light he has is from de computer.

Camera

The camera will do a shot showing the holographic paper where he is writting and his back.


Scene

5

Duration

00:15

Panel

1

Duration

00:15

Action Notes

The black line of the first page will appear and disappear like if this was a normal PC.

Scene

6

Duration

02:00

Panel

1

Duration

02:00

Action Notes

He has writen few lines when he stops and starts thinking about what he has already writen.Few seconds later he thinks that what he has done is not enough good and decides to erase all.

Slugging

He is quiet when he is thinking but he gets a little bit angry when he starts erasing because he thinks he is wasteing his time.

Camera

Hte camera will change from this shot from the back of the architect to the reverse shot of his face to show his emotions.

Scene

7

Duration

03:00

Panel

1

Duration

03:00

Action Notes

While the camera gets closer to the book the lines that are writened on it are being erased so when the shot is over the pages is empty.

Camera

Zoom to the top of the first page.


Scene

5_3

Duration

00:17

Panel

1

Duration

00:17

Action Notes

The black line of the first page will appear and disappear like if this was a normal PC.

Scene

5_A_3

Duration

00:15

Panel

1

Duration

00:15Dissolve

Duration

00:14


Scene

8

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02:03

Panel

1

Duration

02:03

Action Notes


DissolveDuration

01:00

Scene

9

Duration

05:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

The painter is thinking what to paint but she can't paint anything good enough.

Slugging

She is a little bit upset because he doesn't know how to get inspiration.

Camera

The camera starts doing a close shot of the paint and hands of the character and slowly goes back to show all the scene.


Scene

10

Duration

02:00

Panel

1

Duration

02:00

Action Notes

She has already started the paint but another time she stops painting and walk few steps backwards to get another vision of what she has painted.

Slugging

She is not convinced of what she has done.

Camera

The camera moves from the side to a shot from his back when the painter walks backwards.

Scene

11

Duration

01:00

Panel

1

Duration

01:00

Action Notes

She marks the painting as a disaster and puts it on the floor to begin with another one.

Slugging

She feels angry because she cannot paint what she thinks.

Camera

The camera will follow all the movements of the painter always doing a shot from his waist.

Scene

9_A_1

Duration

02:00

Panel

1

Duration

02:00

Action Notes

The painter is another time in front of a blank canvas and she doesn't know what to draw.


DissolveDuration

01:00

Scene

8_1

Duration

02:14

Panel

1

Duration

02:14

Action Notes


DissolveDuration

01:00


Scene

13

Duration

03:00

Panel

1

Duration

03:00

Action Notes

The architect is in front of the plan but he doesn't know what to draw or what to model.

Slugging

He is bored of thinking and finally he feel depressed in front of the table .

Scene

14

Duration

01:01

Panel

1

Duration

01:01

Action Notes

We can see one of the models he has already done but he doesn't finished.

DissolveDuration

00:05


Scene

14_1

Duration

01:05

Panel

1

Duration

01:05

Action Notes

We can see another of the models he has already done but he doesn't finished.

Scene

14_A

Duration

02:00

Panel

1

Duration

02:00

Action Notes

On this shot we can see how he starts another model.

Slugging

He is getting angry because every new model he does is worst than the last one.

Camera

The camera will move from the back (like in the picture) to the other side of the table to show a front shot of the architect.

Scene

15

Duration

04:00

Panel

1

Duration

04:00

Action Notes

Here we can see all the models he has already done.


DissolveDuration

00:15

Scene

8_2

Duration

02:00

Panel

1

Duration

02:00

Action Notes


DissolveDuration

01:00


Scene

4_1

Duration

03:00

Panel

1

Duration

03:00

Dialogue

Writer : Voy a buscar un poco de inspiracion en el sotano. [I'm going to search inspiration on the basement ]

Action Notes

The writer is trying to write and he speaks to his friends.

Notes

Instead he is on the study the main light he has is from de computer.

Camera

The camera make a close shot of him to show that he is talking.

WipeDuration

01:00

Scene

16

Duration

04:00

Panel

1

Duration

04:00

Action Notes

The writer is looking for some inspiration on the library where the old projects are saved.

Slugging

He is courious looking all the things that are saved on the basement library.

Camera

The camera follows the character from his back.


Scene

17

Duration

02:00

Panel

1

Duration

02:00

Action Notes

Hes looks some papers that are on the desks.

Scene

18_A_0

Duration

01:10

Panel

1

Duration

01:10

Action Notes

He opens a drawer.

Slugging

He is tired and he begins thinking that looking here is a waste of time.

Camera

The camera starts with a large shot of the scene and finishes with a close shot of the thing that is on the drawer.

Scene

18_A

Duration

02:00

Panel

1

Duration

02:00

Action Notes

He opens a drawer where he founds a strange box inside.

Slugging

He is curious of what is this strange box and he decides to catch and make a look.

Camera

The camera makes a zoom to the box


Scene

19

Duration

04:00

Panel

1

Duration

04:00

Action Notes

He opens the box...

Slugging

He is nervous to know what hides the box inside.

Camera

Gets closer to the box.

Scene

20

Duration

05:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

... and founds the machine.After a moment he decides to go to the study and analyse it in a better way.

Slugging

He is a little bit confused because he doesn't know what is this machine.

Scene

21

Duration

03:00

Panel

1

Duration

03:00

Action Notes

He decides to try the machine.

Slugging

He is a bit insecure of what he is doing and his hands tremble.

Camera

The camera begins with a large shot to show him wearing the machine and finishes with a close shot of his face to show that he is insecure.


Scene

22_A

Duration

02:00

Panel

1

Duration

02:00

Action Notes

He is preparing to write induced by the machine.

Slugging

He seems asleep.

Camera

Firstly shows the architect and then moves down to show his hands and the holographic book where he is writting.

Scene

21_A

Duration

04:00

Panel

1

Duration

04:00

Action Notes

He begins writting on the PC induced by the machine.

Slugging

He seems asleep because the machine is on his subconscious.

WipeDuration

00:13


Scene

22

Duration

02:00

Panel

1

Duration

02:00

Action Notes

30 minutes after he has finished the novel.

Camera

The camera moves from the back of the writer to the holograpchi book and then to the real novel to show that what is witten on the holographic book is the same as the real novel.

WipeDuration

01:00

Scene

41

Duration

04:00

Panel

1

Duration

04:00

Dialogue

W: Mira lo que he ecnontrado, pruevalo. [look what i've found, try it]Painter: Que es? [What's it?]W: Tu pruevalo y veras, te ayudara. [Just try it, it will help you]P: Esta bien, me fio te di, eh. [Ok, I will trust in you, ah. ]

Action Notes

He talks with the painter and tells she to try the machine.

Slugging

The writer is anxious to tell to someone the good of the machine, he is so happy.She is confused bye the wirter.

Camera

The camera follow the wirter.


WipeDuration

00:23

Scene

24

Duration

03:00

Panel

1

Duration

03:00

Action Notes

When she uses the machine he starts moveing his eyes from one side to the other and at the same time she moves her eyes a new line of the paint is done on the canvas.

Slugging

Like the writer she is unconscious so she looks like she was sleeping.

Scene

25

Duration

01:00

Panel

1

Duration

01:00

Action Notes

She moves her eyes from one side to the other while the paint has been painted.

Slugging

She looks like she was sleeping but she have her eyes open.

Camera

Close shot of his face to show how she moves her eyes from one side to the other.


Scene

25_A

Duration

04:00

Panel

1

Duration

04:00

Action Notes

The painter uses the machine and 45 minutes later she has his paint finished.

Slugging

She feels happy because she could finished her paint at time.

Camera

The camera gets closer to the paint to show the good job she has done.

DissolveDuration

01:00

Scene

26

Duration

03:00

Panel

1

Duration

03:00

Action Notes

The architect is very upset because he can't build any good model.

Slugging

He is getting frustrated because he can't build a model as good as he think.

Camera

Close shot of the architect at the beginning and after that the camera moves to a large shot of the whole scene.


Scene

29_A

Duration

05:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

W: Ei Ruben, prueva esto. [Hey Ruben, try this]Architect: Que es? [What's it?]P: Una maquina que te ayudara a crear tus ideas. [A machine that will help you to create your ideas]A: Y como funciona? [And how does it works?]W: Solo pontela en la cabeza y piensa. [Just wear it on your head and start thinking]

Action Notes

His friends let him the machine so he can finish his project.

Slugging

He is depressed.His friends are happy.

Camera

The camera follows the writer and the painter.

WipeDuration

01:00

Scene

28

Duration

05:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

While he is modeling the holographic cube a model is becoming on the table.

Slugging

Like the other 2 he seems asleep.

Camera

The camera will start with a shot of the architect modeling the holographic cube and then will move to show that on the table a cube, which is equal as the holographic, is being modeled as the same way as the holographic.


DissolveDuration

01:00

Scene

8_3

Duration

03:02

Panel

1

Duration

03:02

Action Notes


DissolveDuration

01:00


Scene

29

Duration

04:00

Panel

1

Duration

04:00

Action Notes

Everybody has gone from the study and the architect takes the machine to use it for his own benefits.

Slugging

He has a mad expression on his face.

Notes

All the study is dark because the only light that is tuned on is on the desk of the architect.

Scene

30

Duration

04:00

Panel

1

Duration

04:00

Action Notes

He models a suit.

DissolveDuration

00:05


Scene

8_5

Duration

00:15

Panel

1

Duration

00:15

Action Notes


DissolveDuration

00:05

Scene

31

Duration

04:00

Panel

1

Duration

04:00

Action Notes

Next morning he models a mobile phone.


DissolveDuration

00:05

Scene

8_6

Duration

00:15

Panel

1

Duration

00:15

Action Notes


DissolveDuration

00:05


Scene

32

Duration

03:00

Panel

1

Duration

03:00

Action Notes

And before lunch he decides to model a car key.

Scene

33

Duration

02:00

Panel

1

Duration

02:00

Action Notes

After modeling the key he goes outside and he see the car park on the street.

Slugging

He watch the car with a devil smile on his face.

Camera

The camera begins with a large shot of the scene and finishes showing the face of the architect.

DissolveDuration

00:05


Scene

8_7

Duration

00:15

Panel

1

Duration

00:15

Action Notes


DissolveDuration

00:05

Scene

34

Duration

03:00

Panel

1

Duration

03:00

Action Notes

Then he decides to model a 500 euro bill to get a real 500 euro bill.


WipeDuration

01:00

Scene

35

Duration

03:00

Panel

1

Duration

03:00

Dialogue

P: Has visto que ultimamente esta muy raro? [Did you see that he is so strange the last few days?]W: Si, y encima ha empezado a llevar siempre puesta la maquina. [Yes, and he is wearing the machine all the time ]

Action Notes

Next morning the architect arrives late at work and very smart so his friends look him confused.A part of the suit he is wearing SUM too.

Slugging

The writer and the painter are confused about the new behaviour of his friend and the architect is so self-confident.

Camera

The camera starts showing the two artists and then follows the architect with a close shot of his face.

Scene

36_A

Duration

03:00

Panel

1

Duration

03:00

Action Notes

He begins doing all the ideas that he have on his brain.

Notes

The study is full of things that he has modeled.

Camera

The camera will begin showing all the things he has modeled and then he will appears from one side and put a new thing on the shelf.


Scene

37

Duration

04:00

Panel

1

Duration

04:00

Action Notes

With every new idea and with every new model he does he goes faster and faster.

Slugging

During the shot he is getting tired and stressed.

Notes

He starts to sweat.

Camera

Gets closer to what he is modeling.

Scene

38

Duration

02:00

Panel

1

Duration

02:00

Action Notes

The painter saw the architect but she doesn't realises that he is in trouble.

Slugging

The painter is curious and the architect is suffering.

Camera

The camera moves from the painter to the architect.

Scene

39

Duration

02:00

Panel

1

Duration

02:00

Action Notes

He is suffering because his brain is being controlled by SUM and he can't stop doing models.

Slugging

He is tired and very stressed.


Scene

40

Duration

05:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

P: Oye creo que Ruben tiene problemas. [Hey Ruben is in trouble]W: Si! Parece que necesita ayuda! [Yes! It seems that he needs help!]

Action Notes

She see that the architect is in trouble and advises the writer to go to help his firend.

Slugging

Both of them are confused about what has been happening on the architect's study.

Scene

42_A

Duration

04:00

Panel

1

Duration

04:00

Dialogue

P: Oh no! la maquina lo tiene controlado! [Oh no! The machine is controlling him!]W: Si, debemos actuar rapido! [Yes! We have to move fast]P: Pero que hacemos? [But what we have to do?]W: Quitarle la maquina! [We have to remove the machine!]

Action Notes

The 2 friends come to the architect study to help him and get out of all things he have modeled.

Slugging

Their friends are alarmed about what's happening.

Camera

Close shot of the architect to large shot of the situation.

Scene

43

Duration

03:00

Panel

1

Duration

03:00

Dialogue

W: Es imposible! No para de moverse! [It's impossible! He doesn't stop moveing!]P: No podemos acercarnos! [We can't get closer!]W: Como podemos pararlo? [How we can stop him?]P: Tengo una idea y si lo sobrecargamos de ideas? [I have an idea, why we overload him of ideas?]

Action Notes

They try to stop the architect but he moves so fast and they can't get closer to him.

Slugging

They try to help his friend but they gets frustrated with every new try.

Camera

Large shot.


Scene

44

Duration

05:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

W: Raton! Paraguas! Ventana! Pelota! Papel! [Mouse! Umbrella! Window! Ball! Paper!]P: Amor! Nieve! Botella! Mesa! [Love! Snow! Botlle! Table!]W: Gorra! Brazalete! [Cup! Bracelet!]P: Camiseta! Zapato! [T-shirt! Shoe!]W: Pantalones! [Trousers!]

Action Notes

They decide to overload his friend giving to him lots of new ideas.The architect goes faster and faster with every new idea they give to him.

Slugging

They gets angry and starts shoutting him lots of ideas.

Camera

The camera will change from a large

NO PANEL

shot of the scene to close shots of the every character.

Scene

45

Duration

04:00

Panel

1

Duration

04:00

Dialogue

P: Rapido, avisa a un medico! [Come on, call a doctor!]

Action Notes

The architect finally falls unconscious and his friends take adventage of the situation and remove the machine.

Slugging

the architect gets axhausted and falls down on the floor and then their friends run fast to him.

Camera

the camera finishes doing a close shot of the body of the architect that rests on the floor.


Scene

46_A

Duration

05:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Dialogue

W: Mira, por fin despierta. [look, he is waking up]A: Que ha pasado? [What happens?]P: Abusaste de la maquina y al final ella te controlo. [you abused the machine and in the end machine controled you]A: Que ha pasado con la maquina? [What happens with the machine?]W: Esta en el estudio pero deberias deshacerte de ella. [Is on the study but you should get rid of it]

Action Notes

The architect wakes up in the hospital. His friends are waiting for him and they explain what happens to him.

Slugging

He feels so weak on the bed and his friends are so concerned for him.

Notes

"2 weeks later" will appear on the black square of the scene.

Camera

Close shot of the architect, who is on

NO PANEL

bed, to large shot of the scene.

Scene

47

Duration

03:00

Panel

1

Duration

03:00

Action Notes

He decides to burn the box of the machine on a litter of the street.

Slugging

He looks the fire with indiference.


Scene

46_B

Duration

05:00

Panel

1

Duration

05:00

Action Notes

The box is still burning and he walks to the end of the street.Inside the bag of the architect we can see some lights.

Camera

Begins with a close shot of the litter where the box is burning and then goes to a larger shot to show the architect walking.

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SUM, Shape Ur Mind storyboard first look