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Focus
Addresses all aspects of prompt appropriately maintains a strongly developed focus.
Look for:*Thesis statement gives a basic answer to the question in the prompt. (3 elements in the stories that address a specific, common theme).*Every part of the paper is supporting some part of the thesis.
Controlling Idea
• Establishes a strong controlling idea with a clear purpose maintained throughout the response.
Look For:*Has a strong thesis statement*Each paragraph begins with a topic sentence that connects to the thesis. (mentions a specific element and connects it to the theme.)*Each example and each piece of commentary supports the thesis in some way. (example of a literary element and how it supports the common theme).
Reading/ Research
• Accurately presents information relevant to all parts of the prompt with effective selection of sources and details from reading materials.
• Look For:• Each example helps answer the prompt. (evidence of literary
elements that develop a common theme).• Each example is accurate (it actually is the literary element
you say it is.)• There is enough textual evidence to strongly support your
point.{ 2 to 4 pieces (direct or indirect quotes) per paragraph}
Rubric UnderstandingReading/Research
Scoring Element 1 1.5 2 2.5 3 3.5 4
Reading/ Research
Attempts to reference reading
materials to develop response,
but lacks connections or relevance to the purpose of the
prompt.
Presents information from reading materials
relevant to the purpose of the prompt with
minor lapses in accuracy or
completeness.
Accurately presents details from reading
materials relevant to the purpose of
the prompt to develop argument
or claim.
Accurately and effectively presents
important details from reading materials to develop argument or
claim.
How does the student transfer relevant content from the reading materials to the writing product?
Development
• Presents thorough and detailed information to strongly support the focus and controlling idea.
• Look For:• Each example is followed by enough
commentary to explain how that example helps answer the thesis. (1-2 sentences of commentary after every example).
Rubric UnderstandingDevelopment
Scoring Element 1 1.5 2 2.5 3 3.5 4
Development
Attempts to provide details in response to the
prompt, but lackssufficient
development or relevance to the purpose of the
prompt.(L3) Makes no
connections or a connection that is
irrelevant to argument or claim.
Presents appropriate details to support and
develop the focus, controlling idea, or claim, with minor
lapses in the reasoning, examples, or explanations.(L3) Makes a
connection with a weak or unclear relationship to argument or claim.
Presents appropriate and sufficient details to
support and develop the focus, controlling idea, or
claim. (L3) Makes a relevant connection to clarify argument or claim.
Presents thorough and detailed information to effectively support and
develop the focus, controlling idea, or claim.
(L3) Makes a clarifying connection(s) that
illuminates argument and adds depth to reasoning.
How thoroughly does the student provide and explain details in support of the controlling idea?
Organization
• Maintains an organizational structure that intentionally and effectively enhances the presentation of information as required by the specific prompt.
• Look For:• Paper is organized into paragraphs• Thesis Statement that is correctly formatted and is in the last
sentence of the first paragraph.• Topic sentences at the beginning of each body paragraph.• Transitions between the body paragraphs.• Transitions between pieces of textual evidence within a paragraph.• Order of the paragraphs match order of thesis.• Transitions used highlight the purpose of the prompt (comparison
transitions used).
Organization
Transition words:• Comparison/contrast order. Words used in
expository writing to signal similarities and differences.
• Ex. (for similarities) also, additionally, just as, as if, as though, like, and similarly; and (for differences) but, yet, only, although, whereas, in contrast, conversely, however, on the other hand, rather, instead, in spite of, and nevertheless.
Conventions
• Demonstrates and maintains a well-developed command of standard English conventions and cohesion, with few errors. Response includes language and tone consistently appropriate to the audience, purpose, and specific requirements of the prompt. Consistently cites sources using an appropriate format.
Conventions
• Demonstrates and maintains a well-developed command of standard English conventions and cohesion, with few errors.
• Look For:• No capitalization errors.• No fragmented sentences.• No run-on sentences.• Commas, semi colons, and colons are used correctly.• Quotes are properly embedded.• No spelling errors.
Conventions
• Response includes language and tone consistently appropriate to the audience, purpose, and specific requirements of the prompt.
• Look for:• No personal pronouns• More academic vocabulary• Tone is scholarly instead of conversational
Conventions
• Consistently cites sources using an appropriate format.
• Look for:• Uses in-text citations (Collins 11) after every
piece of textual evidence or info from an outside source.
• Includes a bibliography page that follows the MLA format.
Content Understanding
• Integrates relevant and accurate disciplinary content with thorough explanations that demonstrate in-depth understanding.
• Look for:• Examples are accurate (literary elements are
correctly identified in each example).• Your explanations show that you really get how
the examples show your theme.