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YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print

AS Print Level Descriptors Level awarded

AFL

Evaluating Peer Work

NameMolly Simpson


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Activity 1

Use the mark scheme below and work in pairs to grade the 4 example pieces ofwork. You must try and place the work into the correct level. Wherever possible youshould use a best fit model, this means that you take an overall view rather thanharshly penalising for one fault. Use the space provided to give specific examples and

write a summary comment at the bottom of the page.

MGN

Minimal

Level 1

1023

marks

Basic

Level 2

2435

marks

Proficiency

Level 3

3647 marks

Excellence

Level 4

4860 marks

Framing a shot,

including and excluding

elements as

appropriate

XThe creator has used the

image on their front cover as

their CVI. Her eyes will draw in

readers. The contents page uses

boosts in order to split up textand images. The double page

spread also uses CVI again. It

also uses smaller images to

ensure there is not any negative

space.

Using a variety of shot

distances as

appropriate

XThe creator has used a

variety of shot distances.

The creator has used a mid

shot on the magazine cover.

On the contents page, the

creator has also used mid

shots again of a variety of

people. This keeps readersinterested. Lastly, the

double page spread also

consists of mid shots.

Shooting material

appropriate to the task

set

XThe creator has taken

images of people in order to

ensure their magazine features

artists from the genre they are

trying to achieve. The front

cover image identifies who is

mainly included in the

magazine. Using other images

of people on the contents page

allows readers to identify thatthe magazine does not only

include information on the

artist on the front cover. The

images on the double page

spread tell readers whom the

article is about.

Selecting mise-en-

scne including colour,

figure, lighting, objects

and setting

XThe creator has considered

mise-en-scene throughout. The

setting of the image on the

cover is effective because its

basic therefore goes well with

her colour scheme. The models

outfit is black and her lipstick is

red which goes with her colour


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scheme. Her figure is

appropriate because it fits the

whole page, avoiding negative

space. The lighting is natural

which is effective because it

brings out the models features,

drawing the readers in. Herbody language suggests she is

reaching out to readers.

Images on the contents page

are effective. A variety of colour

on the images makes them

stand out against each other.

The colours also go well with

the colour scheme. Their figures

are appealing because all of the

images look welcoming and

confident. The lighting varies.

Some images are clearer than

others which are unfortunatee.g. The middle black and white

image is not as clear as the

others. Objects such as the

guitar in the last image on the

contents page are effective as it

highlights the magazine is based

on music. The settings of the

images are pretty basic which

go well with the theme of the

magazine.

The double page spread images

are effective because they have

used natural lighting. They

ensure the artist(s) are clear.

The figures of the images fill the

first page of the double page

spread, ensuring that there is

no negative space. The colours

on the images are white, which

compliments the page well.

Manipulating

photographs as

appropriate to the

context for

presentation, including

cropping and resizing

XThe creator has edited

the image on the double

page spread lighter to

ensure her features come

up clearer.

The images on the double

page spread have been

edited. The 1st

and 3rd

photo

have been made black and

white to create a contrast

with the other images. The

images have clearly been

airbrushed because the

models look flawless in an

obvious way. The images

have been cropped in orderto fit well on the page.

The images on the double


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page spread have also been

airbrushed and cropped in

order to fit on the page. The

use of black and white has

been used to contrast with

the coloured images.

Accurately usinglanguage and register

XThe language used in thismagazine is both formal and

informal. This ensures it hits a

wider target audience, as many

audiences will appeal to this

language.

Appropriately

integrating illustration

and text

XThe illustration has been

used effectively to provide an

organised layout. They do not

overlap.

Showing

understanding of

conventions of layout

and page design

XThe magazine supplies a

variety of mastheads,

headlines and fillers for a

consistent and organised

layout.

Showing awareness of

the need for variety in

fonts and text size

XThe magazine uses

mastheads and headlines in a

large font to get their top

stories across. It uses smaller

text to ensure important

information is still shown.

Using ICT appropriately

for the task set

XThe creator has clearly

researched magazines well as

this looks like a professional

magazine. They have

researched well-known artists

to ensure their magazine looks

real.

Summary Comment

I believe this magazine is level 4 because they have paid attention to detail and ensured that their magazine is full of

information, images, shapes, colour etc. To keep readers busy. The colour scheme is effective as its simplistic and

appealing. To improve, the creator could give us more of a hint of what genre their magazine is. The images are

presented well in order to fill negative space and the models are appealing.


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GHR

Minimal Level 1

1023 marks

Basic Level 2

2435 marks

Proficiency

Level 3

3647 marks

Excellence

Level 4

4860 marks

Framing a shot,


elements as

appropriate

XThe creator has

taken mid shots to

ensure every model

is shown clearly

throughout. The

creator has used

one image on their

front cover to

create a CVI. On

their contents

page, they have

used three images

to spread out on

the page.Using just two

images on the

double page spread

is not effective

because they are

small and are

difficult to see.


distances as

appropriate

X - The images

taken are only using

mid/ long shots. It

is difficult to see

the models onmany of them

which is negative

because they

should draw the

readers in.

Shooting material


set

X - The majority of

the images taken

on the magazine

are effective as the

models are dressed

and look like they

fit the genre of the

magazine.However, some are

not dressed

appropriately

therefore do not fit

the idealised

stereotype of the

magazine.

Selecting mise-en-



and setting

X - The image on

the double page

spread is effective.

The colours are

effective because

they go with the

colourful


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background. The

image fits the

whole page.

Natural lighting is

used to ensure we

can see the models

features. Thesetting of the

image goes well

with the genre of

the magazine.

The images on the

contents page are

average. The

colours are

dissatisfying

because they do

not go with the

colour scheme. 2/3

images are noteffective because

the models are not

wearing outfits that

go with the genre

of the magazine.

The setting where

the images were

taken is not

effective because

they are irrelevant

to the magazine.

The double page

spread images are

average. The

lighting and setting

allows readers to

view the images

clearly

Manipulating

photographs as

appropriate to the

context for



X - The creator has

stretched images,

which do not look

professional, and

some images have

been cropped to fit

on the page.

Accurately using

language and register

XThe magazine

language is mainly

too informal. It is

not appealing.

Appropriately


and text

X -The text overlaps

or underlays some

of the images which

is difficult to see.

The creator has not

worked around

them.

Showingunderstanding of

X -The layout of thecontents page is


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and page design

basic. It is easily

viewed. The

contents page is

also basic however

they have not put a

lot of thought to

how it can beaesthetically

pleasing. The

double page spread

is negative. It is

complicated and

unorganised. The

writing is not in

neat columns.



fonts and text size

X - They have used

font sizes to ensure

there is no negative

space. The use of

text size highlightsthe order of

importance the

writing goes in e.g.

GHR is obviously

the title therefore

they want readers

to recognise this.

Unfortunately, the

headline on the

double page spread

needs to be bigger

to ensure it is an

important part of

the page. The

graffiti-like font

goes well with the

genre of the

magazine.


for the task set

X - The creator has

added many

techniques to hit a

specific grade such

as colour, fonts,

images, layout etc.

Summary Comment

Overall, this magazine needs improving. I believe it is a level 2 maximum. Although they have highlighted the

amount of techniques they have used and achieved, it is too unorganised and over the top. The creator is attempting

to achieve something too over exaggerated. As a reader, the magazine is not aesthetically pleasing and the creator

needs to take that into consideration.


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BUZZ

Minimal Level 1

1023 marks

Basic Level 2

2435 marks

Proficiency

Level 3

3647 marks

Excellence

Level 4

4860 marks

Framing a shot,

including and excludingelements as

appropriate

X - They have used

a variety of frameshowever not good

enough shots to hit

level 4.


distances as

appropriate

X - The creator has

provided a variety

of shot distances

however

sometimes not

appropriate such

as on the contents

page. The long

shots on this page

are difficult to see.

Shooting material


set

X - The models

chosen do not fit

well with the genre

of the magazine. My

first impression on

them is that they are

too hip-hop.

Selecting mise-en-



and setting

X - The colour of the

clothing used on the

models does not fit

well with the colour

theme of themagazine. The main

model fits the front

cover well as there

is no negative space

however the models

on the contents

page leave a lot of

negative space on

the page. The

lighting used on the

model on the front

cover and double

page spread worksbecause it brings out

the models features

however the images

on the contents

page have shadows

and cannot be

viewed easily. The

camera in the male

models hand is not

relevant to the

magazine. The

outfits used fit more

of a hip-hop genre.Manipulating X - A shadow on the


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photographs as

appropriate to the

context for



front cover has been

edited in however

looks

unprofessional. The

image on the cover

looks lightened than

all the others.Accurately using


X - The magazine

uses both formal

and informal

language. These

appeals to a wider

range of audiences.

It fits with the

genre.

Appropriately


and text

X - The text mainly

does not overlap

however there are

some small details

which could bechanged in the

layout in order to

ensure a better

level of work e.g.

On the contents

page, the Editors

Note banner

overlaps the

writing below,

making it difficult

to read.

Showing

understanding of


and page design

X - The layout is

effective however

it could be

improved to

ensure a better

grade.



fonts and text size

X - The creator has

used a variety of

font sizes to

ensure there is no

negative space

and also to

highlight the most

important things.However the

magazine looks

too busy. There is

no variety in fonts.


for the task set

X - The creator has

used a basic amount

of software to get

the look created.

Summary Comment

I feel that this magazine is of level 2 standard. This is because they have not been creative enough to achieve a

better grade and also they have no achieved a professional look. It is at GCSE standard because it looks like it has

been created on publisher and they have not taken full advantage of what Photoshop has to offer.


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DUBZONE

Minimal Level 1

1023 marks

Basic Level 2

2435 marks

Proficiency

Level 3

3647 marks

Excellence

Level 4

4860 marks

Framing a shot,


appropriate

X - The images have

been framed to fillthe pages.


distances as

appropriate

X - Basic shot

distances have

been taken.

Shooting material


set

X- The models do

not fit the genre of

the magazine. Their

clothing and

objects do not

achieve the look

the creator hastried to create.

Selecting mise-en-



and setting

XThe colours of

the magazine

contrast well

together. However,

the colours of the

clothing do not

compliment the

colour scheme but

they are simplistic.

The figures on the

front cover and

contents work wellbecause they will

the page leaving no

negative space.

However, the use

of images on the

double page spread

is not effective or

appealing because

they have been

stretched to fit in

the negative space.

The lighting is very

light so the imagesare easy to see. The

setting on the

double page spread

on the main model

emphasises that

the magazine could

be quite personal

to the made up

model.

Manipulating

photographs as

appropriate to the

context for


X - The images have

been basically

edited. They have

been lightened.

One image on the


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cropping and resizing double page spread

has been placed in

black and white,

which does not go

with the overall

theme.

Accurately usinglanguage and register

XThe languageused is both formal

and informal. This

goes well with the

genre as it appeals

to a wider audience

this way.

Appropriately


and text

XThe layout on

the front cover and

double page spread

is average- its

basic and seems

that is has not been

consideredeffectively. The

double page spread

layout is poor. The

columns appear

complicated and

difficult to read.

Showing

understanding of


and page design

X - The layout could

be improved to

look more creative

and appealing.



fonts and text size

X - The creator has

considered font

sizes in order to

achieve a look of

importance. Some

text could be made

larger to ensure

there is no negative

space.


for the task set

The use of ICT is

basic on this

magazine. They

have not taken ICT

applications to a

great advantage.

Summary Comment

Overall, I believe this magazine is a strong level 2. This is because they have not considered many things about their

chosen genre therefore nothing on the magazine relates to it e.g. Costume, models etc. The use of ICT has been

poor. It looks as if it was created on publisher. For a high grade, this student should have taken full advantage of ICT.


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Task 2

Now using the skills youve acquired in task 1, evaluate your own work and then two

pieces of work from classmates. Use the space provided to give specific examplesand write a summary comment at the bottom of the page.

Magazine title: Underground (Alex Rhodes Magazine)

Minimal Level 1

1023 marks

Basic Level 2

2435 marks

Proficiency

Level 3

3647 marks

Excellence

Level 4

4860 marks

Framing a shot,


elements as

appropriate

X - The shots have

been framed

professionally and

organised.


distances as

appropriate

X - Shot distances

are mainly taken

mid shot so the

student needs to

take a variety of

shots to ensure a

better grade.

Shooting material


set

X - The models fit

the genre of the

magazine

appropriately. The

outfits worn also

highlight the genre.

Selecting mise-en-


figure, lighting, objectsand setting

X - The colour

theme of the

magazine issimplistic therefore

the colour of the

images

compliments the

magazine well. The

figures of the

models fit the

magazine well. They

ensure there is no

negative space.

However, the

model on the

double page spreadneeds improving

because the image

is stretched. The

lighting is bright to

ensure we can see

the images clear.

Setting is effective

because it

compliments the

colour scheme.

Manipulating

photographs as

appropriate to thecontext for

X - The image on

the front cover has

been croppedbecause two of the


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models faces have

been cut off. The

image on the

contents page has

been resized to fit

appropriately. The

image on thedouble page spread

has been stretched

to fit in the

negative space.

Accurately using


XThe student has

used both formal

and informal

language to ensure

a wider target

audience.

Appropriately


and text

XThe text has

been integrated

appropriately to fiton the magazine

professionally and

organised.

Showing

understanding of


and page design

XText on the

double page spread

has been laid out

effectively. The

student has used

columns on the

contents page and

double page

spread. The article

page columns need

to be improved.



fonts and text size

XThe student has

showed a variety of

font sizes to ensure

it highlights

importance. More

fonts need to be

produced.


for the task set

XThe student has

taken an average

advantage of the

applicationPhotoshop to

ensure they good

the look they

wanted. The

student has used

the magic wand

tool especially to

get rid of the

background behind

his models.

Summary Comment: I believe this student has achieved a level 2/3. This is because I believe he has achieved an

appealing indie styled magazine. He has considered mise en scene and researched effectively to achieve thislook. To improve, this student should pay more attention to the way text is set out.


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Magazine title: X Magazine (My Own Magazine)

Minimal Level 1

1023 marks

Basic Level 2

2435 marks

Proficiency

Level 3

3647 marks

Excellence

Level 4

4860 marks

Framing a shot,including and excluding

elements as

appropriate

XI believe I haveframed shots

effectively to suit

the genre of my

magazine.


distances as

appropriate

XI have only

achieved a mid shot

in my images so I

need to improve in

this area.

Shooting material


set

XI believe I have

shot material

appropriate for my

magazine and its

genre.

Selecting mise-en-



and setting

XMy colour

scheme

compliments the

models makeup.

The figure of my

model needs to fit

the negative space

on my front cover. I

think my lighting is

effective because it

brings out all of my

models features,

making her look

flawless.

Manipulating

photographs as

appropriate to the

context for



XI believe I have

manipulated my

images effectively

by using the quick

selection tool, crop

and the magic wand

tool on Photoshop.

Accurately using


XThe language

register I have

chosen is a mixbetween formal and

informal. I think this

is effective because

it appeals to a wider

target audience.

Appropriately


and text

XI have

integrated text on

my magazine so its

easy to read and is

visually appealing.

Showing

understanding of

conventions of layoutand page design

XMy double page

spread layout has

been laid out toensure when it is


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printed the crease

will not disrupt the

text or image.

Everything has

been laid out

clearly.

Showing awareness ofthe need for variety in

fonts and text size

XI have used avariety of fonts to

fit the genre of my

magazine. I have

used a variety in

font sizes to

highlight the texts

importance.


for the task set

XI have

researched

effectively and used

many tools on

dafont.com and

Photoshop toachieve a Pop

look.

Summary Comment

Overall I think I have achieved a level 2. This is because I have attempted to use a variety of tools on

Photoshop to achieve this look. I need to consider other images and fonts in order to achieve a

better grade overall. I also need to use more columns on my double page spread.


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Magazine title: Infuse (Michelle Knights Magazine)

Minimal Level 1

1023 marks

Basic Level 2

2435 marks

Proficiency

Level 3

3647 marks

Excellence

Level 4

4860 marks

Framing a shot,


appropriate

XThe shots taken

are framed wellhowever the 1

st

image on the

contents page is

irrelevant.


distances as

appropriate

X - Mid shot is used

throughout

therefore has not

produced a variety

of shot distances.

Shooting material


set

X - The shots taken

are appropriate

because they fit the

simplistic layout.

Selecting mise-en-



and setting

X - The colour

theme is

aesthetically

pleasing. The

images fit the pages

well. The lighting on

the model is

natural.

Manipulating

photographs as

appropriate to the

context forpresentation, including


X - The images have

been cropped to fit

well on the page

and reducenegative space. The

student has used

the magic wand

tool in Photoshop

to get rid of the

background on the

front cover image.

Accurately using


XThe student has

used mainly formal

language with a

slight informal

language in the

interview on thedouble page

spread.

Appropriately


and text

XThe text has

been laid out

successfully to

ensure there is no

overlapping.

Showing

understanding of


and page design

XThe layout is

professional and

organised.


the need forvariety in fonts

XThe student has

made texts biggerto highlight its


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and text size importance. The

font for the

magazine title is

edgy and unique.


for the task set

XThis student

has used basic

Photoshop tools.

Summary Comment

I believe this student has achieved a level 3. This is because I really like their genre, layout and

overall idea. To improve, reconsider the model used. They do not fit the genre she is trying to

achieve.

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