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If you ask the question "how and why" things happen, then you probably like reading feature stories in newspapers

and magazines.

♦♦What is a feature story?What is a feature story?A feature takes an in-depth look at what’s

going on behind the news.It gets into the lives of people. It tries to explain why and how a trend

developed. Unlike news, a feature does not have to be tied

to a current event or a breaking story. But it can grow out of something that’s reported in the news. 

It may be a profile of a person or a group -- an athlete, a performer, a politician, or a community worker or a team, a choir or a political organization. Or perhaps it’s an in-depth look at a social issue -- like fraternities in schools or eating disorders among young women. It could also be a story that gives the reader background on a topic that’s in the news -- like a story that explains how land mines work and the history of their use in war.

A feature story is usually longer than a news story -- but length is not a requirement! What’s more important is the form the story takes.

Think of the feature as the Think of the feature as the journalistic equivalent of an essay. journalistic equivalent of an essay. Follow these guidelinesFollow these guidelines start with a premise or theme present information and opinions

that back your point, bring the reader to a conclusion.

The feature often explores different points of views, even when the story is about one particular person.

The story behind the newsThe story behind the newsHere’s an example of how a feature can Here’s an example of how a feature can explain and explore a story that makes news:explain and explore a story that makes news:Your local newspaper reports on the front

page that school enrollments are dropping in your small community. The reason? Many people are being forced to leave the town to look for jobs in bigger cities and obviously, their children go with them. As a reporter you can go beyond the facts and figures in the news story by talking to one of the families who are leaving. How do they feel? What made them decide to go?

What will they miss about home? What are they expecting in their new community? How do the children feel about leaving their school and their friends? Or you can look at the story from the point of view of the people who remain in the town. What’s it like to lose friends and family to far-away cities? How does it affect the school? What about the local economy?

The news story tells the audience what happened. The feature will tell them why and how it happened, how the people involved are reacting, and what

impact the decision is having on other people.

Personality profilePersonality profileIndulge your curiosity -- and that of

your readers -- with a profile of an interesting person.

•You can look at someone who’s making news in your community, province or country. Or it could be someone who's relatively unknown to the public but who has done something unusual or remarkable

Here’s one example: Your town elects a full slate of councilors to

represent and serve the community. One is a 19-year-old student who was active in youth parliament and student politics. That makes him the youngest elected official in your province. But that’s not the whole story! He gets the most votes of any of the councilors, and according to the election rules, that makes him deputy mayor. What’s it like to be a politician when you’re still in your teens? What does your life experience add to the council? Are you seen as a spokesman for your generation -- but not the community as a whole? What do the other councilors think of their young colleague? Do people take you seriously?

That young politician may not be famous. But he’s certainly done something new. And his experiences will be something that others will want to learn more about.

Take a look at people from the world of sports, entertainment, politics, science, technology, business, health, international development, community activism, education, the military, the fine arts or any other field that interests you.

You can choose a subject and find out the basic facts of the person’s life and work. What have they learned so far? Are there any surprises? Is there an area of this person's life or work that the student would now like to focus on?

Write your profile by telling your readers the facts of this person's life — while adding the color and details that make them unique.

Talk to the person themselves whenever possible and use their own words to help tell their story.

Tracking a trendMany of the best stories come from reporters’ observations of the world around them. Here’s just one example of how you can come across a great feature story in your daily life:

YOU are hanging around with friends at lunch time and talking about plans for the weekend. Someone says they’ve heard that the town council is considering a curfew for teens. Everyone under 16 has to be off the streets by 11pm on weekends. You have your own curfew - set by your parents - but you are surprised to learn that the mayor wants to put one in place for everyone.

You talk to some of your friends to find out what they think. You and other concerned teens go over to the town hall and ask the mayor or one of the councilors why they see the need for a curfew. You surf the Net and find out what other towns and cities have been doing.

You find that this is a bit of trend in the US.

What you now have is the basis for a really interesting feature. You have taken a little piece of information and investigated further to find out what’s going on. The story will focus on the issue and the thoughts and feeling of the people involved — namely local teenagers and the people who made the decision about the curfew.

Feature writing tipsThe basic guidelines for good writing apply to all types of writing. However, if you expect to hold your readers attention for 1,000 words or more, your writing must be must be lively, specific and clear.

As a student writer you have to start with a lead that captures your reader’s attention.It could be an anecdote you have heard during the course of your research. It could be a description of a person, place or thing that draws the reader in and encourages them to learn more. It could a newsy lead that highlights the point of the story.

Move your story along with descriptions of what happened, quotes from people involved in the issue, and details that place the reader in the midst of the action. Make sure your ending is meaningful. Your closing words should

make an impact on your readers and tie the various strands of your story together.

A powerful quote can often make for a good ending. Or you may want to come full circle and refer back to a word or an image used in your opening sentences. 

A good feature writer hasA good feature writer has SHORTSSHORTSStores a journalHas a nose for good storiesObserves accuracyReads a lotTakes chargeSimple in writing

STEPS IN WRITING STEPS IN WRITING AND ORGANIZING AND ORGANIZING THE FEATURE ARTICLETHE FEATURE ARTICLE

Steps in Writing and Organizing Steps in Writing and Organizing the Feature Articlethe Feature ArticleNarrow down the topicStart with a lead that hooks

the readers– Quote“I want to die with my boots on,” says an 85-year old English teacher.

–Chronology of events

Being part of a big family, Lani Patricio has always aspired of becoming a successful

businesswoman here in the Philippines and abroad.

– Shocking momentIt was in this moment when all hope had faded, that Kat Baron crossed the finish line, giving the Sophomores the

championship medal for the

4x100 relay run.

– A rhetorical questionCollege education is a privilege, not a right, isn’t it?

– A surprising fact80% of Filipinos spend at least 50 pesos a day for cellphone load, despite inflation of basic food prices.

– An ironyThe arrival of the Japanese soldiers signaled no resentment from the Filipino war veterans.

Steps in Writing and Organizing Steps in Writing and Organizing the Feature Articlethe Feature Article

♦ Body–Background and other vital

information–A thread should be present–Transition words–Dialogue–Voice

Test your limits, push your use of language and your ability to set a scene. – You are the Storyteller now.– There’s no one right way to write, and

there’s no single best way for you to tell your story.

Steps in Writing and Organizing Steps in Writing and Organizing the Feature Articlethe Feature Article

Steps in Writing and Organizing the Steps in Writing and Organizing the Feature ArticleFeature ArticleTry to make your reader feel

like they are there. – Your writing can trigger all five

senses!– You can think of a feature story as a

series of mental images, presented one after the other.

– Well-described scenes results to a beautiful montage

Tips for Writing Feature ArticlesTips for Writing Feature ArticlesWhat differentiates a feature article from

any regular informative or news article is the novelty of style, delivery and wordplay that the author uses to create a light, informative reading. Feature articles give writers more breathing space to express one's writing style and to tackle the topic in question in a more creative and less straightforward manner.

Originality is vital to a successful feature article, which is something a writer builds through time and experience,

but for starters, there are only a few fundamental steps to keep in

mind, and you're on your way to becoming a good feature writer.

1. Keep a brainstorming notebook handy1. Keep a brainstorming notebook handy It's always handy to keep a pad of paper or

a small notebook within convenient reach. Ideas don't just come whenever we want them to, and they often hit us at the

most unexpected places and during the most unexpected times.

If you've ever been hit with a brilliant idea while you're on the road or out on the hiking trail, you know what I mean.

Besides, many potential ideas take time to nurse and develop so you can come up with a good article. It's a huge advantage to always have something to scribble those fleeting thoughts on whenever they come

along, so you can go back and review them when it's time to wind down.

2. Do your research2. Do your research The most important step to any successful

article is, more often than not, the one that's most overlooked. Do your research! What decides an article's worth is its credibility, and only good, solid research can give you that. Whatever discussion you tackle must be backed by accurate facts and data that you can reliably source should your article come under fire.

3. Start with something light, like an 3. Start with something light, like an anecdote or a descriptive passageanecdote or a descriptive passage What good will writing a thousand-some

word article be if you can't entice an audience to pick it up and read? Any article should start with something that would pique the interest of readers and endorse your article as an interesting piece. Your first paragraph, or your first sentence for the matter, can either make or break you.

It's your most potent and effective marketing tool in getting your article across to more readers.

One of the most popular techniques would be to start by relating an interesting or comical anecdote that would introduce your topic. A catchy scenario or passage will also do the job perfectly. Also, after reading your first few paragraphs, your reader should

already be able to grasp what your article's about.

4. KISS (Keep it short and simple)4. KISS (Keep it short and simple) Don't subject your reader to the equivalent

of linguistic torture. A feature article, after all, is supposed to be light, entertaining and informative. A winding article that goes through all the nitty-gritties

of your topic is testing the patience of the reader.

Choose only a good amount of detail to include in your discussion; you don't have to tackle the less important aspects of your topic.

Give the most vital pieces of information that you want to get across,

and choose the details that go along with it.

However, be careful that you don't omit too much detail that you end up with a vague outline for an article.

A good technique is to always keep in mind your target audience. If you're writing an article on diving for general sports enthusiasts, you don't have to go through the trouble of explaining technical aspects because it will only bore your readers.

On the other hand, the detail is something you'd consider writing about more profusely if you're writing for a diving magazine.

5. Hold it with the highfalutin language5. Hold it with the highfalutin language It's good to drop profound vocabulary into

your article now and then, because aside from enriching your readers, they do add to the aestheric effect of an article. It's good, too, to know your limits. Dropping in too many "big", highfalutin words

is the equivalent of suicide; you'll drive your readers away without even trying.

Think of the experience of reading through a medical textbook without any medical background; the technical jargon will be enough to give you a headache and work as a natural soporific. Knowing when and how to impress is the key when it comes

to word selection, so save off the temptation of loading up on the big guns.

6. Reread your article6. Reread your article As any writer knows, mental fatigue can set

in pretty quickly doing this sort of work. Rereading your article will give you time and space to objectively reevaluate your article, add new ideas and tweak it to come up with something better. This also gives you time to

proofread your article for grammatical or typographical errors.

There's no surefire way to ensuring a successful article, and a writer's only tools are vocabulary and creativity. These steps are but a simple guide to the writing process, which is a complex and sometimes grueling undertaking.

Remember this: It takes a lot of patience and

experience to overcome hurdles and produce good quality output, but at the end of the day, you'd find

that writing can be an extremely noble and rewarding task.