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Editor-in-chief
Mohammad Hassan Tahririan
Assistant editor
Katayoon Afzali
Editorial board
Afghari, Akbar (Sheikhbahaee University)
Atai, Mahmood Reza (Kharazmi University, Tehran)
Baker, Mona (University of Manchester)
Hillel, Margot (Australian Catholic University)
House, Julian (University of Hamburg)
Sajjadi, Samad (Shahid Beheshti University)
Sedighi, Firooz (Shiraz University)
Talebinezhad, Mohammad Reza (Sheikhbahaee University)
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Aims and Scope
Sheikhbahaee Journal of Language Studies, a peer-reviewed one,
publishes research articles in wide range of topics in the areas of
language teaching, translation and literary studies, including,
discourse analysis, sociolinguistics, psycholinguistics, ESP,
material development, teaching literature, children’s literature and
stylistic analysis.
The journal is particularly keen to help make connections between
fields, theories, research methods, and scholarly discourses and
welcomes contributions which critically reflect on current practices
in the areas mentioned above. Contributors are invited to submit
their innovative manuscripts electronically to: [email protected].
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Contents
The Effect of Portfolio Assessment on the Development of
Metadiscourse Awareness in EFL Learners' Writing in the
Academic Context
Amirian, Z. & Tavakoli, M.
1-22
Objective Assessment of Oral Presentations and EFL Learners’
Speaking Development
Mazdayasna, G.
23-38
The Effect of L2 Learning on Learners' Perception of
Culture
Zarei,G. & Pourghasemian, H.
39-48
The Effect of EFL Learners' Gender and Second
Language Proficiency on Willingness to
Communicate Afghari, A. & Sadeghi, E.
49-66
The Effect of Self-directed Training on ESP Learners’
Self-directed Learning Readiness
Mohammadi, M. & Mohammadi, P
67-82
Literary Criticism and Appreciation
The Chaotic World and the Entropic Crisis in Thomas
Pynchon’s The Crying of Lot 49
Rezaei, H. & Azari Samani, M.
83-98
1 Sheikhbahaee EFL Journal, Vol. 1, No. 1, January 2012
The Effect of Portfolio Assessment on the Development of
Metadiscourse Awareness in EFL Learners' Writing in the
Academic Context
Mansoor Tavakoli Zahra Amirian
University of Isfahan University of Isfahan
[email protected] [email protected]
Abstract
This paper aimed at probing the implementation of portfolio assessment
in the writing classroom in an attempt to examine its effect(s) on EFL
learners‟ metadiscourse awareness. It addressed the following questions:
Does portfolio assessment as a teaching technique have positive wash
back effect on the participants‟ achievement in their writing ability in an
academic context? And to what extent do the students develop
metadiscourse awareness in their writing by the treatment of portfolio
assessment?
The participants were the students of English literature enrolled for
their composition course. After being homogenized for their proficiency
level, they were randomly divided into an experimental group (EG) and a
control group (CG). As the treatment, portfolio assessment was employed
as the teaching technique for the experimental group. Data was then
subjected to different statistical procedures. The results of data analysis
revealed that the participants in the EG outperformed those in the CG
with regard to the achievement in their overall writing ability. Second,
based on chi-square results, participants in the EG used metadiscourse
markers more correctly and efficiently compared with those in the CG.
The results of the present study may have some implications for teaching
of writing to EFL learners.
Keywords: Achievement, Metadiscourse knowledge, Portfolio
assessment, Performance testing, Writing ability
The Effect of Portfolio Assessment on the development … 2
Introduction
In order to assess the effect of teaching on students‟ learning a second
language, different test methods such as paper and pencil tests and performance
tests have so far been used. Teachers usually apply such tests to examine the
outcome or (product) of learning. But how do they assess the process of
learning simultaneously when the students are learning something? This
fundamental question led most researchers to call for a new paradigm in
language teaching and assessment whereby the learner would be able to learn
and assess the process of learning (Teasdale & Leung, 2000; Lynch, 2001;
Leung & Lewkowicz, 2006). So, the need for a paradigm shift from
„positivism‟ to „constructivism‟ attracted the attention of researchers in the field
(e.g., Lynch, 2005; Leung & Lewkowicz, 2006).
This movement was accelerated as we entered the „constructivist post-
method era‟ in which assessment is regarded as part of learning since in the
process of assessing, the learner tries to learn something (Clapham, 2000;
Hancock, 1994; Omalley & Valdez Pierce, 1996). Influenced by this shift of
paradigm from testing the outcome to assessing the learning process, language
assessors proposed a number of alternatives to testing such as self-assessment
and portfolio assessment (Genesee and Upshur, 1996; Hamp-Lyons 1996).
According to Harris (1997), self-assessment is a key learning strategy for
autonomous language learning, enabling students to monitor their progress and
relate learning to individual needs. One of the fundamental elements of self-
directed language learning is the opportunity for learners to assess their own
progress and thus help them to focus their own learning; therefore, self-
assessment is rightly seen as one of the pillars of learner autonomy. Henner-
Stanchina and Holec (1985, p. 98) state that through self-assessment, "learners
simultaneously create and undergo the evaluation procedure, judging their
achievement in relation to themselves against their own personal criteria, in
accordance with their own objectives and learning expectations".
Another advantage of self-assessment is providing the learners with
opportunities for reflective learning and ongoing formative assessment. Self-
assessment can help learners to realize that they have the ultimate responsibility
for their own learning. It helps learners to think about what they need to do in
order to get better marks. In other words, "By encouraging such individual
reflection, self-assessment can begin to make students see their learning in
personal terms" (Harris, 1997, p. 3). As Chamot and O'Malley point out (1994,
p. 119), "self-rating requires the student to exercise a variety of learning
strategies and higher order thinking skills that not only provide feedback to the
student but also provide direction for future learning".
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In fact, because of the potential impact that alternative assessment has on
classroom instruction in assessing the process of learning, there is much for it to
flourish in the field of language assessment.
Among such alternatives to testing, portfolio assessment was singled out in
this study because it might have potential effect on instruction. So, this paper
aimed to explore the effect of portfolio assessment on the students‟ writing
ability, especially on their knowledge and use of metadiscourse markers.
Review of the literature
Assessing the academic achievement of every student is a necessary part of
class activities, especially writing that presents a challenge for teachers and
learners throughout the classroom period. This study focuses on one type of
alternative assessment system, portfolio assessment.
The theoretical foundation that underpins this study is the notion of
„constructivism‟ which refers to more recent views on teaching and learning
proposing that all individuals learn by constructing information about the world
and by using active and dynamic mental processes (Omalley & Valdez Pierce,
1996). This idea led to several alternatives to testing (Omalley & Valdez Pierce,
1996; Brown, 2004; Leung & Lewkowicz, 2006). Following this line of
investigation, many researchers have come to recognize that alternative
assessment is an important means of gaining a dynamic picture of students'
academic and linguistic development. "Alternative assessment refers to
procedures and techniques used within the context of instruction which can be
easily incorporated into the daily activities of the school or classroom"
(Hamayan, 1995, p. 213). In contrast to traditional testing, through alternative
assessment, students are evaluated on what they integrate and produce rather
than on what they are able to reproduce and recall (Hamp-Lyons, 1996).
Meanwhile, Portfolios have been associated with alternative assessment
not only in general education but more particularly in second language
education as well (Darling-Hammond, 1994; Hamayan, 1995; Shohamy, 2001).
The literature reveals a degree of controversy and confusion concerning the use
of portfolio assessment as an alternative to traditional testing. It is argued that
portfolio assessment is more than merely one of many homogeneous
alternatives in assessment (Brown & Hudson, 1998). As further argued by
Lynch and Shaw (2005, p. 264), “…. the portfolio, as an exemplar of
alternative assessment, represents a different paradigm or culture that requires
an approach to validity evidence (i.e., to establishing the trustworthiness of the
The Effect of Portfolio Assessment on the development … 4
inferences made from the assessment process) differing in certain critical
aspects from the approach used in traditional testing.”
Portfolio assessment as one of the alternatives to testing is defined as the
systematic collection of student work measured against predetermined scoring
criteria. These benchmarks may include scoring guides, rubrics, check lists, or
rating scales (O'Malley & Valdez Pierce, 1996). Portfolio assessment is a
systematic collection of a variety of teacher observations and student
products, collected over time, that reflect a student's developmental status
and progress (cited in Shabban, 2001, p. 30 ). In fact, the popular format of
authentic assessment, according to Chapman (1990), is portfolio assessment, in
which students complete a body of writing over a prolonged period of time. The
goal of portfolio assessment is to integrate writing into the teaching of all
subject areas.
Genesee and Upshur (1996) provide a plausible reason for the application of
portfolio assessment: “A portfolio is purposeful collection of students' work
that demonstrates to the students and others their efforts, progress, and
achievements in given areas” (p. 99). They maintained that the primary value
of portfolios is in the assessment of student achievement because they
provide a continuous record of students' language development that can
be shared with others.
Moreover, many researchers (e.g., Genesee and Upshur, 1996; Upshur and
Turner 1998; Kormos 1999; Papajohn 1999; Lynch, 2001; Khoshsima, 2006 to
just mention a few) investigated the effect of portfolio assessment on learning
process in classroom context. Their findings depicted plausible impact on the
assessment of students‟ classroom performance either in writing or speaking.
For instance, Elahinia (2004) investigated the effect of portfolio assessment on
Iranian EFL learners‟ writing achievement. She found that portfolio assessment
had a significant effect on writing performance of the participants. Moreover,
she found that there was a correlation between portfolio assessment scores and
scores on the final exam writing test. Also, the participants of the study had a
positive attitude toward their writing experience (i.e. portfolio assessment).
Marefat (2004) investigated the nature of students' comments, their
reactions to teacher's comments and their views on portfolio use in an email
based EFL writing class. She found that most of the students limited themselves
to comment on their spelling and grammar errors and few of them commented
on organization and content. Meanwhile, the majority of the participants found
portfolio approach a positive and refreshing opportunity. Also some students
developed a personal understanding of their learning process.
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In the same way, in order to investigate the wash back effect of alternative
techniques on Iranian students‟ writing ability and reading comprehension,
Khoshsima (2006) conducted an experimental study. His findings indicated that
using oral and written portfolios affected the participants‟ writing ability and
reading comprehension.
Similarly, Paesani (2006) found that students perceived the value of the
writing portfolio project. In their critical commentaries, the students noted that
the portfolio project was valuable to the development of their skills in writing
as well as their grammatical competence. As Paesani (2006) noted, the themes
that emerged from the commentaries reflect some of the main objectives of the
course: “a process-oriented approach to writing, the simultaneous learning of
skills and content, and the contextualized study of grammar” (p. 626).
In an interesting study, Lam and Lee (2009), while taking a formative
function of portfolio to writing assessment, specifically investigated how the
formative potential of portfolio assessment can be better applied in the EFL
writing classroom. Their findings indicate that although students responded
positively to the formative aspects of portfolio assessment, they still preferred
summative grading and tended to believe that grades were the best way to
inform their current standards of writing.
Following this line of investigations, the current study has taken both the
formative and summative functions of portfolio assessment in the classroom so
as to clearly portray the writing ability of the students through their real
performances during the course and at the end of the instruction. This research
specifically focuses on participants' use of "meta-discourse markers".
Metadiscourse is “discourse about discourse” (Vande Kopple, 1985) and refers
to the author‟s linguistic manifestation in a text to “bracket the discourse
organization and the expressive implications of what is being said” (Schiffrin,
1980, p. 231). Textual metadiscourse refers to terms such as text connectives,
code glosses, illocution markers, etc. Interpersonal meta-discourse is pertaining
to ideas, including validity and modality markers, attitude markers, and
commentaries (Vande Kopple, 1985). Pronouns such as I, me, us, we, you,
conjunctions such as indeed, of course, perhaps, unfortunately, seems, and
phrases such as I felt that, it seems to me, I believe, according to my point of
view are some examples of metadiscourse markers. Some "discourse markers"
are used to indicate relations between segments of discourse (“and,” “because,”
“on the other hand”), interpersonal relations (“sorry, but,” “you know,” “as a
friend”), and cognitive attitudes toward what is being said (“I mean,” “in a
sense,” “certainly”). „Linguistic action verbs‟ are used to describe the social
The Effect of Portfolio Assessment on the development … 6
actions performed in discourse (“she asked,” “don‟t threaten me”), and, in
some cases, simultaneously to carry out those actions in „performative
utterances‟ (“I promise,” “I tell you”). „Reported speech‟ (direct or indirect
quotation) purports to represent for some present purpose something that was
said previously (Lucy 1993, pp. 18-21).
Various studies have examined the role that discourse markers play in
helping readers and writers achieve the communicative function of the texts.
For instance, Dafouz-Milne (2008) sought to explore the role that
metadiscourse markers play in the construction and attainment of persuasion.
Her findings suggested that both textual and interpersonal metadiscourse
markers are present in English and Spanish newspaper columns, but that there
are variations as to the distribution and composition of such markers,
specifically in the case of certain textual categories (i.e. logical markers and
code glosses).
Simin and Tavangar (2009) attempted to look at foreign language learners‟
written products from a pragmatic perspective, focusing on the use of
metadiscourse markers. Based on the results, they inferred that the more
proficient learners are in a second language, the more they use metadiscourse
markers. Also, it appeared that explicit instruction has a positive effect on the
correct use of metadiscourse markers.
Following the above-mentioned studies, the present research tries to
investigate the effect of portfolio assessment on using textual and interpersonal
markers in terms of their frequencies and appropriacy of occurrence in the
participants‟ compositions. By frequency, it means the number of
metadiscourse markers correctly used by the participants in either experimental
group or comparison group. Appropriacy of metadiscourse means that whether
the participants who received portfolio assessment could develop a plausible
understanding of that knowledge or awareness in writing their composition.
Purpose and Research Questions
The purpose of this study was to investigate the implementation of portfolio
assessment in an academic context in an attempt to examine its effect on the
students‟ writing ability, especially their metadiscourse awareness.
Taking the above purposes into consideration, the present study addressed
the following research questions:
1) Does portfolio assessment as a teaching technique have positive wash
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back effect on the participants‟ achievement in their writing ability in an
academic context?
2) To what extent do EFL students develop metadiscourse knowledge
(awareness) in their writing by the treatment of portfolio assessment?
The tentative statements that can be formulated in the form of null hypotheses
about the outcome of the study are that portfolio assessment does not have any
significant effect on the participants' overall writing ability nor does it have any
impact on improving their metadiscourse knowledge.
Methodology
In order to provide plausible answers to the aforementioned questions, a
quasi-experimental study was conducted which will be described and
delineated below.
Participants
The population from which the participants were selected included sophomore
students of English literature from the University of Isfahan, Faculty of foreign
languages who had enrolled for the writing courses. The participants were 86
and were distributed into two classes based on their registration for the term. By
applying different elicitation procedures, their writing performances were
closely observed during the term. These procedures are described and
discussed below.
Instrumentation
At the outset of the term, an Oxford Placement Test (OPT) was administered in
order to neutralize the potential effect that the participants‟ proficiency might
have on the outcome of the study. Then, the descriptive statistics of the scores
obtained on OPT were computed (See Table 1). The mean and standard
deviation were 69.25 and 2.80, respectively. Those participants who scored
above 60% were considered as qualified for the experiment, and the data
obtained by those below the standard were excluded from the final analysis.
After applying this criterion, 60 participants remained for the study who were
randomly distributed between the two classes. So, one class was randomly
assigned to the experimental group (EG), receiving the treatment (using
portfolio assessment as a teaching technique) and the other group (CG) was
exposed to the traditional method of teaching and testing writing.
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Table 1
OPT Scores
Test Mean SD Variance N
OPT 69.25 2.80 19.49 60
The experiment
As mentioned in the previous section, 60 students of the English writing course
were randomly distributed in two classes of 30. For the control group, the
instructor dealt with teaching writing using the traditional techniques such as
explicitly talking about paragraph development, the role of connectives in
developing ideas and attitudes, use of topic sentences, use of major and minor
supporting sentences, and so on. However, for the experimental group, the
teacher asked the students to build up portfolios for themselves as a technique
for both teaching and assessing their writing progress. These portfolios
contained all samples of their works including both classroom assignments and
homework as well as self-assessment records. Self-assessment records were the
students' self-ratings of their own works based on the criteria defined by the
teacher at the beginning of the treatment (See Table 2. below). In each session,
students were asked to write about an argumentative topic which is one of the
portfolio assessment techniques. Then, the teacher observed their classroom
assignments and gave them some guidelines to review their compositions. The
students received some assignments and tasks including various topics
concerning the population growth, life in dormitory, choice of marriage
partners, use of the Internet, importance of academic life, and many other
argumentative subjects and were asked to write about them in about 150-200
words for the next session they came to the class. After that, some criteria were
given to students to help them judge their own tasks (self-rating criteria, See
Table 2). In each session, the instructor spent almost half of the class time to
check the students‟ written works and provided them with useful feedback
about their development in using metadiscourse markers. He was concerned
with how well they would be able to convey their ideas, thoughts and attitudes
by applying their interpersonal knowledge, and what types of organization they
developed in their compositions by using textual markers such as connectives.
In the next session, the instructor collected the students‟ assignments in order to
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observe how much they progressed in terms of their overall writing ability as
well as their metadiscourse knowledge in comparison with previous versions.
During the course in the experimental group, each student had ample
opportunities receiving feedback from the instructor and being checked four or
five times.
Based on the information provided by the participants about their own
strengths and weaknesses, a profile analysis as to the classification of their
problems was done. That is, the instructor categorized the participants
according to the problems they had in writing: those who had problems
with main idea and theme; those who had problems with organization ; those
who had trouble with conventions; and finally those who had difficulty
with metadiscourse awareness.
Then, the instructor scored the students‟ writing portfolios using a rating
system with the analytic criteria borrowed from Chapman (1990). These criteria
were used with some modifications as shown in Table 2. below.
Table 2
Rating System
Scores/Criteria Descriptions
5/Focus Is the main idea, theme, or point of view clear and consistently
maintained?
5/Support/Elaboration Are arguments and conclusions adequately supported and
explained?
5/Organization Is the logical flow of ideas clear and connected?
5/Conventions Are standard English conventions (spelling, grammar,
punctuation) properly followed?
5/Complexity How many words, phrases and sentences are embedded in the
composition?
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In addition to discrete scoring, the assessment of students‟ portfolios also
included a focused, holistic score integration, which reflected how well the
students as a whole accomplished the assignment. The instructor used holistic
marks such as highly-being developed, well-being developed, fairly-being
developed, and not-being developed in order to account for the writing ability
of the participants in qualitative terms. Of course, the instructor considered the
student‟s entire portfolios not just single assignments. This rating system
emphasizes stages of development, and writing ability is described qualitatively
from highly being developed to not being developed. The participants‟ written
portfolios were closely observed by the instructor later in the course to examine
whether participants were able to develop metadiscourse knowledge in their
writing ability.
For data collection procedure, two samples of writing were taken from the
participants in both EG and CG. The first one was taken exactly at the second
week of the term, and the second one obtained at the end of the experiment. The
first sample is normally called pre-test, and the second one, post-test. For the
first administration, the first two argumentative topics (mentioned below) were
given to the students in both classrooms, and they were asked to write their
ideas about one of them in about 150 to 200 words in the classroom.
The second two topics (mentioned below) were given to the participants
in the second administration. The topics given to the participants were
attempted to be more communicative so as to elicit authentic information
concerning the use of metadiscourse elements. Again, the participants were
asked to write their ideas about one of the two topics in about 150 to 200 words
in the classroom.
The selected topics are as follows:
It is high time men ceased to regard women as second-class citizens.
What do you think?
World governments should conduct serious campaigns against smoking.
How?
Parents are too permissive with their children nowadays. What do
children think?
Examinations exert a destructive influence on education. Can you
suggest a better way?
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Scoring
Based on the analytic benchmarks suggested by Chapman (1990) with some
modifications, the two samples of writing composition were scored. The criteria
considered in scoring were the presence or absence of clear thesis statements
and topic sentences, paragraphing, overall organization, complexity of
sentences, and the style of argumentative reasoning, as well as such mechanics
of writing as grammar, spelling, and punctuation. The two raters (researchers)
used interval scaling for scoring the compositions; they assigned 5 to each
criterion such as focus, support/elaboration, organization, conventions, and
complexity if fully observed in the participants' compositions. They also
considered the quantity and quality of the participants‟ use of textual and
interpersonal metadiscourse in terms of organization of the text and transfer of
their ideas and attitudes. T-units were also used to determine the complexity of
the compositions in terms of embedded phrases and clauses. In order to avoid
the subjectivity of scoring, the two raters followed the same rating system
(mentioned in Table 2. above). As shown in Table 3 below, the inter-rater
reliability obtained from the first and second samples are 0.82 and 0.89,
respectively. The obtained data were submitted to a series of statistical
analyses, which will be described and discussed in the following part.
Table 3
Inter-rater Reliability
Raters Mean SD R
1st Sample 37.5 6.48 00.82
2nd
Sample 43 5.83 00.89
Results
As mentioned above, this study aimed at examining the effect of portfolio
assessment on the participants‟ achievement in writing in academic context,
especially focusing on metadiscourse knowledge (awareness). It should be
noted that, portfolio assessment here was used as a technique for teaching
writing to EFL students and it was not considered in its broader sense as a
The Effect of Portfolio Assessment on the development … 12
separate system of assessment.
In order to investigate the null hypotheses (mentioned above), a series of
statistical procedures such as t-test and chi-square were run. The descriptive
statistics were computed in order to provide the average mean scores for both
experimental and control groups. The obtained data are described and
summarized in table 4 below.
Table 4
Descriptive Statistics: Pre-test and Post-test Concerning CG and EG
Groups Mean SD
CG Pre-test 19.5 4.32
CG Post-test 20.10 3.40
EG Pre-test 19.7 4.54
EG Post-test 22.53 3.56
The descriptive statistics in Table 4. indicates that there is a difference
between the mean scores of the pre-test and the post-test in the control and
experimental groups. The participants‟ performance on the second sample was
better than their performance on the first one. Specifically, Table 4. reveals that
the participants‟ writing abilities in the experimental group seem to have
improved after being exposed to the treatment in the classroom.
In order to investigate the first null hypothesis, an independent sample t-test
was run. The t-observed value for the comparison of the control and
experimental groups‟ mean scores on the test is 2.70. As shown in Table 5, this
amount of t-value exceeds the t-critical. It can be claimed that there is a
significant difference between the two groups mean scores on the test, so the
first null hypothesis is rejected.
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Table 5
A Comparison of the Post-test Mean Scores: Control and Experimental Groups
Observed t D.F. t-Critical
2.70 58 2.01
N = 60; *p = < 0.05
The findings imply that, the experimental group with a mean of 22.53
outperformed the control group whose mean is 20.10. As a result, based on the
analyses, it can be said that the application of portfolio assessment as the
teaching procedure in writing proved to be significantly effective and helped
the participants in their overall writing ability in the experimental group.
As for the second question, which aimed at investigating the effect of
portfolio assessment on metadiscourse awareness in the participants‟ writing,
the chi-square test was applied. This statistical procedure was used in order to
examine the frequency of metadiscourse markers such as textual and
interpersonal markers used correctly and appropriately by the participants. It
should be noted again that only those textual and interpersonal markers which
were correctly and efficiently used as to contribute to the theme of the writing
were counted, and through percentage analysis they would be analyzed.
Through the analysis of a corpus of 120 essays written by the participants,
the number of metadiscourse markers, textual and interpersonal, appropriately
used by the participants was counted. The obtained data were described
according to frequencies and percentages (See Table 6. below). Then, a
comparison was made between frequencies and percentages of meta-discourse
markers in order to observe if there would be any meaningful difference
between the comparison and experimental groups in terms of proper use of
them. To do so, two sets of chi-squares were run to find the difference between
CG and EG concerning the appropriate use of metadiscourse markers.
The Effect of Portfolio Assessment on the development … 14
Table6
Frequency and percentage of meta-discourse markers: Textual and
interpersonal
Groups- Meta-discourse Total frequency Percentage
CG Textual 331 46.2
CG Interpersonal 235 45.6
EG Textual 385 53.8
EG Interpersonal 280 54.4
The chi-square observed value for comparing the experimental and control
groups‟ appropriate use of the textual markers is 4.07. As Table 7 below
depicts, this amount of chi-square value exceeds the critical value of chi-square,
i.e., 3.84. It can be claimed that there is a significant difference between the
numbers of textual markers produced by the two groups. As shown in Table 6
above, the experimental group produced 53.8% of correct textual markers while
the control group produced 46.2%.
Table 7
Chi-square Textual Markers
Observed chi-square D.F. Critical chi-square
4.07 1 3.84
N = 60; *p = 0.05
The chi-square observed value for the comparison of the experimental and
control groups use of the inter-personal markers is 3.93. As observed in Table 8
below, this amount of chi-square value was greater than the critical value of
chi-square, i.e. 3.84. It can be claimed that there is a significant difference
15 Sheikhbahaee EFL Journal, Vol. 1, No. 1, January 2012
between the number of inter-personal markers produced by the two groups in
terms of both efficiency and appropriacy. The experimental group produced
280 (54.4%) of inter-personal markers while the control group produced 235
(45.6%).
Table 8
Chi-square Interpersonal Markers
Observed chi-square D.F. Critical chi-square
3.93 1 3.84
N = 60; *p = 0.05
Discussion
Concerning the first null hypothesis, the finding confirmed significant
difference between experimental and control groups. That is, portfolio
assessment affected the participants‟ overall writing ability to a large extent in
the experimental group. By further observing the portfolio assessment, it can be
said that it not only provides improved information about students‟
achievement in writing but also makes a positive influence on teaching and
student learning. This explanation confirms the argument by Hancock (1994)
and Omalley & Valdez Pierce (1996) that alternative assessment has a useful
backwash effect on teaching and learning. The results can also be explicated in
the sense raised by Genesee and Upshur (1996). That is, using portfolio
assessment in second language classroom can have a very specific focus, such
as writing, or broad focus that includes examples of all aspects of language
development.
Furthermore, step by step observation of the written portfolios of the
students in the experimental group indicates that the holistic ratings they
received after the instructor‟s assessment were highly correlated to their scores
obtained on the last writing sample given to them as post-test. This finding
implies that participants in the experimental group had a significant
achievement in their writing ability through using portfolio assessment.
As shown in Tables 7. and 8. above, the results obtained through running the
chi-square tests for comparing the frequency of correctly using metadiscourse
The Effect of Portfolio Assessment on the development … 16
markers in the participants‟ compositions revealed that the students in EG
employed both textual and interpersonal markers more properly than those in
CG. Similarly, the participants in experimental group produced 53.8% textual
markers and 54.4% interpersonal markers correctly in their essays, which are
greater than those used in control group, i.e., 46.2% and 45.6%, respectively.
Based on this analysis, it can be concluded that the implementation of portfolio
assessment in class affected the participants‟ writing abilities in experimental
group to the extent that they could use metadiscourse markers (textual and
interpersonal) more frequently and efficiently than those in the control group.
This will be more clarified below when the qualitative analysis of
metadiscourse knowledge observed in some randomly selected compositions
are discussed.
Moreover, through qualitative analysis of the participants‟ compositions
obtained at the end of the experiment, a number of interesting points
concerning the use of metadiscourse markers both textual and interpersonal can
be raised. It was found that good compositions, which favored higher scores,
included more metadiscourse markers. The higher frequency of using
appropriate metadiscourse markers led to higher ratings of these compositions.
Conversely, lower use of these markers in lower-scored compositions
indicates that paying less attention to how the audience will perceive the text
would lead to poor rating of these texts by the raters.
Of course, there were some other low-scored compositions in the control
group in which a lot of metadiscourse markers were used. This overuse made
the compositions unnecessarily wordy and difficult to follow. On the other
hand, there were some higher-scored compositions in the experimental group
with fewer metadiscourse markers. This point would imply that making a
balance between the content of the composition and the use of metadiscourse
markers is essential. These findings have been supported by other researchers
(e.g., Crismore, 1984; Vande Kopple, 1985; Hyland, 1998).
Conclusion
Based on findings of this study and the related discussion, it can be concluded
that:
1) The use of portfolio assessment in the classroom in an EFL context affected
participants‟ achievements in their overall writing ability and hence led them to
create types of discourse appropriate to academic settings.
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2) The metadiscourse awareness of the participants in the experimental group
proved to be significantly enhanced compared with the comparison group.
3) The use of alternative assessments (portfolio assessment in case of this
study) demonstrated a more useful backwash effect on instruction than the
traditional methods such as paper-and-pencil tests.
Two immediate implications are implied by the findings obtained in this
study. First, the application of alternative assessment procedures such as
portfolio assessment in classroom can be highly beneficial; this is when
assessment is integrated with instruction. Second, portfolio assessment is really
an authentic assessment and is a productive and useful tool for assessing the
students‟ progress in class performance since the characteristics of the
classroom tasks in portfolio assessment correspond to the characteristics of
tasks in the target language use (TLU) situation.
In fact, findings of this study would propose an integrative model of
assessment for classroom application with performance testing such as writing
and speaking or other types of tests. The findings obtained would also support
the application of such instruments in our writing and speaking courses in
academic context. This can be a significant starting point toward the integration
of instruction and assessment.
In the long run, the challenges (whether to assess the students'
performance in writing based on alternative assessments on the one hand or to
measure their ability of writing using such traditional measures on the other)
that language teachers and testers faced would seem to be endless until a
compromise is reached. That is, in order to come to sound and unbiased
decisions regarding the learners‟ classroom language behaviors, language
testers and assessors should move toward a multi-level system of evaluation
that can provide multiple sources of information. This has been, indeed, the
concern of most researchers at the turn of the century (e.g., Teasdale & Leung,
2000; Shohamy, 2001; Lynch, 2005; Leung & Lewkowicz, 2006; Lam & Lee,
2009). In other words, educators would require both quantitative information
and qualitative description about language ability in order to better understand
the meaning of scores obtained by students.
Like many other studies, this one also had some limitations. The first
limitation is concerned with the design of the study, i.e., quasi-experimental
design, the results of which cannot be generalized. Perhaps a study with a more
scientific design may come to more significant results than what were obtained
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here. The second limitation is to do with the nature of portfolio assessment used
here. As mentioned before, a portfolio is a collection of a student's work,
experiences, exhibitions, self-ratings, commentaries, etc. accumulated over
time. However, since in this study, portfolio assessment was used as a
technique for teaching writing to EFL students, such integral features as self-
rating or commentary were neglected. More comprehensive studies can be
conducted which take consideration of these significant features of portfolio
assessment. The third limitation concerns with the low sample size which is
also a threat to the generalizability of the findings. Finally, although alternative
assessments such as portfolios can provide teachers and assessors with useful
and authentic results, they are time-consuming to be employed for large scale
administrations.
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Objective Assessment of Oral Presentations and
EFL Learners’ Speaking Development
Golnar Mazdayasna Yazd University
Abstract
A longitudinal study was planned, and a scale was suggested for assessing
EFL learners’ oral presentations. The scale had three major evaluation
components: `Preparation’, `Organization’, and `Presentation’. The students
were informed about the rating scale against which their performances would
be evaluated. Throughout the course each student had five performances on
different occasions.
The results of the study indicated that: (a) significant improvement was
observed in the learners’ performances, (b) ANOVA results indicated that the
five performances were significantly different, (c) there were high
correlations between each paired performances, and (d) the rating scale was a
reliable and consistent measure by means of which the instructor could assess
the student’s speaking ability.
Key words: Oral presentation, speaking skill, EFL learners, objective
assessment, rating scale.
Introduction
Most students studying English as a foreign language share a common problem
with organizing and communicating their thoughts and ideas orally. This may
be due to the fact that learners do not benefit from sufficient practice and
opportunities to speak in the classroom. Second, learning to speak is a complex
process not readily known to the learners; learners are not familiar with the
skills and strategies they can use to develop their speaking ability. Third, EFL
learners have little opportunity to develop the skills for arranging their ideas
cohesively and coherently while speaking. Fourth, they are not familiar with
the criteria by which their oral performances are assessed.
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Iranian students majoring in `English Literature’ or `Teaching English as a
Foreign Language’ have to pass certain courses related to speaking. Among
these courses is `Oral Reproduction of Short Stories’. The rationale behind this
course is two-fold: (1) to make students familiar with the literary elements used
in short stories as regards characters, and plot. It is assumed that through
reading stories students can experience an enjoyable task, and come across
universal themes, and foreign culture and values; (2) to reproduce the stories in
the classroom in their own words in order to improve their speaking skills so
that they become competent enough to speak appropriately and effectively. As
far as course objectives are concerned the teacher is responsible to create
conditions so that the students will have a chance to be exposed to the language
in real situations.
Like other language skills, speaking is an interactive process of constructing
meaning that involves producing, receiving and processing information (Burns
& Joyce, 1997; Kayi, 2006; Richards & Renandya, 2002). In order to speak
successfully the learners should not only know how to produce grammatically
correct sentences (linguistic competence), but also to use the language properly
(sociolinguistic competence). Furthermore, speech has its own skills,
structures, and conventions that are different from the written language (Carter
& McCarthy, 1995; Cohen, 1996; Burns & Joyce, 1997). The learners should
therefore be provided with opportunities where they can learn and experience
the language through communicative tasks (Stone, 1991; Lavine, 1992; Rathet,
1994; Quinn, 1994).
With respect to assessing the speaking ability of learners studying English
as a foreign or second language, there is a general agreement that evaluating
students’ oral ability is not only a difficult task, but also time consuming.
Henning (1987) states that the greatest draw-back with scales for testing oral
ability is that they tend to have rather low reliability because of subjective
measures. Therefore, teachers should be recommended to use rating scales
which provide them with a clear and precise definition concerning each scale
point so that most measurement errors would be minimized. Kitao and Kitao
(1996) assert that evaluating speaking ability is a difficult task that requires
simultaneous use of different abilities. The components of speaking that might
be considered in the assessment scale are grammar, pronunciation, fluency,
content, organization and vocabulary. Even though methods of testing speaking
are not perfect, they have significant effects on teaching and classroom
instruction. Spolsky (1992) maintains that diagnostic or formative assessment
is typically curriculum-oriented which provides feedback to students and
teachers.
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To date, few research studies have been conducted with the purpose of
proposing ways and methods to assess students’ speaking abilities. Nambiar
and Goon (1993) found out that effectiveness in oral communication is not
dependent on words and sounds alone but that paralinguistic and extra-
linguistic data also play a significant role. Upshur and Turner (1995) suggest a
method for designing simple, reliable and valid rating scales for second
language tests that can be easily created by any group of teachers.
Messerklinger (1997) suggests that teachers can evaluate speaking ability by
asking students to speak. Also, MacGregor (2000) asserts that in the classroom,
evaluation can be seen as an ongoing process in which the teacher utilizes
various instruments to measure the progress of the students. Therefore the main
objective of conducting the present study in a course called `Oral Reproduction
of Short Stories’ was to discover a method by which EFL students’ speaking
ability could be measured objectively, while helping them to learn. The
hypotheses pertaining to this study were as follows:
1. The learners' preparation of a story has a role in their oral performances.
2. The learners’ role in organizing the elements of a story has a role in their oral
performances.
3. The learners’ presentation of a story as regards communication, clarity,
grammar, vocabulary, and pronunciation, has a role in their oral performances.
The research questions addressed in this study were as follows:
1. Does the learners’ preparation of a story have a role in their oral
performances?
2. Does the learners’ role in organizing the elements of a story have a role in
their oral performances?
3. Does the learners’ presentation of a story as regards communication, clarity,
grammar, vocabulary, and pronunciation have a role in their oral performances?
Methodology
The study was based on a longitudinal observational design. The subjects were
fifty-nine undergraduate students who had enrolled in the two sections of the
course called `Oral Reproduction of Short Stories (I)’ at Yazd University. In
the following section the procedure used in the classroom will be elaborated
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Procedure
At the beginning of the semester the students were made familiar with the
methodology and the rating scale by which their oral presentations would be
assessed throughout the course. Handouts containing all the necessary
instruction for home preparation were distributed to all the students on the very
first day. In this way the students were not only informed about the aim of the
course, but also how they were supposed to read and prepare each story at
home for class presentation. The handouts contained the following instruction:
a) At each session the teacher would assign one story from the prescribed book
entitled `Short Stories for Oral Reproduction’.
b) The students would read the story paying close attention to the structure of
the story, that is, the beginning (introducing characters), the body (building of a
conflict or a sequence of actions leading to a crisis or problem), and the climax
(resolution of conflict or how the problem is solved). In addition, they would
visualize the main events of the story and consult their dictionaries for
unfamiliar idiomatic expressions, and words.
c) The students would summarize the main events of the story or write an
outline concerning the main events of the story at home. The students were
advised not to memorize the story word by word; instead they were
recommended to keep in mind the introduction, plot, and conclusion of the
story and reproduce it in their own words. Finally, they were to rehearse the
story at home, in order to present the story in the classroom with less difficulty.
d) With respect to their class performances the students were instructed to bear
in mind the following points:
1. Each student would begin his/her oral presentation by giving an
`Introduction’. In the introduction part the students would talk about (i) the
major and minor characters of the story, (ii) the central idea of the story, and
(iii) the setting of the story.
2. Then, they would talk about the `Development’ of the story. At this stage
they would talk about the events that occurred in the story step by step without
providing the details of events.
3. Finally, they would have a `Conclusion’ at the end of their presentation. In
this part the student would express their opinion about the story in a few
sentences.
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e) Besides the regular class session which was held two hours every week for
each section, a fixed timetable of four hours each week was set so that if the
students had problems regarding their stories, they could consult the teacher.
Class Assessment
During the course, each student was evaluated for five performances. The
teacher would randomly call students to come in front of the class and
reproduce their stories. Each session the teacher would assess the oral
performances of ten students. There was a separate rating sheet for each student
(Appendix I). At the top of the rating sheet there were spaces for such
information as name, date, title, and time. The scale had three general
components: Preparation, Organization, and Presentation. Organization had
three sub-components: `Introduction’, `Development’ and `Conclusion’.
Presentation had five sub-components: `Communication’, `Clarity’,
`Grammar’, `Vocabulary’ and `Pronunciation’. The arrangement of each
criterion helped the teacher to observe and rate the students’ oral performances
systematically. The Likert type scale provided for a numerical rating from 0 to
5; where 5 indicated excellent, 4 very good, 3 good, 2 fair, 1 poor, and 0
indicated the absence of the criterion. In addition, for each criterion there was a
space for “observations” for writing down information that helped the teacher
during the final numerical scoring. At the bottom of the scale there was a space
for general comments. This space was used for recording specific information
regarding mispronounced words and common grammatical errors, so that the
teacher could discuss them with the student at the end of the class.
As mentioned earlier, there were fifty-nine students in the two sections.
They were made familiar with the rating scale so that they would know the
criteria by which they were evaluated. Furthermore, since the class period
throughout the whole semester for assessing the students’ oral presentations
was insufficient, extra classes were also held with this purpose in mind.
Data Analysis
At the end of the semester, after the data collection was over, all the students’
rating sheets were calculated and analyzed using the SPSS package. Then the
students’ performances on five different occasions were compared to see how
the evaluation model had worked. Statistical measures were taken in order to
examine the linear development and improvement of students’ oral
performances throughout the course. The statistical operations performed on
the data were as follows:
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(a) The first computation was to find out whether the five performances
were of the same nature. The statistical operation utilized was
ANOVA. The results as presented in Table 1 indicate that the five
performances were significantly different. The students’ fifth
performances were not greatly different from their fourth
performances. This indicates that the learners had developed some
consistency of performance and had overcome some basic problems in
their oral presentations.
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Table 1
Summary statistics of ANOVAs performed on the results of the 5 performances
Df Mean
Square F Sig.
2nd
performance Between Groups
Within Groups
Total
21
37
58
22.774
9.542
2.387
.010
5th performance Between Groups
Within Groups
Total
21
37
58
9.370
5.374
1.743 .068
3rd
performance Between Groups
Within Groups
Total
21
37
58
20.411
8.328
2.451 .008
4th performance Between Groups
Within Groups
Total
21
37
58
17.278
9.027
1.914
.041
(b) T-tests and Paired Samples Correlations were also computed with the
intention of comparing each two performances. The results revealed high
correlations between each paired performances like first and second, second
and third, third and fourth, as well as fourth and fifth performances (Table 2).
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Table 2
Correlation coefficients computed for each paired performances
N Correlation Sig.
Pair1: 1st & 2
nd performances
Pair2: 2nd
& 3rd
performances
Pair3: 3rd
& 4th
performances
Pair4: 4th
& 5th
performances
Pair5: 1st & 5
th performances
59
59
59
59
59
.642
.720
.776
.760
.465
.000
.000
.000
.000
.000
(b) In order to measure the students’ improvement throughout the course,
t-tests were also computed, the results of which indicated that each
performance was different from the other performance in the pair
(Table 3). Correlation coefficients between each two performances
were also computed, using Pearson Product Moment correlation. The
five correlation coefficients for the five pairs revealed high correlation
between each two performances (p=.000).
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Table 3
Comparison of each two performances from the first performance to the fifth
performance
95% Confidence Interval
of the Difference
t
df
Sig.
(2-tailed) Lower Upper
1st &
2nd
performances
2nd &
3rd
performances
3rd &
4th
performances
4th &
5th
performances
-3.3599
-4.6372
-2.4699
-2.3663
-1.6909
-3.2001
-1.2419
-1.1930
-6.058
-10.917
-6.051
-6.072
58
58
58
58
.000
.000
.000
.000
(c) Correlations were computed for randomly paired performances. All the
coefficients indicated statistically significant correlation between and among all
performances of the subjects. The results are presented in Table 4 which is
indicative of the fact that there has been consistency of the impact of the
treatment on the subjects.
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Table 4
Pearson Product Moment Correlation for randomly paired performances
2nd & 5th performances
Pearson Correlation
Sig. (2-tailed)
N
1.000
59
.530**
.000
59
3rd & 4th performances
Pearson Correlation
Sig. (2-tailed)
N
1.000
59
.776**
.000
59
3rd & 5th performances Pearson Correlation
Sig. (2-tailed)
N
1.000
59
.665**
.000
59
5th & 4th performances
Pearson Correlation
Sig. (2-tailed)
N
1.000
59
.760**
.000
59
4th & 2nd performances
Pearson Correlation
Sig. (2-tailed)
N
1.000
59
.615**
.000
59
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Results and Discussions
As mentioned earlier, the main aim of conducting this study was two-fold: (1)
to introduce and examine a rating scale for assessing learners’ oral
performances; and (2) to examine the effectiveness of the rating scale on the
linear development and improvement of learners’ oral performances. The rating
scale proved to be a reliable and consistent measure by means of which the
teacher could assess the learners’ oral presentations.
The findings of this study revealed that EFL learners’ preparation of a story
along with organizing the elements of a story had a positive role in their oral
performances. At the very beginning of the semester, students were made
familiar with the rating scale, that is, the criteria by which their oral
presentations would be assessed. After the first performance, the students were
informed about what made their performances acceptable or effective. Then, in
the course of the semester, they were given different opportunities to observe
their peer’s performances. Each performance indicated some degree of
qualitative improvement over the previous one.
The findings of this study shows that if the assessment of oral presentations
is done according to some established criteria and/or rating scale the learners
will adjust themselves accordingly and there will be a tangible development in
their performances. Likewise, the guidance and instruction which was provided
to the students from time to time as regards the way they should read, prepare,
and practice reproducing the main events of the story, keeping in mind the
`Introduction’, `Development’ and `Conclusion’ of the story proved fruitful.
Objective evaluation of oral performances enabled the students to become
aware of their pitfalls and needs. In addition, the students’ oral presentations
can be improved if they are made aware of the problems they may have in their
performances.
Correspondingly, the learner’s presentation of a story as regards
communication, clarity, grammar, vocabulary, and pronunciation had a positive
role in their oral performances. All the students reproduced their stories first by
talking about the introduction of the story, then, the development of the main
events leading to the climax of the story, and finally, the conclusion of the
story. The students reproduced the story in their own words using indirect
speech. In addition, they organized their speech by using cohesive devices such
as, pronouns, co-ordinate conjunctions, and discourse markers.
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While the students were reproducing their stories in the class, the teacher
used to jot down the errors, the students had committed on the rating sheet for
each individual student. At the end of each class session, there was a discussion
of the errors that the students had committed while reproducing their stories.
The teacher wrote on the blackboard the errors that the students had committed
without mentioning their names. First, the students were requested to correct
their peers’ errors and, then, if they were not successful, the teacher would
provide the correct answer. In this manner, the students would activate their
own grammatical competence and knowledge in order to take active part in
class discussion and not be passive recipients of knowledge. Moreover, after
the class session was over some students approached the teacher individually,
and the teacher on her behalf pointed out the errors that the particular student
had committed while giving his or her presentation. This technique proved
fruitful because the students came to realize that committing errors while
learning a foreign language is natural, and eventually, as their knowledge and
experience increases about the target language they would get rid of their
errors.
Most importantly, some students while reproducing their stories felt that
they had committed errors in their speech related to tense, vocabulary, articles,
prepositions, or word order. Without getting any hint or clue from the teacher,
the students immediately corrected their own errors and provided the correct
form. Additionally, improvement was seen in those students who at the
beginning of the semester were feeling nervous and inhibited to speak in front
of their classmates. Likewise, assessing students’ oral presentations each time
they spoke enabled them to pay attention to those components of speaking
where they did not make a good performance for the first, second, or third time.
The students had a chance to give a better presentation the following time. At
the end of the semester, an overwhelming number of students had become very
hopeful and realized that if they tried hard and practiced more they would
finally succeed. There was a consistent improvement noticed on the five
different performances that each student had.
Furthermore, some students while reproducing their stories in the class gave
some explanation regarding the story by making use of the blackboard. They
used to write the main events and draw sketches of the main characters on the
board. This technique which some students used in the class without any
instructions given by the teacher revealed that, if students are given a chance to
progress, and, if the teacher creates a humanistic environment in the class to
facilitate the task of language learning, students make use of strategies which
help them to enhance their own learning.
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Conclusion
Several conclusions can be drawn from the present study. First of all the
students in this study realized that learning to speak appropriately is a complex
process and by means of practicing they can overcome many of their problems
and enhance their fluency. The students were instructed to prepare an outline of
the main events of the story, as well as practice reproducing the story at home,
so that it would be easier for them to reproduce the story naturally and
confidently in the classroom. Second, students’ oral presentations can be
assessed objectively if a reliable rating scale is utilized. Third, if the students
are informed beforehand on the basis of what criteria their performances will be
assessed they will prepare accordingly. Fourth, by having some knowledge
about their performances, the students are able to check their progress and
improvement throughout the course. Finally, the students can be convinced that
speaking like any other language skill has to be practiced and developed.
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STUDENT’S NAME: _____________________________
DATE: _________________________________________
TIME: FROM ____________ TO ___________________
TITLE: _________________________________________
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PREPARATION (1) PREPARATION &
KNOWLEDGE
ORGANIZATION
(2) INTRODUCTION
(3) DEVELOPMENT
(4) CONCLUSION
PRESENTATION
(5) COMMUNICATION
(6) CLARITY
(7) GRAMMAR
(8) VOCABULARY
(9) PRONUNCIATION
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The Effect of L2 Learning on Learners' Perception of Culture
Gholamreza Zarei Hossein Pourghasemian
Isfahan university of Technology Qom university of Technology
[email protected] [email protected]
Abstract
This study was undertaken to cast light over EFL learners' perception of
culture. To that end, a group of English language learners was taught
English through Interchange Series and their perception of culture was
assessed using a researcher constructed questionnaire. The same
questionnaire was also administered to the parents of the same learners to
detect any probable differences. The results revealed that the EFL learners
are largely distinct from their parents in perceptions of the designated
cultural issues. While EFL learners were oriented towards Western
Culture, their parents were lopsided towards domestic issues.
Keywords: Interchange series, EFL, Culture, English language, Iranian
learners
Introduction
Though considered multifarious, culture is viewed as inextricably integrated
into language. Brown (2007) is of the opinion that culture can cater for the
biological and psychological needs which are usually formulated as conceptual
networks or mental constructs of realities. In this vein, Halliday (1978) also
contends that mental constructs or semantic networks are sociologically
grounded and need to be realized externally through the medium of language.
That is, language is social semiotic used to symbolically encode and carry over
the underpinning socio-cultural values. It must be noted that Halliday (ibid)
tends to transcend this limit by suggesting that 'language neither drives culture
nor is driven by it' (p. 296). He believes that the relation is not one of cause and
effect but rather one of realization, i.e., culture and language coevolve in the
same way as do meaning and expression. Of course, this conviction seems to
hold valid in relation to the first language. Removed from its main original
cultural bed where possibly no causality can be speculated, a foreign language
seems to have some directional bearing on the new language learners'
perception of the world.
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Admittedly, the scene of learning a foreign language cannot be clearly set up
when it comes to the question of culture and language interplay. A good
number of scholars stress the inalienable and consolidated nature of the two on
different grounds, i.e., lexical, discoursal, ideational, textual, etc, indicating that
a foreign language to be learned cannot be dissociated from cultural elements
and that a language curriculum devoid of culture would fail in developing
communicative competence in the language learners (e.g., Genc and Bada
2005). In the same vein, some have even pushed the limits further and
postulated that learners of another language can achieve linguistic goals
provided they desire assimilation, or to a lesser degree, acculturation
(Schumann 1976). This radical stance assumes that cognitive and affective gaps
between the two languages need to be bridged by converting to the new
language cultural norms. Also, Brown (1980) attributes the failure in mastering
a second language to the learners' inability to bring the linguistic and cultural
development into synchrony.
In contrast, some other scholars refuse to approve of the need for cultural
conversion as a pre-requisite to learning another language. Stevick (1976) talks
about the fragility of students in the face of learning a culture different from
their own, which may arouse some feeling of alienation and estrangement. In
the same line of thinking, Zarei and Khalessi (2010) caution that incorporation
of foreign language culture into the instructional materials could account for
some students’ failure in learning a foreign language as they may desire to get
rid of the unsolicited cultural impositions. Also, Adasko, Britten, and Fahsi
(1990) discovered nothing motivating in using Western culture, but rather
breeding learners’ dissatisfaction with their own culture. Sometimes this
opposite force even grows more intense in regard to the English language,
portraying a totally negative picture of the language with lots of unpredictable
consequences (Chattergee 1993).
A third trend which stands half way between the two above reviewed
opposite camps does not accept either way absolutism in regard to culture and
language. Rather, it emphasizes a culture fair curriculum where cultural
awareness and intercultural competence find prominence (Alptekin 2002) and
students are supplied with strategies to cope with the cultural differences. This
position implies that foreign language pedagogy should help learners feel at
home in both international and national cultures, avoiding those patterns which
are alien, irrelevant, or sometimes adversarial. Likewise, Widdowson (1998)
suggests that instructional materials should include native-nonnative and also
nonnative-nonnative interactions as well and discourage the exclusive use of
native norms as many language learners do not use them in authentic settings.
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All in all, the issue, as it seems, cannot be driven home successfully, and
there is always the danger of losing either sight of the trees for the forest or that
of the forest for the trees. This is to indicate that the golden mean may call for
the inseparability of the culture and language, though this combined entity can
be manipulated in such a manner that more or less weight is given to one of the
two components. As such, it can be claimed that textbooks are always carriers
of values with different orientations. Therefore, textbooks are expected to
impart both knowledge of language and the target culture simultaneously. In
that direction, the present study intends to compare and contrast the effects L2
books can have on young learners learning English through Interchange Series.
Drawing on Vygotsky's (1962) sociocultural constructivist theory, we may
argue that young learners of L2 are more likely to undergo a process of
constructing realities through a new channel of communication. In order to
illuminate the issue further, this study also compares young learners with their
parents to see if they go different ways when exposed to new cultural issues.
Research Purpose
As language symbolically represents a microcosm of culture and social values,
language learning textbooks necessarily embody cultural values and thus
learning the language via such books is believed to leave its culturally inclined
mark on the learners. To cast light over the issue further, this study aimed at
discovering if English language learners who were taught a special series of
books (Interchange) come to prioritize the cultural issues differently from their
parents who have not studied the books and are thus expected to be culturally
most influential in the family.
Method
Participants
The participants of the study comprised two groups. The first group involved
16 male students from the 2nd
year of junior high school to the 2nd
year of senior
high school and ranged in their age from 11 to 15. This group had started
learning English in an Isfahan based institute, Iran, through Interchange Series
about two years before and were about to finish the 3rd
volume. The second
group consisted of the same number of parents as the learners in the first group,
ranging in their age from 42 to 55. They were different in their education from
high school diplomas (6 people) to the majority of bachelors (8 of them) and
two masters. As revealed in their questionnaires, the parents knew little
English, few grammar rules, greetings, and general English conversational
The Effect of L2 Learning on Learners’ Perception of Culture 42
statements. It must be noted that the learners were asked to require their
mothers and fathers to jointly complete the questionnaire so that the result
would represent the family's perception more coherently.
Materials
To collect the data, a researcher-constructed questionnaire was used. The
questionnaire consisted of 20 questions, in each of which a general topic (e.g.,
entertainment) was introduced, followed by 4 relevant choices (e.g., A. Dance
(Western) B. Harakate Mozun (for dance in Iran) C. Violin (Western) D.
Santour (an Iranian musical instrument), for the same general topic
'entertainment'). The topics and two of choices were supposed to represent
‘Western cultural issues’ already used in and thus extracted from Interchange
Series by Zarei and Khalessi (2010). The other two choices were Iranian
counterparts for the Western choices. The participants were required to rank the
four choices (from 1 to 4) in the order they found them most preferred to the
least one. The questionnaire was supposed to unfold the participants' cultural
priorities. Upon the construction of questionnaire, the researcher asked two
colleagues to read and improve the quality, and also piloted it with 7 sample
students to get rid of ambiguities. The order of choices, appropriacy of choices
especially the Iranian ones, and transparency of instructions were all considered
and improved.
Then the following rating scale (Table 1) was designed for the evaluation of
results. Based on the four choices used for each general topic, it was realized
that the learners would rank each item in one of the six possible orders of
preference, indicating different degrees of cultural effect. The first three orders
started with a ‘Western’ choice and received the scales of 'very strong', 'strong',
'moderate', collectively representing the so-called ‘Western Inclination’ and the
second three orders initiated with an ‘Iranian’ choice’, which were thus
assigned 'weak', 'very weak', and 'no effect', collectively representing the so-
called ‘Iranian Inclination’. The last 'no effect' scale indicates that no Western
choice was given the first or the second place in the order; in other words, the
priority was given to the two Iranian counterparts (e.g. for 'entertainment', the
choices Harakate Mozun (for dance) and Santour (an Iranian musical
instrument) both of which considered Iranian may be used first, thus showing
'no effect'). The opposite extreme rate is 'very strong' where the first two places
are given to the Western choices, indicating the strongest case of ‘Western
Inclination’.
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Table1
Questionnaire rating scale
Inclination Possible Orders of Preference Rating Scale
1. Western 1. a. Western b. Western c. Iranian d. Iranian
2. a. Western b. Iranian c. Western d. Iranian
3. a. Western b. Iranian c. Iranian d. Western
1.Very
Strong
2. Strong
3. Moderate
2. Iranian 1. a. Iranian b. Western c. Western d. Iranian
2. a. Iranian b. Western c. Iranian d. Western
3. a. Iranian b. Iranian c. Western d. Western
1. Weak
2.Very
Weak
3.No Effect
Data Collection
The questionnaire was administered first to the 1st group in their institute class
and then taken home by the same learners to be filled by the 2nd
group, i.e., their
parents. The parents (mothers and fathers) were asked to do the task jointly so
that we would get a better representative family perspective. Before starting the
job, learners were briefed on how to do the task and were also trained to guide
their parents through. Parents were additionally asked for their knowledge of
the English language. All the participants were assured of the confidentiality
and anonymity of information received in order to help with the responsibility
to be fully discharged, thus increasing the response validity of the inquiry. They
were asked to rank the four choices of each item in actual order of preference (1
for the most preferred and 4 for the least preferred) depending on their own
priority for the words. The first group finished the task in almost 15 minutes
and the second group's questionnaires were returned a week later.
Results
This study sought to cast light over the culture and language relationship as it
unfolds within foreign language learning milieu. The focus was on the effects
that particular books can produce on the learners. To that end, two groups of
participants, namely, English language learners and their parents participated in
the research. Both groups were asked to prioritize their perceptions of some
The Effect of L2 Learning on Learners’ Perception of Culture 44
cultural issues, which have been extracted from Interchange Series. The results,
as shown in the following table (Table 2), clearly confirm that these language
learners display a skewed cultural orientation as regards both groups. However,
the difference is that one group (young learners of English in Group 1) is
sharply oriented towards Western side while their parents are domestically
inclined. As can be seen, Group 1 goes for the western choices of cultural
issues (with 83.1 percent) all derived from the books they have been taught,
versus 16.9 percent of preferences given to the Iranian cultural equivalents. In
contrast, their parents show a maximum percentage of 34.37 for such Western
choices and 65.62 for domestic ones. Further details also reveal that while
young learners give maximum preference to 'Food' and minimum to 'Names' of
Western inclination their parents prefer 'Music' most and 'Names' least on the
Western list. The findings of the present study may indicate that the language
textbooks used exert a strong force in shaping the learners’ cultural perception
of the world. Of course, one needs to exercise caution in interpreting the results
as there are many other intervening factors at work within a two year long
program of learning English. Regardless of extraneous variables playing a part
in the results, we observe that the two groups stand in stark contrast with each
other. As can be seen, the frequencies and the ensuing percentages reveal that
figures are almost inversely proportional to each other (in the two general
categories of ‘Western Inclination’ vs. Iranian Inclination’).
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Table 2
Frequency and percentage of the two groups' performance on questionnaire
Cultural Topics Frequency
Group 1 (N=16) Group 2 (N=16) Percentage
Group 1 (N=16) Group 2 (N=16)
W Ir. W Ir. W Ir. W Ir.
1. Entertainment 1 14 2 6 10 87.5 12.5 37.5 62.5
2. Social relations 14 2 5 11 87.5 12.5 31.25 68.75
3. Clothes 11 5 8 8 68.8 31.3 50 50
4. Place 1 11 5 7 9 68.8 31.3 43.75 56.25
5. Music 15 1 10** 6* 93.8 6.3 62.6 37.5
6. Market/Exchange 11 5 5 11 68.8 31.3 31.25 68.75
7. Food 16** 0* 4 12 100 0.0 25 75
8. Holidays 15 1 5 11 93.8 6.3 31.25 68.75
9. Names 9* 7** 2* 14** 56.3 43.8 12.5 87.5
10. Celebrities 12 4 4 12 75 25 25 75
11. Sport 15 1 7 9 93.8 6.3 43.75 56.25
12. Films 13 3 8 8 81.3 18.8 50 50
13. Animals 11 5 5 11 68.8 31.3 31.25 68.75
14. TV/Radio 15 1 3 13 93.8 6.3 18.75 81.25
15. Entertainment 2 15 1 4 12 93.8 6.3 25 75
16. Education 12 4 6 10 75 25 37.5 62.5
17. Place 2 14 2 4 12 87.5 12.5 25 75
18. Cinema 14 2 6 10 87.5 12.5 37.5 62.5
19. Miscellaneous 1 15 1 7 9 93.8 6.3 43.75 56.25
20. Miscellaneous 2 16** 0* 4 12 100 0.0 25 75
Total 266 54 110 210 83.1 16.9 34.37 65.62
Note. W= Western; Ir.= Iranian Inclinations
**=Max; *=Min
Discussions and Conclusion
The results of this study suggest that young learners of language tend to diverge
from the way their parents come to perceive the world around them and that
learning a foreign language is to a large extent a way of socially constructing
certain identities. Though it is not 'a magic carpet ride to another culture'
(Robinson-Stuart and Nocon 1996), culture learning is a process through which
language learners come to experience, perceive, interpret and feel the world
around (Brown 2007). As shown in this study, it may be claimed that culture as
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inseparable part of language can penetrate into the language learners' modes of
thinking and feeling, and consequently release as behavioural outputs. Of
course, it must be noted that these remarks are not supposed to verify the strong
version of language and culture interface which stresses the interdependence of
the two for learning the language (acculturation). This point seems to require a
different research design to come up with reliable results.
Another important point to remember in regard to the results is that this
study focused on language learners within age range of 11-15, the period best
viewed as formative. The formative years constitute the learners' cognitive,
affective, and cultural filters and thus arm them with these mechanisms to
perceive and interpret the world accordingly. This is to say that young learners
are more prone to the cultural effects of the instructional materials. This finding
is in line with Vygotsky's (1962) claim that thought reflects conceptualized
actuality and in this case the learners have conceptualized the realities through
the lens of a foreign language. Compared with their parents, these young
children build up their world within what is presented to them through the
extracurricular activities of learning a foreign language, thus moving beyond
the predetermined limits of their family.
Also, the special cultural context, Iran, where our participants have been
placed triggers us not to read too much into the results. Though not approved
by every scholar, the idea of oriental culture considered as collectivist,
uncritical, obedient, etc. (Kumaravodivelu 2003) may also account for our
subjects' rather convergent behaviors. This helps us remember that the oriental
culture holds written materials in high regards with some sort of sanctity
associated. The idea can be evidenced further by referring to a Persian proverb,
which roughly reads, 'speech is air and wind', implying that say what you wish
to but avoid leaving a record, say, written record. So, books are highly valued
for the messages they deliver to the learners.
On the whole, the results reached in this study are to be taken as suggestive
rather than definitive as a multitude of issues might work for or against any
attempts made for illumination of the culture-language relationship. Also,
though young learners of English are brought up by their parents and the
parental care provided is believed to be sometimes stringent and meticulous we
need to remember that the mass media, society in general, school as an
important nurturing milieu, and the overall structure of the new generation life
style fostered by the peer pressure may all variably account for the cultural
changes the youth experience. The English language books may be considered
one crucial factor among many others. Also, the reader needs to remember that
there are lots of other factors which may have affected the results in this study,
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ranging from specificity of instrument, subjects, cultural contexts, to subjects'
age, gender, number, sociocultural and family backgrounds. Therefore, the
results of the study have to be cautiously interpreted or generalized.
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The Effect of EFL Learners' Gender and Second Language
Proficiency on Willingness to Communicate
Akbar Afghari Elahe Sadeghi
Sheikhbahaee University Najafabad Islamic Azad University
[email protected] [email protected]
Abstract
With day-increasing emphasis on communication as the chief objective of
second language learning, willingness to communicate (hereafter WTC)
has come into focus by many researchers, teachers, and foreign language
institutes. Previous studies show that WTC is highly correlated with the
two variables of perceived competence and communication apprehension.
This study aimed to investigate the difference in WTC between male and
female English major students at Khorasgan University, Iran. Firstly, 55
English major students were asked to respond to three questionnaires on
WTC, perceived competence and communication apprehension. The data
was analyzed using independent sample t-test. The results showed no
significant difference between male and female students in WTC,
perceived competence and communication apprehension. The results
related to the effect of language proficiency on WTC, perceived
competence, and communication apprehensions were also analyzed using
one way ANOVA. The results showed no significant differences between
the three different groups of students with different levels of language
proficiency in their WTC, perceived competence, and communication
apprehension
Key words: willingness to communicate, perceived competence,
communication apprehension
Introduction
Given the potential benefits of participating in communicative interaction, some
researchers argue (see for example MacIntyre et al., 1998, 2003) that a
fundamental goal of second language education should be the creation of WTC
in the language learning process; i.e., to encourage learners to be willing to seek
out communication opportunities and to use the language for authentic
communication. Research suggests that higher WTC among learners translates
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into increased opportunity for practice in an L2 and authentic L2 usage
(MacIntyre , Baker, Clemente, Conrad, 2001).
Willingness to communicate (WTC) is a relatively new dimension in the
exploration of language teaching and learning, part of the wider
conceptualization of motivation proposed by Dörnyei (2003, 2005), and defined
as the probability that an individual will choose to initiate communication when
free to do so (McCroskey, 1992). MacIntyre and his colleagues suggest that a
fundamental goal of language instruction should be to foster WTC in the target
language (Baker & MacIntyre, 2000; MacIntyre, Baker, Clément, & Donovan,
2002, 2003), which may assist in language learning by acting upon what
Skehan (1989) calls willingness to ‘‘talk in order to learn’’ (p. 48).
MacIntyre (1994) found that the two variables most closely related to L1
trait-level WTC are communication apprehension and perceived competence.
Communication apprehension, defined as an individual's level of fear or
anxiety associated with either real or anticipated communication with others
and seen as having a trait-like quality (McCroskey & Richmond, 1987), is
considered to be one of the best predictors of WTC in L1 (McCroskey &
Richmond, 1987).
Kang (2005) claims security, excitement and responsibility as antecedents to
WTC. A number of other factors have been identified as directly or indirectly
predictive of WTC, including motivation (Hashimoto, 2002; MacIntyre et al.,
2001; MacIntyre & Charos, 1996), social support (MacIntyre et al., 2001),
attitude (Yashima, 2002; Yashima, Zenuk-Nishide & Shimizu, 2004), perceived
communicative competence (Hashimoto, 2002) and communication anxiety
(Baker & MacIntyre, 2000, 2003; MacIntyre et al., 1998; Yashima, 2002).
However, the relationship between WTC and these factors also depends on
context (Baker & MacIntyre, 2000, 2003; Clément et al., 2003; MacIntyre et
al., 2003).
The most important variables to affect WTC are said to be motivation, anxiety,
and gender.
Motivation
As McDonough (2007) states, motivation is what moves us to act, in this
context to learn English, to learn to teach English, or to teach it. According to
McDonough (2007) this deceptively simple statement reveals, however, the
four elements it involves:
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the reasons why we want to learn
the strength of our desire to learn
the kind of person we are, and
the task, and our estimation of what it requires of us.
The conceptualization of motivation to learn the target language (TL),
originally coined by Gardner and Lambert (1972), has been adopted in
numerous studies. Generally, it refers to two types of motivation: integrative
and instrumental. Integrative motivation is described as a positive orientation
toward the TL group and a desire to interact with members of that community,
whereas instrumental motivation concerns the pragmatic gains of learning the
TL, such as academic achievement. Dörnyei (1990) claims that integrative
motivation is less relevant in a FL context because FL learners tend to have
very little contact with the TL group and may therefore feel less need to
integrate. Research findings are contradictory, failing to show clearly if any
type of motivation is superior in terms of achievements (Baker & MacIntyre,
2000; Csizér & Dörnyei, 2005; Ellis, 1997; Petrides, 2006), and there are also
reservations as to whether and how these dimensions are distinct (e.g., Dörnyei,
2005).
Furthermore, self-determination theory asserts that humans have an innate
need to feel autonomous, competent, and a sense of belongingness. The process
of self-determination is intrinsically motivating, and this motivation is satisfied
when a person is able to meet the three needs listed above. Much of the
literature on intrinsic motivation focuses on the factors that help bring forth and
sustain this tendency, assuming that once students are intrinsically motivated,
adaptive learning outcomes will follow; however, limited research has been
done on whether and how intrinsic motivation predict students’ use of various
learning strategies, and the effects of intrinsic motivation on other academic
outcomes (Dörnyei, 2000). This is surprising given that theories of learning
motivation emphasize that learning motivation is not a direct cause of academic
achievement. It rather makes it more likely that a student invests time and effort
in learning behavior which, in turn, improves the student’s knowledge.
However, not all learning activities are equally efficient and a high learning
motivation can be expected to have a substantial impact on learning gains only
if it leads a student to engage in efficient learning strategies.
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Anxiety
The construct of anxiety plays an important affective role in second language
acquisition. In fact, anxiety is not easy to define in a simple sentence.
According to Scovel (1978) it is associated with the feelings of uneasiness,
frustration, self-doubt, apprehension, or worry. The research on anxiety
suggests that it can be experienced at various levels (Oxford, 1999).
Three components of foreign language anxiety have been identified
(Horwitz , Horwitz & Cope, 1986) in order to break down the construct into
researchable issues: (Horwitz & Horwitz, 1986)
1. communication apprehension, arising from learners' inability to
adequately express mature thoughts and ideas;
2. fear of negative social evaluation, arising from a learner's need to
make a positive social immersion on others; and
3. test anxiety, or apprehension over academic evaluation.
Regarding gender, Baker and MacIntyre (2000) found that boys prefer L2
communication outside of class, whereas girls prefer in-class communication,
and effect sizes for sex and for interactions involving sex as an independent
variable are small. Moreover, Canary and Hause's (1993) found that sex
differences in communication variables tend to be small.
Previous research findings indicating that men engage in more interruptive
behavior than women (e.g., Zimmerman & West, 1975; Case, 1988; Craig and
Pitts, 1990) may not be purely a function of gender but rather a combination of
gender, proportional representation, and perceived competence in a given
situation. Although much research has attempted to uncover gender differences
in conversational power displays, the findings have been somewhat
contradictory (Anderson & Leaper, 1998).
Targeting Iranian setting, this study aimed to investigate the language
proficiency in willingness to communicate, communication apprehension, and
perceived competence.
Regarding the aim of the study, three research questions were raised:
1) Does gender have any effect on Willingness to Communicate (WTC)?
2) Does gender have any effect on perceived competence?
3) Does gender have any effect on communication apprehension?
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Related to the above mentioned research questions, three null hypotheses
have been formulated:
1) There is no difference between male and female English learners in
Willingness to Communicate (WTC) related to their first and second language.
2) There is no difference between males and females in communication
apprehension regarding their first and second language.
3) There is no difference between males and females in perceived competence
related to their first and second language.
Methodology
Participants
One hundred English major junior students of the two universities of Islamic
Azad University of Khorasgan and Isfahan University participated in this study.
Since the study focused on the gender differences in WTC, perceived
competence and communication apprehension, selecting at least 20 male and 20
female students was necessary. Method of sampling was based on accessible
and clustering design.
Instruments
• Questionnaires:
All the questionnaires used in this research study were adopted from
McCroskey (1992). They were translated into Persian and validated. Before
administering the questionnaires, the students were informed how to fill out and
for ease of scoring, they were asked to write their code number and gender, not
their names, so that their identifications remained a secret. All the
questionnaires were administered in one session and in total, they took an hour
to be responded.
1) The willingness to communicate (WTC) questionnaire consisting of
20 items on a Likert scale was administered to the students, who were
to respond the items in twenty minutes. They were asked to state how
willing they are to initiate and continue a conversation in each situation
(from 0 to 100%). In order to compare the students’ willingness to
communicate in Persian and English, the questionnaire was designed to
assess WTC in both languages. As stated in its recipe, eight items were
to be deleted (guidelines from Gardner’ website). After collecting the
data, they were analyzed and the α Cronbach reliability was computed.
This questionnaire enjoyed a reliability coefficient of .92.
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2) The communication apprehension questionnaire. This questionnaire
consisted of 24 items concerning feelings about communicating with
others. The students were asked to indicate the degree to which each
statement applies to them by marking whether they: Strongly Disagree
= 1; Disagree = 2; are Neutral = 3; Agree = 4; and Strongly Agree = 5.
It took students about 20 minutes to respond to the questionnaire. The
questionnaire was reliable due to its high alpha Cronbach of .92.
3) The self-perceived communication competence scale was developed
to obtain information concerning how competent people feel they are in
a variety of communication contexts and with a variety of types of
receivers. This scale is intended to let the respondent define
communication competence. Since people make decisions with regard
to communication (for example, whether they will even do it), it is their
perception which is important, not that of an outside observer. It is
important that users of this measure recognize that this is NOT a
measure of actual communication competence; it is a measure of
PERCEIVED competence.
This questionnaire consisted of 12 items on the Likert scale and the
students were asked to respond to 12 different situations and say how
competent they believed they were from 0 to 100 percent (from
completely incompetent to completely competent). The items took
about 15 minutes to be answered.
In order for the researcher to compare English and Persian perceived
competence, the questionnaire was designed in both languages and the
reliability was computed. The computed alpha Cronbach reliability of
this questionnaire was .95.
Procedure
One hundred junior students studying English as their major in Islamic Azad
University, Khorasgan branch and Esfahan University, participated in this
study. As it was the first time that these questionnaires were used in Iran, the
researcher decided to investigate the probable problems that might be
encountered during data collection. Thus, the questionnaires were first run as a
pilot study in two classes at Khorasgan University. The refined questionnaires
were then administered in one session for four classes consisting of 20 male
and 80 female students. These questionnaires took participants about an hour to
be respond. As the number of female students was at least twice more than
males, the researcher had to select one female class and all the male students in
all the classes.
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Data analysis
Using SPSS software, the scores on OPT were categorized so that the three
groups of low, intermediate, and highly proficient students were selected. The
data obtained from the questionnaires were scored on the basis of guidelines
available on Gardner’s website. Firstly, the alpha Cronbach for the
questionnaires was computed and then a comparison was made and the
relations between the variables were identified using t-test and ANOVA.
Results and Discussion
Gender
First, the role of gender in willingness to communicate, communication
apprehension and perceived competence was determined. Levene’s test for the
equality of variances showed no difference between the two groups of male and
female learners, thus applying independent sample t-test was considered
appropriate.
Table 3.2.1. tabulates the descriptive data for willingness to communicate.
Table 3.2.1.
Group Statistics for English Willingness to Communicate (English WTC)
GENDER N Mean Std. Deviation Std. Error
Mean
English WTC
FEMALE 35 53.87 24.316 4.110
MALE 20 48.79 23.857 5.334
Table 3.2.2. shows that no significant difference was found between male and
female English learners in willingness to communicate.
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Table 3.2.2.
Independent Samples Test for English Willingness to Communicate (English WTC)
Levene's Test for
Equality of
Variances
t-test for Equality of Means
F Sig. t df
Sig.
(2-tailed)
Mean
Difference
Std. Error
Difference
95%
Confidence Interval of the
Difference
Lower Upper
English
WTC
Equal
variances assumed
.045 .833 .752 53 .456 5.09 6.770 -8.491 18.667
Equal
variances
not assumed
.756 40.314 .454 5.09 6.734 -8.519 18.695
Table 3.2.3. represents the descriptive data for Persian willingness to
communicate for male and female English learners.
Table 3.2.3.
Group Statistics for Persian Willingness to Communicate (Persian WTC)
GENDER N Mean Std. Deviation Std. Error
Mean
Persian WTC
FEMALE 35 63.79 21.985 3.716
MALE(MARD) 20 65.17 26.501 5.926
As table 3.2.4. indicates, no significant difference was found between male and
female English learners in the rate of Persian willingness to communicate.
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Table 3.2.4.
Independent Samples Test for Persian Willingness to communicate (Persian WTC)
Levene's
Test for Equality of
Variances
t-test for Equality of Means
F Sig. t df Sig. (2-tailed)
Mean
Difference
Std. Error Difference
95%
Confidence
Interval of the Difference
Lower Upper
Persian
WTC
Equal variances
assumed 1.711
.19
7 -.209 53 .835 -1.39 6.644 -14.714 11.939
Equal variances not
assumed
-.198 33.949 .844 -1.39 6.995 -15.603 12.828
Table 3.2.5. represents the descriptive data for English perceived competence
for male and female learners in detail.
Table 3.2.5.
Group Statistics for English Perceived Competence (English PC)
GENDER N Mean Std. Deviation Std. Error
Mean
English PC
FEMALE 35 52.64 24.818 4.195
MALE(MARD) 20 52.91 26.082 5.832
Table 3.2.6. shows no significant difference between male and female English
learners in the rate of English perceived competence.
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Table 3.2.6.
Independent Samples Test for English Perceived Competence (English PC)
Levene's Test for Equality of
Variances
t-test for Equality of Means
F Sig. t df Sig.
(2-tailed)
Mean Difference
Std.
Error Difference
95%
Confidence
Interval of the Difference
Lower Upper
English PC
Equal variances
assumed .024 .877
-
.039 53 .969 -.28 7.086 -14.488 13.936
Equal variances not assumed
-
.038 38.053 .970 -.28 7.184 -14.819 14.267
Table 3.2.7. briefs the descriptive data for Persian Perceived Competence for
two groups of male and female English learners.
Table 3.2.7.
Group Statistics for Persian Perceived Competence (Persian PC)
GENDER N Mean Std. Deviation Std. Error
Mean
Persian PC
FEMALE 35 72.45 24.324 4.112
MALE(MARD) 20 73.23 23.199 5.187
As table 3.2.8. shows no significant difference was found between male and
female English learners in the level of Persian perceived competence.
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Table 3.2.8.
Independent Samples Test for Persian Perceived Competence (Persian PC)
Levene's Test for Equality of
Variances
t-test for Equality of Means
F Sig. t Df Sig.
(2-tailed)
Mean Difference
Std.
Error Difference
95%
Confidence
Interval of the Difference
Lower Upper
Persian
PC
Equal variances
assumed .019 .890 -.116 53 .908 -.78 6.707 -14.230 12.674
Equal variances not assumed
-.118 41.269 .907 -.78 6.619 -14.143 12.587
Descriptive statistics for English communication apprehension is summarized
in table 3.2.9.
Table 3.2.9.
Group Statistics for English Communication Apprehension
GENDER N Mean Std. Deviation Std. Error
Mean
English communication
apprehension
FEMALE 35 62.91 20.392 3.447
MALE(MARD) 20 64.85 13.929 3.115
As table 3.2.10. shows, no significant difference was found between male and
female English learners in English communication apprehension.
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Table 3.2.10.
Independent Samples Test for English Communication Apprehension
Levene's
Test for
Equality of Variances
t-test for Equality of Means
F Sig. t Df
Sig.
(2-tailed)
Mean
Difference
Std. Error Difference
95%
Confidence
Interval of the
Difference
Lower upper
English
communication apprehension
Equal
variances assumed
1.692 .199 -.377 53 .708 -1.94 5.141 -12.246 8.375
Equal
variances
not assumed
-.417 51.158 .679 -1.94 4.646 -11.262 7.390
Regarding the first null hypothesis; namely, there is no difference between
male and female English major learners in WTC, no significant difference was
found between male and female learners in their WTC. Therefore, the first null
hypothesis was not rejected.
The results of the t-test showed that there was no significant difference
between male and female learners in their rate of communication apprehension.
Thus, the second null hypothesis was not rejected as well.
Regarding the third null hypothesis proposing that there is no difference
between males and females in their perceived competence, the results showed
no significant difference between male and female students in their English and
Persian perceived competence. Therefore, the third null hypothesis was not
rejected, either.
Discussion
While previous studies by McCroskey and Charos (1996) showed high
correlation between L2 WTC on the one hand and communication
apprehension and perceived competence on the other, the results of this study
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indicated high correlation between English WTC and perceived competence.
The correlation was statistically significant. However, there was no significant
correlation between English WTC and English communication apprehension.
Contrary to the findings of the study by Aida (1994), Kitano (2001), and
Horwitz et al. (1986) which revealed that the students with high anxiety were
afraid of speaking in the target language and became nervous when speaking it,
the current study showed no significant correlation between willingness to
communicate and the rate of communication apprehension.
Moreover, regarding the study by Kitano (2001) which showed correlation
between anxiety and self-perception in male students, the results of this study
showed no significant correlation between communication apprehension and
self perceived competence in both male and female learners.
Furthermore, despite Brewer's findings (2008) which indicate that females
are significantly more prone to experiencing anxiety than young men, the
findings of this study showed no significant difference between male and
female learners in their rate of communication apprehension.
Conclusion
Since some of the obtained results are inconsistent with what has been achieved
in other situations, it can be concluded that there are many psychological,
social, and cultural factors affecting willingness to communicate,
communication apprehension, and perceived competence. As perceived
competence is a strong correlate for willingness to communicate, second
language teachers are to provoke the matter of self-confidence in their classes
and make a relaxed setting for learners, so that the learners can perform well
and can participate more eagerly in classes.
The findings of this study do not support the results obtained in other studies
in this field. Obviously, many variances are at work in the issue of language
learning. The combination of these variances and the magnitude of their effects
are of prime importance in research in the area of EFL. Certainly numerous
research studies should be carried out, each of which contribute to the
clarification of the role of each factor. This study is no exception and has its
own contribution.
As Brown puts it, language learning is a jigsaw puzzle, thousands of pieces
of which are to be assembled in order to come up with an eventual shape.
Studies, though in contrast, help us have a more crystallized and scientific
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picture of the phenomenon and will certainly lead to the formulation of a theory
of language learning and acquisition, something which is vital in this discipline.
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The Effect of Self-Directed Training on ESP Learners’ Self-Directed
Learning Readiness
Mohammad Mohammadi Parinaz Mohammadi
Urmia University Urmia University
[email protected] [email protected]
Abstract
The major role of self-directed learning (SDL) in a successful learning at
distance education has been confirmed by various studies. Although
learners pass General English courses before studying any ESP courses at
distance education of Iran, they usually lack the preliminary skills for
independent language learning. The current study aimed to explore the
effect of self-directed training (SDT) on ESP learners‟ self-directed
learning readiness (SDLR). Eighty-six B.A students (19 male and 67
female) studying English for Economy and Management at Tabriz
Payam-e-Noor University participated in this study. A demographic
questionnaire and Guglielmino‟s (1978) self-directed learning readiness
scale (SDLRS) were implemented to select the participants of the control
and experimental groups. The experimental group was provided with
SDT in three different stages a) an introduction to SDL, b) SDT
workshop, and c) SDT pamphlet. Then, a post-test of SDLRS was given
to the two groups. ANCOVA was applied to analyze the data. The results
revealed that SDT could enhance ESP learners‟ SDLR. The findings
imply that an appropriate training is needed to improve learners‟ SDLR.
Higher levels of SDLR can contribute to a successful ESP learning at
Payam-e-Noor University in Iran.
Keywords: distance learning, ESP, self-directed learning, self-directed
language learning, self-directed training
Introduction
In recent decades, the aim to make learners independent from teachers leads to
a new concept in the system of education called „Distance Learning‟. As Petty
and Johnston point out “distance learning takes place out of rigid boundaries of
classroom, using a textbook accompanied by lectures on tapes, CDs, or online
programs handed on a particular schedule to learners studying at home, with the
aim to create a hybrid program by combining elements of learning at classroom
and distance learning” (2002, p. 2).
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Distance learning has been used for many years at developed and
developing countries in the world. Even it has been used ever since Socrates
(died 399 BC). It was applied in Iran by establishing Payam-e-Noor University
in 1988. At this University, students study the materials provided to them
independently. However, they are provided with some sessions to meet their
teachers in order to ask them any questions they might have come across in their
studies.
The main reason in conducting this research originated from my own personal
experiences as an English language learner at Payam-e-Noor University. During
my B.A. studies, I realized that many ESP learners came across problems in
English learning. In many cases, they came to others or me as an English learner
at Payam-e-Noor University for help. ESP learners at different courses used to
question how they should improve and learn English language in their ESP
modules.
Learning ESP is an eminent prerequisite for non-English majoring learners
to act efficiently not only in their current education, but also in their future
work. Therefore, learners spend a considerable time learning ESP during their
B.A. studies. The need for learning ESP even gets more prominence thanks to
the rapid changes and creation of new knowledge, and access to technology.
ESP learners must keep abreast of new information, current issues, and
technological aspects of their scientific studies. Therefore, they need to broaden
their ESP abilities by updating their sources of information independently
beyond what is needed to know about ESP in order to pass the entrance exams
of the postgraduate studies. This effort can be labeled as self-directed learning
(SDL).
SDL is defined by several scholars in different terms. For example,
Knowles (1975) defines SDL as a process in which an individual learner takes
the advantage to recognize his learning needs, establish learning goals, identify
appropriate materials, implement relevant strategies in learning, and evaluate
the learning progress, with or without the help of others. Hiemstra (1994)
believes that SDL is any study in which an individual learner takes the
responsibility to plan, implement, and evaluate his own learning process.
Besides, Vann (1996) states that SDL is a learned phenomenon that is based on
affective traits, love of learning and basic skills, and cognitive exercises. SDL
is defined by Kumaravadivelu (2003) as a state of learning in which making all
the decisions related to learning are shouldered by the learner; however, main
factors in implementing the decisions are necessarily given by authorities. On
the other hand, Smedley (2007) believes that SDL is an approach to learning
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that relies on flexibility in time and place of learning and entrust responsibilities
of learning to the learner.
Whereas SDL is common among all ESP learners, it could be a salient
feature of ESP learners in distance learning. In such a setting, learners are
obliged to apply SDL during their whole studies and cope with the requirements
of this university. It is claimed that SDL is the essential factor in succeeding and
accomplishment of courses in distance learning (Gearhart, 2002; Gan, 2004).
However, as learners in Iran are accustomed to learn in formal education with a
lock-step style for many years, learning in a SDL method seems very
demanding to them. Therefore, they may confront problems in conducting SDL
in their courses, in particular language learning courses.
Despite the plethora of literature developed in the area of SDL across the
world, it seems that we are far from understanding the beneficial role of SDLL
in distance learning of Iran. In order to keep the trends of SDLL, a helpful
instruction of how to conduct SDL is required. This brings about a new kind of
training named „Learner Training‟ which focuses on explicit teaching of
techniques and procedures of learning a language and appreciation of strategies
and their appropriate use to be a self-directed learner (Williams & Burden,
1997).
Several researchers implemented learner-training courses as an intervention
program in various fields of study. They found that it enhances learners‟ SDLR
and achievements of main courses (Gearhart, 2002; Gan, 2004; Saha, 2006;
Hunag, 2008).
The critical state of ESP learning at Payam-e-Noor University and the evident
necessity for such training confirms the need for conducting research in this
area. Hence, this research is going to tackle this issue via steps in training such
students in self-directed procedures - afterwards termed ‘self-directed training’
(SDT) - and try to direct them toward SDLL. In this study, the major aim is to
find the effect of SDT on ESP learners‟ SDLR. Accordingly, the following
research question was posed:
- Does self-directed training affect ESP learners‟ degree of readiness for
self-directed language learning?
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Literature review
There is no doubt that formal education gained high value in most countries
compared to SDL, but as Paul.E. Gray (cited in McGuiness, 2005, p36) believes
"The most important outcome of education is to help students become
independent of formal education.” This is what exactly fostered in stating the
great aim of distance learning in Iran that is to create equitable opportunities for
learners to continue their education independently by their own effort. Truog
(2004) suggests that learners should be equipped with rubrics and strategies of
assessing learning environment and exploiting it in order to carry out a
successful SDL. He believes that the culture of preparing learners for test should
be substituted with a culture of preparing learners for the test of life i.e. SDL.
SDL that leads to conducting independent studies is not totally a new concept in
the field of learning (Grow, 1991). It can be traced back to the lives of Greek
philosophers such as Socrates, Plato, and Aristotle (Hiemstra, 1994). However,
the groundwork of SDL was laid during last three decades of 20 century by
Tough, Knowles, Guglielmino, and Long (Hiemstra, 1994). Tough in his
dissertation tried to analyze self-directed teaching activities that resulted in
publishing a book, The Adult‟s Learning Projects in 1979. Knowles‟s two
famous publications, Self-Directed Learning in 1975 and Andragogy not
Pedagogy in 1968, provided definitions and assumptions as foundations for
further researches. Guglielmino‟s (1978) dissertation leads to development of an
instrument to measure SDLR by Self-Directed Learning Readiness Scale
(SDLRS). Finally, Long and his colleagues established an annual International
Symposium on Self-Directed Learning in 1987.
All these works spawned numerous publications, researches, and instrument
developments by other researches throughout the world. Gibbons et al. (1980)
studied the biographies of 450 self-directed learners to propose principles for
SDL. Long (1989) focused on the importance of building theory and principles
for SDL in terms of sociological, pedagogical, and psychological dimensions.
Candy (1991) illustrated the dichotomy of SDL as a process and as a goal.
Brockett and Hiemstra (1991) proposed Personal Responsibility Orientation
(PRO) model that focused on similarities and differences between SDL as an
instructional method and as a set of personality characteristics. Hiemstra (1994)
studied SDL in terms of learning and learner‟s ability or willingness to take the
responsibility of learning and accepting its consequences. Hiemstra and
Brockett (1994) explored how to overcome internal and external sources of
resistance to SDL.
With accelerating interest in SDL, new roles were assigned to teacher and
learners. Gibbons, Baily, Comeau, Schmuck, Seymour and Wallace (1980)
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focus on the active role of learners in engaging at challenging activities rather
than passive and abstract-theoretical activities. Tough (1967) emphasizes the
shift of responsibility from teacher to learner in conventional learning and SDL.
He asserts that the range of responsibilities varies along a continuum in which at
one pole the maximum responsibility is shouldered by the teacher whereas at the
other pole the maximum responsibility is shouldered by the learner.
Rothwell (1999) defines teachers‟ roles in SDL as facilitator, enabling agent,
and resource agent. As a facilitator, teacher guides learners through providing
strategies by which learners conduct their learning process to achieve specific
goals. By adopting the role of enabling agent, teacher mediates with learners,
provides means for pursuing learning process, and helps them to discover
learning problem and find a solution to carry out SDL. As a resource agent, the
teacher connects learners who have a problem in carrying out SDL with
resources that can help them to solve the problems.
Despite the fact that teacher has a significant role in learning procedure, we
should not ignore the primary role of learner as an individual who is eager to
learn relevant materials in his own controlled, pace, time, and style. The learner
and the teacher are taught as co-managers in the process of learning; therefore,
teaching cannot automatically leads to learning because of the fact that learning
is a personal construct controlled by individual learner (Kumaravadivelu, 2003).
Knowles (1990) acknowledges that some learners might not be familiar with
SDL; therefore, they require time to adapt to SDL (as cited in Saha, 2006).
Learners at any stage of self-direction can acquire a self-directed orientation
toward language learning by adapting various steps proposed by several authors
of SDL. SDL ability in learners can be facilitated by applying several steps such
as introducing appropriate learning activities, creating opportunities for being
independent, implementing facilitating methods, and assessment methods
(Huang, 2008).
Carter (2001) acknowledges that the first phase of any training to facilitate SDL
and autonomy in learners must be the exploring of learners‟ educational
background. He contends that this investigation can determine the degree of
learners‟ willingness to assume responsibility in learning.
Chammot, Barnhardt, El-Dinary, and Robbins (1999) suggests four process
of planning, monitoring, problem solving, and evaluating for language learning
relevant to all skills of listening, speaking, reading, and writing (as cited in
Kumaravadivelu, 2003). They asserts that beyond these processes learners‟
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awareness of learning strategies and teachers effectiveness in learner training
are two major factors in conducting an independent language learning.
Considering all the above discussion, it is needed to provide learners with SDT
that includes information about skills, strategies, and appropriate steps for
managing SDLL process.
Methodology
Participants of the study
Eighty-six B.A students (19 male and 67 female) studying English for
Economy and Management (ESEM) at Tabriz Payam-e-Noor University were
selected to participate in this study. They were selected according to four major
criteria. First, those who passed General English (GE) course were selected.
Then, those who studied ESEM once and failed the final exam of university
were discarded from the study. Moreover, those who were studying English in
institutes more than 1 year were discarded. Finally, those who were not sure to
attend in all sessions of ESEM course were discarded.
Having selected participants according to these criteria, the final participants
were chosen according to the normal distribution of scores in General English
course and SDLRS questionnaire.
Descriptive statistics of learners‟ GE scores displayed the mean score and
standard deviation of 15.2 and 2.4, respectively. In order to have enough
number of participants, scores between two standard deviations above and
below the mean score of GE were selected. However, as those who failed GE
were filtered in the first stage of selecting participants there are not any score
between the ranges of 10.5-12.
Furthermore, in order to select participants based on their scores in SDLRS
questionnaire, a descriptive statistics of SDLRS were calculated. The mean
score and standard deviation of SDLRS scores are 220.5 and 18.9, respectively.
Those scores between two standard deviations above and below the mean score
of SDLRS were selected.
At last, the participants were divided into two groups and the homogeneity
of two groups was confirmed by calculating an independent samples t-test of
GE and SDLRS scores. Then, one group was assigned to the control group and
the other to the experimental group arbitrarily. Table 1 represents the
demographic distribution of the two groups.
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Table 1
Participants in the Two Groups
Gender
Male Female Total
Groups
Control 13 30 43
Experimental 6 37 43
Total 19 67 86
Instruments
For data collection, a demographic questionnaire was prepared to elicit general
information from students including name, age, gender, major, general English
score, language learning experiences, etc. Guglielmino‟s (1978) SDLRS was
adopted as a pretest and posttest. Moreover, the scores obtained from this
questionnaire were also used for selecting participants and homogenizing the
two groups.
SDLRS is a 58-item scale, a highly valid and reliable questionnaire, used in
more than 250 studies of SDL. The main focus of items are on 8 factors:
openness to learning opportunities, self-concept as an effective learner,
initiative and independence in learning, informed acceptance of responsibility
for one‟s own learning, a love to learn, creativity, future orientation, and the
ability to use basic study skills and problem-solving skills. Each item have a 5-
point likert format scale including almost never true of me, usually not true of
me, sometimes true of me, usually true of me, almost always true of me.
Procedure
Data was collected from intact classes at Tabriz Payam-e-Noor University. Two
questionnaires were distributed among learners and they were assured that all
information would be confidential and would not have any effect on their
scores. They were instructed to complete demographic questionnaire and then
read the items of SDLRS. They were explained to read items and select one of
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1-5 points according to their first impression of statement about their learning
experiences.
Data obtained from the two questionnaires were analyzed to select the
participants of the control and experimental groups. The experimental group
received special treatment while the control group instructed by ESP teacher as
is usual at Tabriz Payam-e-Noor University. Treatment was provided to the
experimental group in three different stages. First, the experimental group was
provided with the concept of SDL, SDL models, its relevant issues, and SDLL
in three different sessions, each session lasting 20 minutes. In order to avoid
any intrusion to learner‟s program, a workshop lasting one hour and a half was
scheduled to teach the important issues of SDLL, skills and strategies, and steps
necessary for a successful SDLL. Finally, the researcher decided to supply a
pamphlet to the experimental group covering all the issues discussed earlier in
the workshop.
Having provided the corresponding treatment, SDLRS questionnaire was
given to the two groups after 6 weeks to check the effect of treatment. Data
obtained from this questionnaire, used as posttest, were analyzed to check the
difference of participants‟ SDLR before and after treatment in the experimental
group. Moreover, it was used to check the difference between the control and
experimental group regarding their SDLR.
Data analysis
All the data collected in different stages of conducting this research were
analyzed by Statistical Package for the Social Sciences (SPSS) version 16.0 in
order to carry out descriptive statistical procedure and further calculations.
ANCOVA was used to compare SDLRS scores of the control and
experimental group. The reason for selecting ANCOVA was that it provides
more details about any differences between and within groups regarding
readiness for SDLL after providing treatment to experimental group, while
controlling pretest scores of SDLRS in two groups. Significant level for all
analysis in this study was set at p<0.05.
Discussion
In order to get a general view of learners‟ SDLR, a descriptive statistics of pre-
test SDLRS of the two groups is calculated. After testing homogeneity of the two
groups, the pre-test mean score and standard deviation of control and
experimental groups were 221.3721 and 14.95871; and 221.4186 and 17.75392,
respectively.
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According to Guglielmino (1978, p5), the mean score of 221 is classified in
average level of SDLR. She concludes that learners in this level “are more likely
to be successful in more independent situations, but are not fully comfortable
with handling the entire process of identifying their learning needs and planning
and implementing the learning”.
Following giving instruction of SDT to experimental group a post-test of
SDLRS was implemented. The post-test mean score and standard deviation of
control and experimental groups were 225.0233 and 14.49218; and 242.3256 and
16.46457, respectively.
In order to determine the existence of meaningful difference between pre-test
and post-test scores of SDLRS, ANCOVA was employed. As Table 2 indicates
Wilks' Lambda equals to 0.568 with F value of 63.773 (df=1, Error of df=84) and
a significant value of 0.000. Because the significant amount is less than 0.05, it is
confirmed that learners‟ post-test scores of SDLRS in the two groups has
increased during conducting this research.
Moreover, based on the results provided in Table 2, Wilks' Lambda equals to
0.727 with F value of 31.486 (df=1, Error of df=84) and a significance value of
0.000. Because the significant amount is less than 0.05, it can be claimed that the
difference of post-test and pre-test scores of SDLRS in experimental group is
significantly more than that in control group.
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Table 2
Multivariate Tests of Pre-test and Post-test SDLRS
Effect Value F
Hypothesis
df
Error
df
Sig.
Pre-test and Post-test
of SDLRS
Wilks'
Lambda
.568 63.773 1.000 84.000 .000
Pre-test and Post-test
of SDLRS * control
and experimental
groups
Wilks'
Lambda
.727 31.486 1.000 84.000 .000
Furthermore, according to Table 3 that displays a comparison between the two
groups, the F value equals to 7.923 with a significant level of 0.006.
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Table 3
Tests of Between-Subjects Effects of SDT
Source
Type III
Sum of Squares
Df Mean Square F Sig.
Intercept
8904805.209
1
8904805.209
21815.631
.000
Group 3235.558 1 3235.558 7.923 .006
Error 34303.233 84 408.372
The significance value is less than 0.05 that reveals that a difference can be
observed in learners post-test scores of SDLRS in experimental group in
comparison to those scores in control group. This difference can be traced back
to implementing SDT to experimental group during studying ESEM course at
Tabriz Payam-e-Noor University.
These differences of post-test scores and pre-test scores of SDLRS within and
between two groups are clearly illustrated in figure 1. It is evident that post-test
scores of SDLRS in two groups have been improved in comparison to pre-test
scores of SDLRS. Moreover, this figure manifests the differences of post-test
scores of SDLRS between experimental and control group, obviously.
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Figure 1: Differences of post-test and pre-test mean scores of SDLRS
Conclusion
With the advent of other forms of education such as distance learning,
investigating factors that enhance learning in this educational system gained
more importance. SDL one of the essential issues in distance learning was
explored during recent decades by scholars.
This study aimed to find the effect of SDT in universities that incorporate this
educational system in Iran. By implementing SDT on selected participants, it was
revealed that SDT could improve ESP learners SDLR significantly. This research
with the focus on providing SDT to ESP learners in distance learning highlights
the role of teachers, learners, and material developers in exploring the state of
SDLL and exploiting the information necessary to enhance learning in distance
education of Iran.
Pre-test and Post-test of SDLRS
2 1
Est
imat
ed M
arg
inal
Mea
ns
250
240
230
220
Group
Control
Experimental
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Considering all the possible limitations of this study, some important points
are suggested for further exploration in future. The researchers should repeat
this study in other branches of Payam-e-Noor University in Iran with selecting
participants randomly from various majors to explore the effect of SDT in
different majors. Moreover, it is needed to repeat this study with sufficient time
to provide SDT to learners and check the long time effect of it on learners
SDLR and their ESP achievements. Further research is needed to investigate
the effect of SDT on learners‟ ESP achievements and SDLR by taking in to
account their motivation, self-confidence, socio-cultural factors, and age. Last
but not least, it is essential to explore the effect of SDT on foreign language
learning in distance education of Iran.
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The Chaotic World and the Entropic Crisis in Thomas Pynchon‟s
The Crying of Lot 49
Hassan Rezaei Mehdi Azari Samani
Kazeroon Islamic Azad University Sheikhbahaee University
[email protected] [email protected]
Abstract
Having its roots in science, „chaos theory‟ provides a new strategy to
examine the disordered world of postmodern novels to find the hidden
order underlying the apparent chaos. This study tries to clarify the
ambiguous relation between Oedipa Maas, the „Tristero system‟ and the
„Maxwell‟s Demon‟ in Thomas Pynchon‟s The Crying of Lot 49. Oedipa
Maas, the main character of the novel is regarded as an „everyman‟ type
character who tries desperately to make sense of the signs and mysteries
proliferating around her, but she can never fulfill her quest because she is
trapped in a chaotic world where there are no stable values, friends or
meanings. She feels separated from the world around her and longs to
regain the stability she used to have before she started her task as the
„executrix‟ of her former lover‟s vast estate. She does not manage to find
„order‟ in the surrounding chaos, but applying the major tenets of chaos
theory and examining concepts such as „the butterfly effect‟,
„bifurcations‟, „strange attractors‟, „recursive symmetry‟ and „entropy‟ ,
we can come to a better understanding of the order underlying the
disordered world of the novel.
Key words: chaos theory - the butterfly effect - strange attractors –
entropy - recursive symmetry - Maxwell‟s demon - Thomas Pynchon
Chaos theory is the study of apparently disordered systems to find an
underlying order. The theory was popularized by James Glieck‟s Chaos;
Making New Science (1987) which first introduced the principles and early
developments of chaos theory. After finding a consolidated place in the
scientific context, chaos theory found its way through the literary and cultural
domains as a result of its convergence with postmodernism. “The purported
epistemological power of chaos theory to explain complex nonlinear events has
led some critics to consider chaos theory as being applicable to social systems”
(Ward 4). In the context of literature, chaos theory shares with postmodernism
the concepts of „uncertainty‟ and „ambiguity‟. The literary interpretation of
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chaos theory, as Ward further argues, is founded on two basic premises: that
because of the similarities between chaos theory and postmodernism, “the two
may be considered chronologically and theoretically parallel paradigms, and
that the social and fictional systems studied by the humanities are comparable
with the systems studied by science” (ibid). Prigogine and Stangers might be
the first to consider the convergence of chaos theory and humanities, because,
as they argue, the original French title of their book, La Nouvelle Alliance,
describes the “convergence of science and the humanities.” N. Katherine
Hayles in Chaos Bound: Orderly Disorder in Contemporary Literature and
Science (1990) considers literature and science “as two mingled voices
within… postmodern culture” that have become closely associated (208).
However since the appropriation of chaos theory in literary criticism is a new
field of study there have been just few works to have dealt with it practically.
Harriet Hawkins in Strange Attractors: Literature, Culture and Chaos (1995)
shows how the terms and concepts derived from the science of chaos can be
used in the analysis of the literary works. She emphasizes the universality of
chaos theory and believes that this approach is applicable to literature of all
periods. She discusses the butterfly effect, strange attracters, turbulence and
instability in such early works as Paradise Lost, Tempest and a more recent
book, Jurassic Park. However, Gordon E. Slethaug‟s Beautiful Chaos: Chaos
Theory and Metachaotics in Recent American Fiction (2000) is the first book to
examine contemporary American fiction through the lens of chaos theory.
Slethaug discusses the accomplishment of major American writers “through
their disruption of conventional linear narrative forms and their use of strategic
tropes of chaos and order, but also - and more significantly for an
understanding of the interaction of science and fiction - through their self-
conscious embrace of the current rhetoric of chaos theory”.
A glance at the postmodernist fiction reveals that most contemporary writers
try to bridge the gap between science and literature. In the late twentieth
century, non-linear dynamics and chaos theory provided the writers with a new
source of inspiration that can be seen in the works of Tom Stoppard, Don
Delillo and Thomas Pynchon, who employ concepts of thermodynamics and
information theory to “portray societies saturated with technologies that can by
turns become liberating or threatening” (Heise 2).1 The focus of this article is
on „order‟ and „entropy‟ as tools to find the secret patterns of Thomas
Pynchon‟s The Crying of Lot 49 which is considered the portrayal of the
twentieth century, especially of the American society in the late sixties. In this
novel we can see a mixture of different social and cultural elements such as the
culture of suburbia, hippie rock singers, druggies, conspiracy groups, theater,
actors, lawyers and paranoids. Oedipa Maas, the protagonist of this novel tries
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to put these random elements together and wishes to create “constellations”,
that is, to find an underlying order or pattern behind them, but the more she
tries, the more she gets lost in the surrounding chaos.
„Butterfly Effects‟, „Bifurcations‟ and „Strange Attractors‟
Oedipa, a young woman who lives in California with her husband, Mucho
Maas, comes back home from a party in which she has celebrated her being
appointed as the executrix of her ex-boyfriend‟s will. After contemplating on
the memories she had with Pierce, she travels to San Narciso (Pierce's
hometown) where she meets Metzger, her co-executor, and Miles, a member of
a rock group called Paranoids and begins to sort through Pierce's tangled
financial affairs. She comes across an underground mail service called
W.A.S.T.E with the symbol of a muted post horn. On a trip to Fangoso
Lagoons, an area in which Pierce owned a substantial amount of land, they
meet a lawyer who is suing the Inverarity estate on behalf of his client, who
recovered and sold human bones to Inverarity but has not receive proper
payment. A member of The Paranoids points out that this story is similar to the
plot of a Jacobean Revenge play called The Courier's Tragedy. Oedipa and
Metzger see a production of the play the next day. This play adds to her
bewilderment as she gets to know about an illegal mail system in renaissance
Europe, called Tristero. After the play, she meets Driblette, the director of the
play, and asks him some questions but does not get satisfying answers. As she
leaves the theater, she remembers that she wanted to discuss the bones but she
just talked about Tristero. This word becomes her major concern as she tries to
investigate different versions of the play in order to find out more. She notices
that the paperback version has no mention of the Tristero, which puzzles her.
She decides to go to Berkeley to meet the publisher. On the way, she stops by
an elderly care home that Pierce had owned, where she meets an old man with a
ring depicting the muted post horn. He tells Oedipa that his grandfather cut this
ring off the hands of an Indian he had killed. She also hires a stamp expert
named Genghis Cohen to examine Pierce's stamp collection. Genghis tells her
that some of Pierce's stamps have a muted post horn in their watermark. To
find more about Tristero, Oedipa goes to Yoyodyne Company, one Pierce‟s
large belongings, and sees Stanley Koteks drawing the W.A.S.T.E symbol. He
introduces John Nefastis and his machine that Oedipa, later in the story, seeks
out to bring order to her state of mind, but fails. Oedipa returns to her home in
Kinneret, and decides to see her doctor to seek solace. However, her frustration
never diminishes as she finds her doctor gone crazy and her husband addicted
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to LSD. On return to Echo Hotel, the Paranoids group inform her that Metzger
has run off with a teen girl.
Feeling lonely and frustrated, Oedipa meets Emory Bortz, an English
professor whose name Oedipa finds in the preface to one of the versions of The
Courier's Tragedy that she has found. He helps Oedipa piece together the
history of the Tristero, which dates back to mid-16th-century Europe. He also
tells Oedipa that Driblette, the person who knew the best about the Tristero
version of the play, has committed suicide. Oedipa begins to give up as she
realizes that she is very lonely and has no real friends. She visits Mike
Fallopian again, who suggests that the whole Tristero mystery may be nothing
more than a complex joke played on her by Pierce. Oedipa does not accept this
possibility and leaves him angrily but later when she puts all the information
she has gathered together, she realizes that every route leading to the Tristero
also leads to the Inverarity Estate. Genghis Cohen gives her more information
about Pierce‟s stamp collection, which is to be auctioned off by a local dealer as
Lot 49. Oedipa thinks that the person who is going to bid for the collection may
know the key to the Tristero. So, she attends the auction, wondering what to do
to the strange bidder. In the last scene of the novel, Oedipa sits in the room
waiting for the crying of Lot 49.
One of the most challenging implications of chaos theory that is implied in
the notion of „the butterfly effect‟ is that systems change from near-to-stable
dynamics to far-from-stable dynamics when they undergo bifurcations. The
increasing number of bifurcations will cause the system to break apart and lose
much of the order or pattern they have. Chaos theory demonstrates that
“whether it occurs in computer, weather system, or a human being, a difference
in output, so small as to be imperceptible at the time it occurs, can ultimately
produce huge difference in output” ( Hawkins 15). Nonlinear systems are,
therefore, extremely sensitive to initial conditions, that means, “similar
phenomena or systems will never be wholly identical and that the results of
those small initial changes may be radically different” (Slethaug xxiii). In other
words, chaos theory demonstrates that very small, seemingly insignificant
individual effects can exponentially compound with other effects and give rise
to disproportionate impacts. (Hawkins 16)
In the Crying of Lot 49, Oedipa is leading a seemingly normal, stable and
relatively predictable life until she receives a letter giving her new
responsibilities as Inverarity‟s executrix, at which point she becomes subjected
to emotional and spiritual flux. Her routine and domestic life, symbolized by
Tupperware parties, television, and twilight whisky pours and her marriage
alters dramatically that the foundation of her life breaks apart. Her life, at every
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moment of the story, is so uncertain that she (and even the reader) cannot
predict what is going to happen next. Her life is surrounded by different forms
of butterfly effects so that her life becomes similar to a basin of instability and
bifurcations. In other words, the far-from stable system of her life undergoes
bifurcations that seem totally uncontrollable. In chapter three, having just
committed marital infidelity with Metzger, she finds herself entrapped in a
world of convoluted mysteries that she cannot sort out, and reflects on her
perception of the Rapunzel figure in Remedios Varo‟s painting that she had
once seen in Mexico. This painting has a powerful effect on Oedipa since she
has always seen herself imprisoned in a tower that is “everywhere”, seeking
hopelessly to fill the void of her life. She desperately tries to embroider a world
that she finds uncongenial. She used to think that Pierce can save her from her
tower, “but all that had then gone on between them had really never escaped the
confinement of the tower” (11). Having realized that Pierce is not the solution
to her problem, she hopes to find it somewhere else; “she pursues and then
rejects one possibility after another that might fill the void and provide some
sort of meaning … that may offer some solutions to the mysteries presented to
her” (Slethaug 48).
In the third chapter of the novel, Oedipa finds the muted horn symbol of the
Tristero system, and this is the cause of a new mystery that is going to be a new
“attractor” towards which the whole system of her mind gravitates. An
attractor, to quote Hayles, “is simply any point within an orbit that seems to
attract the system to it”. (140) In other words, it is a point that guides or attracts
the behavior of a system and causes the events to take place. When she comes
upon The Courier’s Tragedy, this is the word Tristero which “ hung in the air as
the act ended and all lights were for a moment cut; hung in the dark to puzzle
Oedipa Maas, but not yet to exert the power over her it was to”(52). She finds
the word significant, and has this presentiment that it would mean more to her
later, although she does not know why yet. Once again, another bifurcation
happens in the system. Now, she is “faced with a metaphor of god knows how
many parts; more than two, anyway. With coincidences blossoming these days
wherever she looked, she had nothing but a sound, a word, Tristero, to hold
them together”. (80) Oedipa is well aware of the chaos that is floating all
around this word, since, as it was mentioned above, when the number of
bifurcations increases, the system is in a state of chaos. She tries to regulate this
chaos, but she gets to know just a few things about it: The Courier’s Tragedy,
Yoyodyne Company, the stamps collection, the Indian killers in nineteenth
century, and the Inamorati Anonymous group all seem to have something to do
with the Tristero system; that is, the "strange attractor” seems to be the Tristero
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itself. Many people trace trajectories within its phase space and wander
unpredictably within it, but are always drawn to remain within its orbit. This
can be witnessed at the night when Oedipa roams the city apparently randomly,
but keeps seeing the Tristero. She too, of course, is in its orbit.
When Oedipa reflects on the incidents happened to her, she realizes that
whenever there is something related to the Tristero system, a trace of her
bidder, Pierce Inverarity, can also be found. In other words, Pierce Inverarity, a
mogul who might have owned the whole San Narciso, can be considered as the
major „strange attractor‟ of this novel. He reminds us of Eris (the goddess of
chaos) who instigated and ordered his own forms of chaos. But Oedipa cannot
make sure about the source of chaos, this major strange attractor of the system,
because he is now missing, and Oedipa has to stay intellectually and
psychologically stable in the midst of a chaotic system surrounding her, as the
Demon in “Nefasits‟ Machine” is detached from the system itself causing the
system not to go towards “ Entropy”.
“Maxwell‟s Demon” and “Entropy” in The Crying of Lot 49
The idea of entropy and Maxwell‟s Demon, which are significant elements of
nonlinear science, play an important role in The Crying of Lot 49. The
ambiguous relationship that Oedipa, Maxwell‟s Demon and the Trystero system
have with one another can be aptly clarified through the exploration of entropy
both in thermodynamics and information theory.3 Maxwell‟s Demon is an
abstract construct which belongs to the realm of thermodynamics. In 1850,
Rudolf Clausius formulated the second law of thermodynamics, which
maintains that “the entropy of the universe tends toward a maximum”.4
Maxwell believes that his demon is able to challenge the claim that all systems
move in one direction - away from order and organization and towards disorder
(entropy) and eventual thermodynamic equilibrium. This Demon (device) is
thought to contradict the second law of thermodynamics by suggesting that a
closed system may evolve into a state of lower entropy (negentropy) over time.
The concept of „entropy‟ seems to be Pynchon‟s favorite metaphor that can
be applicable to many aspects of life. In his introduction to Slow Learner, he
says that he has been trying to understand the concept of entropy ever since he
wrote his short story with the title Entropy, in which he translates the concept
of entropy into social terms (14).5 Oedipa‟s attempt to find the secret of
Trystero and ultimately to save her from her tower of imprisonment is a search
for order, but “the interface between thermodynamics and information theory
prevents the message from being transmitted to the receiver (Dutta 3). In the
story Nefastis tells Oedipa that “communication is the key…the Demon passes
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his data on to the sensitive, and the sensitive must reply in kind… the sensitive
must receive that staggering set of energies, and feedback something like the
same quantity of information. To keep it cycling” (84). Oedipa Maas realizes
that she is within “the confinement of [a] tower‟‟(20), similar to the closed
system in which, according to the laws of thermodynamics, entropy increases
which may cause a heat–death energy that will lead to random disorder. She
seeks “an end to her encapsulation in her tower” (44) of thermodynamic
entropy in identifying the “Trystero system”. She is wandering in the midst of a
whirlwind of messages providing her with different probabilities. If we
consider information as a form of energy, as Shannon and Weaver did, then
“the concept of entropy can be used to measure the information or
organizational content of the message” (Ward 132). Hayles, also, believes that
as the amount of information (the freedom of choice in selecting a message)
increases in a narrative, the complexity and uncertainty of this information will
also increase. The concepts of possibility and uncertainty are also shared by the
thermodynamics. Orrin Klapp, in Overload and Boredom, asserts that “matter
and energy degrade to more probable, less informative states. The larger the
amounts of information processed or diffused, the more likely it is that
information will degrade toward meaningless variety, like noise or information
overload or sterile uniformity” (qtd in Dutta 7). This is also true about the
Oedipa because she gets more disordered as she gains more information about
Trystero. “This paradox of information”, Anindita Dutta argues, “in which
knowledge and meaning clash, is held in limbo by redundancy; repetition is
helpful so long as it serves as reinforcement, and establishes recognition.
Otherwise signals would push a variety that borders randomness and noise” (7).
In The Crying of Lot 49, information refers to the data that the demon
collects on the “untold billions of molecules in the “Nefastis‟ box”. Nefastis
explains to Oedipa that thermodynamic and information were entirely
unconnected, except at one point; Maxwell‟s Demon. As the demon sat and
sorted his molecules into hot and cold, the system was said to lose entropy, but,
somehow the loss was offset by the information the demon gained about the
molecules were where”. (105) Implied in this explanation is that “an increase in
one quantity (information) „offsets‟ decrease in another quantity (heat entropy)”
(Palmeri 983). The demon violates the thermodynamic entropy as it produces a
“ staggering set of energies” through the destruction of a “massive complex of
information”, since entropy is an irreversible transformation, the human
intervention of “ sensitive” supplies the information that the demon needs to
convert heat energy into usable energy.
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Similar to Denis Gabor‟s comment on Maxwell‟s Demon that “we cannot
get anything for nothing, not even an observation” (see Angrist 199), Schaub
asserts that “the Demon requires some input from outside to keep it all cycling”
(Pearce 57) and concludes that this is the role of Oedipa as a “sensitive”.
Oedipa tries for some minutes, “waiting for the Demon to communicate” (106),
amongst the noise from the “high-pitched comic voices issued from the TV
set”, but she only receives a “misfired nerve cell” (107). This unheard message
is like a “hieroglyphic sense of concealed meaning of an intent to
communicate” (13). Anindita Dutta believes that
The light the Demon uses when he acts as "gateskeeper" to identify the
molecules is too bright for Oedipa's system. And truth, like the entropy
of information theory, irreversibly destroys the meaning of its own
message, just as the Demon destroys the knowledge that the sensitive
passes on to it in order to create power. In this paradoxical state,
Oedipa's quest for the truth about Tristero, and her subsequent attempt
to escape from her tower of thermodynamic entropy are useless,
because they bring her back to the same quantity of heat energy(12).
Peter Abernethy argues in “Entropy in Pynchon‟s The crying of Lot 49” that
Pynchon‟s theme in this novel is that “ entropy in the closed system of
American society is increasing rapidly and that we are beginning to experience
a major failure in communications, an identity crisis that could lead to
apocalypse (18). Oedipa cannot find the information and ends up in a highly
probable state of uncertainty over Trystero. She has a job of sorting and her
“sensitivity” makes her the Demon of pierce‟s estate. She is the demon of her
society exactly in the same way that Maxwell‟s demon is to Nefastis‟ machine.
Her effort to disentangle Pierce‟s legacy makes her study her society through
the signs and symbols around her to differentiate between reality and the
illusion of the Trystero system, and to form her information into some order to
achieve the truth. Schaub proposes that Pierce bequeathed to Oedipa not only
his estate, San Narciso, but also his role. Pierce‟s last name, Inverarity, is the
birthplace of James clerk Maxwell, the inventor of the demon. It suggests that
Pierce was the demon of his system, and now, this is Oedipa who has to keep
the system cycling.
But, for her task of sorting, Oedipa requires a source of energy from outside
to reverse the entropic movement inside towards disorganization, sameness and
death. From the beginning of her trip, she feels “as if there were revelations in
progress all around her” (28). Arriving at Pierce‟s estate, as she looks at the
printed circuit pattern of the streets in San Narciso, she experiences “an odd
religious instant” that the town that looks like a circuit has “an intent to
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communicate… so in her first minute in San Narciso a revelation trembled, just
past the threshold of meaning” (13). This revelation, Kermode argues, “would
be of the kind that explains the whole history, the present condition of America,
Inverarity, Wharfinger‟s play and so on; it would explain how waste has
meaning just as, couched as acronym, WASTE forms a sentence („we await sad
Tristero‟s empire)” (13) . She is waiting for a miracle that Jesus Arrable defines
to her as “another world‟s intrusion into this one” (88). But, she falls prey to so
much random information and confronts so many binary choices that she
cannot find that religious instant or that miracle to obtain the truth. “Even if she
did find out the central truth or the excluded middle that has leaked out of the
plot of this novel… Pynchon would have violated the theory of information had
he revealed the encoded message” (Dutta, 12). This is , perhaps, what Pynchon
has had in mind, because the highly entropic information level at the end of the
novel implies high probability and uncertainty which causes the reader to end
up with two different alternatives; either the Trystero doesn‟t exist, and Oedipa
is “in the orbiting ecstasy of a true paranoia”, or it exists, and so it would be the
only way she can “continue and manage to be at all relevant to it, was an alien,
unfurrowed, assumed full circle into some paranoia”(151). Thus the pattern of
Oedipa at the end of the novel is comparable to a type of “everyman” who, just
like the reader, tries to put together the fragments of a chaotic, multi-faceted
society, but fails and cannot achieve the secret, elusive and transcendental
meaning; the END.
„Recursive Symmetry‟ and „Orderly Disorder Structure‟ of The Crying of
Lot 49
Chaos scientists acknowledge that there is an underlying complex pattern in
every disordered (chaotic) system which is said to be repeating itself. This
replication or iteration in the chaotic systems is called recursive symmetry that
is defined by Brian Ward as “a term used by chaologists to describe the
repetitive behavior of an open system” (139). Harriet Hawkins believes that
artistic tradition is nonlinear and chaotic, since “it acts and reacts on itself in
recursive, self referential ways. Thus the behavior of one function is guided by
the behavior of another” (102). Slethaug in Beautiful Chaos asserts that the
distinction between iteration and recursion in literature and art is not as obvious
as in mathematics and science, and differentiates between two forms of
narratives: recursive and iterative. To him, recursive narratives “depend to a
great extent for the meaning of the text upon the readers of an original pattern”,
whereas the iterative narratives “rely more upon the readers‟ conscious
awareness of the differences caused by successive repetitions” (98).
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Iterations and recursions play a central role in the structure of The Crying of
Lot 49. Through these recursions and iterations, Pynchon signals the various
analogous problems of trying to discover the central significance. Oedipa‟s loss
of the sources of information and encouragement, her analysis of The Courier’s
Tragedy and Ramedius Varo‟s paintings, her travel to different parts of
California and her comparison of the city to a circuit card, and finally the
ending of the story are instanes of recursion in this novel.
Various characters of the story seem to leave Oedipa when they are most
needed to bring order or an end to the flux of her mind. The novel begins with a
letter informing her that her former lover, Pierce Inverarity has just deceased,
and she is named the executrix of his estate. While trying to disentangle the
estate, she meets Metzger, her co-executor and has a love affair with him, but
later in the story, Oedipa finds that he has escaped with a young girl. As she
tries to find out the secret of Tristero, Driblette, the only person who knew how
the word Tristero entered the courier‟s Tragedy commits suicide. She also loses
her psychologist who has gone crazy and her husband who is found to be
addicted to LSD drugs, forcing him to withdraw from communication. one by
one, Oedipa loses each of the men whom she had used to protect herself –
lover, husband, psychologist, and her co-executor who was supposed to help
her in her search are all “stripping” from her, leaving her to feel “like a
fluttering curtain in a very high window, moving up to then out over the abyss”
(125-26). At different moments of the story, she becomes emotionally,
spiritually, and intellectually separated, and her quest for the meaning in the
labyrinthine paths of story seems to end in dead-ends.
Her failure to find stability, significance, and meaning in her quest to
understand herself as well as the secret of Tristero, and Pierce‟s intention
behind his will, as Slethaug asserts, “is mirrored in her attempt to locate textual
stability and authorized meaning in the play called The Courier‟s Tragedy”
(113). The failure in interpreting the play is again “mirrored in her attempt to
find coherent meaning and significance in the pictures by Remedios Varo or the
stamps of Inverarity‟s collection (Ibid). Her futile attempts to find the
significance of her relationship, the play, the stamps, and the pictures suggest
that it is the pursuit of meaning and significance and the failure to find it that is
the primary link among these various segments of her life and the text.
The other example of recursive symmetry is the ending of the novel. The
Crying of Lot 49 finishes as Oedipa is awaiting “the crying of lot 49” to
discover the identity of the strange bidder at the stamp auction, that is, as
Georgianna M. Colville suggests, it returns the reader to the moment before
opening the book (14).6 Debra A. Castillo comments on Pynchon‟s ending that
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The book has announced itself, defined itself, and, in a peculiarly
postmodern variation of this lightly symmetrical construction, put
quotation marks around its own title – the key to unlock this structure –
thus displacing formal symmetry into an active, metafictional shadow
writing (25).
The Crying of Lot 49 does not have an actual ending in the conventional sense
of the word, or it defies closure both for the reader and the character but as Paul
Coates argues " this ending is necessary, for "the fact that no revelation
concludes the book...fits [its] thematic design (qtd in Salomon 17). This is a
kind of self-parody, because the whole narrative is moving forward to come to
conclusion, but by the end of the story the reader is kept waiting and the
meaning or The End is permanently postponed.
Recursive symmetry is the structuring technique of the novel; it is a “will to
form which imposes order on apparent chaos… the miracle machine that
creates plot out of disorganized fragments” (ibid). Through the examples of
recursive symmetries discussed above, Pynchon has created a collection of
plots within a novel that is much like a labyrinth full of disordered paths that
apparently end in “nowhere”, but as William Gleason discusses in his article
“The Postmodern Labyrinth of The Crying of Lot 49”, the labyrinth may appear
chaotic and terrifying to the explorer, but at the same time “ordered and even
delightful to the designer” (2).
Notes:
1. Ursula Heise in “Between Technophobia and Utopia; Science and
Postmodern Literature” argues that appropriation of the science in the context
of literature used to deal with the creation of monstrously human bodies and
minds as in Shelly‟s Frankenstein or Hawthorne‟s Rappacini’s Daughter, or
oppressive environments that degrade humans to mere parts of machinery, as in
Fritz Lang‟s film Metropolis, or the totalitarian societies as in Huxley‟s Brave
New World.
2. For the analysis of Don Dellilo‟s major works in the light of science and
chaos theory see Brian Ward‟s The Literary Appropriation of Chaos Theory,
Gordon E. Slethaug‟s Beautiful Chaos.
3. The concept of thermodynamic and information „entropy‟ in Pynchon‟s
major works has been discussed by many scholars. In addition to the books that
I have cited in this section, some articles have fully discussed this subject,
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among which I can mention Thomas R. Lyon‟s “Thomas Pynchon‟s Classic
presentation of the classic law of thermodynamics”, published in the bulletin of
the Rocky Mountain Modern Language Association, Vol, 27. No, 4. (Dec.
1973), Peter A. Abernethy, “Entropy in Pynchon‟s The Crying of Lot 49, 14. 2.
CRITIQUE 18,(1972) , and Anindita Dutta‟s article to which I am much
indebted, “ The Paradox of Truth, the Truth of Entropy”, available on
http://www.pynchon.pomona.edu/entropy/paradox.html.
4. See Lyons and Franklin
5. See also the discussion of Entropy on the following link;
http://www.pynchon.pomona.edu/entropy.html.
6. David Seed also has a similar sentence that “instead of resolving the
narrative Pynchon places Oedipa in an audience and by repeating the novel‟s
title throws the reader back into text”. See Seed (1988;123-24)
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