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Writing Assessment Foci . CW Writing a Horror Story: Setting Monday 15 th October 2012 15/10/12 Learning Objectives : To be able to use clauses more accurately in a sentence. To be able to identify features of an effective setting and use in our own writing. - PowerPoint PPT Presentation
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CW Writing a Horror Story: Setting Monday 15th October 2012
15/10/12
Learning Objectives:1. To be able to use clauses more accurately in a sentence. 2. To be able to identify features of an effective setting and use in
our own writing
Writing Assessment Foci
STARTER: Unscramble to following words.
1. erVb2. oNnu3. vejAcdeti
Extension: write a definition for each
Learning outcomesCore Extension Killer
To be able to recognise the parts of a sentence
To be able to identify effective features of a setting
To be able to apply this knowledge and independently write a setting for a horror story
Write down the
underlined words in
bold!
A clause contains one verb to make it a simple sentence
The tall, dark house loomed before me.
The tall, dark house loomed before me.The house, tall and dark, loomed before me.Tall and dark, the house loomed before me.
Model
In pairs...vary the sentence by moving the adjectives.
1. The clean, crisp air filled my nostrils.2. Clean and crisp, …3. My nostrils …
Apply your knowledge.Try on your own…
1. The ripped, dirty curtains fluttered in the evening.
2. 3.
Learning outcomesCore Extension Killer
To be able to recognise the parts of a sentence
To be able to identify effective features of a setting
To be able to apply this knowledge and independently write a setting for a horror story
6 Part Story Structure
1. Setting2. Introduce a problem3. Adjustment 4. Crisis passage 5. Building suspense 6. Resolution
6 part story sequencePut in the correct order!
A. SettingB. Resolution: happy ending? C. Building suspense: something strange is
happening! D. Introduce a problem : argument?E. Adjustment: problem is beginning to be
sorted F. Crisis : panic! Trapped!
Three Minute scary scene- In three minutes draw a picture of a scary scene
Label your scene with adjectives.
Comparing Representations
COMPARE your picture of your scary scene with your partner.
• What is the same?• What is different?
Learning outcomesCore Extension Killer
To be able to recognise the parts of a sentence
To be able to identify effective features of a setting
To be able to apply this knowledge and independently write a setting for a horror story
Settings for Stories: with your shoulder partner, write a list of what you like about this opening
The attic door creaked open. Something rustled in the darkness. I stared, but could see nothing beyond the vague shapes of old suitcases and trunks piled high. It smelt damp. I struggled up into the attic and wedged the door open. Light poured into the darkness. A cobweb brushed my face and I felt the sudden tickle of a spider crawl across my cheek. As I made my way forwards, it grew darker and colder. I was blocking the light from the attic door. It was there that I saw the hand. It was quite still – and white. At first I thought that it was marble. But then it moved.
Success Criteria
VCOPPEARMS
Settings for Stories: Can we improve using our VCOP mats?
The attic door creaked open. Something rustled in the darkness. I stared, but could see nothing beyond the vague shapes of old suitcases and trunks piled high. It smelt damp. I struggled up into the attic and wedged the door open. Light poured into the darkness. A cobweb brushed my face and I felt the sudden tickle of a spider crawl across my cheek. As I made my way forwards, it grew darker and colder. I was blocking the light from the attic door. It was there that I saw the hand. It was quite still – and white. At first I thought that it was marble. But then it moved.
Learning outcomesCore Extension Killer
To be able to recognise the parts of a sentence
To be able to identify effective features of a setting
To be able to apply this knowledge and independently write a setting for a horror story
Now write your own openingChoose an image and then 6 objects you can describe.
Red Pen Plenary
VCOP
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