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Common Application Essay

undefinedCho tt c,T to ch ny mi ngi cng trao i v "g m aicng bit l ai " :common essay.(gic mng m h cho bn teenager chng ta!!!)Ma essay ang nng, mi mi ngi nhp tic! m u , xin volunteer bi common essay mi ra l ca T

Common, give it some feedback!(Please note: criticism is more welcomed than praise)Chc mi ngi sm complete appli ( cn i chi Noen na

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********************START*************************What do you see as the turning point or important event inyour life and why do you view them as such?

Four years can be just a blink of an eye.Four years , however,can witness dramatic changes in a person.Four years ago,I was like a butterfly,seeking pleasure and

safety everywhere I went.Feeling so secure in the lovingembracing of my parents,I deemed everything so lovely,simpleand smooth.I didnt have to and didnt want to try hard to getwhat I desired.Where there were difficulties,there wasnt me.Idared not be exposed to risk.That used to be the way I lived.Then It happened.A turning point to be put down in my life.Iwent in for my Junior High School English Gifted TeamSelection open to every student at the beginning of gradeeight.By a stroke of luck ,I passed,selected for the schoolsEnglish Major class.There began a new life for me.My first English Fostering Class got me completelydumbfounded .It suddenly dawned on me how far I had been

left behind by my classmates.Those years of take it easy hadtaken their toll on me.Though chosen as an outstandingstudent, I am by no means on a par with them.Mostimportantly of all, there were only ten days left until thescreening test.At that time, my mind was racing with thoughtsand fears.A part of me wanted to hide away in the corner ofthe room and let everything collapse.The other part told me tostick to that silver lining like the very life boat to survive.To tellthe truth,English was the only thing I could feel proud of
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then.It was my everything.If I lost it ,I would be brokeMy other part won.I knew it was now or never.I worked andworked and worked around the clock.I studied from dusk tilldawn,oblivious of anything surrounding me.To my motherssurprise, I began to befriend those long forgotten thicktextbooks and dictionaries.I learned everything I could ,memorized all that possible,filled my head with information toits full extent..My aim at that time was to be a survivor.Tokeep myself going , I made up motivational phrases like :Themorning is within your palm. , My will is made from iron andsteel. or Let them know who you really are.I learnedwholeheartedly, as if I had only ten more living days in whichto learn.One day passed by.Two days ,three days , four days,until the big day came.I dont recall much how I spent thoseseemingly everlasting three hours of the test.It just seemedlike there were only two of us in this world : me and the exampaper.Anyhow,I did pass again.How blissed I was on receivingthe news from my friends.It was my greatest triumph ever

achieved.Though no prize was given , no celebration was held,Ihad gained the most precious thing on earth: perseverance.From that moment,I am no longer who I used to be.Overturned a new leaf. Ive found my springboard and confidencefrom that achievement.Now,where there are difficulties,there isme.No longer am I afraid to try and fail.It is just what everyhuman does.The core of the matter is whether one persists tillthe very end of what one has started.Even if only a spark ofhope is alive, Im holding on to it with both hands.Deep downmy heart a voice is saying :As long as you have dared to try ,then you are the champion.Through many years oftrying,failing,trying and soaring,Ive known that to do theimpossible, first of all,one must have the courage to think of

the unthinkable.Dear me, I can still remember that day when you heard thenews of passing.Your face made me think of the white, deepsky in the early morning : so fresh,shining and assuring.Afterfour years, a lot of things have been forgotten but Ill neverforget that day I got my first harvest of hardwork and self-awakening,that day I got a taste of my own sweat and turnedimmediately addicted.The day I was reborn.Henceforth, no matter where life leads me to,I will not beafraid since with me , I have the greatest supporters of all:Perseverance and Determination.

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Re: Common Application Essay

ch ch c on u, hnh nh em nh du chm fayc lung tung th no nh... hoc l do din n... th 2l ko c dng abbreviation v d nh wasn't... was notth ng hn... c 1 vi ch dng t sai nhng ma thiem gi ri th cng ko nhn xt nhiu hn...

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Re: Common Application Essaywasn't c g m sai? nu Lan ni l khng nn dngwasn't m nn dng was not th chc l hp l hn.vi li chng c ci lut no cm chuyn dng abbreviationnh th c. tt nhin l v mt kin c nhn th anh cngs ni nh Lan, nhng m v mt l do khc. khi vit, mun gi tnh formal ca bi vit, mnh nn trnh vit ttnh th. tuy nhin, xt v hon cnh th anh ngh l essayvit xin hc nh th ny mang tnh c nhn nhiu hn lformal... tm li l nhn tng th ci bi vit ca mnh. nu

m u theo kiu formal th nn gi ci , cn nu cmthy mnh mun hng theo kiu "thn tnh" th vitthong i cht cng khng sao.cn th nhn xt cu c vi c tng + structure th thi,ng no cng gi i ri. trong vng mt on ngn mphi pht biu kin cho c mt ch khoai nh th mvit nh em l decent ri. chc em T may mn.__________________Jack and Jill went up the hillBoth with a buck and a quarterKind words he spoke, the condom brokeAnd now they have a daughter.

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19-12-2004, 01:09 PM #5

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Re: Common Application EssayBn T n , hnh nh bi ny k l hi b nhiu nh,cha give much insight into yourself.(Mnh ch cmthy th thi, bn ng b discourage nh).

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Re: Common Application EssayAnh Long , em c ni sai u hehe hoc l em dng t kong vi mnh hehe em ch thy y cc bc dy em l

ko dng abbreviation... th em ni th thui m my ln b

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may em cha np bi nh T.Gip em vi nh.Mt chuch nu admitted :-)Chc tt c ging sinh vui v.***********START OFESSAY**************************************

What do you do when you go to bed? You laugh and say :"sleeping of course." I ,since my childhood, have beenspending every first hour of my bedtime learning the kindof lesson no school will teach.

As the darkness pervades my own room and everydistracting sound sinks itself into silence, I am lying here,on my 79-by-39 inches bed, gathering all trains of thoughtabout myself, people and the world.It is here, in the verycalmness and tranquility of the night that I am beingcompletely true to me, no thought hidden, no feelingcovered, no pretension displayed, ony the conversation

between me and me voiced clearly and deeply.At ten o'clock ,I begin by casting my mind back to allmistakes I made during the day.So busy revising for myhistory exam, I forgot to say hello to my class and givethem a big smile like usual.No wonder I was so unluckythis morning. Mom always tells me smiling is the best wayto give you energy and happiness and it is for free.I shouldhave been more friendly than burying my head in the bookall the time.Surely, the first thing I will do tomorrow is togive everyone a warm 'Have a good day'.

After that, I reassure myself it has not been a bad day.I

have realized my ambition : being admitted to my school'sswimming varsity team along with six other seniors.Finally,after three and a half months of getting up early andrigorous practice , I have made it .Swimming has been withme since the age of five, being my hobby, my aim, andabove all, my close friend, who has seen me through thickand thin, joy and sorrow, ups and downs.I , though , couldhave done better than ending up a runner-up had I notbeen so worried and uptight in the first place.Next time, Iwill try to swim faster and try harder.

It is half past ten now.Starting a schedule for tomorrow

would be timely.First thing to do will be driving my sister toschool.After my usual geometry class, I will go to thelibrary to gather up information about SARS for my weeklyscience forum.Then comes the time for a little guitarpractice.The music contest drawing near, I should get downto it asap.Exhasted? not yet.A day cannot pass without myvisit to the Elderly Organization.I am a social servicevolunteer there, taking care of three rows of daffodil andseven pots of roses.I love it when, after I have finished all
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the work, Grandma Chau, Thanh , Bay and I will sit arounda table under the carambola tree, telling and listening toeach other's story.I will tell them about my school daywhile, in return, they take me back to thirty years agowhen Vietnam was in starvation and people had to eat branto live by.The stories always made me moved andremained in my mind till now.I have learned a great dealfrom my elderly friends.

The clock's hand shows eleven now.It would be unwise tostay up late.I spare my last though for all the people I loveso well : my parents, my sister and my friends and wishthem a sound sleep.Tomorrow is always a brighter day.

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21-12-2004, 07:57 PM #8

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Re: Common Application EssayT, say ca cu vit theo tone kh l nh, gn, chc

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22-12-2004, 06:53 PM #9

Phng Tun Re: Common Application EssayI posted this in the English Club but the box seems to be
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abandoned Deadline is near This piece needs a lot ofimprovement i thought...however...it's just a supplementalessay.

A model for life

To some people, chess is a game, a way to relax. After all,the basic moves of each chessman are so simple that onecan learn them in a day. For others, chess is a sport oftactics and intellect. Despite the apparent simplicity, withthirty-two soldiers on a field of sixty-four squares, thenumber of possible moves is incredible. For me, chess ismuch more than a game, more than an intellectual exercise;it is a model for life.

The battle begins. The first lesson I learned in chess wascareful planning. Haphazard movements guarantee only

failure. I ponder every move, evaluating how it will help meattain my purpose, whether that means expanding my regionor taking over the center. Patiently organizing my army, Iawait my opponents mistake before opening an immediateattack. Thanks to chess, I recognize the need for strategicpreparation before stepping firmly and fearlessly onto theroad to success.

The fight rages. Both armies expand and build up strongdefenses. The two opponents analyze the field and apply allthe tactics they know to assault each other. I aim to gainroom for maneuvering my pieces and to dominate somepositions with a panoramic view of the whole field, fromwhich I can penetrate into my opponents territory. At thesame time, I put up fortresses, linking my men in anunbroken web. Success in life, as in chess, requires keenanalysis, maintaining both aggressive and defensive controlover the situation.

I open a gambit. This most daring chess strategy requiresthat one or more pieces be sacrificed to execute the scheme.Giving up a chessman is psychologically difficult and puts meat an immediate disadvantage, but I, an astute player, knowthat my risk will pay off in greater advantage later in thegame. Too often people simply follow their instincts, listen to

their fears, and hold onto what they have instead of risking alittle now to gain a lot in the future. Chess encourages itsplayers to evaluate life more thoroughly. Winning requiresacceptance of temporary setback and sacrificing smallerobjects for the major object of dominating the game

The end looms. Only a few men survive on the board. Victoryis in my palm. My opponents King and some pawns are thelast enemies wandering undefeated, while my troop is still
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vigorous. My opponent keeps setting traps to lure me into adraw game, but my experience tells me exactly how to avoidthese pitfalls. Now caution is the key. One erroneous movewill overturn the whole situation. I ignore the temporaryadvantage of promoting a pawn into queen or capturingmore men, and instead concentrate on making every soldier,including my King, work at full power to capture his King. Inthe same way, my determination to succeed in life keeps meconcentrating on my goals, ignoring distractions and trivialtemptations.

Victory brings further reflection. Whether I win or lose, I re-examine each game to learn from what my opponent and Ihave done. Thinking about my success in this game, I realizehow important it is to exploit all the tools available to me.Starting with only sixteen men, I am conscious that each ofthem has its own strengths and weaknesses. Used in theright place and time, my active pawns will possibly overcome

my opponents blocked bishop. Life, like chess, demands themost effective use of whatever materials are at hand. As myfather says, If you know how to play chess, youll knowwhat to do with your life.__________________

..Once upon a time..

You know the sleeping feel no more pain..But the living all are scarred...

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22-12-2004, 06:55 PM #10

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Re: Common Application EssayBy the way, the topic is : Describe an activity that has beenmost meaningful to you and why ?__________________


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Re: Common Application EssayHi c,c 3 on u trong bi essay ca cu, t thy nhc uqu,ging nh l ang suy ngh nh c + vocab qu cao siuv structure hi phc tp dn n bi khng fluent lm, mcd structure rt cht ch v dng connector tt.xem li cng khng nh!V d : stepping firmly and fearlesslykhng nn dng nhiu adverb qu , va lum thum, va

bombasticIt's my first impression. c tip coi no...Quote : Giving up a chessman is psychologically difficultand puts one at an immediate disadvantage, but theastute player knows that his risk will pay off in greateradvantage later in the game. Too often people simplyfollow their instincts, listen to their fears, and hold onto
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what they have instead of risking a little now to gain alot in the future. Chess encourages its players toevaluate life more thoroughly. Winning requiresacceptance of temporary setback and sacrificing smallerobjects for the major object of dominating the game.

on ny thiu personal , sao li l the astute players mkhng l I know that?(cu s t nhn l astute s b bo l chnh h?)cn li th, bi ny vit tt lm, c vo l thy vocabularyaptitude ngay,

M cu np bi ny cho trng no th?Nghe sao hao hao ging trng t.

chc may mn ,PS: nh xem h bi essay ca t nh.

Gi lu ri m khng ai cho kin, bun qu.

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22-12-2004, 11:10 PM #12

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Re: Common Application EssayTrch dn:

on ny thiu personal , sao li l the astute players m

khng l I know that?(cu s t nhn l astute s b bo l chnh h?)

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22-12-2004, 11:46 PM #13

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Essay ca y t thy v idea nh th l ok V cch hnh

vn cng kh mch lc

c bi ca y cng c th thy y l mt ngi kh

involved Tuy nhin c mang tnh k l hi nhiu khng

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Re: Common Application EssayChao cac ban, here la cai essay Hanh moi viet. Moi nguoicorect giup nha. Thanks.It's better to be underaated by people than to be overrated bythem.***********Startesay**************************************

The hottest days of the summer just came to my littlehometown. All of my friends went to the seaside. All myneighbors retreated into the shade of their cool houses. Theonly person who left outdoors, enjoyed walking in the brightsunshine is me. I pass. I will study at one of the top highschools in my country I repeated to myself so many timeson the day I received the letter of acceptance. I found itdifficult to conceal my feeling, the feelings of happiness andpride.

Those feelings is still vivid in my mind even years after thisincidence. I was eager for a new, interesting environment atmy new school. But on the first day of my new school, I wasdisappointed. When I came in, my new classmate stared atme for a while. Someone whistled, others smirked .-What makes them so exiting?- wondered I embarrassingly.Then a boy shouted cheerfully - Hey, where are you comefrom? -My little hometown.. district 9-answered I softly.They broke into loud laugh- A girl from suburb I almostwanted to run out of class.

On the following days, I knew the reason why I was laughedat. All my classmates came from famous Junior high schools inthe city. Therefore, they didnt expect a girl coming fromsuburb like me to be their classmate. Further more, theyconsidered me as a provincial. They thought that I had triedvery hard to be in this class and I knew nothing but study.Though I had studied very hard to be in this class, I was alsoa teenaged girl who liked chatting, shopping, listening to popand rock music. Every night, the illusion that standing in frontof my class, singing the song My love of Westlife as I haddone in my Junior high school came to me. But that was justmy dream. Soon I put my feet on the ground again. Thefeeling that being misplaced was with me all the first semester

of grade tenth.Monday rolled around much in the manner it always does;after Sunday. As usual, I was back to school in a sleepy andboring state. Today the first class was Chemistry, the class ofmy form teacher. She returned us the one-period-test.Speaking in her warmest voice, she announced the score foreach student. I didnt notice what she said. Even who got thehighest point in this test, it wouldnt be me. I was a mere zero
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in this class. I never got the highest point since the schoolyear began. Suddenly, her high voice cut my silly thought Good girl, Thanhhanh, yours is perfect. 32 pairs of eyesstuck on me again like the first day at school .For a while,then they began to clap their hands. Isnt it me? I have toremind myself to breathe? My teachers voice, all myclassmates handclap were like a bell that woke me up from along and deep sleep. I was just..waking up.

Since then, the lonely feeling that followed me through thefirst semester disappeared. I found myself again. There wasone thing I should admitted; if there hadnt been that day, Iwould have continued seeing the reflection of a boring and sadgirl in my mirror everyday. Soon I realized that if I wanted tochange all the world, the first thing to be changed is myownself. I was back to school on Tuesday with a full ofhappiness heart. I smiled to everyone I met in my class. I

started to talk to the girl who sat next to me and I found thatwe have the same dreamed boy band. It would be verywonderful if you can give and receive from your friends. Thatwas exactly what I felt at this time.

Those days were far away. While I am telling you this story, Ihave many call from them, the classmate that two years ago Ithought they would never be my friends. They not only teachme how to find good friends but also the way to believe inmyself. Having belief in what we face is very important. Imyself have learned that. Those days if I had talked to themsooner, put away my self-denied of being thought as aprovincial, I wouldnt have wasted my time so boring.

I am sure there are still many people that dont believe inthemselves. I used to be like that. But whenever I feelunconfident in something, I ask myself If I myself cantbelieve me, who will? and soon I learned to be moreconfident.

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Wow! sorry if I praise you, but I cannot do differently.Your essay is very personal, simple, and emotional . I were the admission officer, the answer would be'Yes'.However, can you make it shorter?
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Re: Common Application EssayThnh mn, ko bit tr li by gi c tr deadline ca bn

cha? Bi ca bn H thy cng rt hay ri, nhng hnhnh hi thiu mt cu chuyn sinh ng cc accom cth ghi nh mt n tng c th no v bn, hay ni

khc hn l cha c personal lm.VD nh on vit v swimming, bn c th k thm l bnc k nim nh no vi mn ny, n gip bn hc c gqua nhng lc 'ups and downs', bn tng vt qua mtth thch no trong mn ny ko? Tm li l on ny c

nhiu tng khai thc lm .Cn on cui elderly organization, H thy hnh nh hinhiu v ngun gc Chu nh (carambola tree, vietnam,barn, ...) lm ngi c c th thy r l bn ang c

nhn mnh iu . Hay l th ni thm v vic bn gn b vi hot ng ny t hi nh xu hay ch mi vitun, khi nghe nhng cu chuyn v ngy xa th bn c

cm gic th no, bn c suy ngh l tng lai bn s lmc g cho nhng c gi y (nhng ng xa xi hay phtrng qu), ch ko ch n thun l 'learn a great deal'

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Re: Common Application EssayTo Hnh: those feelings ARE...; the classmateS...

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