View
4
Download
0
Category
Preview:
Citation preview
TheLiteracyShed© 2018
Remembertoincludeexpandednounphraseswhereappropriate.
SeeE.g.Pitch-black,windingtunnels.
HearE.g.Haunting,howlingwind.
SmellE.g. Dampearth.
Feel/touchE.g.Close,claustrophobicfeeling.
LiteracyShedclipandlink:https://www.literacyshed.com/the-egyptian-pyramids.html
Clip:(TheEgyptians)Tadeo JonesResource1a
TheLiteracyShed© 2018
LiteracyShedclipandlink:https://www.literacyshed.com/the-egyptian-pyramids.html
Clip:(TheEgyptians)Tadeo JonesResource2a
black light silent dry
death quiet clear old
ice hills plain life
brave feather coal pale
mud big grave day
dry bone time cold
old solidChurchmouse lion
large dust elephant rock
TheLiteracyShed© 2018
LiteracyShedclipandlink:https://www.literacyshed.com/the-egyptian-pyramids.html
Clip:(TheEgyptians)Tadeo JonesResource2b
TheLiteracyShed© 2018
LiteracyShedclipandlink:https://www.literacyshed.com/the-egyptian-pyramids.html
Clip:(TheEgyptians)Tadeo JonesResource4a
Aftereveryturn,therearepitch-black,windingtunnels whichseemaslongasthe
riverNile.
Relentlessly,thecold,airlessroomssuffocateandstrangletheirvictims.
Crumblingdebris isacascadingwaterfallbreakingtheeerie,stillsilence.
Enormous,loomingstatues,whichareasoldastime,standtall.
Piecetogetheryourvocabularyandideastocreateyourdescriptivesentences.
TheLiteracyShed© 2018
Aftereveryturn,therearepitch-black,windingtunnelswhichareaslongastheriverNile.Relentlessly,thecold,airlessroomssuffocateandstrangletheirvictims.Crumblingdebrisisacascadingwaterfallbreakingtheeerie,stillsilence.Enormous,loomingstatues,whichareasoldastime,standtall,andallaround,thehauntingwindscreamsmyname.Thearomaofdampearthlingersintheancientcrypt,andfrighteningshadowsleapanddanceinthelamplight.Inthedistance,mysteriousdoorstrytotrickandtease.Hieroglyphswalkthewallsastheyhavedonesincethedawnoftime.Suddenly,aglimpseofglitteringtreasurecatchesmyeye…
LiteracyShedclipandlink:https://www.literacyshed.com/the-egyptian-pyramids.html
Clip:(TheEgyptians)Tadeo JonesResource5a
Canyoufindandhighlightexamplesof:Expandednounphrases?SimilesMetaphorsPersonificationCanyouidentifywhichsenseshavebeenusedtodescribe?
TheLiteracyShed© 2018
LiteracyShedclipandlink:https://www.literacyshed.com/the-egyptian-pyramids.html
Clip:(TheEgyptians)Tadeo JonesResource6a
TheLiteracyShed© 2018
AsIenteredthecrypt,Icouldn’tseeathing.ItwaspitchblackintheresoIhadtofeelmywayaround.
Then,Isawthetreasure!IreachedforthehandleandstartedtoturnitbutIcouldn’treachit.
Withoutwarning,afamilyofmummiesbegantochasemethroughthecrypt.
Suddenly,IheardanoisesoIwalkedtowardsit.Infrontofmewasaroomfilledwithdoors.
Cunningly,Iusedmybooktofigureoutwhichdoortotaketothetreasureroom.
Finally,Imadeitoutbytheskinofmyteeth.Theycan’treachmehere!
Readthesentencescarefullyandplacetheminchronological(time)orderonthestoryboard.
Then,drawapicturetomatchthetext.
LiteracyShedclipandlink:https://www.literacyshed.com/the-egyptian-pyramids.html
Clip:(TheEgyptians)Tadeo JonesResource6b
TheLiteracyShed© 2018
Whatisyourcharacterthinking?
Whatisyourcharacterfeeling?
LiteracyShedclipandlink:https://www.literacyshed.com/the-egyptian-pyramids.html
Clip:(TheEgyptians)Tadeo JonesResource7a
TheLiteracyShed© 2018
Widesmiles/biggrinsRelaxed/openbodylanguageChatty/conversationalLaughingQuick/easymovementsEyecontactLiftedspiritsHeartbursting
TearsClosedbodylanguageQuietLowgaze/lookingdownSolemn/graveexpressionHunchedHuggingselfSlowmovements
FurrowedbrowHeartracingFistsclenchedStompingShakingMindracingSeeingredHeavy/harshmovements
ScratchingheadFurrowedbrowQuestioningSearchingQuestioningbodylanguageHeadshaking
EyeswidePupilsdilatedDrymouthTremblingPalmssweatingTensebodylanguageHeadshakingQuestioning
FixedstareResolutelookDeepbreathingDeafearsTensebodylanguageDefinitemovements
LiteracyShedclipandlink:https://www.literacyshed.com/the-egyptian-pyramids.html
Clip:(TheEgyptians)Tadeo JonesResource7b
TheLiteracyShed© 2018
Canyoufindthesediaryfeatures?
Lookattheexamplesyouhavebeengiven.Howmanycanyoufind?
Features
Deardiary
Signoff
Pasttense
Writteninthefirstperson– I,me
Timeconjunctions
Paragraphs
Informal(chatty)language
Describesimportant places/events
Includes thoughtsandfeelings
LiteracyShedclipandlink:https://www.literacyshed.com/the-egyptian-pyramids.html
Clip:(TheEgyptians)Tadeo JonesResource8a
TheLiteracyShed© 2018
Bytheway…
You’llneverbelievethisbut…
Guesswhathappened…
Thethingis…
Iwon’tevengothere…
Anyway…
Besides…
Perhaps…
Maybe…
Iwonderif…
Canyoubelieveit?
Whathappenedwas…
LiteracyShedclipandlink:https://www.literacyshed.com/the-egyptian-pyramids.html
Clip:(TheEgyptians)Tadeo JonesResource8b
TheLiteracyShed© 2018
LiteracyShedclipandlink:https://www.literacyshed.com/reverso.html
Clip:Reverso Resource8c
Maybe whatdidIhavetolose?
Thethingis nothingbadcouldhappentomehereright?
Besides today,Iwouldfindthetreasureroom.
Iwonderif theyallhadastoughatimeasme?
Anyway thestatuehitme!
You’llneverbelievethisbut
Iwasn’tleavingthereemptyhanded!
Matchthechattysentencestarterstotheendings.Doyoursentencesmakesense? Dotheyneedanyadditionalpunctuation?Whicheventaretheyabout?
TheLiteracyShed© 2018
LiteracyShedclipandlink:https://www.literacyshed.com/the-egyptian-pyramids.html
Clip:(TheEgyptians)Tadeo JonesResource9a
Todaywassuchanepicadventure!Thebestdayofmylife!
AsIenteredtheancientcrypt,Icouldn’tseeathing.ItwaspitchblackintheresoIhadtofeelmywayaround.MypalmsbegantosweatandmypupilsdilatedbutIwasdeterminedtomakeit.Maybetoday,Iwouldfindthetreasureroom?Suddenly,IheardanoisesoIwalkedtowardsit.Infrontofmewasaroomfilledwithdoors.Iscratchedmyheadandmybrowfurrowed.WhichdoorshouldItake?Thethingis,Iwasn’tleavingthereemptyhanded.
Cunningly,Iusedmybooktofigureoutwhichdoortotaketothetreasureroom.You’llneverbelievethisbutthestatueguardingthewayhitme,severaltimes!StraightawayIsawaglimmeringgoldenjackal.Ipickeditup…winner!Then,Isawthetreasure.IreachedforthehandleandstartedtoturnitbutIcouldn’treach.Myfistsclenched,myheartbegantorace,Ihadtoreachit.Iturnedthehandlewithallmymight.Anyway,whatdidIhavetolose?Besides,nothingbadcouldhappentomehereright?
Withoutwarning,afamilyofmummiesbegantochasemethroughthecrypt.Asquickasaflash,Iranthroughthenarrowcorridors.Myheartwaspoundingthewholetime.Theyalmostgotmebuttheyonlymanagedtoripoffmyclothes!Justthen,Icamefacetofacewithaboilinghotriveroflava.Icouldfeeltheheatonmyskin.IgrabbedmybookandittoldmetojumpsoIdid.Luckily,aninvisiblewalkwayformedandIranforit.Finally,Imadeitoutbytheskinofmyteeth.Theycan’treachmehere!Ismiledandbegantolaugh.That’swhenInoticedtheothersstaringatme.Iwonderiftheyallhadastoughatimeasme?Ilovethatplaceandwanttogoback!
Nextevent
Beginning
TheLiteracyShed© 2018
Planningadiaryentry
Ending
• Firstperson• Pasttense• Timeconjunctions• Chronologicalorder• Thoughtsandfeelings
Thoughtsandfeelings
Thoughtsandfeelings
Thoughtsandfeelings
DearDiary,
TadeoLiteracyShedclipandlink:https://www.literacyshed.com/the-egyptian-pyramids.html
Clip:(TheEgyptians)Tadeo JonesResource9b
Nextevent– enteringthetreasureroom,findingtreasure
Cunningly,Iusedmybookto…You’llneverbelievethisbut…
StraightawayIsaw…Then,Isawthetreasure…
Anyway…Besides…
Beginning– enteringthetomb,seeingthedoorsTodaywas…
AsIenteredthespookycrypt…Itwaspitchblackinthereso…Maybetoday,Iwouldfind…Suddenly,Iheard….Thethingis….
TheLiteracyShed© 2018
Planningadiaryentry
Ending– thechase,leavingthecrypt
Withoutwarning…Asquickasaflash…Justthen…Luckily…Finally…Iwonderif…
• Firstperson• Pasttense• Timeconjunctions• Chronologicalorder• Thoughtsandfeelings
Thoughtsandfeelings
Thoughtsandfeelings
Thoughtsandfeelings
DearDiary,
TadeoLiteracyShedclipandlink:https://www.literacyshed.com/the-egyptian-pyramids.html
Clip:(TheEgyptians)Tadeo JonesResource9c
Recommended