The Cherwell School English FacultyMock Exam Feedback 2011

Name: XXXXXXXXXXXXXXREADING SECTION

Question Wording Skills Score1 (Video) ‘List 4 things ...’ Find information 4/42 (Video) ‘Explain how....’ Find and explain 3/43 (Video) ‘Why does...’ Find and explain with inference 4/8

4 (Video) ‘How does the writer use language...’

Write about language 5/12

5 (Video) ‘Compare the ways the texts are presented...’

Write about presentationCompare the texts

9/12

My Total READING score: 25 /40My Targets for Reading

Linking phrases: use the sheets we've looked at to raise the quality of language that you use to describe techniques and their effects - all the 'lodge the idea in the reader's mind' phrases.

WRITING SECTION

Question Wording Score6 (Video) ‘Choose a place you know well and describe ...’ 12/167 (Video) ‘Write an article to persuade ...’ 17/24

My Total WRITING score: 29/40My Targets for Writing

Timing: aim to work much more quickly through the first half of the paper, to ensure that you have enough time to do developed Writing answers for questions 6 and 7.

Advanced sentence structures: use the video on Cherwell Online to revise advanced sentence structures, and avoid using so many exclamation marks at the ends of your sentences!!!!

My Total Exam Score: 54 /80

Next StepsOnce you are very clear what your stronger and weaker areas are, target your revision by using the revision videos on www.youtube.com/cherwellonline. Watch the films there, take notes on what you learn, and do the activities.