Mike, Stephanie and Jamie

Critiquing Zheenyar, Marcus and Patrice

Lip-synching

• I noticed that the lip-synching was strong throughout, however there was I believe there was one line that was less synchronised, that being ‘We called it off again last night but.’

• Other than that we say thumbs up to the lip-synching.

Composition and framing

The walls in the bottom of the shot add some nice symmetry to the shot and almost frame Patrice.

The colouring is also interesting for it is rather dark in the forefront and light in the background.

As some constructive criticism the angle is very standard and it could be more interesting if a stronger angle was chosen.

Once again the colouring is nice with the juxtaposition between light and shade.

Some possible improvements include that they also could have utilised an interesting angle

They could have not cut off the top of Poor Zhee’s head

Very similar to the last shot, it could have been interesting to see some variation.

The framing between the two trees is very interesting and produces a strong frame.

There is some very nice use of symmetry through the trees that makes a visually exciting shot

As we have stated with every other shot a more diverse angle could have been used to make it slightly more interesting.

All of the shots are framed in the middle of the camera, there could have been some alternative framing, perhaps some application of negative space