Movie trailer draft1

This draft mainly used as a template, to find a introduction and to give me what kind of editing I'm going to mainly use, also it pointed out things that I was missing from my trailer. So this draft goes straight into two characters talking/bragging about there self, which used fade in and fading out, also cuts between it giving you images of what will happen later on in the movie jumping in and out. This kept the attention of the viewers instead watching the same clip for 10 seconds because it begins to drag when you watch someone talk for a long time. Instead of just using the video to give you your own opinion of the character and what the movie trailer is, because some viewers like to know what the trailer is about that they are watching. So in my next draft I'm going to add title screens which tells you what is going on, how the characters are reacting, about the character and what the movie is about. I've also added a heart beat for back up, this keeps the viewers on edge. e.g. why is there a heart beat sound, why as it gone faster or slower, Is something going to happen. I cross faded into the next scene and cut down the talking because it goes on to long and made sure the words go together when cut. So people don't see the cut, the sudden change within the image of my character I've faded in and out of small clips covering up the cuts. I've also cut out the screaming because it made people laugh instead of reacting to it in a fearful way. But other then that I liked all the scenes and where they are placed, but the other things I would change is the clip with mask I like the dance scene and the music, it tells you about the characters, but it comes of story and takes away the scary tension, so I'm going to take that out. Also I'm going to take out the clip what doesn't work

Movie trailer draft2

Things I like:I like the use of still title screens because it gives you a underlining of what is going on and what the characters are like.The use of sound effects for example heart beats and screams.The cutting and cross fades.The use of clips jumping in and out so you don't see the drastic change in how the camera as moved.The clips showing both characters being upsetThe clips showing a bit of action but in slow motion, because the slowness gives it a more depress look, like this is not right, wish I could change it all.The end scene of the person walking in and a guy is on the floor lying there to finish of the trailer and how the mask hits the ground and makes a loud sound.

So in my finale draft I think I am going to keep all these things

Things I don't like:I think it should just be the mask with a black background and white mask.I the sound effect of the dead heart beat it stands out to much.I don't like how no loud drums have been used to grab the audiences attention.How the screen moves into the corner when they are talking in the start.I think some kind of music should play all the way through the trailer, until the last scene but come back in to finish it of.

So I am going to add these things in my finale draft.