Experimental Mural EvaluationThis is one of the first initial mural designs that was created by

Sara.

We thought that the mural looked empty and

boring, which lacked detail.

We wanted to include more colours to make the mural much more

interesting.

The mural did not include many instruments or

represent a multi faith community.

The instruments that are on there look as

though they have just been thrown in rather

than placed.

If we cut down on the musical notes, included

more instruments, show more of a multi

faith community it would dramatically improve the mural.

If a yellow background was painted on the

mural it would make it look more interesting

and not so blank.

We thought the idea of keyboard through the middle was good as it

drew the views attention to it.

Experimental Mural EvaluationAfter the comment on the other design Sara

went away and redrew the idea.

We thought about having different coloured hands to represent a multi faith

community.

We wanted to put music in a banner to make it

really stand out.

We didn’t like the CCC at the top and thought of

putting it under the music sigh.

It included more instruments and didn’t

look so empty.

It still needed a lot more colour and Varity

of things in it, particularly a different

colour background.We didn’t like the

person in the corner and thought we could

replace that with a large microphone.

The keyboard looks even better at and angle and with the

curves.