WRITING SHORT STORIES

A Short Story Should Include: . . . • setting details woven into the text

• development of at least one character through the

character’s words, thoughts, and actions and through the words of other characters and/or the writer.

• a problem/conflict which is developed as the story

(plot) progresses

• a resolution of that problem/conflict (climax)

• a conclusion (what happens after climax)

• snapshots (things for the reader to visualize)

• thoughtshots (characters’ thoughts)

• dialogue (optional)

Eight Ways to Reveal Characterby Dewey Hensley

Actions

Dialogue

Physical Description

Idiosyncracies

Objects/Possessions

Reactions

Thoughts

Background Information

Actions

Kevin whistled despite the loud rumble of the traffic and the car horns. He passed by the garbage on the sidewalk and continued to smile as he headed toward Cindy’s house. Nothing could erase that smile from his face, not even the coldness of the streets he calledhome.

Dialogue

“Stay where you are”I told him”and don´t turn around .” Then I closed my eyes and shot the gun twice.

Physical DescriptionOther guys walking through the hallway were taller and even more handsome, but there

was something about Billy Belaire..

IdiosyncraciesJunior tapped his fingertips against the table and looked at his watch constantly.

Objects/Possessions Michael touched the locket around his neck and rolled it between his fingers.

ReactionsTony’s words stung Laura. How could he break her heart?.

Tony watched the tears fill her eyes. Jeez, I hope I can make it to the gym on time.

Thoughts

He began to remember when he was a freshman in high school. The seniors always trying to play tricks on the freshman. He walked over to Jeff and Larry to tell them it was time to stop.