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How To Write AnEmail – Teen 5
3 Steps To Success
Plan
Write
Review
Planning StepsRead question carefully
Brainstorm ideas & useful expressions
Write a plan
Underline keywords You have received an email from your English-speaking friend, Jack, who is coming to visit your country with some friends. Write an email to Jack, answering his questions. Where are the best places to explore and things to see in your area? Should we take public transport or hire bikes? Are there any interesting museums or exhibitions to learn about your country? Join us if you can! Please write soon,Jack
Underline keywords You have received an email from your English-speaking friend, Jack, who is coming to visit your country with some friends. Write an email to Jack, answering his questions. Where are the best places to explore and things to see in your area? Should we take public transport or hire bikes? Are there any interesting museums or exhibitions to learn about your country? Join us if you can! Please write soon,Jack
PlanSalutation/Beginning Dear/Hi + name of the person
First ParagraphSay thanks for your friend’s letter, say what you’ve been doing & respond to their news
Main BodyAnswer all parts of the question.Think of specific details/extra information to include.
Last ParagraphMake an excuse – don’t be too abrupt. Say you hope the information you have given is useful.
Signing off/Ending
Best wishes/Regards – All the best – Take care – Love from + your name
PlanSalutation/Beginning Dear/Hi + name of the person
First ParagraphSay thanks for your friend’s letter, say what you’ve been doing & respond to their news
Main BodyAnswer all parts of the question.Think of specific details/extra information to include.
Last ParagraphMake an excuse – don’t be too abrupt. Say you hope the information you have given is useful.
Signing off/Ending
Best wishes/Regards – All the best – Take care – Love from + your name
Main BodyAnswer all parts of the question.
Think of specific details/extra information to include.
best places to explore and things to see in your area
Instow – fishing village
public transport or hire bikes Hire bikes - cheaper & more fun
Interesting museums or
exhibitions to learn about your country
History Museum – interesting, interactive displays, free & inventions exhibition
Join us if you can Only Saturday – got school
How Cambridge corrects
Communication AchievementOrganisation
Language
Content
ContentSalutation/Beginning
“The target reader is informed if content points and/or task requirements are addressed and appropriately developed.”
First Paragraph
Main Body
Last Paragraph
Signing off/Ending
ContentSalutation/Beginning Dear/Hi + name of the person
First ParagraphSay thanks for your friend’s letter, say what you’ve been doing & respond to their news
Main BodyAnswer all parts of the question.Think of specific details/extra information to include.
Last ParagraphMake an excuse – don’t be too abrupt. Say you hope the information you have given is useful.
Signing off/Ending
Best wishes/Regards – All the best – Take care – Love from + your name
Salutation/Beginning
“Conventions of the communicative task include such things as genre, format, register, and function.”
“Communicative purpose refers to the communicative requirements as set out in the task, e.g. make a complaint, suggest alternatives.”
First Paragraph
Main Body
Last Paragraph
Signing off/Ending
Communication Achievement
Communication AchievementSalutation/Beginning Dear/Hi + name of the person
First ParagraphSay thanks for your friend’s letter, say what you’ve been doing & respond to their news
Main BodyAnswer all parts of the question.Think of specific details/extra information to include.
Last ParagraphMake an excuse – don’t be too abrupt. Say you hope the information you have given is useful.
Signing off/Ending
Best wishes/Regards – All the best – Take care – Love from + your name
LanguageSalutation/Beginning
“Everyday vocabulary comes up in common situations”
“Less common lexis, vocabulary items that appear less often. These items often help to express ideas more succinctly and precisely. “ “Complex grammatical forms: noun clauses, relative and adverb clauses, subordination, passive forms, infinitives and modal forms, etc.”
First Paragraph
Main Body
Last Paragraph
Signing off/Ending
Writing StepsFollow your plan
Write in an informal style
Use useful expressions and topic vocabulary
Writing StepsFollow your plan
Write in an informal style
Use useful expressions and topic vocabulary
Content Organisation
Writing StepsFollow your plan
Write in an informal style
Use useful expressions and topic vocabulary
Content
Communication Achievement
Organisation
Writing StepsFollow your plan
Write in an informal style
Use useful expressions and topic vocabulary
Content
Communication Achievement
Language
Organisation
Salutation & 1st ParagraphHi Jack, It was great to hear from you. It’s really exciting that you’re coming over, I’m sure your friends will love it here. I wish I could have some time to relax instead of studying all day!
Says thanks for letter & respond to news.
Salutation & 1st ParagraphHi Jack, It was great to hear from you. It’s really exciting that you’re coming over, I’m sure your friends will love it here. I wish I could have some time to relax instead of studying all day!
Says thanks for letter & respond to news. Friendly tone!
Salutation & 1st ParagraphHi Jack, It was great to hear from you. It’s really exciting that you’re coming over, I’m sure your friends will love it here. I wish I could have some time to relax instead of studying all day!
Set expressions
Salutation & 1st ParagraphHi Jack, It was great to hear from you. It’s really exciting that you’re coming over, I’m sure your friends will love it here. I wish I could have some time to relax instead of studying all day!
Set expressions
Salutation & 1st ParagraphHi Jack, It was great to hear from you. It’s really exciting that you’re coming over, I’m sure your friends will love it here. I wish I could have some time to relax instead of studying all day!
Complex grammar
Salutation & 1st ParagraphHi Jack, It was great to hear from you. It’s really exciting that you’re coming over, I’m sure your friends will love it here. I wish I could have some time to relax instead of studying all day!
Complex grammar
2nd ParagraphTo answer you first question about what to do and visit, you may want to go to Instow - a picturesque, fishing village about 3 miles away. I think it would be a good idea to hire some bikes as It only takes 15 minutes to cycle there along the coastal road. It'll be cheaper and more fun than going by bus. Don’t forget to take your camera! Answer all parts of the
question. Best places to explore?
Public transport or hire bikes?
2nd ParagraphTo answer you first question about what to do and visit, you may want to go to Instow - a picturesque, fishing village about 3 miles away. I think it would be a good idea to hire some bikes as It only takes 15 minutes to cycle there along the coastal road. It'll be cheaper and more fun than going by bus. Don’t forget to take your camera! Best places to explore?Public transport or hire bikes?
2nd ParagraphTo answer you first question about what to do and visit, you may want to go to Instow - a picturesque, fishing village about 3 miles away. I think it would be a good idea to hire some bikes as It only takes 15 minutes to cycle there along the coastal road. It'll be cheaper and more fun than going by bus. Don’t forget to take your camera! Set expressions & good
vocabulary
2nd ParagraphTo answer you first question about what to do and visit, you may want to go to Instow - a picturesque, fishing village about 3 miles away. I think it would be a good idea to hire some bikes as It only takes 15 minutes to cycle there along the coastal road. It'll be cheaper and more fun than going by bus. Don’t forget to take your camera! Set expressions & good
vocabulary
2nd ParagraphTo answer you first question about what to do and visit, you may want to go to Instow - a picturesque, fishing village about 3 miles away. I think it would be a good idea to hire some bikes as It only takes 15 minutes to cycle there along the coastal road. It'll be cheaper and more fun than going by bus. Don’t forget to take your camera!
Friendly tone!
2nd ParagraphTo answer you first question about what to do and visit, you may want to go to Instow - a picturesque, fishing village about 3 miles away. I think it would be a good idea to hire some bikes as It only takes 15 minutes to cycle there along the coastal road. It'll be cheaper and more fun than going by bus. Don’t forget to take your camera!
Friendly tone!
3rd ParagraphI’ve managed to find some information about the History Museum, it sounds very interesting with lots of interactive displays. And, it’s free! Believe it or not, there’s a special exhibition of local inventions. You'll love it, you know you're such a geek!
Answer all parts of the question.
Interesting museums or exhibitions?
3rd ParagraphI’ve managed to find some information about the History Museum, it sounds very interesting with lots of interactive displays. And, it’s free! Believe it or not, there’s a special exhibition of local inventions. You'll love it, you know you're such a geek!
Interesting museums or exhibitions?
3rd ParagraphI’ve managed to find some information about the History Museum, it sounds very interesting with lots of interactive displays. And, it’s free! Believe it or not, there’s a special exhibition of local inventions. You'll love it, you know you're such a geek!
Set expressions & good vocabulary
3rd ParagraphI’ve managed to find some information about the History Museum, it sounds very interesting with lots of interactive displays. And, it’s free! Believe it or not, there’s a special exhibition of local inventions. You'll love it, you know you're such a geek!
Set expressions & good vocabulary
3rd ParagraphI’ve managed to find some information about the History Museum, it sounds very interesting with lots of interactive displays. And, it’s free! Believe it or not, there’s a special exhibition of local inventions. You'll love it, you know you're such a geek!
Friendly tone!
3rd ParagraphI’ve managed to find some information about the History Museum, it sounds very interesting with lots of interactive displays. And, it’s free! Believe it or not, there’s a special exhibition of local inventions. You'll love it, you know you're such a geek!
Friendly tone!
4th ParagraphI’d love to join you, but I'm only free on Saturday. I've got to go to school, I can't miss any classes.
Answer all parts of the question. Join us if you can!
4th ParagraphI’d love to join you, but I'm only free on Saturday. I've got to go to school, I can't miss any classes.
Join us if you can!
4th ParagraphI’d love to join you, but I'm only free on Saturday. I've got to go to school, I can't miss any classes.
Set expressions & good vocabulary
4th ParagraphI’d love to join you, but I'm only free on Saturday. I've got to go to school, I can't miss any classes.
Set expressions & good vocabulary
Last paragraphAnyway, I’d better stop now and get on with my revising. I hope this information is useful – let me know if you need anything.
Don’t be too abrupt!
Last paragraphAnyway, I’d better stop now and get on with my revising. I hope this information is useful – let me know if you need anything.
Don’t be too abrupt!
Last paragraphAnyway, I’d better stop now and get on with my revising. I hope this information is useful – let me know if you need anything.
Friendly tone!
Last paragraphAnyway, I’d better stop now and get on with my revising. I hope this information is useful – let me know if you need anything.
Set expressions
Last paragraphAnyway, I’d better stop now and get on with my revising. I hope this information is useful – let me know if you need anything.
Set expressions
Signing off/EndingSee you soon,Hermione
Set expression
Signing off/EndingSee you soon,Hermione
Set expression
Signing off/EndingSee you soon,Hermione
Set expression
Reviewing StepsSpelling
Vocabulary & useful expressions
Grammar