Evil Ellie

By George carter

Chapter 1-NarniaStanding by the burning fire ,Max (a small shy boy) who was becoming more and more braver about being picked to go on the quest.Shakes ran down the spine of his back and his eyes darted like a jet .A couple hours later he waited for the king to explain evrything.

You have a choice yes or no! yes max decided I am happy the wise king explained but why cant you pick somebody else because you’re the only one who is old enough to do this challenge can you get the fire-ice ball.

Despite feeling scared, max knew he couldn’t back down doing this quest he said I wlll beat this challenge .

Chapter 2-Freaky forest

Meanwhile,max met the limit of the freaky forest , he started to shake and tremble GRRRRR! What was that noise ? The noise was like a meanicing tiger.

Pacing forwads, a tear of fire hit him.Spit there it was again he was aproaching the forest he ses a 4 headed dragon in the distance BOOM the dragon is like a storm of lightning.after being chased he met some crosroads should he go left or right?

Chapter 3-right

Having decided to take the right path , max ventured on his journey –he was steps closer to getting the fire ice ball. Before long, he met the river(a bubbling river) which was his least fear. SPLASH! He was under the water. He went under in a tunnel .

In the corner of his eye he saw a golden hilt on top o a sword, he pulled it out of the wall, water spiders were storming everywhere he saw bones floating as he floated back up he said I can beat evil ellie.

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Chapter 3 leftHaving decided to take the left path,max ventured on his journey –he was steps closer to getting the fire ice ball.before long,he met a cave –a horror cave-which was his worst fear. feeling shocked, he tip toed in to the cave.

In the corner of his eye,he saw a golden hilt on top of a sword , he pulled it out of a rock. Meanwhile spiders were running like tigers. He knew he would deafeat evil ellie.

Chapter 4

After a while, tired Max finally he reached the rohan castle. He couldn’t wait. CLICK! PHEW! It was open he was inside Max went to the magnificent shiny dungeons .

Suddenly, max was ready” you will never beat me.”SWOOSH! WING! SQUINK! One more hit to the head and kaboom he fell to the ground like a plane crashing.

Dertermanation flooded his body he ran to the dungeon there it was a fire ice ball.

Chapter 5Slowly , walking down the path he had the fire ice ball and he ran out of this castle , stormed through the crossroads and skipped the forest , evry one was cheering ad congratulating him also the king said well done .

Besides , going to the forest he threw the fire ice ball all it did was melt te 4 headed dragon and he was balling and screaming. Despite, saving lives evry body was so impressed also he saved the land.