英検準１級ライティング対策虎の巻

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(16年度からの新試験についての対策法 )

1. 準１級ライティングについて1.1 求められていること1.2 時間配分について

2. 構成と要素2.1 書き方１：パラグラフの構成2.2 書き方２：パラグラフの各要素（イントロ）2.3 書き方３：パラグラフの各要素（ボディ）2.4 書き方４：パラグラフの各要素（結論）

3. １文ずつの英作文について3.1 求められる語彙の難易度3.2 求められる文法の難易度

目次

1. 準１級ライティングについて

1.1 求められていること

16 年度改定は IELTS/TOEFL を意識

海外大学院留学等準備にスムーズに移行可能な改定

Eメール形式エッセイ形式

今まで これから

100 語 120~150 語

1.1 求められていること

に使える時間最大ﾗｲﾃｨﾝｸﾞ 20 分

準備時間を考えると、定型の型を使うのが賢い

文法・語彙(15 分 )

長文 (55 分 )

ﾗｲﾃｨﾝｸﾞ(20 分 )

20分で書くには…内容推敲 2.5分執筆　 15分チェック　 2.5分

2. 構成と要素

問題見本を使い解説

(参考）日本英語検定協会 HPよりhttps://www.eiken.or.jp/eiken/info/2015/pdf/20151225_pressrelease_1601renewal.pdf

【出題】Write an essay on the given TOPICUse TWO of the POINTS below to support your answerStructure: Introduction, main body , and conclusionSuggested Length: 120-150 words

TOPICAgree or disagree:Small, independent shops and businesses can survive in modern society

POINTSCost / Customer service / The economy / Traditional skills

賛成？ or 反対？ ( スタンス、主張 )

なぜ賛成か反対かを、その理由を２つ選び説明

問題見本を使い解説

(参考）https://www.eiken.or.jp/eiken/info/2015/pdf/20151225_pressrelease_1601renewal.pdf

【模範解答】 I agree with the idea that small, independent shops and businesses will be able to survive in modern society, and I have two reasons to support my opinion.

To begin with, the service at small, independent shops is usually far better than the service at 　larger businesses and chain stores. Independent shops are usually more closely connected to their communities, and their staff members often know their customers personally and have a good idea of what they are looking for.

Secondly, many independent shops are responsible for producing traditionally made goods. The skills to make these products have been passed down over generations, and consumers today still appreciate the quality and craftsmanship of the goods that these businesses sell.

It is for these reasons that I believe people will continue to use small, independent businesses.

４つのパラグラフで構成する

2.1 書き方１：パラグラフの構成

【模範解答】 I agree with the idea that small, independent shops and businesses will be able to survive in modern society, and I have two reasons to support my opinion.

To begin with, the service at small, independent shops is usually far better than the service at 　larger businesses and chain stores. Independent shops are usually more closely connected to their communities, and their staff members often know their customers personally and have a good idea of what they are looking for.

Secondly, many independent shops are responsible for producing traditionally made goods. The skills to make these products have been passed down over generations, and consumers today still appreciate the quality and craftsmanship of the goods that these businesses sell.

It is for these reasons that I believe people will continue to use small, independent businesses.

合格点を最短・最小の労力で狙う =考えよりこの型を使う

パラグラフ１ : イントロ

パラグラフ 2: ボディ１

パラグラフ 3: ボディ２

パラグラフ 4: 結論

イントロのポイント

2.2 書き方２：パラグラフの各要素（イントロ）

【模範解答】 I agree with the idea that small, independent shops and businesses will be able to survive in modern society, and I have two reasons to support my opinion.

To begin with, the service at small, independent shops is usually far better than the service at 　larger businesses and chain stores. Independent shops are usually more closely connected to their communities, and their staff members often know their customers personally and have a good idea of what they are looking for.

Secondly, many independent shops are responsible for producing traditionally made goods. The skills to make these products have been passed down over generations, and consumers today still appreciate the quality and craftsmanship of the goods that these businesses sell.

It is for these reasons that I believe people will continue to use small, independent businesses.

イントロの役割は、「結論の提示」と「導入・つなぎ」

パラグラフ１ : イントロ

 (1) I agree with the idea that small, independent shops and businesses will be able to survive in modern society, (2) and I have two reasons to support my opinion.

  【型のポイント】(1) 必ず自分のスタンス・主張 (賛成・反対 )を明確にします(2) 次のパラグラフへのつなぎ言葉やテーマの背景について１文入れます（準１級では例のようにつなぎ言葉を１つ覚えて常にそれを使う =語法・文法ミスを避ける）

ボディ１のポイント

2.3 書き方３：パラグラフの各要素（ボディ）

【模範解答】 I agree with the idea that small, independent shops and businesses will be able to survive in modern society, and I have two reasons to support my opinion.

To begin with, the service at small, independent shops is usually far better than the service at 　larger businesses and chain stores. Independent shops are usually more closely connected to their communities, and their staff members often know their customers personally and have a good idea of what they are looking for.

Secondly, many independent shops are responsible for producing traditionally made goods. The skills to make these products have been passed down over generations, and consumers today still appreciate the quality and craftsmanship of the goods that these businesses sell.

It is for these reasons that I believe people will continue to use small, independent businesses.

Topic+detailの２文で構成、頭のつなぎ言葉、トピックの明示

パラグラフ 2: 　ボディ１

(1) To begin with, (2) the (3) service at small, independent shops is usually far better than the service

at　 larger businesses and chain stores.

(4) Independent shops are usually more closely connected to their communities, and their staff members often know their customers personally and have a good idea of what

they are looking for.

  【型のポイント】(1) Firstly, secondly等パラグラフの頭に構成を示すつなぎ言葉を入れる(2) Topic sentence: 4つのトピックから選んだものについて理由を明示(3) 分かり易さ重視で、トピックから選んだキーワードは必ず入れる(4) Supporting detail: トピックセンテンスを経験や例などでサポート

ボディ 2 のポイント

2.3 書き方３：パラグラフの各要素（ボディ）

【模範解答】 I agree with the idea that small, independent shops and businesses will be able to survive in modern society, and I have two reasons to support my opinion.

To begin with, the service at small, independent shops is usually far better than the service at 　larger businesses and chain stores. Independent shops are usually more closely connected to their communities, and their staff members often know their customers personally and have a good idea of what they are looking for.

Secondly, many independent shops are responsible for producing traditionally made goods. The skills to make these products have been passed down over generations, and consumers today still appreciate the quality and craftsmanship of the goods that these businesses sell.

It is for these reasons that I believe people will continue to use small, independent businesses.

ボディは 1,2ともに基本的に全く同じ構成で良い

パラグラフ 3: 　ボディ 2

(1) Secondly, (2)many independent shops are responsible for producing (3) traditionally made goods.

(4) The skills to make these products have been passed down over generations, and consumers today still

appreciate the quality and craftsmanship of the goods that these businesses sell.

  【型のポイント】(1) Firstly, secondly等パラグラフの頭に構成を示すつなぎ言葉を入れる(2) Topic sentence: 4つのトピックから選んだものについて理由を明示(3) 分かり易さ重視で、トピックから選んだキーワードは必ず入れる(4) Supporting detail: トピックセンテンスを経験や例などでサポート

結論のポイント

2.4 書き方４：パラグラフの各要素（結論）

【模範解答】 I agree with the idea that small, independent shops and businesses will be able to survive in modern society, and I have two reasons to support my opinion.

To begin with, the service at small, independent shops is usually far better than the service at 　larger businesses and chain stores. Independent shops are usually more closely connected to their communities, and their staff members often know their customers personally and have a good idea of what they are looking for.

Secondly, many independent shops are responsible for producing traditionally made goods. The skills to make these products have been passed down over generations, and consumers today still appreciate the quality and craftsmanship of the goods that these businesses sell.

It is for these reasons that I believe people will continue to use small, independent businesses.

ボディは 1,2ともに基本的に全く同じ構成で良いパラグラフ 4: 結論

(1) It is for these reasons that (2)I believe people will continue to use small, independent businesses.

  【型のポイント】(1) 解答例のようにパラグラフの頭に結論を示すつなぎ言葉を入れる(2) イントロでも触れたが、再度自分のスタンス・主張 (賛成・反対 )を明確にします

まとめと練習方法

1. 型、つなぎ言葉、構成を丸暗記2. 日本語で、型通りに書けるか？確認3. 制限時間 ( ２０分 ) 以内で英語で反復練習

3. １文ごとの英作文について

模範解答の語彙レベルを計測

3.1 求められる語彙の難易度準２級レベルの語彙を「使いこなす」ことが重要

(参考 )Word Level Checker　 http://www.someya-net.com/wlc/index_J.html

96% が準２級以下1. 基本 1000 語 :75%2. 2~3000 語 : 21%

【まとめと対策】• 基本の語彙ですばやく文章を作る力を鍛える• 瞬間英作文の反復練習• VOAの記事をまとめる練習

【解析結果】

模範解答の文法とレベル

3.2 求められる文法の難易度

【模範解答】 I agree with the idea that small, independent shops and businesses will be able to survive in modern society, and I have two reasons to support my opinion. (28 words)

To begin with, the service at small, independent shops is usually far better than the service at 　larger businesses and chain stores. (22 words)

Independent shops are usually more closely connected to their communities, and their staff members often know their customers personally and have a good idea of what they are looking for. (30 words)

Secondly, many independent shops are responsible for producing traditionally made goods. (11 words)The skills to make these products have been passed down over generations, and consumers today still appreciate the quality and craftsmanship of the goods that these businesses sell. (28 words)

It is for these reasons that I believe people will continue to use small, independent businesses. (16 words)

関係代名詞 (that)や等位接続詞 (andのみ )で 1文平均15語

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