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(1.) Prevent overuse oftraditional textbook phrases
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? One can develop, expand, and
debug the program easily in the
future.
The program can beeasily developed, expanded, and
debugged in the future.
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? It is very difficult to find for sheet
bending operations a suitable
deformation limit.
Finding an adequate(appropriate) deformation limit
for sheet bending operations is
quite difficult.
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( 2 .) Make your intended meaningmore visually accessible
:
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? Because of an extremely short transfer time
and high exposure sensitivity of the camera,
there was almost no interval as takingpictures of moving objects.
Almost no interval betweenphotographing moving objects was
allowed owing to an extremely shorttransfer time and the camera's high
exposure sensitivity.
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( 3. ) Avoid overemphasis ofclauses involving time
:
(a)(b) (c)
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? Currently, there are more than 50
varieties of bulk pharmaceuticals
produced in Taiwan.
More than fifty varietiesof bulk pharmaceuticals are
produced in Taiwan.
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( 4. ) Avoid overemphasis of
clauses involving comparison
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In comparison with the
conventional method, the proposed
method spends less computationaltime.
The proposed methodspends less computational time
than the conventional method.
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( 5. ) Avoid overemphasis of
"domains.
(a)
(b)
(c)
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? In order to determine the acoustic
pressure due to an ultrasonic
transducer, we must solve thegeneral equation.
Determining the acousticpressure requires (necessitates)
solving the general equation.
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? If we wish to carry out
environmental protection measures
that internalize the resulting socialcosts, we must consider using
market mechanisms to lead the
people and industry.
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Implementing(Promulgating) environmentalprotection measures that
internalize the subsequent socialcosts hinges on effectively usingmarket mechanisms to directindividuals (the general public)and industry.
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? In Article 18 of the Waste
Treatment Law, it is stipulated
that. .
Article 18 of the WasteTreatment Law stipulates that. . .
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( 6. ) Use transition to linksentences and promote themanuscript's flow
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Common sentence linkers includethe following:
Under those circumstances,
For such a reason,In such a case,In light of above developments,
As mentioned earlier,If this above condition is satisfied,
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According to those results,Above results suggestthat. . .This finding (event, fact,phenomenon, occurrence)reveals that. . .
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( 7. ) Provide variety in verb
form and selection
(a)
(b)
(c)
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? Our results fit very good with those
of Wu et al.
Our results closelycorrespond to (correlate well
with) those of Wu et al.
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? Recycling has to be practiced more.
Recycling must beadhered to more stringently.
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? Companies see big results in
cutting air pollution.
Companies witnesssignificant progress in
alleviating air pollution.
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( 8.) Avoid excessively long
sentence
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:(a) (b)
(c)
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? Through numerous discussions by
representatives from industry, government,
academic and research organizations, the"Inspection Table for the Standard of Good
Manufacturing Practice on
Pharmaceuticals" suitable to local
condition as well as acceptable tointernational standards was drafted in July
1996.
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Through numerousdiscussions by representatives fromindustry, government, academicand research organizations, the"Inspection Table for the Standardof Good Manufacturing Practice onPharmaceuticals"
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was drafted in July 1995. Thedocument was deemed
appropriate (adequate") for localconditions as well as acceptableto international standards.
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? Since the climate of Orchid Island
is relatively hot and humid
compared to Taiwan, the researchteam from the research Institute
decided to return them to their
native habitat on Orchid Island to
allow the butterflies to besuccessfully born.
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The climate of Orchid
Island is hotter and more humidthan that of Taiwan, accounting forwhy the team from the research
Institute decided to return thebutterflies to their native habitat onOrchid Island for their successful
birth.
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( 9. ) Avoid overuse of
First person
:(a )
(b)
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? We must emphasize the development and
introduction of technologies that are both
environmentally friendly and able to satisfythe needs of humankind.
Developing and introducingtechnologies that are both
environmentally friendly and able tosatisfy the needs of humankind must be
emphasized.
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? From the literature having been
mentioned, we can find that the
factors which influence impactpressure include impact velocity,
weight, bottom area and bottom
edge.
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Above literatureindicates that impact velocity,weight, bottom area and
bottom edge influence impactpressure.
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( 10. ) Separate writing process
from the revision process
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