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Would You Rather… Not be able to bend your knees or Not be able to bend your elbows?

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Would You Rather…

Not be able to bend your kneesor

Not be able to bend your elbows?

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Summary and Paraphrase

Reading Quiz for week 3

BA2 due Mon.

Reading 4 due Wed.

Author research

paragraph

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Reading 3 Quiz

1. Make a list of nearly everything you’ve done in the last 24 hours.

2. Trade with a neighbor3. Use your reading to write a summary

of that person’s last 24 hours.4. Return it and check to see how well

you represented your neighbor.

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What is a summary?A condense version of the main idea and important details of a piece of writing or another work.

*Chapter 12 f 3 in ehandbook *Page 127-128 in book

+•Supports•Background•Familiarize•Condense

--•Opinion•Forget to cite•Lose meaning

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Want an example?

After being forcibly transported far from home, a young girl kills the first person she encounters and joins up with three other desperate individuals. She will  kill again before achieving her goal of returning to her homeland.

Dorothy Gale is swept away to a magical land in a tornado and embarks on a quest to see the Wizard who can help her return home.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-WdC4DaYIeQ

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TbQm5doF_Uc

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Example Summary:

Malcolm Gladwell argues that success is not the direct result of innate talent, but instead that of hard work in his essay, “The 10,000-Hour Rule.” Gladwell claims that a minimum of 10,000 hours of practice is needed before “good” success turns into “great” success. He identifies two main factors to support this claim. First he demonstrates how great musicians practice much harder and longer than average musicians at a renown music academy. Secondly, he examines how famous people such as The Beatles and Bill Gates devoted much of their lives in preparing for their success. In both examples, each person contributed thousands of hours of practice.

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What is a paraphrase?A restatement of the original passage’s points by putting someone else’s thoughts in your words.

*Chapter 12 f 2 in ehandbook *Page 58-59 in book

+

• Main points and details

• Clarify complex ideas

--

• Replace• Mimic • Forget to cite

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The adventuresome Cat in the Hat runs amok while Mother is away, leaving a horrible mess for the two astonished children who are so well behaved. The remarkable qualities of the story are its rhyme--done with only 223 words--and its quirky illustrations that are as silly as the tale itself.

The crazy Cat in the Hatruns wild while Mother isaway, leaving a mess forthe two surprised childrenwho are so well behaved.The remarkable qualities ofthe story are its rhymedone with only 223 wordsand its illustrations that areas silly as the tale itself.

How about some examples?

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The adventuresome Cat in the Hat runs amok while Mother is away, leaving a horrible mess for the two astonished children who are so well behaved. The remarkable qualities of the story are its rhyme--done with only 223 words--and its quirky illustrations that are as silly as the tale itself.

The crazy Cat in the Hatruns wild while Mother isaway, leaving a mess forthe two surprised childrenwho are so well behaved.The remarkable qualities ofthe story are its rhymedone with only 223 wordsand its illustrations that areas silly as the tale itself.

How about some examples?

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How about some examples?The adventuresome Cat in the Hat runs amok while Mother is away, leaving a horrible mess for the two astonished children who are so well behaved. The remarkable qualities of the story are its rhyme--done with only 223 words--and its quirky illustrations that are as silly as the tale itself.

The Cat in the Hat has many qualities that appeal to children. Using only 223 words and a catchy rhyme scheme, Dr. Seuss wrote the story of the naughty Cat in the Hat who gets himself into trouble. Children enjoy the adventurous story, and they can also learn to read because of the rhyming words.

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Page 572 has examples of BA2: Summary and Paraphrase

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A short note on plagiarism

Plagiarius Plagiarism

Latin English

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How and when to cite:

• Direct quote, paraphrase, summary

• (lastname page#)• Turnitin.com

In-text(parenthetical)

• In Work/s Cited page• www.easybib.com or Purdue

OwlBibliography

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So, what does in-text citation look like?

Gladwell says that “practice isn’t the thing you do once you’re good. It’s the thing you do that makes you good” (559).

My favorite take away is that practicing is not just the hard work that goes into improving, but it should be considered the act that makes you good at what you do(Gladwell 559).

Gladwell argues that a Mozart wasn’t a great musician until he practiced for 10,000 hours (559).

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Work Cited

Gladwell, Malcolm. “The 10,000-Hour Rule.” First-Year

Writing in the Disciplines Eighth Custom Ed.

Boston: Pearson, 2014-2015. 557-562. Print.

How about the bibliographic page?

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BA2 Part 1: summarize

a selected essay from the first three

in chapter 16.

Part 2: paraphrase one paragraph

from that essay.

GRADING RULES• You MUST paraphrase one of the two paragraphs listed for the

chosen article.• You MUST paraphrase the same article that you summarize.• Summaries MUST have the article title, purpose, and author

somewhere in them and must be about 150-200 words.• NO DIRECT QUOTES ARE ALLOWED. • Include a works cited at the bottom.

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Homework

1. BA2 – pick ONE essay!*Use specified paragraphs ONLY for part 2Dewey: p. 463, pp. 27 OR p. 464, pp. 34Steele: p. 453, pp. 11 OR p. 455, pp. 16Emerson: p. 473, pp. 18 OR p. 474, pp. 21

2. Reading 4FYW: 67-97Ehandbook: Ch. 7, Reading Critically, & Reading and Writing about Text Audio Lesson

3. Author research paragraph (5-6 sentences)*Bring to class next week