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Final shooting script for my thesis film.
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FADE IN:
INT. EMPTY BAR - DAY
Dark wood and leather furniture. Well kept, but not
spotless. Light streams in through window with partially
open blinds. Ambitious KENT (late 20s)-dark hair, cold
eyes-and humble ALLEN (late 20s)-dark hair, soft eyes-sit
across from the formidable yet gentle BOSS (mid 50s) at
table. Kent and Allen wear dress shirts and ties. The Boss
is in full suit.
BOSS
You will be my go-to boys when I
need things done and done
well. When I need things done
clean. (Beat) Loyalty, that’s
something you can’t buy. Even if
you could, you wouldn’t want
to. Your father was a good
man. Loyal to his friends. I
expect the same from his sons.
Kent, Allen nod, stand.
ALLEN
We won’t let you down.
BOSS
Sit.
Boss waits for brothers to sit before proceeding.
BOSS
(To Kent)
Can I trust Allen?
KENT
Of course.
BOSS
(To Allen)
Can I trust Kent?
Allen hesitates for a split second.
ALLEN
Yes.
BOSS
If I find out you’re cheating me,
I’ll forget how much your father
did for me.
2.
KENT
You’ve got nothing to worry about.
Boss leans back, folds his hands over his stomach.
BOSS
A man was walking home on a
freezing cold night. He found a
stray dog, freezing to death on the
side of the road. The man felt
sorry for the dog and carried it
home with him. When he got home,
the man put the dog on the floor
near the fire. The dog turned to
the man’s wife and child with a
hungry snarl. The man promptly
buried a fire poker in the dog’s
skull.
Boss leans forward, places his still-folded hands on arm
rests.
BOSS
I’ve taken you into my home and
into my business. Don’t make me
regret it.
The Boss leans back, satisfied with his warning.
BOSS
Now, there has been word one of
Baptiste’s dealers likes to hang
out around 5th and
Williamson. Check it out. And if
he comes around, kindly let him
know he’s far from home.
EXT. ENTRANCE TO BAR - CONTINUOUS
Brothers exit front door. Allen spots self-assured ISABEL
(mid 20s) as he exits. She sees him, smiles. He reaches
out, grabs her hand.
ISABEL
How’d it go?
ALLEN
I can’t wait to show your dad what
I can do.
3.
ISABEL
You’re going to impress him. I know
you will.
Isabel kisses his cheek. They cross the parking lot
together.
ISABEL
Is Kent going to hold up his end?
ALLEN
Yea. Why?
ISABEL
I don’t know. He always just seems
to try too hard.
Allen stops.
ALLEN
What do you mean?
ISABEL
He always has to be better than
everyone else. Especially you.
ALLEN
Well, we’re working together, so we
should be fine.
ISABEL
Okay. Good.
EXT. 5TH AND WILLIAMSON - LATE AFTERNOON
Brothers lean against wall. Kent, Allen see shaggy JOHNSON
(20s) approaching on sidewalk corner. Kent taps his brother
and crosses to Johnson with Allen in tow.
KENT
What are you doing here?
JOHNSON
You guys like to party?
Kent steps uncomfortably close to Johnson. He reaches
inside Johnson’s jacket and yanks out a paper bag.
JOHNSON
Piss off. Who do you think--
4.
ALLEN
You’re a long way from home, buddy.
JOHNSON
Fine, I’ll go. Just give me my--
KENT
Uh uh. Call it an insurance policy
against us breaking all the bones
in your body.
Johnson makes another lunge for the cash bag. Kent whips
out a folding knife, bringing it to Johnson’s face.
KENT
If you’re not gone before I take my
next breath, I’m going to take your
face as a souvenir.
Johnson throws up his hands defensively and backs away. He
is compromising, not frightened. The brothers retreat down
the alley. Allen points to the bag of cash.
ALLEN
What are you gonna do with that?
KENT
Take good care of it.
ALLEN
But...stealing from Baptiste?
KENT
Not stealing from him. Stealing
from his idiot dealer.
ALLEN
Okay. Just--
KENT
Be cool, okay?
Kent’s phone RINGS. He checks it, answers.
KENT
Hey sexy. (Pause) What’s up?
(Pause) Are you free later? (Pause)
Swing by my place around 7.
ALLEN
Who was that?
Kent looks at his brother as if Allen should already know
the answer.
5.
KENT
Delilah.
ALLEN
She’s a nice girl. You should take
her out sometime.
KENT
When I need advice from you, I’ll
ask for it.
ALLEN
I’m just saying. Might be nice to
get out. Spend some of that money
you just got.
KENT
Oh, I know how to spend my
share. Don’t worry about that.
The brothers turn, look out at the alley.
INT. KENT’S DEN - NIGHT
One lamp lighting mostly bare room. Couch, floor neat and
sterile with pillows, blankets, magazines. Kent and
manipulative DELILAH (late 20s) sitting on couch, rigidly
cuddling. Kent wears white t-shirt, dark jeans. Delilah
wears skinny jeans, red top. Light flickers from the TV.
KENT
You’re right. That extra 10 inches
makes a difference.
DELILAH
I told you. You’ll never be able
to watch on a little TV again.
KENT
Yea, well I’m not planning on
downsizing at this point.
DELILAH
Where do you want to go eat?
KENT
I don’t care.
DELILAH
You must have some idea what you
want.
Kent shrugs.
6.
DELILAH
There’s this new Japanese place on
10th I want to try.
KENT
I really shouldn’t be down past
7th.
DELILAH
Come on.
KENT
Delilah...I can’t.
DELILAH
This is ridiculous.
KENT
There’s plenty of nice restaurants
on this side of town.
DELILAH
I hate that stupid rule.
KENT
The two families get along as long
as we all stay on our own
turf. It’s for our own good.
DELILAH
It’s for your own good. I can go
wherever I want.
KENT
Let’s just go to Rico’s.
DELILAH
God, I’m so sick of this.
KENT
Well, what do you want me to do?
Quit? Yea, that’s a good idea.
DELILAH
Well something has to change--
KENT
I’m working on it, okay?
DELILAH
I’m not going to limit my life for
you.
7.
KENT
I promise. Sooner than later.
Delilah lays her head on Kent’s shoulder.
DELILAH
I don’t want to look back and ask
why we didn’t take any risks. I
don’t want to be stuck here
forever. We deserve more.
Delilah looks up to make sure Kent heard her.
EXT. 5TH AND WILLIAMSON - DUSK
Allen sees Johnson dealing to scruffy COLLEGE KID
(20s). Allen walks toward Johnson, but Johnson notices and
runs away. Allen pursues.
EXT. BACK ALLEY - DUSK (CONTINUOUS)
Allen rounds the corner, nearly running into Kent.
ALLEN
Whoa. Hey. Did you see, uhhh...
Allen looks behind Kent.
KENT
See who?
ALLEN
That dealer. That guy who we
scared off the other day.
KENT
Oh him? Nope. No one down there.
ALLEN
You sure? I could have sworn he--
KENT
Too young to be losing it, bro.
ALLEN
Guess I’m just paranoid.
KENT
Why don’t you head back. I’ll keep
an eye out for him.
8.
Allen retreats. Kent turns back down the alley. He
approaches Johnson behind a dumpster, pulling out a tooth
pick to chew on.
JOHNSON
I don’t know why you did that--
KENT
Because now you owe me.
JOHNSON
I don’t understand--
KENT
You keep dealing around here, and
it’s a problem for everyone. You
cut me in, and I’ll protect you.
JOHNSON
Screw you. I don’t need--
Kent opens his jacket to show his gun. Johnson looks.
JOHNSON
Be cool.
KENT
We can do this my way, or let the
bosses handle it.
Johnson looks away, frustrated.
KENT
It’s a good neighborhood. They
like to spend here.
JOHNSON
Fine.
Johnson shakes Kent’s hand reluctantly.
INT. KENT’S DEN - NIGHT
Kent pours money out of paper bag. Delilah sits on couch,
eyes lit, hungry. She grabs a stack of cash.
DELILAH
What do we do with it?
KENT
Whatever we want.
9.
DELILAH
Maybe a house? Over in Raintree?
KENT
We’re not there yet.
DELILAH
But we will be.
KENT
I’m good at what I do.
DELILAH
And you should be rewarded for
doing such a good job.
Delilah leans in and pushes Kent down on the couch.
EXT. LOCAL COFFEE SHOP - NIGHT
Allen and Isabel walk down street with coffee.
ALLEN
How many shots of espresso did you
get in that?
ISABEL
Don’t want to fall asleep on you.
ALLEN
I could always carry you home.
Isabel takes Allen’s hand.
ISABEL
You know what I keep thinking
about?
ALLEN
What?
ISABEL
That one time as kids when your dad
dropped you and Kent off at our
house. I was a princess and you
two were my knights. Remember
that?
ALLEN
Kind of. Yeah.
10.
ISABEL
I know it’s cheesy, but it would
still be nice to have a fairy tale
ending.
ALLEN
It is a little cliche, but it
sounds nice.
The couple walks hand in hand down street.
INT. EMPTY BAR - NIGHT
Boss folds hands. Kent chews on tooth pick.
BOSS
Years of peace. I don’t want to
start a war. This guy...what’s his
name--
KENT
Johnson--
BOSS
--just can’t take a hint?
ALLEN
Maybe this is a bigger move by the
Baptiste family?
BOSS
No, Baptiste has no idea. Says the
guy is acting all on his own. I
believe him.
KENT
If this guy is on his own, then he
isn’t protected by the family.
BOSS
(To Kent)
Take care of this. No mess. There
was once a man sitting
outdoors. An ant crawled up the
man’s leg and bit him. The man
slapped his leg trying to kill the
ant, but the ant had already
escaped. The man’s leg now stung
from both the bite and the
slap. Don’t overreact to a small
problem.
11.
KENT
You can count on me.
Kent smiles slightly, straightens jacket before exiting.
INT. KENT’S DEN - NIGHT
Kent thumbs through a stack of bills. Delilah sits next to
him, rubbing his back. Kent chews tooth pick.
KENT
Not sure how long we can keep this
up. Boss is getting suspicious.
DELILAH
(Whispering in his ear)
Whatever it takes, my hero.
Kent grabs his leather jacket, wool-knit cap, and his gun
before crossing to door. Delilah catches him at the door.
DELILAH
Be careful. I don’t know what I’d
do without you.
KENT
The hero always comes back.
EXT. 5TH AND WILLIAMSON - NIGHT
Kent and Allen approach the alley from the street. Johnson
stands with his back to them.
KENT
Let me handle this.
Allen turns to watch the alley. Kent grabs Johnson and pins
him against the wall, keeping his voice down. Allen starts
to slowly approach.
KENT
It’s getting too hot man. You need
to clear out of here.
JOHNSON
(Too loudly)
You said you’d handle this.
KENT
Shut up! (Beat) I will. You just
need to disappear for a while.
12.
JOHNSON
I was doing fine til you showed up.
KENT
Until I saved you, you mean. (Beat)
You’re mine.
JOHNSON
Nawww. You’re on you’re own. I’m
out. You can take your deal and
shove it. I’m gonna tell Baptiste
you made me deal over here--
On "made me," Kent whips out his pistol and FIRES into
Johnson’s abdomen before Johnson can return
fire. Allen rushes up as Kent fires three more
times. Allen grabs Kent’s shoulder and whips him around.
ALLEN
What are you doing?
KENT
Cleaning up.
ALLEN
Yeah. You’re mess. What deal did
you have with this guy?
KENT
Nothing.
ALLEN
You were letting him deal down here
and taking a cut, weren’t you?
Kent puts his gun in his jacket, adjust his hat.
ALLEN
I can’t believe you.
KENT
This is what it takes.
ALLEN
This isn’t what it was like with
dad.
KENT
Yea, well he’s dead, isn’t
he? Kind of hard to teach lessons
from the grave.
Kent storms off, leaving Allen with Johnson’s body.
13.
INT. CHURCH SANCTUARY - NIGHT
Allen sits, hands folded in prayer, forehead on the pew in
front of him. Isabel enters. Allen raises head.
ISABEL
What’s wrong?
ALLEN
Kent.
ISABEL
Is he okay?
ALLEN
It just wasn’t enough for him.
ISABEL
What happened?
ALLEN
I found out something today that’s
not going to go over well.
Isabel looks in his eyes, encouraging him to finish his
thought.
ALLEN
Kent. He protected one of
Baptiste’s dealers on our side of
town. Then he killed the guy for
threatening to tell Baptiste.
Isabel continues to study Allen’s face.
ISABEL
What are you going to do?
ALLEN
Don’t say anything to your
dad. I’ll fix this.
Isabel turns, looks straight ahead. She reaches over, grabs
Allen’s hand.
INT. KENT’S DEN - NIGHT
Kent paces in front of Delilah sitting on the couch.
DELILAH
What are you going to do?
14.
KENT
If you would just shut up for a
minute, then I could think. I
wouldn’t be having to deal with
this problem if it wasn’t for your
delusions of grandeur.
DELILAH
You did this. Don’t blame me.
Kent’s phone vibrates. He reads text.
KENT
Allen wants to talk.
DELILAH
Well at least one of you has
balls. What are you going to do?
KENT
Allen knows. A lot.
Kent pulls out toothpick and begins chewing
forcefully. Delilah stands beside him, runs her finger
along his shoulder and neck, addressing him soothingly.
DELILAH
We can run this town. You and me.
She leans forward and kisses his neck. Disinterest oozes
from Kent’s unwavered breathing. Kent crosses to door.
KENT
Don’t wait up for me.
DELILAH
I wasn’t planning on it.
INT. CHURCH SANCTUARY - NIGHT
Allen stands in silence. He loosens his tie. Kent enters
chewing on a toothpick, disturbing the silence.
ALLEN
I’m in a real spot here, Kent.
Kent chews tooth pick.
ALLEN
I think I can protect you. I just
need you to let me handle it.
15.
KENT
I’m not going to do that.
ALLEN
You’ve killed the goose. There are
no more golden eggs.
KENT
You talk like him now?
ALLEN
You’ve got to let me help.
KENT
I don’t need you.
ALLEN
Yes you do. You’ve gotten yourself
so deep into this mess you can’t
get out on your own.
KENT
I took care of the problem. What’s
the big deal?
ALLEN
The big deal is you killed a man
because you made a bad deal. You
made a stupid deal, and now you’re
gonna have to pay for it unless I
help.
KENT
(Half-mumbled)
Well you’re the only one who knows
about the deal.
ALLEN
What?
KENT
I know what I’m going to do.
ALLEN
What, Kent? What’s your master
plan?
Kent draws his gun and FIRES, narrowly missing Allen. Allen
takes cover behind a pew, drawing his own gun. He starts to
cock it, but stops.
16.
ALLEN
Kent! I’m not going to do this.
Allen stands, removes the clip from his gun, places both on
the ground. He crosses to center aisle, looking down each
row of pews to see nothing. Kent fires one shot in Allen’s
back. Allen falls to the ground. Kent plugs two more
rounds into Allen’s barely living body. He stands over his
brother.
INT. EMPTY BAR - DAY
Kent enters, forcefully chews toothpick. Boss sits, hands
folded on table.
BOSS
Where’s Allen, Kent?
KENT
Haven’t you heard from him?
Boss shakes head.
BOSS
Neither has Isabel.
KENT
I’m sure it’s nothing.
BOSS
I wish that were true.
Boss nods to DARK FIGURE behind Kent. Dark Figure pistol
whips Kent on the back of the head, knocking him
unconscious.
INT. BOSS’S GARAGE - NIGHT
Kent fades in and out of consciousness to the sounds of a
buzzing noise.
Kent finally wakes, he feels a dull burning in his neck. He
is shirtless, tied to a chair, his neck wrapped in plastic
wrap. He grunts, unable to form words with his thick,
semiconscious tongue. He struggles half-heartedly at his
bonds.
BOSS
"For whatever one sows, that he
will also reap."
17.
KENT
What?
BOSS
You stole from me, Kent.
KENT
Never took anything.
BOSS
You stole from me when you killed
that dealer. Johnson.
KENT
I would never--
Boss leans down into Kent’s face.
BOSS
And then you killed your own
brother.
KENT
How--
BOSS
One thing I learned early on is you
never do your own dirty
work. That’s why I’m in charge,
Kent. I know how things work.
KENT
I’m sure there’s something I can--
BOSS
NO! There’s nothing you could
offer me that could replace what
you’ve taken. From me or from
Isabel. I don’t think she’ll ever
forgive me for putting Allen in
danger.
KENT
What are you going to do?
BOSS
I wanted to shoot you in the back
like you did to your brother,
but Isabel wouldn’t let me. So I
came up with an alternative.
18.
Boss unties Kent. Kent sits up, reaching for his neck,
which is wrapped in plastic wrap. He pulls off the wrap,
wincing in pain. The boss holds up a mirror to reveal the
words "Brother’s Keeper" tattooed on either side of Kent’s
throat
BOSS
People can forget their
mistakes. But you’ll remember what
you’ve done. You killed your own
flesh and blood.
Kent looks at the Boss: anger, frustration. The Boss turns
his back, puts his hands behind him.
BOSS
A queen bee brought an offering to
the Mother Nature. She promised
the queen anything in return. The
queen bee asked for a stinger that
would kill anyone that got in her
way. Nature gave her this gift,
but told her that using this
stinger would mean risking her own
life. Because once used, the
stringer would remain in the victim
and she would die without it.
(Beat) Death comes home to those
who desire to kill.
Kent puts his head in his hands.
BOSS
Killing family is bad
business. Always.
Kent buttons shirt.
BOSS
If any one of my boys sees you, you
won’t see the next sunset.
Kent stands.
BOSS
When we went to your place to
retrieve Baptiste’s money, it
wasn’t there.
The boss pulls a house key out of his pocket and places it
in Kent’s hand.
19.
BOSS
We will get the money back.
EXT. SMALL TOWN STREET - NIGHT
Delilah walks down street towards her car, hips swaying,
confident. Her purse is full of cash. Her eyes smile.
Dark Figure walks out of shadow, following behind Delilah
wearing a dark wool hat and large heavy jacket. Delilah
turns, worried look, speeds up her pace.
Dark Figure slowly draws gun. GUNSHOTS. Delilah falls to
the ground. Dark Figure takes Delilah’s purse.
INT. BOSS’S GARAGE - NIGHT
Kent stands, grabs his clothes, exits. Boss sits with hands
folded on table. He lowers head, rubs temples.
INT. KENT’S DEN - NIGHT (LATER)
Kent frantically rushes in with duffel bag. He grabs bottle
of whiskey and a glass and quickly downs a drink. He grabs
his gun and stuffs it in his jacket.
A KNOCK at the door. Kent draws his gun, slowly approaches
the door and answers. Isabel stands, waiting like a marble
statue. She wears the hat and jacket we recognize from Dark
Figure. Kent lowers his gun.
ISABEL
You killed my knight.
Isabel pulls out a gun from under her jacket and FIRES into
Kent’s chest. He falls to the ground gasping as the world
slowly fades to black, holding his chest as his life
fountains out.
FADE OUT
INT. BOSS’S GARAGE - NIGHT
ALTERNATE ENDING:
Boss is putting away materials from tattooing. Isabel
enters and drops Delilah’s purse full of cash. The only
light on them comes from directly overhead. Boss looks at
her then down at the bags. His eyes betray his deep pain at
dragging his daughter into the business.