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Verbal Equinox
The Weber State University Writing Center Journal Fall l994
Dr. John Shwiebert is an English professor at WSU who teaches writng as a
process and is the WSU Writing Center Director. His admonition to carry a
notebook and write down everything is particularly applicable to this issue which
is dedicated to the writing opportunities and possibilities travel inspires.
Our Own Rejected Thoughts by John Schwiebert
I once heard a distance runner say he woke up every
morning with heart pounding, eager to run. As a writer you
often experience this same elation about writing - a feeling of
"I can't wait!" and "There is absolutely nothing I can't express."
Too often, however, this energy seems to come when you're in
bed, in between classes, or somewhere else without writing
utensils. You say, "I'll have to write down this brilliant idea as
soon as I get back to my desk;" but before you do, the idea
evaporates, or you censor the idea as "stupid" and neglect to
record it for that reason.
"In every work of genius," wrote Ralph Waldo
Emerson, "we recognize our own rejected thoughts." The idea
you failed to record, because you meant to do it "later" or
because it seemed "stupid," is invariably the one you rediscover
in someone else's literary masterpiece. Emerson's advice, as
valid today as it was a century ago, is simple: Don't let those
ideas get away! Write them down on the spot, as they occur to
you.
How you record your ideas is up to you. Poet Walt
Whitman rarely went anywhere without equipping himself with
pocketsful of blank scraps of paper; other creators- not just
writers, but painters, composers, scientists, engineers, and many
others- carry around pocket-sized notebooks or file cards; still
others improvise and jot down thoughts on napkins, backs of
envelopes, flyleaves of books, or any other available flat surface.
(An extreme case: William Faulkner took notes for/outlined one
of his novels on the interior walls of his house.) The crucial
point is to record the thought immediately.
But why? Three reasons come to mind.
1) They will disappear if you don't.
2) First thoughts are the best thoughts. Though com
monly too clumsy for instant public consumption, they define
clearly for the writer what s/he cares about and wants to create.
3) Productive writers write in quantity and revise
selectively. Notes provide the abundance of materials (good, bad,
and middling) from which writers can select their most promis
ing ideas for further development. Generically speaking, prolific
writers collect (hundreds and thousands of notes); organize
them into files for easy retrieval and review; reread these raw
materials regularly (with pen or other writing utensil in hand to
make additions and revision); and select the best or most
interesting to revise into finished and publishable texts. Sustain
ing this process is the writer's focal interest(s) or obsession(s),
what Virginia Woolf called "some fierce attachment to an idea."
While many or most of a writer's notes may remain unused,
without ·the habit of notetaking the excellent ideas might never
be able to surface.
But you don't have to take my word for any of this; the
notetakers speak clearly enough for themselves.
"Thou, dearest scholar, stick to thy foolish task, add a line every hour,
and between whiles add a line" (Ralph Waldo Emerson, essayist/poet).
"If I get a promising idea I set it down, and it stays there. I don 't
make myself do anything with it"(Marianne Moore, poet).
"See enough and write it down. Then some morning when the world
seems drained of wonder, some day when I am only going through the motions of
what I am supposed to do -on that bankrupt morning. I will simply open my
notebook and there it will all be, a forgotten account with accumulated interest, paid
passage back to the world out there..."(Joan Didion, novelist/journalist).
"Most composers keep a notebook in which they put down germinal
ideas...They put them down where they can find them when they need to look
for ideas and they don't come easily" (Aaron Copland, composer).
"I would recommend carrying a notebook around as routinely as you
carry your house key or wallet. Whenever an idea turns up, make a note of it
The simple act of writing down a few words will help to fix the idea in your
mind so your subconscious can get hold of it
If I make a note of an idea so I won't forget it, and if I read through my notebook from time to time and make it a point to think about what I find there, the good ideas will survive and grow. The bad ones will drop out along the way, and that's fine" (Lawrence Block, mystery novelist).
"Do not fear mistakes. There are none"(Miles Davis, musician).
With these thoughts, we welcome the new 1994-95
writing assistants, as well as wish for each of you a successful
academic year. We hope that you will take the time to spend a
few moments in the Writing Center. We look forward to
assisting you with your personal writing journey.
New Writing Assistants
Alice Jo Blanscett Sue Burnham
Kim Johnson (096 tutor) Sherrie Johnson
Sharrnila Kulkarni Cliphane Lucas
Kathy Marietti (096 tutor) Kristin Richards
Patricia L. Robertson Paula Gam Sever
Ann Stoeckl Collin Turner
2
ANNOUNCING
The 1994 Writing Center
Writing Contest Catagories:
Forged Mountains by
Ed West
Short Short Story
Short Story Essay
1500 Words or less
1500-2500 Words
2000 Words Maximum
Crystalline blue flows
and
winds a
Poetry
3 Poems, 100 line Max.
path.
snake-like
Prizes will be awarded for first, second, and
third place in each catagory. First place winners will
also be published in the spring edition of Verbal Equi
nox, as will a list of all winners.
Manuscripts should be typed, double spaced,
with author's name, address, phone, and Social Secu
rity number on a cover sheet, title ONLY on each succeeding page. A computer disk of the manuscript
It whips and compels me forward,
while I float on captured air atop whitecaps.
The surging razor
forges grandeur mountains
that touch white cotton.
With patience,
the churning, wet
figure
of the
would also be appreciated for publication purposes,
using Word Perfect 5.1 or lower.
Bring or mail entries to the Writing Center,
Weber State University.
Multiple submissions allowed and encouraged.
Deadline
Friday, November 18, 1994 Authors retain all rights. This competition does
not limit submission potential for the author. All authors
are encouraged to also submit to Metaphor
and to the WSU Writing Competition. Their deadline
is February 3, 1995. If the same entry is selected as
first place winner and also chosen for publication in
Metaphor, choice of publication will be made by the author.
••••••••••••••••••••••
VERBAL EQUINOX
EDITORIAL BOARD
Dr. Robert Hogge Linda Larsen
Patrick McGonegal Anne Robbins
Dr. John Schweibert Lisa Kim Webster
CONTRIBUTORS
snake
grabs a pebble or two.
Children work on a well-groomed field
moving feet, heads, chests, and legs
with focus and precision.
The stubborn, rolling sphere
finds place within its fishnet home,
while onlookers watch
in amazement amidst forged mountains.
Determined to run the hillside,
my lungs, weak and rasping
Burning - sucking air
through tunnels of despair.
I am forced by a mind set to run and
conquer the sickness.
Onlookers watch, in anticipation,
while they stand amidst forged mountains.
Now I forge another path and
listen to Magi sell philosophies
of the religion of science
and a neverending tunnel of ideas.
Sorting through mounds of books,
I gather up some pebbles.
I return to a favorite site, and
the river
David V Chevalier
Merlin Cheney
Linda Larsen
Anne Robbins
Collin Turner
Sundy Watanabe
Donna Cheney
Charlie Cuthbertson
Christina H. Millard
John Schwiebert
Les Wade
Ed West
still
flows
through forged mountains.
3
Focused flight by David V. Chevalier
1994 Most of my fellow passengers
were trying to get some sleep, so I quietly
moved through the train and found my
economy sleeper compartment, already
made up for snoozing by the car atten
dant. I wondered in passing how many of
the others shared my escape plan and
were traveling not to journey, but to get
away from some of their own problems.
The eastbound AMTRAK
California Zephyr, loaded to near capac
ity, pulled out of the Salt Lake City
D&RGW station right on time--5:05 a.m.
Rather than attempt any quarrels with my
enigmatic emotions, as I had for weeks, I
decided to instead surrender to the
momentary peace and not labor to stay up
at that early hour. I lay down on the
comfortable single bed, snuggled up with
the pillows and quickly dozed off to the
gentle rocking and rolling of the swaying
sleeper car.
When I awoke, I glanced out the
window to a dusky, light-brown and
orange-green landscape of the early dawn.
We were just approaching the wide
mountain pass called Soldier Summit At
that elevation, steep grade, and through
sharp turns, we were only moving about
20-25 mph, so the details of the flora
along the right-of-way were easy to make
out.
Dry, brittle plants, starved for
thirst, looked a simple spark away from
incineration. Most appeared utterly dead,
ready for cremation. But knowing Utah's
horticulture, the eye could easily be fooled
when it comes to plant life. Many of these
seemingly lifeless plants were in a unique
form of summer hibernation, merely
awaiting some splash of moisture on their
faces to awaken them into proliferation.
How unlike we humans are with
the wonderfully, environmentally bal
anced vegetation, I thought; without a
nurturing, nourishing relationship with
our surroundings, we homo sapiens would
quickly perish. We only endure with
persistent care and feeding of the body,
soul and spirit. Otherwise, a part of us
dies off, never to flower again. In my
particular case, such was the c i rcum-
stance with my barren and splintered
relationship with my wife--soon ex-wife-
after flourishing 17 years together.
As the Chief of On-Board
Services made his first call for breakfast
over the intercom, I was already half-way
through my car quickly moving towards
an anticipated meal of hot French toast,
link sausage and cold orange juice.
Having traveled by train many times
before, I knew many of the routine
schedules, such as meal periods, by heart.
I made my way briskly along,
dodging and weaving around and through
the passenger obstacle course, through the
filled coaches and crowded observation
car to the diner. Though traveling alone,
I didn't have to eat alone. Luckily, I was
seated at one of the few tables with an
availability remaining for one. I joined a
smiling, older couple
"Not even tile Nazi buzz
bomb could come between
us!"
The retired couple who kept me
company during our pleasant meal shared a
wonderful conversation. They told me
they were from California and headed
towards their eldest grandson's wedding
being held in Denver. Their accent,
however, sounded more like they'd
recently arrived from the British Isles. ·In
fact, both were from southern England
and had become naturalized citizens ten
years before. Seems their children had
flown the coop and, like any decent
grandparent, they wanted to be close to
their grandchildren, to help nurture, teach
and grow with them, and pass down to
them the unique ordeals and marvels of a
shared family history.
The gentleman had been an
airframe specialist on Spitfires during
World War Two and his enduring bride
had been a driver for the RAF big-wigs.
They married during the war and had
witnessed many of the horrors of the V-l
and V-2 bombing; she told me that their
shared strife, worries and tears had made
their relationship stronger, more impervi
ous to threat. "Not even a Nazi buzz
bomb could come between us!" she smiled
wide.
I yearned to recount with them
the explosiveness, wonder and bonding
that my wife and I had had , and what our
wonderful life together was like so early
in our marriage, but then thought better
than to dig up and share that old elation.
The hurt was still too fresh, too distress-
ing.
After all, following so long an
emotional barrage that had rocketed us at
first, our volatile relationship had seemed
in the end to turn out more like a big,
fizzled dud. My emotional fortitude had
suffered through in silent susceptibility, a
part of the so-called collateral damage,
and I didn’t want to reexamine or reopen
aching, healing wounds.
"Besides," I mused to myself,
"wasn't I fleeing from 'the front' for some
sorely required ‘R and R'?" Smiling over
my plate at them, I just nodded, respond
ing in the most socially acceptable and
proper manner. Turning away from the
moment, I looked outside and surveyed
the vast stretches of idle desolation we
sped past.
As we continued our exchange,
their faces were always aglow with great
joy every time they spoke of their children
and grandchildren. Now that joy, I knew
-- the major source of my remaining
happiness. With the tasks of our two
boys, grown, raised, and out of the house,
and an astonishingly wonderful two-year
old daughter who waited behind for me at
home, here was an enlivening subject
about which we could openly share,
chatter and swap tales.
My daughter, my bright, beauti
ful "twinkle, twinkle little star," loved
trains--like most little kids--and she
adored traveling with her Daddy . . . and
Mommy, a natural for our daughter in her
role as an AMTRAK Conductor. "Not
this trip, baby," I heard myself medita
tively calling my girl. "This depressing
journey wouldn't be good for your perfect,
radiant innocence."
After taking too much time
occupying our table and telling enough
lies regarding our offspring's phenom
enal, near-superhuman capabilities, the
waiter pushed us into one of two options.
Would we like anything else or were we
done ... as there were other people
waiting to be seated. The subtle hint was
received and understood.
The older couple and I rose and
parted our ways with cordial smiles,
handshakes and a prospect for dinner
together. That was fine by me, but I
walked away knowing what a roulette
4
wheel chance seating was for the diner
during the dinner meal--the most popular
with rail passengers during their trip.
After I got back in my roomette,
I plopped down in the forward facing
seat, as the porter had thankfully made up
my room while I was at breakfast.
Withdrawing my grey, leather-covered
legal pad that I am almost never without,
I began to record my hodgepodge of
impassioned thoughts. "Free time to
freewrite while freewheeling down the
track," I reasoned.
...my hand jotted jown run away sensations
garnered from tile vista, transitory thoughts, and
secret passions.
As the darting train swept along,
down and out across the open expanses of
the desolate southern Utah desert, my
mind strayed as my hand jotted down
runaway sensations garnered from the
vista, transitory thoughts, and secret
passions. I also reluctantly formulated
plans for an impending fury of ungovern
able turmoil.
Divorce. Such a vile word. The
fact of our separation was bad enough
with its despicable sensations ofloneli
ness, abandonment and betrayal. This
wearisome separation was but a precursor
to our divorce. The idea behind the
finality of divorce just amplified these
agonizing torments. Brooding momen
tarily to myself, I sensed the train begin to
slow.
As we stopped briefly in Grand
Junction, Colorado, to pick-up and drop
off some passengers, I noted I'd already
filled many pages of the legal pad with
cryptic pen scratchings that only remotely
looked like handwriting. Between my
random reflections in freewriting and the
uncertainty of the movements of the
gently pitching car, it appeared as though
I'd graduated from a medical school
prescription writing class. Looking my
work over, I smirked and chuckled under
my breath, abruptly envisioning in
passing that if the train was in a grue
some accident, no one would be able to
decipher my surviving final thoughts.
Suddenly there was a quick bump and
tug, and we pulled away from the depot
and moved on, starting into our long
climb up and over the Rocky Mountains.
The beauty outside my window
was magnificent. Pine trees began to
appear irregularly along our route. There
were mountains in every direction, and at
every angle and elevation -- rolling, jetting,
jutting, and even expanding out and over
the tracks in places. The crystal brilliance
of the translucent river running
next to the right -of-way was rushing away
in the opposite direction of our travel
making it look much swifter than it was.
Sporadically along the way, there
were kayaks, canoes and rubber rafts
filled with adventuresome souls hoping to
fulfill their own escape plans, and looking
as though they were having a blessed of a
good time doing it. It was genuinely
engaging when they would seize a brave
moment, drop their guard and release
their concentration from their treacherous
river adventure to exchange waves with
us on the train. Caught up in the genuine
deliverance of the moment, I waved back
with childlike delight. What a wonder
fully distracting feeling of relief. A cool
sensation of release washed over me.
"Now. Write right now," I reflected.
I looked long, hard and be wildered down into the flickering glitter of the
waters below as we crawled through a long canyon.
What would it be like . ..after?
After the despondency and impoverished
sorrow, grief, anger and hollow feelings
of the divorce were final, what would it be
like? My hand moved and the pen
printed "Freedom" - the first word that
popped into my mind, like a Fourth of
July firework going off. Wow! But how
could I suddenly feel any good about the
hurtful end and distressful loss of what
had been a favorable and loving mar
riage? I looked long, hard and bewildered
into the flickering glitter of the waters
below as we crawled through a long
canyon. I felt lost.
Then, it happened. Almost too
fast to respond, let alone react. As we
rounded a tight, sharp curve, there they
were--a huge rubber raft filled with Boy
Scouts in big orange life jackets. The
leader stood and was hurriedly motioning
the boys with his hands. They too stood,
grabbed at their waists, and each and
every one of them pulled down their pants
and mooned the train.
The laughter that filled our car
was reverberant. It seemed to permeate
every room, every spectator, every soul,
right down to the very bone. At least
that's how I felt. Such a simple little
sophomoric act, and y et I hadn't
laughed out loud so hard in some time.
"My God, " I said, as I real ized my solace, "Life really
does go full-circle."
Instantaneously it hit me that I'd
heard a similar story before . Dad's
brightly smiling face suddenly took form
in my mind ; he was retelling a story to me
of when he was young. He and his
buddies had gone skinny-dipping at the
local creek and they had mooned the
Milwaukee Hiawatha passenger trains
that ran past my grandmother's farm.
"My God," I said, as I realized my solace.
"Life really does go full-circle."
I reacted simply, almost tit-for
tat, matter-of-fact-like, expressing my
understanding. "Thanks, Dad! This part
of my circle is now complete." The
release of it felt remarkably good! Then
another word popped into my mind and
out onto paper, “Recuperation."
Whatever happened, I knew that
the forthcoming journey of providence
would happen. Whether I traveled along
as a rider or driver, spectator or partici
pant, was entirely up to me. The adven
ture was just beginning; I was determined
to focus on my flight. My little girl
needed to hear the stories of how her
grandpa flashed a passing train ...and
how her Daddy, keeping unconscious
tradition, had mooned some Boy Scouts.
* * *
Dedicated to my Dad because I truly
listened to you; to Christine because I
honestly loved, respected and cared about
you; and to Shannon because you're Gods
and Daddy s most marvelous, exceptional
and loving little girl.
T
. es-mi)
England Waits. . .
. . .a look at travel, inspiration, and print, through the eyes of the participants.
The Weber State University Writing Center Journal Special Insert Fall 1994
· ... . .....,...,..4. "m:oe sunsbine in QEnglanb
.::#',...!: tuas part of a pbpsical gift. m:oe sun Walking to scbool earlp in ®ctober '92, . TN -· [on tbe bribe] from alisburp to
.:fflerlin anb 1f began to tuonber. . . ..... .. ,.... tratforb ...gabe brilliance to tbe f tbings 1f satu. 1ft seemeb tbat aU tbe
Wbat if ®n a Wilb Wbim. . . i ,E! tii!ii element of nature bab combineb tbat bap to gtbe an unparalleleb probuc- tion of beautp anb peace."
We took a few students
To stand in the spot where
Becket was martyred
Walkf".d inthe cloisters
And heard boys' sweet voices
Float high to the top
Of the dusty, dark arch?
What ifwe marveling held
A hawk on our hands
Then stood on a bridge
On a cool gray evening
And thought about rainbows
Over old stone spires?
What ifwe circled blue monoliths
On a misty March morning
While the ages of earth
Swiveled round us
Then drove down the byways
Where pastorals carne true?
What ifwe strolled down the street
Where walked the man
who holds us enthralled
Four hundred years later?
What if we conquered the city
No one tires of till they
Tire of life?
1fngrib .:fflorriU
JJ OA#f'r . "m:oomas 1!iecket's sbrine
at Qeanterbucy became a faborite
site for pilgrims tubo came to
bisit tbe martpr' s tomb. 1ft is
fitting tbat Qeanterburp tuas our first bestination for tue, too,
tuere pilgrims."
Qebristina ..:fflillarb
"1f bab no cboice but to
go to QEnglanb 'emptp, open,
cboiceless as a beacb - Would the same songs haunt other's souls
That push us to dare to share ours? lrlaiting for a gift from tbe sea."'
ilBonna QCijenep 1fngrib .:fflorriii
0Wanton rio!' Wanbeting in SS>ttatfotb
· utet tbe lap QCbarlie QCutbhertson
"... 11 sbaii be forgot,
jliut be'll remember, witb ab\Hmtages ,
Wbat feats be bib tbat bap . . ." 1!,lenrp l'
Excuseme,Father · ct Jil', cene iii IfI stand mute before you
Inthe small church where you lie
Attended, serene,
Foundation of sunlit corner
Organ notes cascade in swirls around me
Like a dizzy parade of characters
Freshly rememb'red.
But what words, what words?
What testimony may I speak to you
When the words that splashed from your pen
Cleanse like drops of tangy wine
On stalty tongues, arid with misuse .
When will you be done?
I finger crumpled stubs in my pocket
Reminding me of you,
Reminding me of heroes and harlots and fools
Fluttering flags over the theatres of Avon
Flowers gathered by the feet of a doomed prince
Roses thrown to Lear on a star-filled summer 's night
Folio-crisp harvests of speech
Allow me to dream, perchance ,
Clutching my catalogue oflanguage.
I picture you in some neighborhood pub
Relaxed and aloofby some corner table
Dark ale raised high, murmuring down your throat
Eyes of sparkle laughter
Open, open
Hearing what you see, revealing what is silent
And I wonder
What ifyou were not?
What ifyou never were?
Excuse me, Father
IfI stand mute before you
IfI,humbled, silenced like you never were,
Place counterfoils at your headstone,
Bow my head and weep, softly:
Not for what was lost,
But for what remains,
What remains and what shall endure.
"'[;f)e baps' unfolb so
easilp, eacb one blenbing
hlitb tbe fibers of tbe one
before, mobing togetber
into one gentle, perfect
hibole . .3J am berp mucb at
peace bere. W::be bap is
fiHeb hlitb grep daubs, a
stiff hlinb, patcbes of baffo
bils anb green eberphlbere.
· W::be most imrebible of an
mornings ...We spent at
olp W::rinitp QCburcb,
hlbere bakespeare is
burieb. s' we bJa(keb in,
sunhgbt was streaming
tbrougb tbe hlinbohls anb
tbe organ was plaping . .3J
sat, perfectlp still, I isteneb
to t{Je organ , anb wept." nne 3Robbins
II
jf irst jfligbt 1erl in QCbenep
When first we linked our hands
And ran at life. We hardly thought we'd leave the ground. But swift beneath our wondrous gaze
All England sprange to view:
The ancient towers of Canterbury
Stretch upward inthin air.
And Dover's cliffs, still geamingwhite,
Forever beckoning and fair,
Recede beyond the mystic sea At Channel crossing there.
At Salisbury's plain the ancient Henge, Too far in time to speak to us In language we can tell,
Proclaims the human spirit That outlasts all meaning else.
And Salisbury's spire that pierces heaven, Borne up by human faith,
Defies the laws of weight and stone And draws from stress of marble bent A ringing note to pierce the soul
But as we streak for London,
The teeming center of that world,
That promises to each what we love most,
Peripheral vision mourns the loss
Of Oxford slipping by.
And York, the Viking home,
And Edinburgh, and Inisfree.
And Oh my hungry soul,
There's Wales,
And Ireland waiting still,
And Hebrides whose circled stone,
So rumor has, is older than the world .
Exhaustion damps our eager hearts,
And we are back on earth
With daily chores and chosen work
Where dreams dissolve in common day.
But strange to us our souls have changed. The vision does not fade.
We wait and gather strength. Preparing for the day,
When love and friendship link our hands In exponential power
To pierce the air inquickened flight
With threads of glory from this world As stays against eternal night
QCatbebral jf aces :fflerlin QCbenep
The chill and green of English spring still holds them where they stood: gray tan cathedral walls, defying centuries of weight and human need for pulling down,
fling spires of stone against a sky of blue that vaults all mortal care.
And buttresses parenthesize
a filigree of floating lace
that hangs too light and delicate for stone.
Three hundred feet of solid earth
join air and wind and sky
in seeming weightlessness of weight to summon human eye.
The blue and red and flame of glass ignite the sunlight into fire, illuminating filces lifted up
by stone and glass and sky
in brilliant transformation from the light within and out
Your face that brought the faces here ·
is kindled like astar.
In moment unaware, your gaze
a soul of love reveals, transfigured by the light of faces etched in time.
Today Iwalk on heavy earth
beneath an ordinary sky. Yet, shall the memory shape for me
these cathedral faces for eternity.
m
.
;l
rJ . i
jf or tbe 3L\oob 1llreamer nne 3RobbinS'
Stone washed with pre-dawn dark,
Moss and mist on this
Isle inlet of Solway Firth.
Green heath, grey light, six centuries
Since Hadrian built the wall
Secluding this solemn wind-auved world.
Sandaled steps follow a solitary pat
Through dew-wet grasses that catch
At garment's hem;
Hood and robe flap in early breezes
Heavy with salt and sea sounds.
From chapel cloister, it is not far
To this place apart.
The cross waits, serene in sol;Jtr-
-· - if - He kneels, forehead and hands hr ssed
"" ' "Fervently to the stone; 1';
.Lips move insilent prayer.
·i "t • Communion begins as malle
if t and an iron spike -
1:? . '!r-' uch like th?se, e thought,
, ·t : i used to crucify Him-
I .,' '/ l <;;:arve words of life inimmortal , : ' :· .";·. !/1. ,'There heed none he afraid . '.
.. I •
(t i - .. ..., •
I •
/_ .:- !,; ' Chiseled shards lie scattered,
l ·.f:f , Precious jewels ,of ho and.IJ.til@i'i! "f 'Revealing faint outline offal •
I - ..who'b ru s o · " I
hi t _ 1'f. •
t: th'e best oL 6urdens. ., . ,, r..·, I ,._,- \ ;
' Fii'St rays' of gentle ight embrace him;»'
let _rests ,b. ells toll the da ' _..d Centunes to <{Qme. . .., • - •
.. • .t."
# ..... .;+- -
Bel<lje?-soul-ment r, · .. ,
Protector of my past;1cnow this:
A'fumion mornings -he ,
.I place my hand .on·printed page
f _.
.• _...
And feel humble supplication etched
In sacred stone. · ·
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One could imagine Guinevere riding through your stone slab arches
Making the long journey by night in a misty drizzle
That obscured your ramparts from afar.
Contemplating betrayal, she kneels in the centre of your circle,
Sadlv raruant, and awaits the darity of the dawn.
What visions came to her on that rounded slope,
Between those mossy clockwork monoliths ,
Under the accusatory flashes of the ravens' eyes.
As we see her now, a mythical ghost of Avalon,
Then could she not see us in a confused blur?
Dew settling on her eyelash,
Worn grass staining her earth-toned cloak
As the world centers intself round this chalk plateau .
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It was so packed in that damn pub,
Icouldn't move without being molested.
Smoke crinkled the air like cheap plastic wrap,
Ale smell hiccuped from overturned glasses,
and kids kept coming inby the dozens.
Good God, it was electric stuff,
and you could feel the buzzbuzzbuzz of the amp
Humming all the way down your thighs
As more people came in
and more ale broke from the keg taps in
Bubbly gold-dark blisters offoam,
and the cigarettes made my throat water and sweat,
and how many more people can they fit INthis place!
But by the time the band plugged in,
Iwas pressed against the drinking elbows
of the couple in front of me,
and the breasts of the girl behind me
were gently nudging me,
and no one said anything, they just started to play.
The accents were different, but it was stuffIknew-
Goddamnit! Jackie Wtlson and Sam & Dave
and Eddie Floyd and Wllson Pickett-
Stuff we use for car commercials and fast-food advertisements;
Nobody really listens to it anymore,
But hereIam in this pub in the middle of Cnaterbwy, England,
and not only is the bar band playing Sixties R & B tunes,
but everybody,Imean everybody in the goddamll audience
is singing along, and it's
likel'mintheApolloin '63.
But this is England, land of illegal dances, 1993,
and I am far from home, but here in this pub
I'm closer to it than I've ever been before,
and we're singing and drinking and dancing, .,
and somebody says, "Do Otis Redding!"
and we all sing "Dock of the Bay"
and kiss and laugh and the saxophonist winks at me,
and the night goes on forever, oh please,
as I dance with foreigners I know I will never see again,
but this time is ours and this music is ours and we know each other.
"So," they ask me later, "What was the high point of your trip?"
"Oh," I say, "probably Stonehenge or maybe seeing Hamlet,
or walking in London at dawn," and I smile quietly
Because in my secret heart, my honest heart,
I know it was 5 brash youngsters
Belting out the songs of my culture,
Gulping down dark ales between sets;
and a cute hom player blocking out the midnight chimes of
Canterbury Catherdral, 5 blocks away.
VI
®oing orne
After twelve days
Of wearing ourselves out,
Oflooking at too many things,
Of walking too many miles
We breathed sighs of relief
And slept solidly as
The plane brought us home.
The next day we started
Back to classes, so very early,
Back to work, even on tht first day.
Within 24 hours England seemed
A distant memory,
A place we once had been .
Caught up in our workaday world
We walked in a web of reality.
Yet all it takes to go back
Is half a moment.
The golden word Cadbury on a label
And we taste shared chocolate sin.
Inthe nod of a daffodil,
We smell the rainy green meadow
To Anne's thatched cottage.
Yawning at a boring speaker,
We see gentle, gray St. Giles or
Marvel at white swans
swimming on the Avon,
Or squeeze into a richly cowded
London pub .
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It is Tuesday evening, two days
past London . I am sitting on my bed,
surrounded by a happy mess of trip
memorabilia . Two nights ago, through a
swirling fog of fatigue, I managed to drag
my faithful grey-green dufile bag up one
final flight of stairs to my room. The stairs,
I noted at the time, were nowhere nearly as
narrow as those to which I'd recently
become accustomed . I resented the fact
that they didn 't slope to one side or creak
with age -- greatly lacking in character, I
decided .
1\vo days have passed and the
dufile bag still gapes open, spilling its
contents over the bed and onto the floor.
Most of the clothes have been washed
and hung in the closet, but I am reluctant
to put away the mementoes that are
tangible evidence of England- art tubes
from the Tate, St Michael 's strawberryjam,
shortbread and sweaters, subway passes
and a picture of Stonehenge at sunset. All
of it, even the silly, sweet Jelly babies , are
pieces of the puzzle that I want to keep
intact I am not yet ready to distance
myself from even the smallest part of it, not
even by placing it out of sight in a drawer.
Thus, I continue to sit, to hold, to think.
My friend from across the street
rings the doorbell , lets herself in, and
climbs the stairs. She finds me lining up
jars of jam and stacking shortbread .
"Wow," she says, surveying the chaos,
"Looks like you brought most of England
home with you! Did you have fun?"
I finger a postcard and try to t
hink of what to say. Did I have fun? I look
at the postcard . The picture is of marble
cathedral coiumns feebly framed within a
three-by-five-inch space. I point to a
bench in the foreground . "This is where I
sat," I explain to her. "the organ -ever
since I was little, I've wanted to hear a
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cathedral organ. Finally, after all these
years, I could feel the vibrations of the
organ in the benches. and the sound -oh.
it soared upward, to a ceiling eighty feet
above me! Never have I heard a sound
more pure, more beautiful ."
She is quiet. She is a dear friend
who wants to understand whatever is
important to me.Likewise, I wish I could
give her at least a small portion of the
treasure. Yet we both know that some
things cannot be completely shared. Of necessity, they must remain locked within
the souls of those who were there. Still, at
her insistence, I proceed .
Carefully choosing my words, I
tell her how I clearly felt the past had
waited patiently for me to find it. Th re
were cathedrals built by those who refused
to let go of a vision that burned within
them. At Dover, I believed I could easily
reach out and clasp the hands of people
I've never met, perhaps to share a fire or a
blanket with them. At a quiet breakfast
table in Salisbury, I understood that all
ages of humankind are linked by common
dreams, experiences, and emotions . Within
the hushed halls of an art gallery, I saw the
timeless, immortal brilliance of the human
spirit captured on canvas. Finally, the
serenity of Holy Trinity Church brought a
quiet affirmation of the purpose of it all -
that the peace and majesty of the past are
gifts to humbly accept and then humbly
give.
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As I talk, I am reminded of the
fairy tale children who left a path of
breadcrumbs through the forest so they
wouldn't lose their way. Maybe these
scattered pearls of perspective are
somewhat the same. For centuries, they
have been lovingly prepared and placed
across my path, awaiting the day of my
discovery. Now, it is my turn to carefully
leave them behind me..Perhaps on some
distant day, my friend, or another fellow
traveller. will find the luminous gems and
want to follow where they lead. Only then
will the treasure truly belong to both of us.
But for today, I walk by friend to
the door; she leaves with shortbread and a
promise to call her inthe morning.I
reluctantly realize that life will soon resume
its familiar pattern. Yet it will never again
be entirely the same.For me, seven hours
away, a spire sleeps in pre-dawn silence.
Stones will soon stand in silhouette ·
against a grey-green sky, as they have for
more than a million mornings . Stained
glass patterns will pronounce yet another
benediction oflight on a quiet grave. At
evensong, an organ will speak eloquently
of a past that transcends all time and
distance. With eyes closed briefly in
thought, I am there. And I am at
peace. England waits.
VIII
The Shoe in the
Road by Linda Larsen
There it is again - another shoe.
Right there in the middle of the road, just
lying there, right in the middle. How
many times have I seen a lone shoe sitting
between two yellow lines or straddling a
dotted white one? Too many. Every time
I ask myself the same questions, "How did
that get there?" "Why is it there?" "Does
it MEAN something?"
The first time I remember seeing
a shoe like that, I was just a kid, it was
summer, and the shoe was a black and
white Ked. It was pretty worn, and I was
pretty dumb. My brother told me some
jogger probably had a blowout on the
sticky hot pavement. I believed him.
He told me in graphic detail about a guy
he knew that broke his leg when it
happened to him. The jogger was going
so fast, he was four blocks down the road,
bleeding and about to collapse, before he
realized it had blown clean off-- just like
a semi truck that blows a tire and leaves
strips of rubber all over the freeway.
I spent that entire summer
hawkishly watching for
joggers who may have put
too many miles on their Keds.
Sounded good to me. Perfectly
reasonable . I spent that entire summer
hawkishly watching for joggers who may
have put too many miles on their Keds. If
those kinds of accidents really did
happen, I wanted to see one.
But I never did. I saw more
shoes, but I never saw a runner actually
blow out.
My sister told me the Shoe Fairy
puts the shoes on the road to remind us of
all the poor unfortunate people who only
have one leg and so they only need one.
I asked her, if there's a Shoe
Fairy, why doesn't she just give all the
extra shoes to somebody else that needs
just a left or a right? That way they 'd all
have twice as many shoes. Leaving them
in the road is a waste and even I couldn't
picture some stupid fairy trying to dodge
cars while they drop off a size 13 that she
could hardly lift.
No. My sister definitely had a
credibility problem with that one.
Dad said it wasn't a fairy at all.
It was Road Gremlins. He said they were
little critters that steal shoes off kids as
they sit on tailgates or fool around in the
back of station wagons and trucks.
Sometimes they even sneak them off
baggage racks. Why? So they can leave
them in the road and some poor schnook,
who's tired or maybe had a few and
shouldn't be on the road anyway, will
think it's a cat or dog and swerve or slam
on the brakes and get in a wreck. Dad
said those little critters just love to watch
people crash. I wondered how many
accidents were caused each year by Road
Gremlins?
Then, when I started learning to
drive, I noticed there were all kinds of
shoes that ended up stranded in the
middle, just like that first Ked I'd seen as
a child. Really. I've seen about every
kind of shoe you could imagine -
sneakers, thongs, dress pumps, sandals,
and even wing-tips. They weren't all old
beat-up tennies or loafers. It seemed
strange to me that any pair of shoes, any
color, any size, any style, could end up in
a split that resulted in a tenuous existence
on the fringe of disaster.
I mean, well, a shoe that's had its
glory days and was all beat up and ready
to the garbage bin or the second-hand
store could easily fall off a dump truck or
get thrown out a back seat, but a brand
new, shiny, patent leather, three-inch
heel? It could only have been forgotten by
some murderer, caught on the bumper as
he stuffed the rich widow 's body in the
trunk, only later to have it fall off as he
bounced through a pot-hole, on his way to
dispose of the evidence.
I even saw an Italian number
that I could only reason came from some
upper class addict, some young, hand
some, too-soon-successful executive, who
tossed it carelessly out the window of his
Mercedes after sniffing all his contraband
out of his Dr. Scholl's insert.
For years I've thought there should be a
division of the police department dedica
tion to unsolved shoe mysteries. Perhaps
they could train some shoe-sniffing dogs
that could somehow track the perpetrators
of these heinous shoe crimes. I know the
explanations are out
there somewhere -- if only we could
develop the technology to understand
what is going on.
Last week, I saw another one -- a
brown dress shoe that surely went with an
insurance man 's suit. No one speeding
along that four-lane highway paid it much
attention. It was in the meridian, upright,
looking almost. . .expectant.
I found myself turning around
and parking right across from it. I
watched the cars go by -- four lanes of
traffic moving smoothly, stretching into
colored blurs as they whizzed pass me. I
sat behind the wheel. . .watching the
shoe.
It never changed positions.
It never looked any different
It never did anything.
But I watched.
It quivered sometimes, when a
truck or low-built car came too close, but
no one actually hit it. No one seemed to
see it. That bothered me, but I drove off
after awhile and chuckled to myself that I
had spent so much time on such a stupid
activity.
The next day I did the same
thing.
What was this fascination? I
didn't want to retrieve the shoe. I didn't
want to see it run over. I don't know
what I wanted, but the shoe bothered me.
Two more days I sat behind the
wheel and looked at the shoe between the
blur of cars. It never changed positions.
It never looked any different. It never did
anything. But I watched.
And then the shoe was gone.
Gone.
Oh, I drove around a little.
Actually, I drove around a lot. I
checked the gutters. I checked the side
streets. I wondered if anyone was curious
about me. I even looked under some
garbage in a drain. The shoe was gone.
I still don't know why these
solitary shoes are there or why they get to
me. Maybe next time I see one I'll do
more than look at it. Maybe next time I'll
stop. Maybe I'll eyen pick it up.
Maybe next time I'll understand
of why it's there.
Maybe.
5
Home by Collin Turner
Home is where the spirit runs
when the body sleeps. It is the place
where your mind wanders when it is
given a moment alone. Your heart is with
the ones you love, especially when they
are distant or no longer by your side. But
the heart is not at home unless your spirit
calls it, your mind sees it and your body
takes it there. Home is intangible; it is
more than a location or a foundation. It is
sacred ground that is blessed by some
memory too far lost in time to ever be
traced by an earthbound mind. Home
exists before, during and after you walk
through it. Even after the appearance of it
has changed, its sacred nature will always
exist and always call.
Home exists before,
during and after you walk
through it.
It is late July in 1986; the sun is
now a fiery band of crimson washing over
the sandstone landscape of Northern
Arizona. I have the windows down,
letting desert wind pull teasingly at my
hair and wash the smell of Irish Setter out
of my worn Ford Fairmont. Robert Plant
cuts through the roar of sixty-five mile
an-hour wind and lulls my gut into
silence. I say nothing, sing nothing. All I
do is watch the old Chevette and Interna
tional pick-up ahead of me and follow
them to a new reality - a new house in a
new city where a second chance at life
awaits me packed among a boxful of
sacrifice. The drugs that pumped through
me are mere traces but the after-effects
still ripple through my life. It is because
of them that I follow the cars, and because
of them that I have left my life behind in
a puff of oil smoke and cauterized
emotions.
The dog in the back seat snorts
as the tape ends. I watch Page, Arizona,
pass off to the side and marvel at the
number of pick-up trucks, mostly Dodges
and Fords, that pack the small city. This is
Redneck country, I think. I pass a road
sign that has a weaving car on it. I know
it means "Slippery When Wet" but laugh
when my Dad 's voice comes over the CB
and tells us to watch out for "drunken
Indians." The impressions and premature
judgements are already forming. When
mixed and allowed to ferment, they
combine and become prejudice -- a
dangerous thing to carry in a land where
the flames of prejudice crack the dirt and
bake bones. I hit the rewind button on my
stereo, reach back to pet the dog, and
drive into a small canyon that winds
down onto the Vermillion Cliffs.
I watch the walls of the
Vermillion Cliffs blaze in tile
dying embers of sunset,
Calmly, I look off the sandstone
lip as my speed blurs the guardrail.
Nearly a thousand feet below, stretched
out like a giant skin, lies the Painted
Desert. It revitalizes the sunset, its colors
reflecting to the sky, off the few clouds
and onto the darkening canvas. My
inexperience at driving long distances
forces me to concentrate on the road and I
don 't have much of an opportunity to
ponder the beauty of this land from above.
That waits until I am off the cliffs and
driving through the surrealistic desert,
letting the Fairmont float over rises,
around curves and through bridged
arroyos. In the rearview mirror, I watch
the walls of the Vermillion Cliffs blaze in
the dying embers of sunset, understanding
why they carry their name. And in those
moments, I feel my spirit begin to
awaken.
All my strength is channeled
into keeping
myself "clean," not in
running from tile coyotes
or owls.
Two cars and truck on a road
that seem to loop infinity. Then I notice
the pinpoint flash of headlights far behind
me, vanishing as I round a curve. Only a
few minutes later, I see them closer and
moving in fast. My mind breeds images of
a predator closing in on a helpless victim.
The weak are its prey; that's the way the
circle works -- the weak giving life to the
strong. I was the last in the line, and I
was the weakest. All my strength is being
channeled into keeping myself "clean,"
not in running from the coyotes or owls.
Caught in traveller 's imagination, I let
my foot pull away from the gas pedal. The
taillights of my brother 's car begin to
shrink and the faded orange needle of my
speedometer slowly falls to forty-two. The
headlights flash, close, and my hands
tighten on the vinyl-padded steering
wheel. It tops a rise, swooping down, then
weaves around me and past -- sleek, black
and humming with power. My foot slams
down and the sluggish engine pings to
life. The pursuit was meaningless, but it
let me see . Images, smeared by twilight,
streamed by me. I pass the Chevette, then
the International, and sail out on my own;
chasing the dream awakened in my spirit
and my mind .
This us a land of shifting
realities. It matches my
scrambled mind but with a
patience that is both infinite
and brooding.
My Dad calls me over the CB,
but I ignore it. "The Big Log" drifts
through the wind, seductive layers of
electronic music adding to my lone flight.
I am alone, no longer following anything
but a winding road that leads into a land
older than the bones of Adam. My eyes
scan every detail: silhouette images of
sage and saguaro, shale stacks and
crumbling hills. I feel it here, life and
death, hot and cold, drought and flood.
This is a land of shifting realities. It
matches my scrambled mind but with a
patience that is both infinite and brood
ing. I am embraced by it.
Several minutes pass before a
static burst caught my attention. When I
listened carefully, I hear my father telling
me to stop at the next pull-off. I don't.
answer, but when I find a place big
enough, I hit the brakes, the dog is
thrown forward and I skid into the
pull-off. I climb out of the car, shutting off
the engine but leaving the last verse of the
song playing. The sky is filled with
flickering stars and the faint band of the
Milky Way. I lay on my hood and watch.
Shooting stars cut into the darkness and
the distant sounds of night life accompany
the sounds of approaching vehicles. My
6
7
family arrived I say nothing, but lie on my warm hood, staring
into the sky and letting my spirit become acquainted with this
ancient land.
As I lay, a moving van roars past, carrying nearly
everything we own from one empty house to another. I don 't
care about where I am going anymore, I will eventually adapt to
it and try to shed my poisoned skin. But I know that I am
already home. Even as I drive away, into the mountains that
cradle Flagstaff, I feel part of my spirit staying behind. It melded
with the thousands of other wandering spirits and acts as a
beacon.
Now, several years and numberless events later, that
part of me still calls out I feel it now, as I write. I dream about
it when I sleep. Eventually, I will need to leave, if only for a
short time, and return to the land that I know as Home, "South
and Red." When I get there, I will probably just stand, or lie on
my car and watch the stars. I will let the cool breeze cleanse my
mind and chill my angers. My spirit will reunite with itself,
become whole, and the homecoming will be complete.
•••••••••••••
THE NORTH AMERICAN INTERDISCIPLINARY
WILDERNESSCONFERENCE NOVEMBER 10, 11 & 12, 1994
to be held on campus
November 10-12, 1994
please contact: Mike Vause @ 626-6654 or
Bill McVaugh @ 626-6600. ASAP.
Amtrack:
All the Night Things by Sundy Watanabe
Where grasses shiver
along a river bed,
train tracks run through.
and the wind and the river
the moan
of the
river tumbles beside.
Rhythm and Blues
burns along rails of steel
through spruce and pine
nudging,
pulsing,
screaming,
and after it reaches the ridge,
just flows--
spider hair sucked through
blue-black
caverns on the mountain
over
under
trestles framing measures miles below.
Willows by a stream
stream by, pool
in pockets of valley
silence hard land long
behind, riveted to shadow.
Call for submissions for the Winter edition
of Verbal Equinox. Theme: Writing Methods and Practices
Emphasis on the variety of ways writing
can be produced. What works for YOU?
Deadline: December 15, 1994
Send to The Writing Center, SS042
All the night things
wail tunes: blowsy
horn,
breezy harmonica,
cool sax.
8
Not Forgotten
By Les Wade
Remember when we forgot the pancake turner
and the can opener?
I cut a jagged lid from a peach can
with my Boy Scout knife
and made a make-shift spatula
by shoving the lid between the tines
of my odd fork.
And then the time we left the butter,
and the kids begged a cube from the
campground hosts so I could fry
the fresh-caught R a i n b o w s .
I don't know who forgot the poles,
but we scrounged some string,
cut a green willow pole,
hooked a safety pin baited with
a hunk of pancake
the squirrels had somehow missed;
we didn't get a bite.
And once you left the cooler with the food
and the box with all the cooking gear.
Old Faithful Inn's
cheapest steak, $12.95,
tasted great, but next morning we loaded up
on all kinds of picnic stuff
paper dishes, plastic utensils,
sugared cereal, green bananas,
sliced wheat bread and bologna.
And that time we came home and found
the lost orange juice oozing
from a ruptured cardboard can,
gooing all over the gas stovetop where
someone set it while packing Coleman's cooler.
And that night in empty
Blue Mountain campground,
way above Monticello,
on our trip to Mesa Verde,
I lay lonely in a collapsed nylon tent, pegs forgotten,
my head stuck through the unzipped orange door,
the boys asleep in bags under bare June stars -
I had not forgotten you.