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UNIVERSITY OF GUAYAQUIL
FACULTY OF PHILOSOPHY, LETTERS AND EDUCATION SCIENCES
SCHOOL OF LANGUAGES AND LINGUISTICS
EDUCATIONAL PROJECT
IN FULFILLMENT OF THE REQUIREMENTS FOR OBTAINING THE
ENGLISH LANGUAGE AND LINGUISTICS DEGREE
TOPIC
THE USE OF PRE-WRITING GRAPHIC ORGANIZERS FOR THE
DEVELOPMENT OF WRITTEN PRODUCTION
PROPOSAL
SYSTEM OF ACTIVITIES BASED ON PRE-WRITING GRAPHIC ORGANIZERS.
AUTHORS
FREIRE MOREJON MERY LEONELA
MORENO TRIVIÑO ELIZA MARIANA
ACADEMIC CONSULTANT
MSC. HEIDI MARRIOTT TOLEDO
GUAYAQUIL, APRIL 2018
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Guayaquil, 2018
UNIVERSITY OF GUAYAQUIL
FACULTY OF PHILOSOPHY, LETTERS AND EDUCATION
SCIENCES OF EDUCATION SCHOOL OF LANGUAGES AND
LINGUISTICS
BOARD OF DIRECTORS
MSc. Silvia Moy-Sang Castro MSc. Wilson Romero Dávila
DEAN SUB DEAN
MSc. Alfonso Sánchez Ávila Ab. Sebastián Cadena Alvarado
DIRECTOR SECRETARY
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Msc.
SILVIA MOY-SANG CASTRO, Arq.
DECANA DE LA FACULTAD DE FILOSOFIA,
LETRAS Y CIENCIAS DE LA EDUCACION
CIUDAD.
De mis consideraciones: En virtud que las autoridades de la Facultad de Filosofía, Letras y Ciencias de la Educación me designaron Consultora Académica de Proyectos Educativos de Licenciatura en Ciencias de la Educación, Mención: lengua Inglesa y Lingüística, el 27 de Noviembre del 2017.
Tengo a bien informar lo siguiente:
Que Mery Leonela Freire Morejón, con C.C. 120713315-6 y Eliza Mariana
Moreno Triviño, con C.C 092144881-7, diseñó el proyecto educativo con el
Tema: The Use Of Pre-Writing Graphic Organizers for the Development of
Written Production. Propuesta: System of Activities Based on Pre-Writing
Graphic Organizers. El mismo que ha cumplido con las directrices y
recomendaciones dadas por la suscrita.
La participante ha ejecutado satisfactoriamente las diferentes etapas
constitutivas del proyecto, por lo que proceso a la aprobación del proyecto, y
pongo a vuestra consideración dadas por la suscrita.
Atentamente
MSc. Heidi Marriott Toledo
Consultora Académica
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MSc
SILVIA MOY-SANG CASTRO Arq.
DECANA DE LA FACULTAD DE
FILOSOFÍA, LETRAS Y CIENCIAS DE LA EDUCACIÓN.
CIUDAD.-
Para los fines legales pertinentes comunico a usted que los derechos
intelectuales del proyecto educativo con el tema: The Use of Pre-Writing
Graphic Organizers for the Development of Written Production. Propuesta:
System of Activities Based on Pre-Writing Graphic Organizers.
Pertenecen a la Facultad de Filosofía, Letras y Ciencias de la Educación.
Atentamente,
Mery Leonela Freire Morejón Eliza Mariana Moreno Triviño
C.I.120713315-6 C.I.092144881-7
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UNIVERSIDAD DE GUAYAQUIL
Facultad de Filosofía, Letras y Ciencias de la Educación
Escuela de Lenguas y Lingüística
PROYECTO
TEMA: THE USE OF PRE-WRITING GRAPHIC ORGANIZERS, FOR THE
DEVELOPMENT OF WRITTEN PRODUCTION.
PROPUESTA: SYSTEM OF ACTIVITIES BASED ON PRE-WRITING
GRAPHIC ORGANIZERS.
APROBADO
Tribunal No 1
Tribunal No 2 Tribunal No 3
Mery Leonela Freire Morejón Eliza Mariana Moreno Triviño
C.I.120713315-6 C.I. 092144881-7
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EL TRIBUNAL EXAMINADOR OTORGA AL
PRESENTE TRABAJO
LA CALIFICACIÓN DE:
EQUIVALENTE A:
TRIBUNAL
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DEDICATION
I would like to dedicate this Project to God because despite the adversities in
the studies and my life. He has given me the strength to continue and reach
my goal.
I also want to dedicate it:
To my parents for their unconditional support.
To my children, Nathalie and Bradley because they are the reason to
accomplish my goal.
Mery Leonela Freire Morejón
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DEDICATION
I want to dedicate this project first of all, to God for given me the wisdom and
life to allow me to conclude this important goal. To my family, specially my
mom Elisa Luna and Clariza Triviño, for giving me strength and support. To
my aunts, specially Jenny and Merly for welcoming in their home during all
this time, for their advice and give encouragement to keep going.
Eliza Mariana Moreno Triviño
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ACKNOWLEDGEMENT
This thesis would not have been possible without the generous assistance of
our dear teacher Mrs. Heidi Marriott Toledo, who shared with us their
knowledge and helped us in this last step of our career.
Mery Leonela Freire Morejón
Eliza Mariana Moreno Triviño
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GENERAL INDEX
Cover Page……………………………………….…………………………………………………..i
Board Of Director…………………………………………………………………………………….ii
Letter of Approval……………………………………………………………………………………iii
Intellectual Property Rights………………………………………………………………………...iv
Tribunal’s Approvals….……………………………………………………………………………..v
Tribunal’s Grade…………………………………………………………………………………….vi
Dedicatory…………………………………………………………………………………………..vii
Acknowledgement…………………………………………………………………………………..ix
General Index…………………………………………………………………………………….….x
Tables………………………………………………………………………………………………...xi
Figures……………………………………………………………………………………………….xii
National Repository………………………………………………………………………………..xiv
Abstract……………………………………………………………………………………………..xvi
Introduction………………………………………………………………………………………..xviii
CHAPTER I
THE PROBLEM
Problem Of the Investigation……………………………………………………………………….1
Problem Statement………………………………………………………………………………….1
Scientific Fact………………………………………………………………….…………………….2
Causes………………………………………………………………………….…………………….2
Problem Formulation…………………………………………………….………………………….3
General Objective………………………………………………………..………………………….3
Specific Objectives…………………………………………………….…….………………………3
Scientific Questions………………………………………………….…….………………………..4
Justification…………………………………………………………….…….………………………4
CHAPTER II
THEORICAL FRAMEWORK
Background……………………………………………………………..……………………………6
Theorical-Conceptual Framework…………………………………………………………………8
Contextual Framework…………………………………………………………………………….26
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Legal Framework…………………………………………………………………………………..27
CHAPTER III
METHODOLOGY, PROCESS, ANALYSIS AND DISCUSSION OF RESULTS
Methodological design…………………………………………………………………………….30
Types Of Research…………………………………………………………………………..…….30
Population and Sample……………………………………………………………………………31
Operationalization Of Variables Chart…………………………………………………………...32
Research Methods…………………………………………………………………………………33
Statical Methods And Techniques………………………………………………………………..34
Techniques Of the Investigation………………………………………………………………….34
Instrument Of The Investigation………………………………………………………………….35
Analysis And Interpretation Of The Results……………………………………………………..37
Analysis And Interpretation Of The Observation……………………………………………….37
Analysis And Interpretation Of The Survey Results……………………………………………39
Analysis And Interpretation Of The Interview Results………………………………………….54
Chi-Square Test……………………………………………………………………………………56
CHAPTER IV
THE PROPOSAL
Title…………………………………………………………………………………………………..58
Justification…………………………………………………………………………………………58
General objective…………………………………………………………………….…………….59
Specific Objectives……………………………………………………………………..………….59
Theorical Aspects……………………………………………………………………….…………59
Description Of The Proposal…………………………………………………………….………..60
Conclusions……………………………………………………………………………………….117
Recommendations………………………………………………………………………………..117
References………………………………………………………………………………………..119
Annexes…………………………………………………………………………………….……..123
TABLES
Table 1: Population and sample ........................................................................................ 32
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Table 2: Operational Matrix Chart of the Variables ............................................................ 32
Table 3: I like writing .......................................................................................................... 39
Table 4: I consider that writing is important ro express me ................................................ 40
Table 5 : I have problems at the moment of writing ........................................................... 41
Table 6: I think that is necessary to organize my ideas before writing ................................ 42
Table 7: I know the stages of writing .................................................................................. 43
Table 8: I believe that the P.W stages is important to produce a written text in a good wey44
Table 9: I have used Graphic Organizers before ............................................................... 45
Table 10: I know the variety of Graphic Organizers ........................................................... 46
Table 11: I know the differet types of text .......................................................................... 47
Table 12: I can describe in written form: events, feeling, etc .............................................. 48
Table 13: I can write formal and informal letters ................................................................ 49
Table 14: I can express my opinion in a written form ......................................................... 50
Table 15: I consider that I can organize my ideas and create an outline for written text ..... 51
Table 16: I know the important of check my final work ....................................................... 52
Table 17: I believe that a system of activities focused on the use of Grahic Organizers could
be useful for me................................................................................................................. 53
FIGURES
Figure 1: Benefits of Graphic Organizers ........................................................................... 11
Figure 2: Brainstorm .......................................................................................................... 12
Figure 3: Mind Map ........................................................................................................... 13
Figure 4: Outline ............................................................................................................... 14
Figure 5: Conceptual map ................................................................................................. 16
Figure 6: Word map .......................................................................................................... 17
Figure 7: Main Characteristics Diagram ............................................................................. 18
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Figure 8: GUIDE RESULTS............................................................................................... 37
Figure 9 I like writing.......................................................................................................... 39
Figure 10 I consider that wriing is important to express me ............................................... 40
Figure 11: I have problems at the moment of writing ......................................................... 41
Figure 12: I think that is necessary to organize my ideas before writing............................. 42
Figure 13: I know the stages of writng ............................................................................... 43
Figure 14: I believe that the pre-writing stages is important to produce a written text in a
good way ........................................................................................................................... 44
Figure 15: I have used graphic organizers before .............................................................. 45
Figure 16: I know the variety of graphics organizers .......................................................... 46
Figure 17: I know the different types of text ....................................................................... 47
Figure 18: I can describe in written form: events, feeling, etc............................................. 48
Figure 19: I can write formal and informal letters ............................................................... 49
Figure 20: I can express my opinion in written form ........................................................... 50
Figure 21: I consider that I can organize my ideas and create an outline for a written text . 51
Figure 22: I know the important of checking my finak work ................................................ 52
Figure 23: I believe that a system of activities focused on the use of graphic organizers
could be for me.................................................................................................................. 53
Figure 24: Chi-Square ....................................................................................................... 56
Figure 25: Correlation Test ................................................................................................ 56
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REPOSITORIO NACIONAL EN CIENCIA Y TECNOLOGÍA
FICHA DE REGISTRO DE TESIS/TRABAJO DE GRADUACIÓN
TÍTULO Y SUBTÍTULO: Uso de los organizadores gráficos en la pre-escritura para desarrollar la producción escrita.
Sistema de actividades basadas en organizadores gráficos en la pre-escritura.
AUTOR(ES) Freire Morejón Mery Leonela Moreno Triviño Eliza Mariana
REVISOR(ES)/TUTOR(ES) MSc. Marriott Toledo Heidi
INSTITUCIÓN: Universidad de Guayaquil
UNIDAD/FACULTAD: Filosofía , Letras y Ciencias de la Educación
MAESTRÍA/ESPECIALIDAD: Lenguas y Lingüística
GRADO OBTENIDO: Licenciatura en Ciencias de la Educación, Mención en la Lengua Inglesa y Lingüística.
FECHA DE PUBLICACIÓN: No. DE PÁGINAS: 160
ÁREAS TEMÁTICAS: Lengua Inglesa
PALABRAS CLAVES/ KEYWORDS:
Organizadores gráficos, producción escrita, pre-escritura, sistema de actividades
RESUMEN/ABSTRACT Este trabajo fue desarrollado con el fin de mejorar la producción escrita, mediante el uso de organizadores gráficos en la pre-escritura de los estudiantes del Primer Bachillerato, sección F, de la “Unidad Educativa Babahoyo”. El proyecto fue realizado mediante una investigación descriptiva, explicativa, propositiva mediante el uso del método cualitativo y cuantitativo. El tema ha sido sustentado por algunos principios teóricos basados en dos variables principales: producción escrita y organizadores gráficos; además, algunos métodos teóricos fueron usados, tales como: análisis-síntesis, inductivo-deductivo, lógico-histórico, sistemático-estructural-funcional, así como métodos estadísticos y técnicas, tales como la observación de clases, encuestas y entrevista. La aplicación y análisis de todos los elementos previamente mencionados han guiado a la conclusión de que, el uso de los organizadores gráficos en la pre-escritura ejerce una influencia en el desarrollo de la producción escrita. En consecuencia, los autores de esta investigación han diseñado y proponen un sistema de actividades destinadas a convertirse en una herramienta efectiva para solucionar este problema educativo. ADJUNTO PDF: SI NO
CONTACTO CON AUTOR/ES: Teléfono:
0982221490 0999847048
E-mail: [email protected] [email protected]
CONTACTO CON LA INSTITUCIÓN:
Nombre: Escuela de lenguas y lingüística.
Teléfono: (04)2294888 Ext. 123
E-mail: [email protected]
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NATIONAL REPOSITORYIN SCIENCE AND
TECHNOLOGY
THESIS REGISTRATION FORM
TITTLE AND SUBTITTLE: TITTLE AND SUBTITTLE: The use of Pre- Writing Graphic Organizers for the development of written production.
System of activities based on pre-writing graphic organizers.
AUTHOR(ES) Freire Morejón Mery Leonela Moreno Triviño Eliza Mariana
REVISOR(ES)/TUTOR(ES) MSc. Marriott Toledo Heidi
INSTITUTION: University of Guayaquil
UNIDAD/FACULTAD: Filosofía , Letras y Ciencias de la Educación
CAREER: Languages and Linguistics
DEGREE: Bachelor of Education in English Language and Linguistics.
PUBLICATION DATE: No. OF PAGES: 160
THEME AREAS: Lengua Inglesa
KEYWORDS: Graphic organizers, written production, system of activities
ABSTRACT: This issue is focused in the students of First Bachillerato, Room F, of Unidad Educativa Babahoyo, where the students were not able to organize their ideas at the moment of producing a written text. This implies an insufficiency in their written production which affects their overall language development. This work was developed in order to improve written production, through the uses of Graphic organizers in the pre-writing. The project was made using a descriptive, explanatory, propositive research through the use of the qualitative and quantitative method. This topic has been supported by several theoretical principles based on two main variables: written production and use of graphic organizers. In addition, some theoretical methods were used, such as: analysis-synthesis, inductive-deductive, logical-historical, systematic-structural-functional, as well as statistical and technical methods, such as observation of classes, surveys and interviews. The application and analysis of all the previously mentioned elements have led to the conclusion that the use of graphic organizers in pre-writing exerts an influence on the development of written production. Consequently, the authors of this research have designed and propose a system of activities designed to become an effective tool to solve this educational problem. ADJUNTO PDF: SI NO
CONTACTO CON AUTOR/ES: Teléfono:
0982221490 0999847048
E-mail: [email protected] [email protected]
CONTACTO CON LA INSTITUCIÓN:
Nombre: Escuela de lenguas y lingüística.
Teléfono: (04)2294888 Ext. 123
E-mail: [email protected]
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UNIVERSIDAD DE GUAYAQUIL
FACULTAD DE FILOSOFÍA, LETRAS Y CIENCIAS DE LA EDUCACIÓN
ESCUELA DE LENGUAS Y LINGUISTÍCA
Unidad de Titulación
“EL USO DE LOS ORGANIZADORES GRÁFICOS EN LA PRE-ESCRITURA PARA
DESARROLLAR LA PRODUCCIÓN ESCRITA.”
Sistema de actividades basadas en organizadores gráficos en la pre-escritura.
Autor: Mery Leonela Freire Morejón Eliza Mariana Moreno Triviño
Tutor: MSc.Heidi Marriott Toledo
RESUMEN
Este trabajo de investigación se enfoca en los estudiantes de Primer Bachillerato, Sala F, de la
Unidad Educativa Babahoyo, donde los estudiantes no pudieron organizar sus ideas al momento de
producir un texto escrito. Esto implica una insuficiencia en su producción escrita que afecta su
desarrollo general del lenguaje. Este trabajo fue desarrollado con el fin de mejorar la producción
escrita, mediante el uso de organizadores gráficos en la pre-escritura.
El proyecto fue realizado mediante una investigación descriptiva, explicativa, propositiva mediante
el uso del método cualitativo y cuantitativo. El tema ha sido sustentado por algunos principios
teóricos basados en dos variables principales: producción escrita y organizadores gráficos; además,
algunos métodos teóricos fueron usados, tales como: análisis-síntesis, inductivo-deductivo, lógico-
histórico, sistemático-estructural-funcional, así como métodos estadísticos y técnicas, tales como la
observación de clases, encuestas y entrevista.
La aplicación y análisis de todos los elementos previamente mencionados han guiado a la
conclusión de que, el uso de los organizadores gráficos en la pre-escritura ejerce una influencia en
el desarrollo de la producción escrita. En consecuencia, los autores de esta investigación han
diseñado y proponen un sistema de actividades destinadas a convertirse en una herramienta
efectiva para solucionar este problema educativo.
Palabras Claves: Organizadores gráficos, producción escrita, pre-escritura, sistema de actividades.
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UNIVERSIDAD DE GUAYAQUIL FACULTAD DE FILOSOFÍA, LETRAS Y CIENCIAS DE LA EDUCACIÓN
ESCUELA DE LENGUAS Y LINGUISTÍCA
Unidad de Titulación
“THE USE OF PRE-WRITING GRAPHIC ORGANIZERS FOR THE DEVELOPMENT OF WRITTEN PRODUCTION”
SYSTEM OF ACTIVITIES BASED ON PRE-WRITING GRAPHIC ORGANIZERS.
Author: Mery Leonela Freire Morejón Eliza Mariana Moreno Triviño
Advisor: MSc.Heidi Marriott Toledo
ABSTRACT
This issue is focused in the students of First Bachillerato, Room F, of Unidad Educativa Babahoyo,
where the students were not able to organize their ideas at the moment of producing a written text.
This implies an insufficiency in their written production which affects their overall language
development. This work was developed in order to improve written production, through the uses of
Graphic organizers in the pre-writing.
The project was made using a descriptive, explanatory, propositive research through the use of the
qualitative and quantitative method. This topic has been supported by several theoretical principles
based on two main variables: written production and use of graphic organizers. In addition, some
theoretical methods were used, such as: analysis-synthesis, inductive-deductive, logical-historical,
systematic-structural-functional, as well as statistical and technical methods, such as observation of
classes, surveys and interviews.
The application and analysis of all the previously mentioned elements have led to the conclusion that
the use of graphic organizers in pre-writing exerts an influence on the development of written
production. Consequently, the authors of this research have designed and propose a system of
activities designed to become an effective tool to solve this educational problem.
KEYWORDS: Graphic organizers, written production, system of activities.
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INTRODUCTION
The following research is based on English education in Babahoyo – Ecuador,
particularly it focuses the study of the use of Graphic organizers in the pre-writing to
facilitate the writing production, in the students of First Bachillerato, Room F of Unidad
Educativa Babahoyo.
In this institution, a deficiency in the writing skills was detected, through a direct
observation. This paper sustains that is important because this educative project is
performed to promote the correct learning process in writing in a creative and easy
way in the pre-writing. Furthermore, students could organize their ideas with the uses
of a system with graphics.
Chapter I: Presents the problem in the writing productions, the possible, the scientific
facts, possible causes of the problem, and the justification of the study.
Chapter II: Contains the theoretical bases on which the proposal is sustained through
theories and different Graphics Organizers that grounds the foundation of this
research.
Chapter III: Stablish the details of the methodological design for the research. Above
all, the types of research, techniques, and instruments used for the developing of the
project. Eventually, the analysis of the instruments with the conclusions and
recommendation.
Chapter IV: Offers the proposal of the research including the justification, conclusion,
and recommendations, so those teachers can apply the system of activities easily for
getting good results.
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CHAPTER I
THE PROBLEM
1. PROBLEM OF THE INVESTIGATION
The present research was developed in the Unidad Educativa
Babahoyo, it was focused on students of First of Bachillerato. According to
the Common European Framework (2002), the students in First of
Bachillerato must have a proficiency level of English language A2.2.
However, it has been found that in this educative unit, students
were not able to organize their ideas at the moment of producing a written
text. For that reason, students have an insufficiency in their written
production which affects their overall language development.
1.2. PROBLEM STATEMENT
The Ministry of Education of Ecuador has implemented the teaching
of the English language for students of fiscal educational institutions from
Second Grade of Basic General Education to the Third Year of
Bachillerato. This institution gives to the English teachers the guidelines
based on the Common European Framework, with the purpose and vision
of providing students a quality education. According the Ministry of
education the guidelines provided will form students capable of facing the
challenges of globalization.
The English education in Ecuador is changing day to day and
English teachers are always trying to work in better way with the students,
applying new techniques and tools that can facilitate the learning process.
After the initial observation, it was noticeable that students of the
First Year of Bachillerato had difficulties when writing about any kind of
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topic. This occurred because at first, they did not know how to put in order
their ideas. When they had to write about topics, the organization of ideas
is poor causing their written production to be limited. Therefore, they do
not finish covering the topic as requested by the teacher. Also, this
constitutes a conflict situation which is the insufficiency in the written
production.
Writing is a productive skill and sometimes it is one of the last
ones used in the classroom, because many times more focus on students
can communicate. However, when putting students to think about ideas on
a particular topic, they often have difficulties to write. Also, it is the last skill
that is worked many times the focus of writing is based only on
assimilation of grammar rules, this might the reason why many students
consider the writing as a difficult skill.
1.3. SCIENTIFIC FACT
Taking into account all these factors, it could be concluded that the
scientific fact of this research is insufficiency in written production of the
students of First of Bachillerato Room “F” of Unidad Educativa Babahoyo
in the academic year 2017-2018
1.4. CAUSES
Due to the insufficiency that has been found in the written ability of
the students of the First Year Bachillerato, Room “F”, of Unidad Educativa
Babahoyo, could be mention three specific causes that hinder the learning
and the development of this ability in the English language have been
observed, in which it can be mentioned:
Difficulty in the organization of students’ ideas.
Insufficient knowledge of tools such as graphic organizers for written
production.
Limited resources for the development of written production.
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1.5. PROBLEM FORMULATION
How does the use of graphic organizers to organize ideas in the
pre-writing stage influence the development of written production in
students of First Year Bachillerato, Room “F”, of Unidad Educativa
Babahoyo belonging to Zone 5, District 2CD01, Los Rios Province, Cantón
Babahoyo, in the 2017-2018 academic year?
1.6. RESEARCH OBJECTIVES
1.6.1. OBJECTIVES
1.6.1.1. GENERAL OBJECTIVE
To determine the influence of the use of pre-writing graphic
organizers for the organization of ideas in the improvement of written
production through a bibliographical study, field research and statistical
analysis to design a system of activities focused on the use of pre-writing
graphic organizers
1.6.1.2. SPECIFIC OBJECTIVES
The specific objectives of this project to improve the writing skills are:
To value the use of the graphic organizers to organize ideas in the pre-
writing stage through a bibliographical study, field research and
statistical analysis.
To characterize the process of written production improvement through
a bibliographical study, field research, and statistical analysis.
To design a system of activities focused on the use of graphic
organizers to improve the development of written production through
the interpretation of information obtained.
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1.7. SCIENTIFIC QUESTIONS
Starting from the problem mentioned above, the following questions can
be derived:
1. What is current level that the students of Second First of Bachillerato
section “F” of Unidad Educativa Babahoyo present?
2. How does the treatment of graphic organizers in the pre- writing stage
influence written production improvement?
3. What are the theoretical foundations that support the use of graphic
organizers to for the treatment of written production?
4. Which transformative proposal allows the improvement of activities
based on graphic organizers for pre-writing?
5. How will the design of a system of activities contribute to the
improvement of written production?
1.8. JUSTIFICATION
At the moment, the writing learning goal is not being achieved in the
written production, as at the time of producing a written text, students have
problems to organize their ideas.
To write is to express in a written way thoughts, feelings, and
knowledge that have been organized and prepared in advance. There are
some instruments that can help to organize ideas before writing a text.
Graphic organizers are one of them; this instrument is very useful because
they let students put in order their ideas.
According to the National Curriculum Guidelines (2014) students of
First of Bachillerato must have a proficiency level of English language
A2.2. This implies, according to the Common European Framework of
Reference for Languages (2002) that students at the end of the academic
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year should be able to produce texts such as essays, letters, descriptions,
etc.
In order to help students to improve their written production, graphic
organizers for the organization of ideas might become an aid in the
process.
Graphic organizers are schemes to organize the ideas in a visual
way, to understand, to keep and remember information, they are
considered as a good instrument to help students establish an idea at the
moment of they start to produce a written text, they are an alternative to
taking notes or organizing ideas, as well as helping improve their written
production easily.
Furthermore, this research complies with the current legal body in
place in Ecuador like what is established in the National Plan of Good
Living (2013), article 4. 1, literal: e. In this literal, it is explicitly mentioned
that to strengthen the capacities and potentialities of citizenship, it must be
guaranteed the access to the educational resources necessary for the
good performance, attendance, and permanence of the school-age
population to the National System of Public Education.
Effectively, this confirms the pertinence of this project because, in
this research, it is proposed the written production of the students a
solution for the problem that affects them.
To conclude this educative project is performed to promote the
correct learning process in writing in a creative and easy way. In
consequence, students will be seen as the principal beneficiaries with the
solution proposed and teachers will find the proposal as a great help for
their writing lessons and work with the future students who present the
same problem in writing. Moreover, even the community will be benefited,
taking into account that all this process contributes to the development of
Ecuador.
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CHAPTER II
THEORETICAL FRAMEWORK
2. 1 BACKGROUND
After a rigorous analysis of the current research about the learning
of English as a foreign language it was possible to find that there are many
authors who write about the writing skill and the different techniques that
can be used to reinforce it.
According to Yi (2009) various definitions of writing ability have
been formulated according the two main approaches for the teaching of
writing. In order to do this the author mentioned a classification of
approaches such as the text-oriented approach and the writer-oriented
approach.
In concordance, this author states that the product/text-oriented
approach sees texts as either a contextually autonomous objects focusing
on the surface structures of writing at sentence level, or discourse,
emphasizing cohesion and the processability of text.
According the writer-oriented approach Tribble’s (1996) explains
that this writing approach emphasizes mechanical aspects of writing, such
as focusing on grammatical and syntactical structures which lead learners
to imitate certain writing styles. This approach is primarily concerned with
correctness and form of the final product. However, Tribble also suggests
that this approach fails to recognize that people write for an audience and
for a purpose and that ideas are created and formulated during the
process of writing. Therefore, the writer-oriented approach emphasizes
that writing itself is a developmental process that creates self-discovery
and meaning.
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Hedge (1998) argue that approaches to the teaching of writing can
be grouped into two groups: the product approach vs. the process
approach.
In concordance, Hyland (2002) said that since factors such as
audience and social context have come to be considered important in
writing, approaches involving these elements need to be included in the
discussion.
Moore, Readence & Rickelman (1983) describe the graphic
organizers as providing a verbal and visual structure to obtain a new
vocabulary, identifying, classifying the main concepts and vocabulary
relationships within a unit of study.
Robinson (1998) conducted an investigation on graphic organizers
and suggests that teachers and researchers use only those organizers
created for beginners and those that adapt to the content. This implies that
for students the graphic organizers should be implement in an easy form
for their comprehension.
Currently, the use of graphic organizers is usual in the learning
process. According to Campos (2005), visualizing also helps us establish
relationships between different ideas and concepts. He also affirms that
the graphic organizers are a visual aid for students because in this form,
they can memorize the information easily.
In summary, it is said that graphic organizers are useful for the
written production because through them it is possible to organize the
ideas and have the bases to be able to structure a written text.
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2.1 THEORETICAL- CONCEPTUAL FRAMEWORK
In the learning of English as a foreign language, the reinforce of
writing skill is fundamental, because this way of communication allow
students to express their feelings and ideas.
From the didactic point of view, Barragán (2013) states that the
written production is an object that help the students to shape a global
vision of writing and allow them to identify the relationships between the
elements of the text unit and the formal tools that establish them, such as
connectors, punctuation marks, etc.
The Ministry of Education of Ecuador (2016) states that the
learning of writing in English takes place in a progression that ranges from
imitation or controlled writing at lower levels of language proficiency to
expressive writing that implies a more independent use of language. The
teaching of writing also contemplates how to generate ideas and how to
organize them and give them coherence according to the type of text,
using the appropriate expressions and grammar.
In addition, this ministry presents the purpose of the written
production in two aspects: as a social practice that takes into account the
context, the purpose and the audience; but also as a way to learn by
applying techniques such as: Process writing, brainstorming, handwriting,
spelling patterns.
The ability of written production does not refer only to the graphic
representation of language, but it is a process with defined steps, whose
result is the product of reflection, testing, correction and review. This
process allows students to discover and develop writing strategies, revise
their mistakes and learn from them, in order to improve their
performances.
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Pujol cited by Sotomayor, Lucchini, Bedwell, Biedma, Hernandez,
Molina (2013) considers that written production is one of the most complex
tasks faced by students, since it involves the deployment and coordination
of linguistic and cognitive skills, and also requires pragmatic knowledge.
According to Sotomayor et al. (2013) the writing process leads to
an interaction between different subprocesses. Thus, in the construction of
a text three main stages are identified (planning, textualization and
revision of the writing), each of which involves subprocesses of different
complexity (for example, generation of ideas, organization and definition of
objectives in the phase of planning), which are constantly submitted to the
evaluation and review of the writer.
These tasks, however, are not necessarily done in a linear mode,
but interact and alternate with greater or lesser flexibility according to the
writer's expertise.
According to Delrose (2011), there is a huge difficulty for children in
the writing learning process, but in particular for those with language
based learning difficulties. For improve their written production, these
students have to do an extra effort with the language skills of spelling,
sentence formation, word choice, and punctuation, but also have difficulty
with the cognitive processes of planning and organizing the topic for
writing.
This research aims to deepen the information related to
organization of ideas, for this it is necessary to do a review of the stages of
writing. A publication of Capella University (2015) mentions the critical
thinking and states that comes into play in the phases that generate the
written production: prewriting, drafting, revising and polishing. In fact,
recommends to follow the next steps for a correct writing process which
are:
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Prewriting: In this stage, it is necessary to choose a topic and
determine the objective of text and whom is addressed.
Drafting: This step is for put in a written way all the ideas collected in
the before step, taking in account the correct language for each type of
texts.
Revising: It is recommended that the writer put himself in the reader's
place and, according to this, make the necessary changes for a better
comprehension.
Polishing: it is the last edition and in this stage the writers will verify
the readability of their work. At the end can be presented the final work.
Even though every single stage is fundamental for the correct
writing process, this research is focused on the pre-writing stage.
a) PREWRITING
According to Armstrong (2006), in the prewriting stage there are
some activities that can facilitates the writing process such as thinking
about the topic, taking notes, sharing opinions with others, brainstorming,
outlining, in this last activities the author makes reference to the graphic
organizers.
Kang (2004) defines a graphic organizer as a creative technique
used to present complex information and convert it into a simple and
meaningful graphic display of the relationships between concepts.
According to this author Graphic organizers can be used by students, as a
study tool to better understand vocabulary meanings or topics.
On the other hand, Grabe & Jiang (2007) states that teachers can
use the graphic organizer prior, during, or following the teaching or a topic
to organize the concepts taught. Suitable graphic organizers can be
created or chosen by teachers alone, students alone, or both, to teach a
certain set of vocabulary. Graphic organizers need to be as simple, clear,
direct and teachable as possible.
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Figure 1: Benefits of Graphic Organizers
Source: The Use of Graphic organizers to enhance thinking skills in the Learning of Economics. Created by: Hong Kong Curriculum Development Institute. Personal, Social and Humanities Education Section.
b) CLASSIFICATION OF GRAPHIC ORGANIZERS
In this study, it has been selected six graphic organizers, that
according with the authors studied, could be more effective its application
to the students of the universe studied.
1) BRAINSTORM
The brainstorm is an activity to stimulate creative thinking, where
students will suggest, develop their ideas spontaneously, cleverly and
brightly to solve a problem.
In concordance with Armstrong (2006), this activity is useful for the
ideas’ generation; the author mentions that this activity can be used for
writing in all levels. With this the author wants to make conscience that
students can use this activity since the first years of their school life.
Capella University (2015) states that, the brainstorming is a thinking
activity and there is exist an interaction between thinking and writing. Idea
trees, freewriting, mapping, and questioning all describe strategies that
force writers to expand their thinking, make connections, and ask hard
questions.
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Figure 2: Brainstorm
Source: 8 kinds of writing (2001) Created by: Goose. (2001)
2) MIND MAP
The James Cook University (2006) presents the mind map as a tool
which is a great help for the learning process. According to this author, the
mind map was created by Buzan.
According to Buzan (2011) a Mind Map is a powerful graphic
technique which provides a universal key to unlock the potential of the
brain. It harnesses the full range of cortical skills – word, image, number,
logic, rhythm, colour and spatial awareness – in a single, uniquely
powerful manner.
Developing a Mind Map
The development of the mind map is to establish the relationships
between concepts, write down key ideas, put the main idea in the center
and draw quickly on unlined paper without pausing or editing.
Applications
Different types of mind maps can be used for: preparing an essay, making
exams or taking notes.
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Figure 3: Mind Map
Source: https: http://www.tonybuzan.com/images/mm_chemistry.jpg
Created by: Buzan (2017)
3) OUTLINE
According to an official publication of the Aims community
college (2017), an outline is a map of an essay. In concordance
with the author, the outline could be considered as the structure of
the essay. The main ideas/paragraphs of the essay have been
grouped into an order that makes sense; the main idea behind
each paragraph is identified along with the support that will be
offered. Essentially, the essay is completely organized. Now the
writer can simply follow the outline and turn each idea into a
paragraph by expanding on the details that are present.
It is important to take into account that this graphic organizer
saves a lot of time in the writing process of an essay.
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Development of the Outline
To develop the outline in the first place, is necessary to write
sentences that capture the main idea, in order to prepare a tentative
outline, and spend some time freewriting arguments in favor and against
the topic.
Might need to rethink your argument, pretending to be a hostile
reader, furthermore ask every uncomfortable question that should be
answer the argument you have outlined.
Circle and draw lines between statements or assumptions made
and the evidence used to back them up, together with the evidence you
circled, and use this line of critical thinking to identify the problem, give it a
name and define the problem. Last but not least, escribe the hard
evidence that a problem exists and how it affects other people or things
and do not forget to describe as many possible solutions.
Figure 4: Outline
Source: https://educators.brainpop.com/printable/paragraph-graphic-organizer/ Created by: Samantha Keys
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4) CONCEPTUAL MAP
According to Novak & Gowin cited by Rodriguez (2007) concept maps are
instruments developed to study the formation of concepts and meanings in
children. Its main objective is to represent significant relationships between
concepts in form of propositions. When talking about proposition, it is
making a reference to two or more concepts united by words and that
together form a unity with a specific meaning.
According to Campos (2005) the concept map can be understood
as a strategy, to help students learn and teachers to organize the material
for learning; and as a method to help students to help grasp the meaning
of learning materials and as a resource, to schematically present a set of
conceptual meanings.
In agreement to this, the author gives some directions to elaborate
the word map.
Development of the conceptual map
For the elaboration of the conceptual map, the following procedure
must be applied:
At the beginning, decide and remember the topic to develop to
identify the concepts associated with the first concept, furthermore,
establish relationships between concepts. Continue establishing
relationships with concepts from another level to the end. Given these
points, check and correct the presentation of the final version.
Components
The graphic expression of a conceptual map is done using the
following: ellipses, rectangles, and squares can also be used, these
concepts are written, and straight lines are used to join the concepts that
are related.
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Applications
The application of the conceptual maps is an illustration ingredient
to represent knowledge, as an instrument to explore the student’s prior
knowledge. On the whole, is teaching tool for teaching, and understand
the topic to be addressed.
Figure 5: Conceptual map
Source: Journal of Business and Management Sciences. 2014
Created by: Edson Coutinho
5) WORD MAP
According to Jones (2007), a word map is a visual organizer that
helps students engage with and think about new terms or concepts in
several ways. In concordance with the author, this graphic organizer could
be used for gat some ideas about a topic and promotes vocabulary
improvement in the students.
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Development of the word map
To develop the word map mainly the new term goes in the middle of the
map, thus, students should fill in the rest of the map with a definition,
synonyms, and antonyms.
Eventually, it is recommendable to draw a picture to help illustrate the new
concept or topic.
Applications
The application of word map helps students visualize the connections
between words and concepts, allow understand, understand, acquires and
retain the new vocabulary. Moreover, this graphic organizer facilitates the
redaction if instead of a word the students put a topic.
Figure 6: Word map
Source: http://www.readingrockets.org/strategies/word_maps Created by: www.readingrockets.org
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6) MAIN CHARACTERISTICS DIAGRAM
Campos (2005) states that this diagram is used to present the main
characteristics of an object, article, instrument, etc. It is a drawing of the
object in which the most important characteristics are marked, they are
named and described shortly. According to the object, the most
outstanding characteristics are identified, an explanatory text is marked
and written.
To conclude, with the contribution of the authors mentioned before,
it is possible to stablish the importance of the pre-writing stage in writing
process and the useful that the graphic organizers can be for the
organization of ideas.
Figure 7: Main Characteristics Diagram
Source: Microsoft Word
Created by: Freire Mery & Moreno Eliza
For the study of the variables in study, it is important to mention the
theories of different authors from the pedagogical point of view.
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Daniels cited by Ledesma (2014) states that the pedagogy is the
means by which education organizes the social influences. In fact, Piaget
& Inhelder (2015) state that the experience of the child, the situations with
which he faces are generated by his social environment, and things
appear in contexts that give them special meanings. which implies an
epistemological change that stablishes the subject and the object as active
entities.
Hyland cited by Flores (2016) affirm that the constructionist side
has exerted a great influence on the description of writing in English for
academic purposes. With this the author means that the written production
occupies a central place in professional practice and learning, and the
acquisition of a specialist culture is fundamental to professional success.
The current teaching of specialty English admits that the
conventions of each discipline are complex and the written production is
created through the experiences that the writer possesses of previous
discourses, and not through the explicit knowledge of rules. Certain genres
acquire meaning as discourse within a specific context; thus, the teacher
has to encourage the student to discover how valued textual forms and
their practices are socially constructed in response to the common
objectives of the target communities.
The aim is to provide the student with a series of framework
guidelines so that he can produce texts, making him aware of the
connections between the forms, objectives and role of the participants in
specific social contexts.
In another hand, Vigotsky (1998) states that the properties of an
object of knowledge imply that the child has to interact with the object but
also with another individual, which gives the character of social interaction
where the actions of one affect those of the other.
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Vygotsky himself expressed the idea that to understand the actions
performed by an individual it is necessary, first, to understand the social
relationships in which that individual develops what makes the everyday
social context where the subject appropriates knowledge which is
completely by its own personal and social history, that is, by its interaction
as a social subject.
This causes both social and individual learning that is internalized in
the individual, this is explained by the process of internalization.
The proposal by Goodman (1993) is based on the philosophy of
Integral Language is not a method to teach reading and writing, which is a
new conception of language and human being in interaction, where
teachers and students have a leading role in the teaching and learning
process as researchers in contexts sociocultural in search of knowledge of
different realities. Also, González cited by Ledesma (2014) propose the
scope to promote Teaching-Learning compatible with the emotional
development of brain in order to:
1. Promote the best of each one offering the possibility of developing the
multiple Intelligences.
2. Create in your classroom areas that resemble the reality of life.
3. Use as a strategy to focus attention, commitment to emotions.
4. Promote collaborative work.
5. Respect the learning times of the students: be flexible.
6. Have as a goal the understanding.
7. Work with mental maps, permanently relating patterns mental.
8. Work mental skills.
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9. Promote spaces and times for personal reflection, self-evaluation and
Metacognition.
To conclude the studies of Piaget and Vygotsky, agree that
knowledge is given by a constructive process of the subject in interaction
with the environment and the scope of González is presented as great
support for the learning process.
For the linguistic aspect of the variables studied in this research, it
could be mentioned the following theories and opinions from a variety of
authors:
Tamayo, Ribes, & Padilla Vargas (2010) affirm that two sorts of
linguistic modes exist in the learning process such as: Reactive mode an
active mode. The authors explain that the reactive mode refers to the
functions of the individual as a reader, listener and observer. In other hand
the active mode acts as mediators in other ways, they represent actions of
the individual as pointing / gesturing, speaking and writing.
In agreement with the authors mentioned before, the active mode in
linguistics refers to the actions made by the learners to communicate their
ideas based on the language. For this it is fundamental to study the
functions of the language, because determined the form used by the
writers for transmit their message.
Flores(2016) states that written language lacks certain essential
attributes of oral language: intonation, accent, facial and body language,
and gestural language, this lack is compensated with greater clarity or with
the use of various stylistic and grammatical techniques that help to focus
attention on central point.
In agreement with the author mentioned before, in the written
production is fundamental to be clear with the message that will be given
and have a correct vocabulary according to the reader who is addressed
the written text.
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According to Ronquillo (2009) the communicative competence in
the teaching of languages had its origins around the decade of the 60s of
the 20th century. In it, Chomsky introduces the elements 'competition-
performance', where the first implies the knowledge that the speaker /
listener has of their language, understand linguistic knowledge
(phonological, morphological, syntactic, semantic and lexical) and the
second is the real use of the language in specific situations.
According to Halliday cited by Chaves (2001) there are seven
categories of linguistic functions that are developed in the social context
and that apply both to oral language and written language:
Instrumental: It is the language used to respond to needs.
Regulatory: It is the one used to control the behavior of others
Interactional: It refers to language to maintain and establish social
relationships.
Personal: It is that it allows to express personal opinions
Imaginative: It allows us to express what we imagine and create
Heuristic language: It allows us to create information and answers
about different things that we want to know.
Informative language: It is the one that allows to communicate
information
For improving the written production, it is necessary to study the
types of text and the qualities that should have. Through a bibliographical
research it was found that there is a variety of types of text, thinking the
needs of the students in study. The classification is the following:
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Narrative text: it is the narration of events in which characters
intervene and that develop in space and time. The facts are told by a
narrator.
Expositive Text: This type of text is known as informative in the school
setting. The primary function of the informative text is to transmit
information but it is not limited to simply providing data but also adds
explanations, describes with examples and analogies.
Descriptive text: It refers to the characteristics or properties of an
object or situation. its structure is basically organized on the spatial
dimension. The description always supposes then a form of analysis,
because details feelings, situations or things.
Informational text: This text is made based on events that occurred to
people or real things or real events, current or past. Within the
informational texts are the journalistic texts that inform about reality.
Informative texts of type scientist are used to raise awareness the
results and details of the investigations of the most various topics.
According to Pérez (2014), the qualities that the text should are the
following:
Clarity: It is achieved through well-constructed sentences, ordered and
without implied in general, scientific texts maintain a simplicity syntactic,
although there are also more complex syntax texts.
Precision: Ambiguous terminology and subjectivity should be avoided,
and instead use univocal terms (terms with only one signifier and
meaning).
Universality: It is the possibility that the treated facts can be
understood in any part of the world by any member of the group that
goes addressed. For this purpose, a specific terminology that can be
translate very easily from one language to another.
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From the Philosophical point of view, Capella University (2015)
affirms that writers often appeal to emotions or morality when they are
making their works. They might use fear, happiness, sadness, patriotism,
flattery, or loyalty to bring readers around to their points of view.
Coello, Hernandez, Sintras, Rodriguez & Betancourt (2014) state
the need to recognize scientific writing as an ethical guideline in
publications, and to assess the entire publication process carried out by
the author from an axiological perspective, where he expresses the
values: responsibility, honesty, humanism.
This authors also affirm that the human being, as a social entity,
must act according to the norms that each context requires, from their
relationships in the family, life in society and professionally. In the latter the
Individuals must manifest responsibility in the functions that are their
responsibility.
In conclusion, taking into account all the opinions of the authors
mentioned before, it can be said it that is important for writers to take
conscience of what they are writing, and is fundamental that in their written
works always prevails the values, in this way will be a contribution for the
community.
From the psychological point of view there are different opinion
from a diversity of authors which will be mentioned on the following
paragraphs:
Tribble cited by Flores (2016) affirms that the difficulty of writing lies
mainly in its own artificial and learned nature, as well as in the way in
which written language has evolved in urban societies with a highly
developed technology to tackle complex social and intellectual tasks.
According to this author, children understand the different roles that
spoken language plays through a process of trial and error, but it is not
until the formal education period that they come to understand the social
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role played by having access to written language. While the main objective
of speech is to establish a relationship, in writing, children try to record
things, complete tasks, or develop ideas and arguments.
For this, it is important the use of techniques that facilitates the
written production, techniques as the graphic organizers.
Ausubel cited by Campos (2005) states that graphic organizers
serve as mental tools to help the students understand and retain important
information and relationships. In agreement with this author it can be said
that the graphic organizers are a great help for students because these
tools help them in their cognitive process.
Ledesma (2014) affirms that basic cognitive processes tend to use
the mental operations that are given in Vygotsky's hierarchy, therefore,
cognitive processes superiors use functions as similarity, of course
influenced by their socio-educational context to improve thinking with
psychology and pedagogy.
According to Ausubel (2000) proposes that meaningful learning as
the basis of school learning, a fundamental condition, to achieve
significance is that the new information can be related substantively with
others that we already have. This relationship can be facilitated with the
use of previous organizers, as this provides conceptual contact, to
integrate a new knowledge.
In conclusion, the graphic organizers allow the learners to acquire
new knowledge based on the prior knowledge, generating with this a
meaningful learning, in other words a consolidation of knowledge.
The sociological aspect of the variables in study will be presented
on the following theories:
According to Val (2013) the written production is very important in
two ways: first, because it is an intellectual exercise that leads to the
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transformation of knowledge itself; and second is the way that the
members of the academic community make known their advances and
findings. With this the author tries to relate the writing skill with the
socialization of knowledge.
In other hand, Ribes (2007) states that human behavior is practiced
and always makes sense within language. Since language is present in all
human interactions, it is possible to think that it plays a fundamental role in
learning. In this way the author states that each type of relationship
between language and learning, exemplifies the qualitative changes that
occur in terms of the capacities and experiences.
Capella University (2015) states that the social aspects of the
writing are in the intellectual’s exercises. This makes references to the
interaction with the others. That could be reflected in the classroom with
activities such as: writing letters or exchanging notes with different
messages.
In conclusion, the writing skill is important for the communication
because this skill allow the human being to interact with others.
CONTEXTUAL FRAMEWORK
The present research was developed in the Unidad Educativa
Babahoyo, it was focused on students from First Year Bachillerato, Room
“F”, where it has been noticed that in students have not been receiving the
necessary encouragement and tools to allow them to improve their written
production. This problem is generated particularly due to the insufficient
writing resources available to develop this skill.
This Educative Unit began its history in the year 1960, beginning its
activities with the purpose of achieving the creation of a high school
dedicated to the formation of young ladies, an idea that has the support of
the then Minister of Education Mr. Dr. Sergio Quirola, who through
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Ministerial Resolution # 635 of May 19, 1961 creates the legendary
National School of Ladies "Babahoyo”. Whose classes began on May 29,
1961, a day of great emotion for the city of Babahoyo.
After more than 10 years working as a ladies' high school, due to
the agreement # 3922 May 12, 1986 transforms into a Higher Technical
Institute to the National School of Young Ladies "Babahoyo". After a
decade later the agreement # 3391 July 24, 1996 elevates the Babahoyo
Higher Technical Institute to the category of Higher Technical and
Technological Institute, with the third year of studies in System Analysis,
Fashion Design and Business Management.
This high school has two daily shifts. It has 2238 students divided
in 925 boys and 1313 girls. This establishment offers three specializations
such as: Science (BGU), Technical in Computer Applications, Technical in
Accounting Administration.
Currently, the Unidad Educativa Babahoyo counts with approximately,
forty students per classroom, an auditorium and a library, but unfortunately
it does not count with an English lab. The Unidad Educativa Babahoyo is
located on It is located in Avenida Enrique Ponce Luque, calle Jorge
Villega, zone 5; district 2CD01, circuit 06 province Los Ríos, Cantón
Babahoyo.
LEGAL FRAMEWORK
The present investigation is based on the Organic Law of
Intercultural Education and the Code of the childhood and Adolescence,
which in the article 37 of The Code of the childhood and Adolescence
Chapter III, Section fourth it is established the next:
Article 37.- It guarantees that children and
adolescents have teachers, didactic materials,
laboratories, premises, adequate facilities and resources
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and enjoy a favorable environment for learning. This right
includes effective access to initial education from zero to
five years, and therefore flexible and open programs and
projects, adapted to the cultural needs of the students, will
be developed;
According to what it is mentioned in this article, children and
adolescents have the right to a quality education from the beginning of
their years of study, with methodology, materials and didactic resources
that will facilitate a better learning in each subject and level that they study.
In the articles 2 and 43 of The Organic Law of Intercultural
Education (LOEI) it is established the next:
Article 2, Section ll.- Relevance. - Students are guaranteed a
training that responds to the needs of their social, natural and cultural
environment at the local, national and global levels.
Article 43.- The unified general Bachillerato comprises three years
of compulsory education following general basic education. Its purpose is
to provide people with a general education and interdisciplinary
preparation to guide them in the development of life projects and to
integrate themselves into society as responsible, critical and supportive
human beings. It develops permanent learning and citizenship skills in
students, and prepares them for work, entrepreneurship, and access to
higher education.
Moreover, the national curriculum guidelines (2014) states that in
First of Bachillerato, students have to produce longer, more detailed,
complex transactional, expository and informational texts than those
presented in previous years and with more variety in sentence structure
and lexical range. Also they will be able to produce simple narrative texts
with some detail and variety in sentence structure yet may contain some
usage error.
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By the end of First Year of Bachillerato, students will have reached
the communicative competence for A2 proficiency level, and they will be
able to communicate in simple, routine tasks requiring a simple, direct
exchange of information on familiar and routine matters; describing in
simple terms aspects of their background, immediate environment, and
matters in areas of immediate need.
One of the objectives promoted by the ministry of education to
strength the teaching of the English language, is to provide contemporary
support resources for teaching and learning this language and inform the
educational.
The articles mentioned refers to the students who have completed
the basic education in such a way that the purpose in them is to train them
in the academic and social. So, they can be defended in higher education
which is the last level of study that must be done to go out to provide their
services to society as a good professional.
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CHAPTER III
METHODOLOGY, PROCESS, ANALYSIS AND DISCUSSION OF
RESULTS
3.1. Methodological design
The methodology influenced in this research about the use of pre-
writing organizers for the improvement of written production will use a
mixed methods approach, as it is of qualitative and quantitative nature.
It is a qualitative investigation because it is based on the data
obtained from the instruments of investigation that allows the interpretation
and analysis of how this problem affects the population. Furthermore, it is
a quantitative investigation because it provides numerical data, results in
concrete answers regarding the different manifestation of the problem in
the investigation through the application of the instruments used in the
research. It allows using tables for the presentation of the measures made
by the authors.
3.2. Types of research
In this project the types of investigation used are the following:
Descriptive research
The descriptive method seeks an initial knowledge of the reality that
occurs from the direct observation of the researcher and the knowledge
obtained by reading or studying the information provided by other authors.
With this research the real situation of students of the First Year of
Bachillerato, Room “F”, of Unidad Educativa Babahoyo will be reflected.
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Explanatory research
This research is explanatory because it allows searching the cause
of the facts through the establishment of cause-effect relationships. In this
case the fundamental cause of this project is the insufficiency in the written
production produced by the lack of the use of graphic organizers to
organize ideas in the prewriting stage.
Purposeful research
It is purposeful because it is based on a need of students of the
First Year of Bachillerato, Room “F”, of the Unidad Educativa Babahoyo, in
which a proposal will benefit students helping them to improve their written
production.
3.3. Population and sample
This research is focused on the students of the First Year of
Bachillerato, Room “F” from Unidad Educativa Babahoyo, located in
Babahoyo, Los Rios province. Although, the universe population is
determined by a total of 240 students and tree teachers. All whom belong
to the First Year Bachillerato, and correspond to six rooms with forty
students each, the problem was identified in the last group in Room “F”,
this means that this group became the sample for this study.
Furthermore, the sample in the study was selected, after a revision
of the current score analysis performed by the Vicerrectorado of the school
regarding the group which presented more problems in the English
subject. According to the authority, students of the First of Bachillerato,
Room “F”, have the lowest level of English language, compared to the
other sections in the same year of Bachillerato.
In this table, a detailed the distribution of the population and sample is
made:
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Table 1: Population and sample
Description Population Sample Percentage
Students 40 40 100%
Teacher 1 1 100%
Total 41 41 100%
Source: Unidad Educativa Babahoyo Authors: Freire Morejon Mery & Moreno Triviño Eliza.
3.4. Operationalization of variables chart
Table 2: Operational Matrix Chart of the Variables
DIMENSIONS INDICATORS
DEPENDENT
VARIABLE WRITTEN
PRODUCTION
Conceptualization Definition
Characteristics
Types of text
Narrative
Expository
Descriptive
Informational
Qualities of text Clarity
Precision
Universality
Linguistics functions
Instrumental
Regulatory
Interactional
Personal
Imaginative
Informative
INDEPENDENT VARIABLE GRAPHIC
ORGANIZERS
Conceptualization Definition
Characteristics
Classification of
Graphic organizers
Brainstorm
Outline
Mind map
Conceptual Map
Word Map
Main Characteristics
Diagram
Source: Methodology, process, analysis and discussion of results Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
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3.5. Research methods
Salas & Cárdenas (2008) affirm that the research methods explain a
certain phenomenon and/or determine what the conditions in which this
occurs are. That is why to discover and use of graphic organizers to
organize ideas in the prewriting stage for improve the written production in
students of the First Year of Bachillerato, Room "F" of Unidad Educativa
Babahoyo, the theoretical methods included in this investigation are the
following:
Analysis–Synthesis method
The analytical method refers to the analysis of things or
phenomena; it refers to the decomposition and examination of all the
factors to reach a conclusion. The synthetic method refers to the synthesis
of the phenomena.
This project will use the analytical because it analyzes all the
factors through a bibliographical, field and statistical research, which after
that made possible to state a conclusion.
Inductive-deductive method
In this project, the inductive-deductive method was applied. It is
inductive because this study work is addressed to a specific section of the
population of Unidad Educativa Babahoyo, it means students of First Year
of Bachillerato, Room “F”, as is the deficiency in the pre-writing stage to
the general understanding based in written production using the deductive
method.
Historical-logical method
This method has been applied in the study work because it was
realized a compilation of information of the variables which are: graphic
organizers and written production. Authors were cited to verify the theories
mentioned.
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Systemic-Structural-Functional method
In this project it has been used this method because it will be
designing a proposal that will be structured in function to generate a
solution to the problem in study.
That is why to solve the problem of investigation it will be designed
a system of activities focused on the use of graphic organizers in the
prewriting stage to improve the written production.
3.6. Statistical methods and techniques
For the analysis of the reality of the sample in study is necessary
collect information through research instruments and statistical techniques
to allow their analysis.
3.7. Techniques of the investigation
In this project were used various techniques to identify and delimit the
problem and solution, the following techniques were applied in this
research.
3.7.1 Observation
The observation is a technique used by the researcher to compile
information to identify a problem and find a possible solution, through a
natural observation in the classroom. Moreover the researcher will see the
behavior, participation of the students after teacher gives instruction to do
an activity, and the development of the English class.
3.7.2 Survey
Ruiz (2006) states that the survey is an interrogative process that
focuses its scientific value on the rules of its procedure, it is used to know
what people think about a situation or problem. The researcher will be
apply a survey to the students to know the situation or problem that
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involves in the English class, at the time of producing a written production,
what are their interest, knowledge, weakness in this skills, in a fast and
efficient way.
3.7.3 Interview
According to Ruiz (2006), the interview is the practice that allows
the researcher to obtain first-hand information. The interview can be
carried out directly, by telephone, by sending questionnaires by mail or in
group sessions. For this project the interview will be a timeline
conversation between the researcher and the teacher, it is expected to
collect valuable information to understand how is the situation inside the
class between the teacher and the students, and how the teacher handles
it.
3.8 Instruments of the investigation
The instruments of the investigation applied in this research project
were: an observation guide for the teacher and students in the class,
questionnaire to the students, and an interview to the teacher
3.8.1 Observation Guide
For the purpose of this observation, the instrument used will be an
observation guide, which contains six behaviors for the teacher and five for
the students that are expected to be observed during the English class.
Furthermore, during the class the researcher does not have contact with
the students or teacher, will be only objective observers.
These criteria or behaviors are related to the way in which the
teacher handles this skill within the class, as well as the behavior that the
students assume during the class.
The observation class will be performed in the First Year of
Bachillerato, Room "F", of Unidad Educativa Babahoyo, where an English
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class was observed in order to know the reality of its development. On the
other hand, the observation sheet consisted of 12 criteria that will be
analyzed through observation, providing the researcher the opportunity to
identify if the behavior was observed or not, as well as starting observation
gathered during the process.
3.8.2 Survey to the students
For this research, the instrument that will be used in this project as
survey will be a questionnaire. This questionnaire will help to the
researcher to compile information about what level of development that
students have in the production of written text, essays or letter, and its
treatment in class
The questionnaire includes 15 items or structured questions related
to the research variable that allowed students to express their opinions,
the Likert scale will be implemented to obtain a better analysis of the
results. In this case, the survey has been applied to students of First Year
Room "F", from Unidad Educativa Babahoyo.
3.8.3 Interview to the teacher
The interview instrument In this case, for the interview was
elaborated as a questionnaire of six open-ended questions addressed to
the English teacher in charge of the students of the First Year of
Bachillerato, Room "F", of Unidad Educativa Babahoyo.
The interview sheet contained six interrogates that will be orally
applied to the English teacher; with this, the researchers will obtain a
closer look to the teacher’s point of view regarding the treatment of this
skill in the classroom.
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3.9. ANALYSIS AND INTERPRETATION OF THE RESULTS
The relevant results obtained from the instruments of investigation applied
made to the students and teacher of the First Year Bachillerato, Room “F’,
of Unidad Educativa Babahoyo were the following:
3.9.1 ANALYSIS AND INTERPRETATION OF THE OBSERVATION
The observations were performed in the development of one of the
English Classes. For this, the observation guide was used, the following
relevant information was collected which is divided into two aspects:
Figure 8: OBSERVATION GUIDE RESULTS
Source: Data collected from the First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza
About Teachers’ Attitude in the Classroom
It is notable the effort of the English teacher for the warm-up activities.
It was not observed that the teacher provides additional material to
students.
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It was not observed the implement of teaching techniques that develop
the writing skill.
The teacher helps their students with their doubts about the English
class.
It was observed only the use of the official English book and the board.
It was not observed an evaluation at the end of the class.
About Students’ Attitude in the Classroom
Motivation in the students was observed at the beginning of the English
class.
The students do not count with an additional material apart of the
English book.
It was not observed the use of the graphic organizers.
It was observed that students do not feel comfortable at the moment of
writing a text.
Students, in the majority of the cases do not follow the teacher’s
instructions.
Comment:
These aspects obtained from observations put in evidence that English
teacher from the First Year of Bachillerato, Room “F”, at Unidad Educativa
Babahoyo does not apply techniques or tools that help students to
improve their writing skill.
On the other hand, students do not feel comfortable at the moment of write
a text, in the majority of the cases, they feel lost because they do not pay
attention to the teacher’s instructions. As well as not having the necessary
tools to organize their ideas before writing.
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ANALYSIS AND INTERPRETATION OF THE SURVEY RESULTS
Item 1: I like writing Sample: 40 students Grade: First Bachillerato, Room “F” Table 3 survey item no. 1
I like writing.
Code Category Frequency Percentages
Item Nº1
Strongly agree 2 5%
Agree 5 12%
Indifferent 1 3%
Disagree 14 35%
Strongly disagree 18 45%
TOTALS 40 100% Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Figure 9: I like writing
Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Comment:
According to the results, most students manifest that they do not
like writing. On the other hand, there is a small percentage of the students
that enjoy writing
5%
13%
3%
35%
45%
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Stronglydisagree
0%
5%
10%
15%
20%
25%
30%
35%
40%
45%
50%
I LIKE WRITINGStrongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Strongly disagree
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Item2: I consider that writing is important to express me Sample: 40 students Grade: First Bachillerato room “F Table 4 survey item no. 2
I consider that writing is important to express me.
Code Category Frequency Percentages
Item Nº2
Strongly agree 20 50%
Agree 14 35%
Indifferent 0 0%
Disagree 5 12%
Strongly disagree 1 3%
TOTALS 40 100% Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Figure 10 survey item no. 2
Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza
Comment:
For the great majority of the students consider that the writing skill
is important to express them. However, low percentages of students do
not think the same.
50%
35%
0% 13% 3%
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Stronglydisagree
0%
10%
20%
30%
40%
50%
60%
I CONSIDER THAT WRITING IS IMPORTANT TO EXPRESS ME
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Strongly disagree
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Item 3: I have problems at the moment of writing. Sample: 40 students Grade: First Bachillerato, Room “F” Table 5 : Survey item no. 3
I have problems at the moment of writing.
Code Category Frequency Percentages
Item Nº3
Strongly agree 23 58%
Agree 17 40%
Indifferent 0 0%
Disagree 1 2%
Strongly disagree 0 0%
TOTALS 40 100% Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza
Figure 11: Survey item no. 3
Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Comment:
According to the results, the majority of the students consider that
they have a problem at the moment of writing. On the other hand, a little
percentage of students affirm that they do not have it.
58%
43%
0% 0%0%
10%
20%
30%
40%
50%
60%
70%
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Stronglydisagree
I HAVE PROBLEMS AT THE MOMENT OF WRITING.
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Strongly disagree
0%
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Item 4: I think that is necessary to organize my ideas before writing Sample: 40 students Grade: First Bachillerato, Room “F”
Table 6: survey item no. 4
I think that is necessary to organize my ideas before writing
Code Category Frequency Percentages
Item Nº4
Strongly agree 14 35%
Agree 22 55%
Indifferent 4 10%
Disagree 0 0%
Strongly disagree 0 0%
TOTALS 40 100% Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Figure 12: survey item no. 4
Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Comment:
The results of the analysis show that a little group of students think
that is not necessary organize their ideas before writing. Meanwhile, most
of the students do not think the same.
35%
55%
10% 0% 0%0%
10%
20%
30%
40%
50%
60%
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Stronglydisagree
I THINK THAT IS NECESSARY TO ORGANIZE MY IDEAS BEFORE WRITING.
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Strongly disagree
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Item 5: I know the stages of writing. Sample: 40 students Grade: First Bachillerato, Room “F”
Table 7: survey item no. 5
I know the stages of writing.
Code Category Frequency Percentages
Item Nº5
Strongly agree 0 0%
Agree 0 0%
Indifferent 3 7%
Disagree 22 55%
Strongly disagree 15 38%
TOTALS 40 100% Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Figure 13: survey item no. 5
Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo.
Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Comment:
The majority of the students do not know which the stages to start writing are. Although, a small group of students know what these ones are.
0% 0%10%
55%
35%
0%
10%
20%
30%
40%
50%
60%
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Stronglydisagree
I KNOW THE STAGES OF WRITING.
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Strongly disagree
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Item 6: I believe that the pre-writing stage is important to produce a
written text in a good way. Sample: 40 students Grade: First Bachillerato, Room “F”
Table 8: survey item no. 6
I believe that the pre-writing stage is important to produce a written text in a good way.
Code Category Frequency Percentages
Item Nº6
Strongly agree 7 18%
Agree 20 50%
Indifferent 9 23%
Disagree 4 10%
Strongly disagree 0 0%
TOTALS 40 100% Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Figure 14: survey item no. 6
Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo.
Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Comment:
According to the data analysis, the majority of the students believe
that the pre-writing stage is important at the moment to produce a written
text.
18%
50%
23%
10% 0%0%
10%
20%
30%
40%
50%
60%
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Stronglydisagree
I BELIEVE THAT THE PRE-WRITING STAGE IS IMPORTANT TO PRODUCE A WRITTEN TEXT IN
A GOOD WAY.Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Strongly disagree
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Item 7: I have used graphic organizers before. Sample: 40 students. Grade: First Bachillerato, Room “F”. Table 9: survey item no. 7
I have used graphic organizers before.
Code Category Frequency Percentages
Item Nº7
Strongly agree 12 30%
Agree 20 50%
Indifferent 0 0%
Disagree 7 17%
Strongly disagree 1 3%
TOTALS 40 100% Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza
Figure 15: survey item no. 7
Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza
Comment:
The data analysis shows that most students confirm that they have
used graphic organizers before. However, a little percentage of students
affirm that they have not used it before.
30%
50%
0%
18%
3%0%
10%
20%
30%
40%
50%
60%
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Stronglydisagree
I HAVE USED GRAPHIC ORGANIZERS BEFORE.
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Strongly disagree
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Item 8: I know the variety of graphics organizers. Sample: 40 students. Grade: First Bachillerato, Room “F”. Table 10: survey item no. 8
I know the variety of graphics organizers.
Code Category Frequency Percentages
Item Nº8
Strongly agree 1 3%
Agree 12 30%
Indifferent 0 0%
Disagree 16 40%
Strongly disagree 11 27%
TOTALS 40 100% Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Figure 16: survey item no. 8
Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Comment:
The results show that there are students that know about the variety
of graphic organizers. Although, the majority of the students do not know
about the kinds of graphic organizers.
3%
30%
0%
40%
28%
0%
5%
10%
15%
20%
25%
30%
35%
40%
45%
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Stronglydisagree
I KNOW THE VARIETY OF GRAPHICS ORGANIZERS.
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Strongly disagree
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Item 9: I know the different types of text. Sample: 40 students. Grade: First Bachillerato, Room “F”.
Table 11: survey item no. 9
I know the different types of text.
Code Category Frequency Percentages
Item Nº9
Strongly agree 0 0%
Agree 5 13%
Indifferent 2 5%
Disagree 20 50%
Strongly disagree 13 32%
TOTALS 40 100% Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Figure 17: survey item no. 9
Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo.Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Comment:
For most of the students, the different types of texts are unknown.
Meanwhile, a little percentage of students have knowledge about it.
0%13%
5%
50%
32%
0%
10%
20%
30%
40%
50%
60%
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Stronglydisagree
I KNOW THE DIFFERENT TYPES OF TEXT.
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Strongly disagree
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Item 10: I can describe in written form: events, feeling, etc. Sample: 40 students. Grade: First Bachillerato, Room “F”.
Table 12: survey item no. 10
I can describe in written form: events, feeling, etc.
Code Category Frequency Percentages
Item Nº10
Strongly agree 2 5%
Agree 6 15%
Indifferent 0 0%
Disagree 12 30%
Strongly disagree 20 50%
TOTALS 40 100% Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Figure 18: survey item no. 10
Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Comment:
In this result, the majority of students recognize that they cannot
produce a written text describing events or their feelings. Nevertheless, a
little group of students express that they can make a description.
5%
15%
0%
30%
50%
0%
10%
20%
30%
40%
50%
60%
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Stronglydisagree
I CAN DESCRIBE IN WRITTEN FORM: EVENTS, FEELING, ETC.
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Strongly disagree
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Item 11: I can write formal and informal letters. Sample: 40 students. Grade: First Bachillerato, Room “F”.
Table 13: survey item no. 11
I can write formal and informal letters.
Code Category Frequency Percentages
Item Nº 11
Strongly agree 3 7%
Agree 7 17%
Indifferent 1 3%
Disagree 11 28%
Strongly disagree 18 45%
TOTALS 40 100% Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Figure 19: survey item no. 11
Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Comment:
As a result, the majority of students do not think that they can write
formal and informal letters. However, a minority group of them think that
they are capable to do this activity.
8%
18%
3%
28%
45%
0%
5%
10%
15%
20%
25%
30%
35%
40%
45%
50%
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Stronglydisagree
I CAN WRITE FORMAL AND INFORMAL LETTERS.
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Strongly disagree
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Item 12: I can express my opinion in a written form. Sample: 40 students. Grade: First Bachillerato, Room “F”.
Table 14: survey item no. 12
I can express my opinion in a written form.
Code Category Frequency Percentages
Item Nº12
Strongly agree 0 0%
Agree 9 23%
Indifferent 7 17%
Disagree 8 20%
Strongly disagree 16 40%
TOTALS 40 100% Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Figure 20: survey item no. 12
Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Comment:
Furthermore, an important group of students consider that they
cannot express their opinion in a written form. On the other hands, it is
notable that a little group of students could express their opinion in a text.
0% 23% 18% 20% 40%0%
5%
10%
15%
20%
25%
30%
35%
40%
45%
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Stronglydisagree
I CAN EXPRESS MY OPINION IN A WRITTEN FORM.
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Strongly disagree
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Item 13: I consider that I can organize my ideas and create an outline for a
written text. Sample: 40 students. Grade: First Bachillerato, Room “F”
Table 15: survey item no. 13
I consider that I can organize my ideas and create an outline for a written text.
Code Category Frequency Percentages
Item Nº13
Strongly agree 2 5%
Agree 4 10%
Indifferent 0 0%
Disagree 18 45%
Strongly disagree 16 40%
TOTALS 40 100% Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Figure 21: survey item no. 13
Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Comment:
As a result, a minority of students consider that they are capable of
organizing their ideas and create an outline for writing text. Whereas, a big
group of students do not consider that they can do this activity.
0%
10%
20%
30%
40%
50%
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Strongly disagree
I CONSIDER THAT I CAN ORGANIZE MY IDEAS AND CREATE AN OUTLINE FOR A
WRITTEN TEXT.Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Strongly disagree
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Item 14: I know the important of check my final work. Sample: 40 students. Grade: First Bachillerato, Room “F”.
Table 16: survey item no. 14
I know the important of check my final work.
Code Category Frequency Percentages
Item Nº14
Strongly agree 6 15%
Agree 12 30%
Indifferent 3 7%
Disagree 4 10%
Strongly disagree 15 38%
TOTALS 40 100% Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Figure 22: survey item no. 14
Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo.Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Comment:
For this result, the students have divided opinion about the
importance of checking the final written text. Half of the students know the
importance of this. On other hands, the other half of students do not know
about this stage of writing.
15%
30%
8%10%
38%
0%
5%
10%
15%
20%
25%
30%
35%
40%
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Stronglydisagree
I KNOW THE IMPORTANT OF CHECKING MY FINAL WORK.
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Strongly disagree
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Item 15: I believe that a system of activities focused on the use of
graphic organizers could be useful for me. Sample: 40 students. Grade: First Bachillerato, Room “F”. Table 17: survey item no. 15
I believe that a system of activities focused on the use of graphic organizers could be useful for me.
Code Category Frequency Percentages
Item Nº15
Strongly agree 22 55%
Agree 18 45%
Indifferent 0 0%
Disagree 0 0%
Strongly disagree 0 0%
TOTALS 40 100% Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo. Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
Figure 23: survey item no. 15
Source: Data collected from First Year of Bachillerato, Unidad Educativa Babahoyo.Authors: Freire Morejón Mery and Moreno Triviño Eliza.
. Comment:
Mostly of students are agreeing with a system of activities that
could help them in the improvement of their written production.
55%
45%
0% 0% 0%0%
10%
20%
30%
40%
50%
60%
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Stronglydisagree
I BELIEVE THAT A SYSTEM OF ACTIVITIES FOCUSED ON THE USE OF GRAPHIC
ORGANIZERS COULD BE USEFUL FOR ME.
Strongly agree Agree Indifferent Disagree Strongly disagree
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ANALYSIS AND INTERPRETATION OF THE INTERVIEW RESULTS
The English teacher was interviewed, the questions and answers will be
analyzed coming up next.
1. Do you consider that reinforce writing skill is necessary for the
English learning process? Why?
Yes, because the students need to communicate in different ways and
writing is one of them.
2. What is your opinion about the pre-writing stage in the writing
skill?
In my opinion, it’s really important because in each class we have to
evaluate the topic with any activity.
3. What instructions do you use to write a text in class?
Instructions like this: look at the pictures, and give the main idea about,
and after that write about it
4. What techniques or tools do you use to help your students to
improve their writing skill? Why?
Pictures are good tool to motivate to the students to write, we can use
videos or real life as well.
5. What type of additional material it is provided to students for the
development of writing skill?
These could be: poster, pictures, videos, and short tails.
6. Which are the advantages of the graphic organizers to help
students to organize their ideas before of writing a text?
I have knowledge about the graphic organizers and I consider that is a
great help for the ideas and concepts organization.
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Comment:
The interview revealed that English teacher considers that the
prewriting stage is fundamental for the writing process but, unfortunately,
she does not implement techniques to reinforce it.
The teacher affirmed that the uses Graphic Organizers represent a
good advantage to students organize their ideas therefore, does not work
with graphics organizers as additional material to help their students in the
writing process.
The information obtained through the survey questionnaire,
interview and observations, allows the researchers to conclude that there
is an insufficiency in the written production in students from First Year of
Bachillerato, Room “F,” in Unidad Educativa Babahoyo school year 2017 –
2018, it also found that there are not enough resources at the moment to
organize the students’ ideas in the prewriting stage.
On the other hand, the English teacher does not implement
activities or provider additional material that promotes the ideas
organization in learners, however the teacher makes an effort to help
students with their doubts. In the majority of the cases students do not
follow the instructions given by the English teacher, this generate another
difficulty to the development of the writing process.
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CHI-SQUARE TEST
Figure 24: Chi-Square
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Figure 25: Correlation Test
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COMMENT:
Through the Chi-square analysis it was possible to determine that there
are a 0.01 grades of frequency between the variables in study (item 3 and
item 15).
According to this result, it is established that there is a relationship
between the dependent variable (Item3, written production) and the
independent variable (Item15, graphic organizers).
The correlation test shows the relation between the dependent variable
(written production) and the independent variable (graphic organizers).
The result obtained is based on Pearson’s relation coefficient.
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CHAPTER IV
THE PROPOSAL
TITLE
System of activities based on pre-writing graphic organizers.
JUSTIFICATION
This proposal is the result of a study work elaborated using different
investigation methods, bibliographical and statistical techniques for data
analysis. Those were applied on students in First Year of Bachillerato
Room “F” of Unidad Educativa Babahoyo during the 2017-2018 academic
year. In order to obtain the results and analyze them, it was necessary to
collect information through some empirical techniques like an observation
guide, an interview and a survey questionnaire.
After the application of the statistical instruments, it could be found
that the students had a deficiency in their writing skill and for help them to
increase their English level it would be necessary to provide the extra
material focused on the use of the graphic organizers in the prewriting
stage to improve their written production.
Graphic organizers are an important resource that students can use
to improve the written production because they let students to organize
their ideas for the correct production of text.
This proposal is a contribution to the educational development
because students will have an additional material which is a system of
activities based on the graphic organizers that would help them to improve
their writing skill.
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OBJECTIVES
GENERAL OBJECTIVE
To promote the use of the pre-writing Graphic Organizers for written
production.
SPECIFIC OBJECTIVES
To organize ideas in a coherent way to write texts.
To use pre-writing graphic organizers to sequentially write a text.
To apply pre-writing graphic organizers to improve written production.
THEORETICAL ASPECTS
This study work was elaborated taking into account the different
theories and opinions from authors. For a better comprehension they
divided thinking in their foundations per area.
This proposal was based on the didactic point of view from
Barragán (2013) states that the written production allow them to identify
the relationships between the elements of the text unit and the formal tools
that establish them. This proposal deepen the information related to
organization of ideas for writing a text.
From the Psychological point of view from Ausubel cited by Campos
(2005) who states that graphic organizers serve as mental tools to help the
students understand and retain important information and relationships.
For that reason this proposal is focused to promote the ideas organization
through graphic organizers.
This proposal was based on the Pedagogical point of view from
Piaget & Inhelder (2015) state that the experience of the child, the
situations with which he faces are generated by his social environment,
and things appear in contexts that give them special meanings. Which
implies that with the graphic organizers students will make a connection
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with ideas for the written production and their environment and that will be
a benefit for their English learning process.
From the linguistic point of view from Halliday cited by Chaves
(2001) for improving the written production, it is necessary to study the
types of text and the qualities that should have for the communicative
competence. In this proposal is focused in develop the written production
in the different types of text and with all the qualities.
From the philosophical point of view, it is based from Coello et
al.(2014) state that the author from an axiological perspective, expresses
the values: responsibility, honesty, humanism. In this proposal students
will produce texts according to the norms that each context requires,
manifesting responsibility and respect.
From the sociological aspect, from Val (2013) the written production
is very important, because it is an intellectual exercise that leads to the
transformation of knowledge itself; this proposal is focused on promote
motivate the written production always thinking in the social context.
The proposal counts with all the feasibility elements for its application.
Taking into account that there is the necessary human talent and the
investigator will contribute the material. The proposal was designed to be
feasible in every sense, for this different aspects were considered.
This proposal is socio-politically feasible because the proposal is
oriented to solve a problem of education implementing a very important
tool as graphic organizers to develop the writing communication of
students.
DESCRIPTION OF THE PROPOSAL
This proposal was elaborated to improve the written production of
students of the First Year of Bachillerato from Unidad Educativa
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Babahoyo, through the use of Graphic Organizers. This system of
activities was designed according to the English book A2. 2.
The next system of activities was created according to the six units of the
official English Book level A2.2.
The present work is divided on 6 units. On each unit, the teacher will find a
brief explanation about which Graphic Organizer can be used in order to
promote the organization of ideas to jump start writing production.
Finally, a consolidation example for the activity using that Graphic
Organizer will be introduced to elaborate the final written text.
In order to provide a sense of continuity with the official text, these
activities will provide extra practices to enhance written development in
student. It is important to work according the topics seen in the book.
Table 19: Scope and Sequence
UNIT TITLE CONTENT G.O USED
1 Inspirational People Mark Zuckerberg
My Mother Shakira
Mind map
2 Experience Culture! Hobbies
My favorite sport My favorite movie
Brainstorm
3 Story Time
Thor A dragon story
Ecuadorian story
Main Characteristics
Diagram
4 Traveling the world
My city Trips
People around the world.
Conceptual Map
5 News Media Report an event
News Magazine article
Word map
6 A Tech-World
Technological advances. Computer
My favorite social network.
Outline
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CONCLUSIONS
The founding revealed that activities that promote the use of the
graphic organizers in the writing skill with critical thinking will develop
communicative competences in students and as a consequence the level
of written production will increase.
The observations showed that the teacher does not apply techniques
that develop the writing skill, this will rest opportunities for students to
improve their written production.
Once the empirical instrument were applied and analyzed, the
deficiencies on writing production were revealed confirming the presence
of a problem that need to be treated. Providing to this research the
guidelines to elaborate an alternative to correct this problem.
RECOMMENDATIONS
Teachers should include in class extra activities promoting the use of
Graphic Organizers that are not included to enhance written production in
the English book, to garner more attention from students. In this way,
students will be opened to participate and share experiences, ideas, and
feelings in writing.
Teachers must be updated, in order to be able to bring their students
the knowledge necessary for their educational development.
Students need to be more motivated to do activities that reinforce their
writing skill, they should be invited without pressures to participate, and
reinforce the different skills with activities in group.
This research presents the proposal as a great help to train students
on the use of graphic organizers due to the current deficiency levels in the
writing skill. For this it is important because it lets to improve students'
writing skill which will be a benefit for the English learning process.
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The proposal should be seen as a supporting resource to reinforce the
writing skill and the proposal will be practical because is based on the
National Curriculum Guidelines.
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UNIVERSIDAD DE GUAYAQUIL FACULTAD DE FILOSOFÍA CIENCIAS Y LETRAS DE LA EDUCACIÓN LICENCIATURA EN LA EDUCACION ESPECIALIZACIÓN LENGUAS Y
LINGÜÍSTICA
OBSERVATION GUIDE
Objective: The purpose of this observation guide is to collect information about the development of the English class in which the teacher and students participate. The results of the application of this instrument will be useful for this research.
Institución: Babahoyo Educative Unit
Course: First Year Bachillerato
Section: F
Please mark with an (X) the level that you consider appropriate.
TEACHER Yes No Not observed
Realize warm-up activities to introduce the writing class.
Provides to students extra material to develop the writing skill.
Teaches techniques to students that allow them to improve their writing skill.
Supervises and helping students. Implement didactic resources to help students to organize their ideas before writing.
At the end of the class, the teacher evaluates the knowledge acquired by students.
STUDENTS Students are motivated to learn and to participate in the writing class.
Students have extra material for the development of writing activities.
Students use graphic organizers that allow them to organize their ideas.
Students are comfortable when they are writing.
Students follow the teacher’s directions at the moment to do the writing activities.
Comments: Not all the students followed the instructions of the teacher. Researchers: Freire Morejon Mery – Moreno Triviño Eliza
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SURVEY TO THE STUDENTS
OBJECTIVE: To compile information about the level of development that students have reading the production of written texts and its treatment in classes. Please read the statements and then, mark with an (X) the alternative that you consider the most appropriate for you, using the following scale:
1=Strongly disagree 2=Disagree 3=Indifferent 4=Agree 5=Strongly Agree
*Thank you for your cooperation!
SCALE
N° ITEM 1 2 3 4 5
1 I like writing.
2 I consider writing is important to express myself.
3 I have problems at the moment of writing.
4 I think that is necessary to organize my ideas before writing.
5 I know the stages of writing.
6 I believe that the pre-writing stage is important to produce a written text in a good way.
7 I have used graphic organizers before.
8 I know the variety of graphics organizers.
9 I know the different types of text.
10 I can describe in writing form: events, feeling, story, etc.
11 I can write formal and informal letters.
12 I can express my opinion in a written form.
13 I consider that I can organize my ideas and create an outline for a written text.
14 I know the importantness of checking my final work.
15 I believe that a system of activities focused on the use of graphic organizers could be useful for me.
Researchers: Freire Morejon Mery – Moreno Triviño Eliza
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Interview Questionnaire
Objective: the purpose of this interview is to collect information of the strategy or tools of the teacher use to improve the writing skills with their students, and how important is for him.
Teacher’s information
Name:
Experience:
Institution: Babahoyo Educative Unit
1. Do you consider that reinforce writing skill is necessary for the English learning process? Why?
2. What is your opinion about the pre-writing stage in the writing skill?
3. What instructions do you use to write text in class?
4. What techniques or tools do you use to help students to improve their writing skill? Why?
5. What type of additional material is provided to students for the development of writing?
6. Which are the advantages of Graphic organizers to help students organize their ideas before writing a text?