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Unit 4: data commentary. P80: Location Elements and Summaries Table 6 and 7, present tense, both active and passive P81, informative. To be used as alternative. P82: Language Focus: Verbs in Indicative and Informative summaries P83, Table 8 P82: Language Focus: Linking as-Clauses - PowerPoint PPT Presentation
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Unit 4: data commentary
P80: Location Elements and Summaries Table 6 and 7, present tense, both active and
passive P81, informative. To be used as alternative.
P82: Language Focus: Verbs in Indicative and Informative summaries P83, Table 8
P82: Language Focus: Linking as-Clauses P83: main standard uses HW: p84, task 4
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Unit 4: data commentary
P85: Highlighting Statements P86: Qualifications and Strength of Claim
Remember the examples in p86-87 P88: weaker verbs HW: p88, task 6 P89: combined qualifications HW: p90, task 7
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Unit 4: data commentary P90: Organization major claims are followed by minor claims Do NOT simply repeat the numbers in the
tables Use comparison: more, fewer, 21% more/less,
twice, 3.5-fold increase… P97: dealing with ‘problems’: remember the
phrases HW: write ‘Results’ for the table in next
slide
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6-min high-intensity cycling performed every hr for 16 hr.
Muscle biopsy data
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Dealing with graphs
P99: follow the same principles as with tables But with different vocabularies
P101: Language Focus: Referring to Lines on Graphs
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Common mistakes 找出 data 重點
圖表中 Data 呈現的順序 不要太刻意使用 however, in addition, … 清楚說明變數
少用 it, they, ; 直接寫出 glucose, lactate, and pyruvate…
Grammar were significantly decreased, showed a
significant decrease There was no significant difference after
exercise…
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Tennis skill test results performed before and after treatment
2 treatments: placebo or HCO3
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measured before and after treatment
2 treatments: placebo or HMB