A PERSUASIVE SPEECH AGAINST

UNDERAGE DRINKING

Specific Purpose: To persuade our audience to be aware of underage drinking.Thesis State:Today we are here to convince you to think twice before going to pick up the next bottle of alcohol.

INTRODUCTION: Attention Getter: By a show of hands, how many people in this classroom are under the age of 21? As you look around the classroom, you will see that many of you are under this age. Now think to yourself, even though you are under the age of 21, does it mean that no one in this classroom has ever tried alcohol? According to Prof. Rosenberg from the Psychological Bulletin 1993, alcohol is the most serious problem facing teenagers.

Link to Audience: We are all students at university and most likely gone to one party with alcohol.

Speaker Credibility: Being a university student and under the age of 21, We have researched this topic of underage drinking because We thought this issue would be extremely beneficial to all of us since we are in university & will most likely be going through experiences involving alcohol.

Thesis Sentence: Today we are here to convince you to think twice before going to pick up that next bottle of alcohol.Preview of Speech: First, we will talk about why teenagers should not have alcohol. Next, well discuss why teens are not responsible enough to drink and lastly well explain how alcohol is not good for your health.

Transition: Let's begin by talking about why teenagers should not have alcohol.

BODY: Main Point #1A. Underage drinking is illegal in all 50 states:i. The tolerance that police have to a teenager drinking and driving is absolutely zero.ii. Most parents who find out that their child has been drinking are not pleased with it.iii. Underage drinking is a crime. It is a first-degree misdemeanor punishable with a maximum sentence of 6 months incapacitation and a BDT1000.00 fine.

B. Not only is underage drinking against the law, but it is endangering the person's life, as well as others, especially on university campuses.

i. As you can see on this survey from the George Mason Univ. & West Chester Univ. in 1997, alcohol was involved in more than two-thirds of all the campus incidents last year that occurred in residence halls. This survey involved 330 colleges & univ. throughout the country.ii. From the PSU Police Safety Services, the actual offenses of liquor in 2000 were 125 people and 169 people that were arrested due to liquor.Transition: Now that we have explained why teens should not have alcohol, we will explain to all of you why teens are not responsible enough to drink.

Main Point #2 A. Teenagers are not responsible enough to drink.i. When people drink they use poor judgment and when underage people drink it is even worse.ii. So the more you drink, the more judgment you lose.iii. For example, according to Prof. Rosenberg from the Psychological Bulletin in 1993, 90% of all campus rapes involving drinking are 68% of manslaughter convictions and 63% of assaults that involve alcohol.

B. Hypothetical Storyi. Imagine this situation of your best friend driving home from your house one night. And on the way home, your friend meets some person who decided to drink too much and your friend and the other driver crash head on. The underage drunk driver survives, while your best friend is killed. So what happened to the drunk drivers judgment? It is in his 15 empty beer cans at the party!

ii. Officer Dean Wilson, executive director of the National Organizations, has calculated that every 15 minutes someone in the U.S. dies as the result of an alcohol related traffic collision.

Transition: As we have explained why teenagers are not responsible to drink because of lack of judgment, we will now explain how alcohol is harmful to your health. Main Point #3 A. Alcohol is harmful to your health.i. Anyone who drinks has the chance of seriously hurting his or her body. This can happen in several ways.

B. Alcohol is a drug that can cause:

i. Liver damage, cancer, heart damage or even death.ii. Women who consume alcohol during pregnancy are at risk to deliver a child with fetal alcohol syndrome.iii. Looks/appearance: People who drink on a regular basis tend to look older faster. So just think to yourself, drinking alcohol may seem good when you are 18 and want to look 21, but what happens when you turn 30 and look like your 50. How good is it then?iv. As John Carvel, the spokesperson for the charity Alcohol Concern said: "Alcohol reinforces our belief that there needs to be much more emphasis on education and prevention in terms of making people more aware of the dangers of alcohol misuse. Young bodies are just not made for drinking alcohol."

Transition: Already I have gone over all the facts; let's go back over what we've learned today.

CONCLUSION:

Restate thesis: Today we've explained to you why drinking underage is harmful to teenagers.

Restate main points: First we talked about why teenagers should not have alcohol, then wediscussed why teenagers are not responsible enough to drink, and finally we discussed howalcohol is harmful to your health.

Call-to-Action: We encourage you to learn all that you can about underage drinking and thinkabout what we have said to you today. We also urge you to educate others about the effects ofalcohol.

Concluding: Having said that we will end this speech with a question that we would like for allof you to think about, Is being accepted into a group, loosening up in an uncomfortable setting,and escaping the pressures of everyday life worth the risks and consequences that are in effectafter the first, sip, funnel, or bottle of alcohol? Is it really worth it?

REFERENCES

i. The Psychological Bulletin 1993 of Prof. Rosenbergii. Survey of the George Mason Univ. & West Chester Univ. in 1997iii. Justice and Safety Institute - Penn State University offenses of liquor report in 2000iv. The power alcohol ordinance, 1959 Ordinance No. LIX of 1959v. http://forums.bollyent.com/bad-effects-of-alcohol-t-11502.htmlvi. http://ezinearticles.com/?Bad-Health-Effects-of-Alcohol:-Worth-Avoiding&id=405130vii. http://www.guardian.co.uk/profile/johncarvelviii. http://www.guardian.co.uk/theguardianix. http://www2.potsdam.edu/hansondj/UnderageDrinking.htmlx. http://www.stopalcoholabuse.gov/xi. "Bangladesh". Global Status Report on Alcohol 2004. World Health Organization. 2004. http://www.who.int/substance_abuse/publications/en/bangladesh.pdf. Retrieved 2009-03-28.xii. Exceptions to Minimum Age of 21 for Possession of Alcohol as of January 1, 2009, Alcohol Policy Information Systemxiii. Drinking Age Limits - International Center for Alcohol Policies.