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The table chart illustrates the proportion of boys in two different/separate age groups who were interested in 5 various sport activitiesof in the UK in the year 2010.Overall, football accounted for the largest percentage of sports in both two groups.In addition, the rate of boys aged from 6 to 11 participating sports was higher than boys aged 12 to 16 (except for swimming). Comment by Author: the figures for boys aged between 6 and 11 years old are always higher than those for the older boys, with the notable exception of swimming, which is the same. 87% of boys aged 6-11 in the UK, which accounted for the largest part, was for played football while the figure for boys aged 12-16 was 78%. The proportion of boys playing basketball in the UK was 35%, whereas the this proportionfigure for boys aged 12-16 was lower, at 25%. In term of cricket, the figure forrate of the boys aged 6-11 in the UK was slightly higher than that for of boys aged 12-16their older counterparts, at 45% and 34% respectively. By contrast, the rate of boys in the UK spending their time for swimming was exactly the same in both age groups, at 19% each. However, the percentage of rugby for boys aged 6-11 in the UK taking part in rugby (at 23%) was 2% higher more than that of boys aged 12-16 (at 21%)Grade

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