1. You help out at a music festival which is held in your town
every year. This takes place outdoors over one weekend. The
organisers want to improve the festival and so have asked you to
write a short report. You should comment on the site, the
programme, the food and other facilities, the cost and anything
else you consider relevant.
Write your report of 120-180 words in an appropriate
style.SAMPLE REPORT
To: Music festival organisers
From: Patricia Rivas
Subjets: Suggested improvements of festival.
Date: 29th April 2015Purpose
As requested, this is a report concerning to the improvement of
the conditions of our music festival, which is celebrated in the
town every year.Music festival conditionsDue to the recent history
of the music festival, which is started in 2012, I can state that
there are certain factors that could organise better than now in
order to improve the quality of the facilities that are offered by
the company.Firstly, the mainly services such as camping or parking
place are inadequate to host thousands of people. Secondly, the
number of people who collaborate as staff in the big tents is
insufficient to guarantee the right working of the festival.
Finally, the unreasonable high price of the tickets does not help
to the attendance of spectators from all country.Suggested
improvements
To begin with the suggestions, I would invest some money in a
new open space to extra parking places and in a remodelling of the
bungalows and the toilets in the camping site. To continue, I would
employ more people like volunteers. Last, I would offer lower
prices to people who pay the tickets before February.Conclusion
To sum up, I strongly believe that If we want a popular and a
prestigious music festival, we should consider these suggestions
and do the proper changes. So, both, the organisers and currents
would be satisfied in the future editions of this amazing
event.
