3 3 3 3 SECTION3

Time- 25 minutes 35 Questions

Tum to Section 3 (page 4) of your answer sheet to answer the queatlona In this section.

Directions: For each question in this section, select the best answer from among the choices given and fill in the corresponding circle on the answer sheet.

The following sentences test correctness and effectiveness of eltpression. Pan of each sentence or the entire sentence is underlined; beneath each sentence are five ways of phrasing the underlined material. O.Oice A repeats the original phrasing: the other four choices are different. If you think the original phrasing produces a better sentence than any of the alternatives. select choice A; if not. select one of the other choices.

In making your selection, follow the requirements of standard written English; that is, pay attention to grammar. choice of words, sentence construction, and punctuation. Your selection should result in the most effective sentence-clear and precise, without awkwardness or ambiguity.

EXAMPLE:

Laura Ingalls Wilder published her first book and sbe was sixty-five years old then.

(A) and she was sixty-five years old then (8 ) when she was sixty-five (C) at age sixty-five yean old (D) upon the reaching of sixty-five years (E) at the time when she was sixty-five

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1. The California gold rush of the mid-nineteenth cenwry began in the Sierra foothills on a site where John Sutter, an immigrant from Bavaria. had planned a sawmill to be built

(A) a sawmill to be built (B) a sawmill's being built (C) a sawmill would be built (D) for building a sawmill (E) to build a sawmill

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2. Some Tibetan moolcs consider butter to be not only a delicacy and also a substance of ~piritual value.

(A) and also (B) as well as (C) but also (D) as to be (E) besides being

J. Sun.and wind evaporate seawater. and the resulting fine. light crystal is known u "flower of salf' and it js considered by some to be tastier and bealthier than regular salt.

(A) crystal is known as ··oower of salt" and it is (8) crystal, being known as "flower of salt'' and (C) crystal, it is known as .. flower of salt" and (D) crystal, known as ·•nower of salt," is (E) crystal known to be 1'flower of salt.·· is

4. I! js ofien djsappojnlin& for pc:oj)le who travel alone &Dd. find that cabins and hotels are priced for two or more guests. (A) It is often disappointing for people who travel

alone and (B) People traveling alone are often disappointed to (C) When people are traveling alone. it is often

disappointing to (0) 'The disappointment for people traveling alone is

often when they (E) It is often disappointing when people who are

traveling alone and

3 S. Ex.pens predict that in the near future unsolicited,

commercial e-mail messages accouots for more than 90 percent of all messages received by Internet users.

(A) accounts (B) accouut (C) will account (D) will be accounted (E) could be accounted

6. Little R~k and Memphis have a museum commemoratina the important rples these cities played in changing the social landscape of the United Stares.

(A) have a museum commemorating (B) bas a museum commemorating (C) commemorating with a museum (D) have museum." commemorating (E) commemorates in museums

7. Known as the "founder of art in Texas," &dmirers of Elisabet Ney immortalized. her by tumina her Austin studio into an art museum.

(A) admirers of Elisabet Ney immortaUzed her by turning her Austin studio into an art museum

(B) Elisabet Ney's admirers turned her Austin studio into an art museum and immortalized. her

(C) when her admirers turned her Austin studio into an art museum. Blisabet Ney was immortalized

(D) Elisabet Ney was immorta.l.ized by adn:Jirers who turned her Austin studio into an art museum

(E) the Austin studio of Elisabet Ney was immortalized by ber admirers who turned it into an art museum

3 3 8. In eighteenth-century America, smallpox bad the

power to disrupt 1iRL..i1 shut down trado, altered the routine.'! sustainina ordinary existence. and raised questions about public health.

(A) lives, it (B) lives: it (C) lives for the reason that it (D) lives: nevertheless. it (E) lives so it

9. Most newspaper companies save money by using offset printing. a printing method whereby the ink is deposited on the surface df the paae rather than imPRHina it into the paper.

(A) page ratber than imJ)J'eSSi.na it (B) page rather than impressed (C) page instead of impressing it (D) page, it is not impressed (E) page, they do not iml'feSS it

10. A dispute bas arisen between Crystal City's two com~""g department store$. each of which sells mainly clothing. expensive jewelry. and unusual furniture.

(A) each of which sells (B) each of them sells (C) each of wbicb. selling (D) both tell (E) at:e ~lling

11. Neither the Dead Sea nor the Great Salt Lake ~ outlet such as a river. ro can:y water awl}' and lower its salt content

(A) have an outlet, such as a river. to carry water away and lower

(B) have outlets. sucb as rivers. for carrying water away and to lower

(C) have an outlet like a river. carrying water away and lowering

(D) has an outlet. such as a river. to carry water away and lower

(E) has an outlet like rivers for carrying water away and to lower

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The following sentences te.'lt your ability to recognize grammar and usage errors. Each sentence contains either a single error or no error at all. No sentence contain." more than one error. The error. if there i!i one. i,; underlined and lettered. If the sentence contains an error. select the one underlined part that must be changed lo make the sentence correct. Jf the sentence is correct. select choice E. In choosing answer.;. follow the requirements of standard written English.

EXAMPLE:

Tile other delegates and him immediately

A 8 C accepted the resolution drafted by the

neutral states. No error

E

D

12. The meteor shower being best seen from the

A 8

naval observatory on Saturday just before dawn.

No error

E

C D

13. Because it is critical to administer

A

cardiopulmonary resuscitation (CPR) as soon as

possible in certain emergencies. health professionals

8 are encouraging per.;ons which are not trained

C D in CPR to sign up for cour.;es. No error

E

14. One of the finest collections of Native American

A

turquoise jewelry ~ on display at the Millicent

8 c Rogers Museum. which occupies a small adobe

0 building in Tao!i. New Mexico. No error

E

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3 3 15. Despite her desire to emphasizing the soundne...s of

A 8

the car, the seller eventually disclosed the most recent

c repairs to !!_. No error

D E

16. As a fav<nd member of the Elizabethan c<1un.

Sir Walter Raleigh assumed an independence that

A

eventually became intolerable ~ the queen. who

8 c had long been his friend and benefactor. No error

0 E

17. After spending seventeen years underground. the

A

periodical cicada. an insect often confused with the

8

locusc. ~ for a few weeks in late spring ~

C D

and lay its eggs. No error

E

18. lndigo, the most widely used blue dye for over

A 8

two thousand years. comes from a shrub called

"indigofera." No error

E

C D

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3 19. In contemporary fiction, ambiguous endings both

T allow readers to imagine their own stories and

8 c it forces them to recognize life's complexity.

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No error E

20. After 1986. trading on the London Stock Exchange

has been computerized to such an extent that A 8 C

personal contact between buyers and sellers became 0

unnecessary. No error E

21. PopuJations of insects that damye crops

A can be targeted chemically. with peaticides,

B C

~ biologically. with natural pn:dators and

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parasites. No error

E

22. Though generally insecure and excessively deferential A

to the opinioru of others, President Buchanan would 8

sometimes adhere stubbornly on an ill-advised policy, c

even in the face of vigorous public criticism. 0

Noe.rror E

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3 3 l3. Although the first crude sawmill in tbe Northwest

was built in 1827, commercial logging on a large

A

scaJe did not initially succeed there because the

B

distance from forest to market ~ ~-

No error

E

C D

%4. Many people who know us say that the

A

competitiveness between my best friend and I B

is more intense than that between

c players on opposing teams . No error

0 E

l!. Although snowing furiously, all the students A

who bad come to visit the campus intended B

to continue tbe tour of the college grounds c

rather than go home . No error D E

26. Many adults today coosider themselves

A B a member of a special group of caretakers

c who care for both their teenage children

0 and their aging parents. No error

E

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27. Even though most Americans deplore the shortsighted

A

exploitation of n.ature and the thoughtless disturbance

of ecological balance, they are still reluctant to

B C

change it. No error

D E

28. Critics contend that the number of people who will A

be disadvantaged by the new legislation far exceeds B

those who will benefit from it . No error -c [) E

29. Members of the senior staff may have considered

A B the new employees threats to their security; however.

c they had the full support of management. No error

D E

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Dtnc:tloas: The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten.

Read the passage and select the best answers for the questions that follow. Some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence strUcture or word choice. Other questions ask you to consider organization and development. In choosing answers, foUow the requirements of SWidard written English.

Qaestloall0-35 refer to the followlng pass81e.

(l) Jf you have never had braces, it might seem strange to fantasize about the day you do not have to haul toothbrush. toothpaste. and rubber bands around in your backpack: there it is-my dream. (l) My braces have caused me to behave in ways I never could have predicted. (3) I sit quietly by while all my friends socialize in front of foods that I can no longer eat. (4) 1 also adorn my teeth with what looks like colorful tooth decorations. (S) Braces can improve your bealch as well as your appearance.

(6) The stories about pain aod suffering, like Fran/cnutein, that we read in English class have become relevant to my experience. (7) After my monthly braces~ tightening sessions at the orthodontist' s office, my inevitable beadacbe makes me sympathize with the terrible pressure John Proctor feels in The Crucible. (8) This may sound pathetic to you, but ibuprofen is my best friend.

(9) In addition to food deprivation and pain. I worried about my appearance when 1 started we&Jing braces. (10) What made me feel better was ftnding out that actor Tom Cruise started wearing braces. (11) Even lhough he can afford expensive special braces, it takes courage for a star to admit to a physical flaw. (12) As our rewards. we'll both have beautiful smiles when these things finally come off.

(13) Actually. a mouthful of s&eel is not so bad when 1 can impress everyone with bands of color on my teeth. (14) Still. alii can think about is pure. blinding white. ( 15) I dream about having nothing in my mouth but ol~fashiooed teeth.

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3 30. Which sentence is best to put al the beginning of the

second paragraph. before sentence 6 '!

(A) ln spite of that. I will soon be able to eat whatever I like.

(B) No matter what my smile may Jook like, braces still hurt

(C) In addition. many pe<>ple have had the same experience.

(D) Suddenly. you are a new person. (E) Sometimes l have to miss a class in order to

visit the orthodontist.

31. Which is the best sentence to place after sentence II ?

(A) If he could appear wearing bnu:es before the entire world. who wa.c; I to complain?

(B) He had no idea he had problems with his teeth. (C) Even a famous person like Tom Cruise can' t

avoid discomfort while wearing braces. (D) I would have liked to have had special

braces too. but they just cost too much. (E) Tom Cruise and I have a lot in common,

it turns out.

32. In context. what would be a more pre<:ise replacement for the word "things'' in sentence 12?

(A) helpers (B) materials (C) aids (D) unsightly contraptions (E) expensive attachments

33. The third paragraph (sentences 9- 12) primarily serves to

(A) relate an imaginary story (B) emphasize a contrast (C) describe a change in attitude (D) offer a solution to a problem (E) express disapproval of a celebrity

3 3 34. In context, which of the following is the best version of

the underlined portion of sentence 13 (reproduced below)?

Actually " mouthful qfsreel is not so bad when/ can impress everyone with bands of color on my teeth.

(A) (As it is now) (B) In fact. a mouthful of steel was not actu:sUy so bad (C) It is not so bad to have actually a mouthful of steel (D) Not actually so bad, I teU myself, but a mouthful

of steel is okay (E) A mouthful of steel is okay. not actually so bad,

is what I teU myself

35. Which sentence should be deleted from the passage?

(A) I (B) 5 (C) 8 (D) 11 (E) 15

STOP If you finish before time Ia called, you may check your work on this section only.

Do not turn to any other section in the test.

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