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Rhetoric
Using words effectively
Rhetoric QuestionsQuestions with words and phrases like:
1) "...the writer..."
2) "Given that all the choices are true..."
3) "...style and tone..."
4) "...logic and coherence..."
5) "Which choice provides the most..."
6) "Which choice fits..."
7) "The best placement..."
are RHETORIC QUESTIONS!
Rhetoric Questions
Do what the question asks you to do!
"...which choice best accomplishes the writer's goal?"
"...deleting the phrase..."
"This sentence should be placed..."
"Which choice most effectively..."
Rhetoric Questions
Keep your focus on the question!
When reading the rhetoric questions which ask you to consider making changes to what is written to create a certain effect, underline the key phrase you are to address so as to not lose focus on what the question asks.
ACT English Section
45 minutes
5 reading passages
75 questions
1m 30sec to read each passage
30 sec to answer each question
ACT English Section
Today:
4.5 minutes
1 passage
5 questions
1 min 30 sec to read each passage
45 sec to answer each question
Pages 23-25
Take a minute to look over questions 61-75.
Circle the rhetoric questions.
You're all exactly right!
70, 71, 72, 73, 74.
So smart!
Circle them now
Rhetoric Questions
Do what the question asks you to do!
"...which choice best accomplishes the writer's goal?"
"...deleting the phrase..."
"This sentence should be placed..."
"Which choice most effectively..."
Rhetoric Questions
Keep your focus on the question!
When reading the rhetoric questions which ask you to consider making changes to what is written to create a certain effect, underline the key phrase you are to address so as to not lose focus on what the question asks.
ACT English Section
Today:
4.5 minutes
1 passage
5 questions
1 min 30 sec to read each passage
45 sec to answer each question
ACT English Section
BEGIN!
70In the hot waters surrounding Juan de Fuca Ridge in the Paicific Ocean,
thermophiles ensure the survival of other marine life. Here, the ocean floor is
scarred by earthquakes and underwater volcanoes. Poisonous waters from
cracks at temperatures up to 360 degrees Celsius gush in the ocean floor, and
thermophiles convert the toxic chemicals into food for crabs, giant worms, and
other deep-sea life.
The writer is considering deleting the following phrase from the preceding
sentence (and revising the capitalization accordingly):
In the hot waters surrounding Juan de Fuca Ridge in the Pacific Ocean,
Should this phrase be kept or deleted?
F. Kept, because it clarifies that thermophiles live in both the Pacific Ocean and Juan de Fuca
Ridge.
G. Kept, because it provides specific details about "Here" referred to in the next sentence.
H. Deleted, because it contradicts the preceding paragraph, which makes it clear that
thermophiles do not live in water only.
J. Deleted, because this information is provided later in this paragraph.
70In the hot waters surrounding Juan de Fuca Ridge in the Paicific Ocean,
thermophiles ensure the survival of other marine life. Here, the ocean floor is
scarred by earthquakes and underwater volcanoes. Poisonous waters from
cracks at temperatures up to 360 degrees Celsius gush in the ocean floor, and
thermophiles convert the toxic chemicals into food for crabs, giant worms, and
other deep-sea life.
The writer is considering deleting the following phrase from the preceding
sentence (and revising the capitalization accordingly):
In the hot waters surrounding Juan de Fuca Ridge in the Pacific Ocean,
Should this phrase be kept or deleted?
F. Kept, because it clarifies that thermophiles live in both the Pacific Ocean and Juan de Fuca
Ridge.
G. Kept, because it provides specific details about "Here" referred to in the next sentence.
H. Deleted, because it contradicts the preceding paragraph, which makes it clear that
thermophiles do not live in water only.
J. Deleted, because this information is provided later in this paragraph.
70In the hot waters surrounding Juan de Fuca Ridge in the Paicific Ocean,
thermophiles ensure the survival of other marine life. Here, the ocean floor is
scarred by earthquakes and underwater volcanoes. Poisonous waters from
cracks at temperatures up to 360 degrees Celsius gush in the ocean floor, and
thermophiles convert the toxic chemicals into food for crabs, giant worms, and
other deep-sea life.
The writer is considering deleting the following phrase from the preceding
sentence (and revising the capitalization accordingly):
In the hot waters surrounding Juan de Fuca Ridge in the Pacific Ocean,
Should this phrase be kept or deleted?
F. Kept, because it clarifies that thermophiles live in both the Pacific Ocean and Juan de Fuca
Ridge.
G. Kept, because it provides specific details about "Here" referred to in the next sentence.
H. Deleted, because it contradicts the preceding paragraph, which makes it clear that
thermophiles do not live in water only.
J. Deleted, because this information is provided later in this paragraph.
70In the hot waters surrounding Juan de Fuca Ridge in the Paicific Ocean,
thermophiles ensure the survival of other marine life. Here, the ocean floor is
scarred by earthquakes and underwater volcanoes. Poisonous waters from
cracks at temperatures up to 360 degrees Celsius gush in the ocean floor, and
thermophiles convert the toxic chemicals into food for crabs, giant worms, and
other deep-sea life.
The writer is considering deleting the following phrase from the preceding
sentence (and revising the capitalization accordingly):
In the hot waters surrounding Juan de Fuca Ridge in the Pacific Ocean,
Should this phrase be kept or deleted?
F. Kept, because it clarifies that thermophiles live in both the Pacific Ocean and Juan de Fuca
Ridge.
G. Kept, because it provides specific details about "Here" referred to in the next sentence.
H. Deleted, because it contradicts the preceding paragraph, which makes it clear that
thermophiles do not live in water only.
J. Deleted, because this information is provided later in this paragraph.
70In the hot waters surrounding Juan de Fuca Ridge in the Paicific Ocean,
thermophiles ensure the survival of other marine life. Here, the ocean floor is
scarred by earthquakes and underwater volcanoes. Poisonous waters from
cracks at temperatures up to 360 degrees Celsius gush in the ocean floor, and
thermophiles convert the toxic chemicals into food for crabs, giant worms, and
other deep-sea life.
F. Kept, because it clarifies that thermophiles live in both the Pacific Ocean
and Juan de Fuca Ridge. (Not as good as G)
G. Kept, because it provides specific details about "Here" referred to in the next
sentence.
(Never have an unidentified pronoun)
H. Deleted, because it contradicts the preceding paragraph, which makes it
clear that thermophiles do not live in water only.
(Doesn't contradict preceding paragraph)
J. Deleted, because this information is provided later in this paragraph.
(Same as G)
71Here, the ocean floor is scarred by earthquakes and underwater
volcanoes.
Given that all the choices are true, which one most specifically
and vividly describes the underwater terrain?
A. NO CHANGE
B. there are signs of both seismic and volcanic activity.
C. the results of earthquakes and volcanic eruptions are evident.
D. the effect of earthquake and volcanic activity is apparent.
71Here, the ocean floor is scarred by earthquakes and underwater
volcanoes.
Given that all the choices are true, which one most specifically
and vividly describes the underwater terrain?
A. NO CHANGE
B. there are signs of both seismic and volcanic activity.
C. the results of earthquakes and volcanic eruptions are evident.
D. the effect of earthquake and volcanic activity is apparent.
71Here, the ocean floor is scarred by earthquakes and underwater
volcanoes.
Given that all the choices are true, which one most specifically
and vividly describes the underwater terrain?
A. NO CHANGE
B. there are signs of both seismic and volcanic activity.
C. the results of earthquakes and volcanic eruptions are evident.
D. the effect of earthquake and volcanic activity is apparent.
71Here, the ocean floor is scarred by earthquakes and underwater
volcanoes.
Given that all the choices are true, which one most specifically
and vividly describes the underwater terrain?
A. NO CHANGE
B. there are signs of both seismic and volcanic activity.
C. the results of earthquakes and volcanic eruptions are evident.
D. the effect of earthquake and volcanic activity is apparent.
71Here, the ocean floor is scarred by earthquakes and underwater
volcanoes.
Given that all the choices are true, which one most specifically
and vividly describes the underwater terrain?
A. NO CHANGE (specific and vivid evidence)
B. there are signs of both seismic and volcanic activity.
(what are the signs?)
C. the results of earthquakes and volcanic eruptions are evident.
(what are the results?)
D. the effect of earthquake and volcanic activity is apparent.
(how is it apparent?)
72Poisonous waters from cracks at temperatures up to 360 degrees
Celsius gush in the ocean floor, and thermophiles convert the
toxic chemicals into food for crabs, giant worms, and other deep-
sea life.
The best placement for the underlined portion would be:
F. where it is now.
G. after the word temperatures.
H. after the word Celsius.
J. after the word gush.
72Poisonous waters from cracks at temperatures up to 360 degrees
Celsius gush in the ocean floor, and thermophiles convert the
toxic chemicals into food for crabs, giant worms, and other deep-
sea life.
The best placement for the underlined portion would be:
F. where it is now.
G. after the word temperatures.
H. after the word Celsius.
J. after the word gush.
72Poisonous waters from cracks at temperatures up to 360 degrees
Celsius gush in the ocean floor, and thermophiles convert the
toxic chemicals into food for crabs, giant worms, and other deep-
sea life.
The best placement for the underlined portion would be:
F. where it is now.
G. after the word temperatures.
H. after the word Celsius.
J. after the word gush.
72Poisonous waters from cracks at temperatures up to 360 degrees
Celsius gush in the ocean floor, and thermophiles convert the
toxic chemicals into food for crabs, giant worms, and other deep-
sea life.
The best placement for the underlined portion would be:
F. where it is now.
G. after the word temperatures.
H. after the word Celsius.
J. after the word gush.
72Poisonous waters from cracks at temperatures up to 360 degrees
Celsius gush in the ocean floor, and thermophiles convert the
toxic chemicals into food for crabs, giant worms, and other deep-
sea life.
The best placement for the underlined portion would be:
F. where it is now.
G. after the word temperatures.
H. after the word Celsius.
J. after the word gush.
72Poisonous waters from cracks at temperatures up to 360 degrees
Celsius gush in the ocean floor, and thermophiles convert the
toxic chemicals into food for crabs, giant worms, and other deep-
sea life.
The best placement for the underlined portion would be:
F. where it is now. (see J)
G. after the word temperatures.
H. after the word Celsius.
J. after the word gush.
(I from glasses drink=waters from cracks gush NO)
(I drink from glasses=waters gush from cracks YES!)
73Psychrophiles live in harsh and inhospitable places on our
planet. One ancient breed of psychrophile lives in million-year-
old ice miles below an Antarctic glacier. In the ice of the South
Pole, psychrophiles survive not only darkness and subzero
temperatures but also ultraviolet radiation.
Given that all the choices are true, which one would LEAST
effectively introduce the subject of Paragraph 4?
A. NO CHANGE
B. According to researchers, the environment of a cold-loving extremophile, or
psychrophile, is as exteme as that of a heat-loving thermophile.
C. Certain extremophiles, called psychotrophiles, thrive in cold environments
rather than hot ones.
D. Other types of extremophiles--cold-loving psychrophiles--have been found in
temperatures as low as -17 degrees Celsius.
73Psychrophiles live in harsh and inhospitable places on our
planet. One ancient breed of psychrophile lives in million-year-
old ice miles below an Antarctic glacier. In the ice of the South
Pole, psychrophiles survive not only darkness and subzero
temperatures but also ultraviolet radiation.
Given that all the choices are true, which one would LEAST
effectively introduce the subject of Paragraph 4?
A. NO CHANGE
B. According to researchers, the environment of a cold-loving extremophile, or
psychrophile, is as exteme as that of a heat-loving thermophile.
C. Certain extremophiles, called psychotrophiles, thrive in cold environments
rather than hot ones.
D. Other types of extremophiles--cold-loving psychrophiles--have been found in
temperatures as low as -17 degrees Celsius.
73Psychrophiles live in harsh and inhospitable places on our
planet. One ancient breed of psychrophile lives in million-year-
old ice miles below an Antarctic glacier. In the ice of the South
Pole, psychrophiles survive not only darkness and subzero
temperatures but also ultraviolet radiation.
Given that all the choices are true, which one would LEAST
effectively introduce the subject of Paragraph 4?
A. NO CHANGE
B. According to researchers, the environment of a cold-loving extremophile, or
psychrophile, is as exteme as that of a heat-loving thermophile.
C. Certain extremophiles, called psychotrophiles, thrive in cold environments
rather than hot ones.
D. Other types of extremophiles--cold-loving psychrophiles--have been found in
temperatures as low as -17 degrees Celsius.
73Psychrophiles live in harsh and inhospitable places on our
planet. One ancient breed of psychrophile lives in million-year-
old ice miles below an Antarctic glacier. In the ice of the South
Pole, psychrophiles survive not only darkness and subzero
temperatures but also ultraviolet radiation.
Given that all the choices are true, which one would LEAST
effectively introduce the subject of Paragraph 4?
A. NO CHANGE
B. According to researchers, the environment of a cold-loving extremophile, or
psychrophile, is as exteme as that of a heat-loving thermophile.
C. Certain extremophiles, called psychotrophiles, thrive in cold environments
rather than hot ones.
D. Other types of extremophiles--cold-loving psychrophiles--have been found in
temperatures as low as -17 degrees Celsius.
73Psychrophiles live in harsh and inhospitable places on our
planet. One ancient breed of psychrophile lives in million-year-
old ice miles below an Antarctic glacier. In the ice of the South
Pole, psychrophiles survive not only darkness and subzero
temperatures but also ultraviolet radiation.
Given that all the choices are true, which one would LEAST
effectively introduce the subject of Paragraph 4?
A. NO CHANGE (must inform reader of what a psychrophile is)
B. According to researchers, the environment of a cold-loving extremophile, or
psychrophile, is as exteme as that of a heat-loving thermophile.
C. Certain extremophiles, called psychotrophiles, thrive in cold environments
rather than hot ones.
D. Other types of extremophiles--cold-loving psychrophiles--have been found in
temperatures as low as -17 degrees Celsius.
74If life can persist in extreme environments on Earth, scientists speculate that life
may endure under similar conditions, perhaps in the frozen seas or the
exploding volcanoes of Jupiter's moons, or beneath the barren landscape of
Mars.
The writer is considering deleting the following clause from the preceding
sentence (revising the capitalization accordingly):
If life can persist in extreme environments on Earth,
Should this clause be kept or deleted?
F. Kept, because it clarifies for readers that life in extreme environments on Earth
may not exit.
G. Kept, because it makes the connection between life on Earth and the possibility of
life on other planets.
H. Deleted, because it contradicts the essay's main point by implying that life may not
exist in extreme environments.
J. Deleted, because it misleads readers into thinking the paragraph is about life on
Earth rather than life on other planets.
74If life can persist in extreme environments on Earth, scientists speculate that life
may endure under similar conditions, perhaps in the frozen seas or the
exploding volcanoes of Jupiter's moons, or beneath the barren landscape of
Mars.
The writer is considering deleting the following clause from the preceding
sentence (revising the capitalization accordingly):
If life can persist in extreme environments on Earth,
Should this clause be kept or deleted?
F. Kept, because it clarifies for readers that life in extreme environments on Earth
may not exit.
G. Kept, because it makes the connection between life on Earth and the possibility of
life on other planets.
H. Deleted, because it contradicts the essay's main point by implying that life may not
exist in extreme environments.
J. Deleted, because it misleads readers into thinking the paragraph is about life on
Earth rather than life on other planets.
74If life can persist in extreme environments on Earth, scientists speculate that life
may endure under similar conditions, perhaps in the frozen seas or the
exploding volcanoes of Jupiter's moons, or beneath the barren landscape of
Mars.
The writer is considering deleting the following clause from the preceding
sentence (revising the capitalization accordingly):
If life can persist in extreme environments on Earth,
Should this clause be kept or deleted?
F. Kept, because it clarifies for readers that life in extreme environments on Earth
may not exit.
G. Kept, because it makes the connection between life on Earth and the possibility of
life on other planets.
H. Deleted, because it contradicts the essay's main point by implying that life may not
exist in extreme environments.
J. Deleted, because it misleads readers into thinking the paragraph is about life on
Earth rather than life on other planets.
74If life can persist in extreme environments on Earth, scientists speculate that life
may endure under similar conditions, perhaps in the frozen seas or the
exploding volcanoes of Jupiter's moons, or beneath the barren landscape of
Mars.
The writer is considering deleting the following clause from the preceding
sentence (revising the capitalization accordingly):
If life can persist in extreme environments on Earth,
Should this clause be kept or deleted?
F. Kept, because it clarifies for readers that life in extreme environments on Earth
may not exit.
G. Kept, because it makes the connection between life on Earth and the possibility of
life on other planets.
H. Deleted, because it contradicts the essay's main point by implying that life may not
exist in extreme environments.
J. Deleted, because it misleads readers into thinking the paragraph is about life on
Earth rather than life on other planets.
74If life can persist in extreme environments on Earth, scientists speculate that life
may endure under similar conditions, perhaps in the frozen seas or the
exploding volcanoes of Jupiter's moons, or beneath the barren landscape of
Mars.
The writer is considering deleting the following clause from the preceding
sentence (revising the capitalization accordingly):
If life can persist in extreme environments on Earth,
Should this clause be kept or deleted?
F. Kept, because it clarifies for readers that life in extreme environments on Earth
may not exit. (opposite of what this sentence does?)
G. Kept, because it makes the connection between life on Earth and the possibility of
life on other planets.
H. Deleted, because it contradicts the essay's main point by implying that life may not
exist in extreme environments. (same as F)
J. Deleted, because it misleads readers into thinking the paragraph is about life on
Earth rather than life on other planets. (see G)