Task 1 – Boxing it up. .

Read the following Sales Pitch then complete the ‘Boxing it up’ task below

Sales Pitch - Sofa SphereGood morning. I want to start my sales pitch by asking you to ask yourself a personal question: when was the last time you treated yourself to something special? I mean really spoiled yourself with something above the norm, something unashamedly luxurious?

At Sofa Sphere we produce sumptuously special sofas that can change your life. The time has come to make a big change in your life. You must throw out your ancient, dusty and threadbare sofa. Don’t even try to relax on the hard seat and broken springs. It’s time to say no to those coffee stains and rips that the dog made.

You must visit Sofa Sphere NOW and browse hundreds of incredible seats that will help you to unwind at the end of a difficult day. After all, you deserve it! Our slogan says it all: ‘Come toast our sofas that boast the most.’ Our highly trained and dedicated sales staff will help you choose the right product for you.

You and your loved ones can welcome a new member of the family - a sofa - from our ‘superstar range.’ We are very proud of these expertly made stunning sofas as each one is made with a velvet covering and has our unique glitter-fabric finish that will make you feel like a million dollars the minute you sit on it.

Don’t just take our word for it, celebrity talent spotter, Simon Cowell raves about our scintillating superstar sofas:

At the end of a boring day watching dozens and dozens of

talentless members of the public that want to be pop stars, I

like to sit down and relax on my tiger-skin superstar sofa from

Sofa Sphere.

What’s more, if you order one of our superstar sofas by the end of this month you can get a free reclining armchair absolutely free!

So come along to Sofa Sphere and try for yourself our heavenly furniture that will change your life forever!

Name:-………………………………………..

Task 1 – Boxing it up. .

‘Boxing it up’ Task

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What does this paragraph do? Magpie impressive words/ sentence starters to use in my writing

1Good morning. I want to start my sales pitch by asking you a personal question: when was the last time you treated yourself to something special? I mean really spoiled yourself with something above the norm, something unashamedly luxurious?

2At Sofa Sphere we produce sumptuously special sofas that can change your life. The time has come to make a big change in your life. You must throw out your ancient, dusty and threadbare sofa. Don’t even try to relax on the hard seat and broken springs. It’s time to say no to those coffee stains and rips that the dog made.

3You must visit Sofa Sphere NOW and browse hundreds of incredible seats that will help you to unwind at the end of a difficult day. After all, you deserve it! Our slogan says it all: ‘Come toast our sofas that boast the most. Our highly trained and dedicated sales staff will help you choose the right product for you.

Name:-………………………………………..

Task 1 – Boxing it up. .

4You and your loved ones can welcome a new member of the family - a sofa - from our ‘superstar range.’ We are very proud of these expertly made stunning sofas as each one is made with a velvet covering and has our unique glitter-fabric finish that will make you feel like a million dollars the minute you sit on it.

5Don’t just take our word for it, celebrity talent spotter, Simon Cowell raves about our scintillating superstar sofas:

At the end of a boring day watching dozens and dozens of talentless members of the public that want to be pop stars, I like to sit down and relax on my tiger-skin superstar sofa from

Sofa Sphere.6

What’s more, if you order one of our superstar sofas by the end of this month you can get a free reclining armchair absolutely free!

7So come along to Sofa Sphere and try for yourself our heavenly furniture that will change your life forever!

Name:-………………………………………..