Reality stars in the mediaby Amy Buchanan

Submission date: 10-Apr-2018 11:03AM (UTC+0100)Submission ID: 86274047File name: VA-P500-20009-35736-18_8550496_9707407_Reality_stars_in_the_media_.docxWord count: 1654Character count: 8893

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FINAL GRADE

65/100

Reality stars in the mediaGRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

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Comment 1

Punctuation! If you are using a f ull stop here then you need to start the next sentence with acapital letter. In that case, deleting the and would make it read better.

Comment 2

lower case

Comment 3

Capital letter on the names of places such as Hollywood.

Comment 4

Italics

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Italics

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comma

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comma

Comment 8

This word could be deleted.

Comment 9

italics

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italics

Comment 11

This is a long sentence. Read it out loud.

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Comment 12

Italics

Comment 13

Italics.

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Italics

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