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Peer Editing
• Share your essay with the peer on your left. • Read the requirements for Use of Language on
the scoring guide. • Look through your peer’s essay for elements
in that section. • Go back and review for conventions- don’t fix
them, just mark them as incorrect.
Convention note• As you score your peer’s paper, if you notice a WOD error ( incomplete list
below), circle it. • Its/it’s; there/their/they’re; where/were/wear/we’re; which/witch;
to/two/too; then/than; here/hear; knew/new; affect/effect; except/accept; your/you’re.
• Semi-colons need to have a complete sentence on each side.• Colons must be used correctly: complete sentence leading to the colon,
and additional information after. • ALL MOVIE TITLES ARE ITALICIZED!!!!!
Works Cited: add to your paper
Alice in Wonderland. Dir. Tim Burton. Perf. Mia Wasikowska and Johnny Depp. Walt Disney Studios, 2010. DVD.
Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. Dir. Tim Burton. Perf. Johnny Depp. Warner, 2005. DVD
Edward Scissorhands. Dir. Tim Burton. Perf. Johnny Depp and Winona Ryder. Twentieth Century Fox, 1990. DVD