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“My First Free Summer” Essay
Let’s Look at “The Luckiest Time of All” Essay from the Assessment
• Repetition• Topic Sentence
“because”• Transitions• Commas• Random Periods• Paragraph Form• What’s a Sentence-
subject & predicate• Off Topic Sentences
• Information from the Story
• Talking to the Essay/ Audience
• Exclamation Points• Conjunctions as
Sentence Starters• Closing Sentence-
No “The End”• Write Out Numbers
Up to Ten
“My First Free Summer”Ten Sentence Paragraph
• Green- Topic Sentence- Answer the question without using “because”.
• Yellow- Key Idea- Support your answer. Use transitions. Include at least four key ideas. Stick to ideas from the story.
• Red- Explain- Explain or discuss your key ideas.• Green- Concluding Sentence- Restate your topic
sentence. Do not introduce anything new here. Do not change your opinion.