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“Is is true that in this day and age, children have too many freedoms, have too much money and are not subject to sufficient discipline to make them respectful to others?”
Good or bad?
It should be several questions:
• “Do children have too much freedom to do as they please?”
• “Do children have too much money?”
• “Do adults discipline children enough?”
Clarify actual time of day and remove the negative
• “Do people feel less alert at certain times of the day?”
• “Do people feel less alert around midday?”
Bad: because unclear
• “How are online users experiencing or addressing privacy issues on such social networking sites as MySpace and Facebook?”
Bad: because too simple
• “What are common traits of those suffering from diabetes in America, and how can these commonalities be used to aid the medical community in prevention of the disease?”