Guided Writing Form 3

The details below show how a blind old man was helped by a kind girl.

Write out a story.Use the pictures and notes given to write the story.

man – old and blind - played violin – collected money

Picture 1

missing- girl concerned

Picture 2

went – his house

Picture 3

found – old man- unwell

Picture 4

taxi – sent - hospital

Picture 5

old man - grateful

Picture 6

When writing out your story, you should:

use all the notes given to describe the incident

elaborate on the given notes to make it more interesting

make sure it is not less than 120 words.

What do think is the best title for your story?

1st paragraph - Introduction1. Who is the man?2. What did he always do?3. Where did he always go?4. What was special about this man?5. What did people do to help him?2nd paragraph - Body6. Who used to pass this shopping complex?7. Where did she go?8. What did she always do?

man – old and blind - played violin – collected money

Picture 1

3nd paragraph – Body1. What had happened one day?2. What did she think about?3. What did she do then?

missing- girl concernedwent – his house

Picture 2 & 3

Picture 2

Picture 3

4th paragraph -Body1. What did she find at his house?2. What had happened to the old man?3. What did she do then?4. Where did she bring the old man to?

found – old man- unwelltaxi – sent - hospital

Picture 4 & 5

Picture 4 Picture 5

5th paragraph - body1. How did the old man feel?2. What did he do?3. What do you think he will say to her?6th paragraph - Ending4. What do you think the doctor and the nurses

will do/say to the girl?

old man - grateful

Picture 6

A Kind GirlPak Ali was old and blind.

He always sat in front of a shopping complex playing his violin to collect money. He was a very talented violinist, despite being blind. Passerby would drop money into his collection bowl.

Aini used to pass this shopping complex on her way to the tuition centre. She often stopped to chat with him. She usually gave him a packet drink or some snacks.

One day, Aini was surprised to find Pak Ali missing. Suspecting that something was wrong, she immediately went to his house.

There, she found the old man unwell and shivering on the floor. She called a taxi using her handphone and took him to the hospital.

Pak Ali was very grateful to Aini. Holding her hands he said with a faint voice, “I’ll always remember you for your kindness.”

The doctor and the nurses praised Aini for her thoughtfulness.

Enjoy writing your story!

With Love Always,Po Po Tun