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GCSE ENGLISH AND
ENGLISH LITERATURE
INFORMATION AND PERSONAL PROFILE
FOR STUDENTS AT ASHTON COMMUNITY
SCIENCE COLLEGE
NAME: …………………………………………..
TEACHER: …………………………………….
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THE COURSE(S)
You will be following the AQA, Specification A syllabus for English. As an additional GCSE,
many of you will be following the AQA, Specification A syllabus for English Literature.
(www.aqa.org.uk)
There are two methods of assessment within each course:
1. Coursework
2. Examination
The following tables give you a breakdown of the elements that need to be studied and the work
that needs to be completed in each area. The percentage weighting of each element in relation to
your overall grade is also included:
Coursework
Written
If you are entered for English and English Literature you will
complete five written assignments. If you are entered for English only you will complete four
written assignments:
ASSIGNMENT EXAMPLE TASKS % OF OVERALL GCSE
Original Writing
(Writing assessment for
English only)
A short story or an
autobiographical piece of
writing.
5 % of the English GCSE
Media
(Writing assessment for
English only)
A close analysis of an
advertising campaign or of the
marketing for a film.
5% of the English GCSE
Shakespeare
(Reading assessment for
English and English Lit.)
A close analysis of the impact
created by the first 95 lines in
Romeo and Juliet.
5% of the English GCSE plus
10% of the English Literature
GCSE
Pre-Twentieth Century Prose
Study
(Reading assessment for
English and English Lit.)
A comparison between two
chapters in Great Expectations
by Charles Dickens.
5% of the English GCSE plus
10% of the English Literature
GCSE
Twentieth Century Play
(Assessment for English
Literature only)
A close analysis of the role
played by the narrator in Blood
Brothers by Willy Russell
10% of the English Literature
GCSE
Spoken
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In addition to written coursework there is also a spoken coursework element for English GCSE.
This assesses your abilities in Speaking and Listening. There are three assessments worth
approximately 7% each:
1. An individual extended contribution
2. Group Interaction
3. A Drama-focused activity
Over the three assessments your abilities in each of the following skill triplets must be
demonstrated:
1. Explain, Describe, Narrate
2. Explore, Analyse, Imagine
3. Discuss, Argue, Persuade
Here are some example tasks which could be used to fulfil the Speaking and Listening element of
your coursework:
Example activity Skill Triplet %
Assessment 1
Individual extended
contribution
An individual talk given to the class after a
student’s two week work experience
Explain
Describe
Narrate
7%
Assessment 2
Group Interaction
In small groups students explore and analyse
the impact an army recruitment campaign may
have on young people
Explore
Analyse
Imagine
7%
Assessment 3
Drama-focused
activity
Students’ role-play a public meeting, held with
local councillors, in which a decision to close
down the local primary school is debated
Discuss
Argue
persuade
7%
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Coursework Summary
English GCSE
Four written assignments worth 20% of your
final GCSE
Plus
Three Speaking and Listening assignments worth
20% of your final GCSE
40% Total
English Literature GCSE
One additional piece of coursework needed in
order for your folder to be assessed for English
Literature.
30% Total
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Examination
English
You will sit two separate examination papers for English. Each paper is worth 30% of the overall
grade (total for both 60%):
Paper 1 (1 hour 45 minutes)
Section Task Time
allocated
Marks Overall %
of GCSE
A Reading Media and Non-Fiction texts and
answering a series of questions
1 hour 27 15%
B Choosing one of four written tasks in which you
are asked to argue, persuade or advise for a
particular target audience
45 Minutes 27 15%
Paper 2 (1 hour 30 minutes)
Section Task Time
allocated
Marks Overall %
of GCSE
A Writing an essay comparing two poems from
Other Cultures and Traditions selected from a
GCSE anthology
45 Minutes 27 15%
B Choosing one of four written tasks in which you
are asked to describe, imagine or explain
45 Minutes 27 15%
English Literature (1 hour and 45 Minutes)
You will sit one examination paper for English Literature worth 70% of the overall grade:
Section Task Time
allocated
Marks Overall %
of GCSE
A An essay on a contemporary novel: Of Mice and
Men by John Steinbeck or A Kestral For a
Knave by Barry Hines
45 Minutes 27 30%
B Writing an essay on four poems taken from a
selection of Twentieth and Pre-twentieth
century poetry you have studied
1 hour 36 40%
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Teaching schedule
There are two essential things which you and your teacher must ensure if you are to gain the best
grade you are capable of:
1. By the end of year 10 you must have completed all coursework tasks and hit your target
grade.
2. By the time you sit your examinations you have studied all the different elements of the
course and have had sufficient opportunities to practise and improve your examination
technique.
Each class, depending on your set and target grade, will have an individual programme of study
mapped out to ensure the above. Here is an example teaching schedule, followed by a blank onto
which your teacher will map out assignments, teaching blocks and deadlines with you:
YEAR 9
TERM TEACHING AND LEARNING
ACTIVITIES
DEADLINES
TEACHING AND
LEARNING
OUTCOMES
3B – 7
week
block
(after
SATs)
� A variety of short stories read as
stimulus for students’ own writing
� Students plan, draft and re-draft their
own original story
� With structured guidance from the
teacher, small groups of students
plan a reading and presentation on a
poem from the GCSE English
anthology
week 3 - hand
in draft 1 of
story
week 5 – hand
in draft 2 of
story
week 7 – ready
for group
presentation
Original writing
coursework completed
Students made familiar
with poems for English
language paper 2
Group interaction oral
coursework assessment
completed
7
YEAR 10
TERM TEACHING AND LEARNING
ACTIVITIES
DEADLINES
TEACHING AND
LEARNING
OUTCOMES
Autumn –
1A
� The play “The Crucible” by Arthur
Miller read and studied.
� An improvised role play in which the
students dramatise a public meeting that
might have taken place in Salem when
the rumours of witchcraft are first
spread.
� Students plan, draft and prepare to
redraft an essay on the destructive
impact of the love triangle between
Abigail Williams, John and Elizabeth
Proctor.
Week 3 –
ready for
improvised
role play
Week 6 – hand
in draft one of
assignment
Week 8 – draft
2 of
assignment set
for end of first
week back
after half term
Drama-focused oral
coursework completed
Twentieth Century
play coursework
completed for English
Literature
Half term
Autumn –
1B
� Students study/ revise their
knowledge of media texts, focusing
on children’s charity campaign
material (posters, leaflets, TV
advertisements and websites)
� Students made familiar with format
and question types included on
English paper 1 section A (Response
to non-fiction and media texts
� Students plan, draft and prepare to
redraft an essay on use of shock
tactics in advertising
Week 3 –
ready for
practice
English paper
1 section A
Week 5 – hand
in draft one of
assignment
Week 7 – draft
2 of
assignment set
for end of first
week back
after half term
Experience of skills
needed for English
Paper 1 gained
Media coursework for
English completed
Christmas
holiday
8
Spring –
2A
� Students study the play Romeo and
Juliet by William Shakespeare,
focusing on the opening in detail
� Students plan, draft and prepare to
re-draft an essay on how
Shakespeare grabs the attention of
the audience in the first 95 lines of
the play
Week 5 – hand
in draft one of
essay
Shakespeare
coursework for
English and English
Literature begun.
Half term
Spring –
2B
� Students revise work completed on
poems from other cultures and
traditions in year 9 and study others
� Students practice skills needed for
writing comparative essays on
poetry in examinations
Week 3 –
students hand
in draft 2 of
Shakespeare
essay
Shakespeare
coursework for
English and English
Literature completed
Skills for English
paper 2 developed
Easter
holiday
Summer
– 3A
� Revision for English language Paper
1 and 2 – writing to argue, persuade
and advise and writing to imagine,
inform and explain
� Year 10 examinations
� Work Experience
Week 3 –
students ready
for
examination
(English paper
1 and 2)
Skills for English
paper 1 and 2
developed
Half term
Summer
– 3B
� Students prepare an individual talk
on their work Experience
� Students study Great Expectations
by Charles Dickens, focusing on
chapter 1 and 39
� Students plan, draft and prepare to
redraft an essay comparing the
presentation of Pip and Magwitch in
the above chapters.
Week 2 –
ready for work
experience talk
Week 6 –
students hand
in draft one of
essay
Individual oral
coursework completed
Prose study
coursework for
English and English
literature begun
Summer
holiday
� Students redraft prose study
coursework
� Students given opportunity to read
the Literature set text over the
Summer (Of Mice and Men by
Steinbeck)
Prose study
coursework for
English and English
literature completed
English Literature set
text read
9
Year 11
TERM TEACHING AND LEARNING
ACTIVITIES
DEADLINES
TEACHING AND
LEARNING
OUTCOMES
Autumn –
1A
� Study Of Mice and Men by John
Steinbeck
� Coursework Review
Week 2 – hand
in draft 2 of
prose study
essay
Coursework completed
and improved
Students prepared for
section A of English
Literature Examination
Half term
Autumn –
1B
� Revision of Skills for English
language Examinations
� Year 11 Mock Examinations
Ready for
Mock GCSE
English
Development of skills
for English GCSE
Christmas
holiday
Spring –
2A
� Study of poetry for English
Literature Examination
� Opportunities to improve oral
coursework marks during group
interaction and via role play based
on poems
Students prepared for
section B of English
Literature examination
Oral coursework
marks improved
Half term
Spring –
2B
� Revision and examination practice Examination skills
developed
Easter
holiday
Summer
– 3A
� GCSE examinations begin
Half term
Summer
– 3B
� GCSE examinations continue
Summer
holiday
Students receive their
grades
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BLANK TEACHING SCHEDULE YEAR 9
TERM
TEACHING AND LEARNING
ACTIVITIES
DEADLINES
TEACHING AND
LEARNING
OUTCOMES
3B – 7
week
block
(after
SATs)
YEAR
10
TERM
TEACHING AND LEARNING
ACTIVITIES
DEADLINES
TEACHING AND
LEARNING
OUTCOMES
Autumn –
1A
Half term
YEAR
10
TERM
TEACHING AND LEARNING
ACTIVITIES
DEADLINES
TEACHING AND
LEARNING
OUTCOMES
Autumn –
1B
Christmas
11
YEAR
10
TERM
TEACHING AND LEARNING
ACTIVITIES
DEADLINES
TEACHING AND
LEARNING
OUTCOMES
Spring –
2A
Half term
YEAR
10
TERM
TEACHING AND LEARNING
ACTIVITIES
DEADLINES
TEACHING AND
LEARNING
OUTCOMES
Spring –
2B
Easter
YEAR
10
TERM
TEACHING AND LEARNING
ACTIVITIES
DEADLINES
TEACHING AND
LEARNING
OUTCOMES
Summer
– 3A
Half term
12
YEAR
10
TERM
TEACHING AND LEARNING
ACTIVITIES
DEADLINES
TEACHING AND
LEARNING
OUTCOMES
Summer
– 3B
Summer
holiday
YEAR
11
TERM
TEACHING AND LEARNING
ACTIVITIES
DEADLINES
TEACHING AND
LEARNING
OUTCOMES
Autumn –
1A
Half term
YEAR
11
TERM
TEACHING AND LEARNING
ACTIVITIES
DEADLINES
TEACHING AND
LEARNING
OUTCOMES
Autumn –
1B
Christmas
13
YEAR
11
TERM
TEACHING AND LEARNING
ACTIVITIES
DEADLINES
TEACHING AND
LEARNING
OUTCOMES
Spring –
2A
Half term
YEAR
11
TERM
TEACHING AND LEARNING
ACTIVITIES
DEADLINES
TEACHING AND
LEARNING
OUTCOMES
Spring –
2B
Easter
YEAR
11
TERM
TEACHING AND LEARNING
ACTIVITIES
DEADLINES
TEACHING AND
LEARNING
OUTCOMES
Summer
– 3A
Half term
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MY PROGRESS
INTRODUCTION
This section of your booklet helps you to keep track of your progress. You will be able to make a
record of which parts of the courses you have studied. In addition, you will be able to write down
the targets your teacher has set you after each unit of work. Using the mark schemes yourself and
becoming familiar with the criteria you will be judged by is also an important part of this process. If
you can set your own targets you are more likely to achieve them.
Before focusing on moving forward it is important to remember what your targets were at the end
of Key Stage 3
My Reading targets were to:
My Writing targets were to:
My Speaking and Listening Targets were to:
My GCSE Target is: ___.___ = Grade ___
WRITTEN COURSEWORK
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COMPONENT ORIGINAL WRITING (EN3)
ASSIGNMENT
TITLE
KEY
LEARNING
POINTS
TARGET
AFTER
DRAFT 1
TARGET
AFTER
DRAFT 2
GRADE AND
COMMENTS
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COMPONENT MEDIA (EN3)
ASSIGNMENT
TITLE
KEY
LEARNING
POINTS
TARGET
AFTER
DRAFT 1
TARGET
AFTER
DRAFT 2
GRADE AND
COMMENTS
COMPONENT SHAKESPEARE (EN2 AND LIT.)
ASSIGNMENT
TITLE
KEY
LEARNING
POINTS
TARGET
AFTER
DRAFT 1
TARGET
AFTER
DRAFT 2
GRADE AND
COMMENTS
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COMPONENT PROSE STUDY (EN2 AND LIT.)
ASSIGNMENT
TITLE
KEY
LEARNING
POINTS
TARGET
AFTER
DRAFT 1
TARGET
AFTER
DRAFT 2
GRADE AND
COMMENTS
COMPONENT TWENTIETH CENTURY PLAY (LIT.)
ASSIGNMENT
TITLE
KEY
LEARNING
POINTS
TARGET
AFTER
DRAFT 1
TARGET
AFTER
DRAFT 2
GRADE AND
COMMENTS
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SPOKEN COURSEWORK
1. Description of activity Explain
Describ
e
Narrate
Explore
Analyse
Imagine
Discuss
Argue
Persuade
Individual
extended
contribution
How and
what I did.
Teacher
comments
Targets
Grade/Mark
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2 Description of activity Explain
Describ
e
Narrate
Explore
Analyse
Imagine
Discuss
Argue
Persuade
Group
interaction
How and
whatI did.
Teacher
comments
Targets
Grade/Mark
20
3
Description of activity Explain
Describ
e
Narrate
Explore
Analyse
Imagine
Discuss
Argue
Persuade
Drama-based
activity
How and
what I did.
Teacher
comments
Targets
Grade/Mark
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EXAMINATION SKILLS
ENGLISH
The two English examination papers are divided into section A and section B.
Section A, on both papers, is a test of Reading. Section B, on both papers, is a test of
Writing. The criteria against which you are marked for Reading and Writing differ
greatly. Here are the assessment objectives upon which the mark-schemes are based:
READING
Candidates are required to demonstrate their ability to:
i. Read, with insight and engagement, making appropriate references to texts,
and developing and sustaining interpretations of them
ii. Distinguish between fact and opinion and evaluate how information is
presented
iii. Follow an argument, identifying implications and recognising inconsistencies
iv. Select material appropriate to purpose, collate material from different sources,
and make cross references
v. Understand and evaluate how writers use linguistic, structural and
presentational devices to achieve their effects, and comment on ways
language varies and changes
WRITING
Candidates are required to demonstrate their ability to:
i. Communicate clearly and imaginatively, using and adapting forms for
different readers and purposes
ii. Organise ideas into sentences, paragraphs and whole texts using a variety of
linguistic and structural features
iii. Use a range of sentence structures effectively with accurate punctuation and
spelling
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EXAMINATION PRACTICE FOR READING SKILLS
PAPER 1 SECTION A – READING NON-FICTION AND MEDIA TEXTS In this section of the paper you will be asked to read two or three different non-fiction/media texts
and then answer 5 or 6 questions. Each question will focus on a specific skill from within the
assessment objectives. For example, identifying or commenting on the writer’s use of fact and
opinion or commenting on the presentational devices.
Opinion verses Fact
QUESTION
ASSESSMENT
OBJECTIVE
KEY
LEARNING
POINTS
MARK AND
COMMENT
TARGET
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QUESTION
ASSESSMENT
OBJECTIVE
KEY
LEARNING
POINTS
MARK AND
COMMENT
TARGET
QUESTION
ASSESSMENT
OBJECTIVE
KEY
LEARNING
POINTS
MARK AND
COMMENT
TARGET
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QUESTION
ASSESSMENT
OBJECTIVE
KEY
LEARNING
POINTS
MARK AND
COMMENT
TARGET
QUESTION
ASSESSMENT
OBJECTIVE
KEY
LEARNING
POINTS
MARK AND
COMMENT
TARGET
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QUESTION
ASSESSMENT
OBJECTIVE
KEY
LEARNING
POINTS
MARK AND
COMMENT
TARGET
QUESTION
ASSESSMENT
OBJECTIVE
KEY
LEARNING
POINTS
MARK AND
COMMENT
TARGET
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PAPER 2 SECTION A – READING POEMS FROM OTHER CULTURES
AND TRADITIONS
In this section of the paper you will have a choice of two questions. Question 1 will name a poem
from Cluster 1 poems listed on the contents page of your GCSE anthology. It will ask you to
compare this with one other poem from either cluster. Question 2 will name a poem from Cluster 2
listed on the contents page of your anthology. Again, it will ask you to compare this with one other
poem from either cluster.
Fill in this chart as you study the poems.
CLUSTER 1
POEM CULTURE KEY THEME KEY TECHNIQUE
Limbo
Nothing’s changed
Island Man
Blessing
Two Scavengers in
a truck
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POEM CULTURE KEY THEME KEY TECHNIQUE
Night of the
Scorpion
Vultures
What Were They
like
CLUSTER 2
POEM CULTURE KEY THEME KEY TECHNIQUE
From Search for My
Tongue
From Unrelated
Incidents
Half Caste
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POEM CULTURE KEY THEME KEY TECHNIQUE
Love after love
This Room
Not My Business
Presents from My
Aunts in Pakistan
Hurricane Hits
England
Key tips for essay writing success in this section:
� Plan your essay (following the bullet points if you are entered for foundation tier).
� Write a clear introduction, referring to both poems and the key words in the essay title.
� Use PEE paragraphs (Point, Evidence, Explain).
� Compare the poems using effective connectives and connective phrases such as: similarly, by comparison, in
addition, by contrast, whereas, however.
� Comment on the use of interesting structural and presentational devices such as stanza length, layout and
use of punctuation.
� Comment on the use of interesting language techniques such as similes, metaphors, dialect and emotive
words.
� Refer back to the key words in each paragraph and in your conclusion.
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Essay title:
Yes or
no
Did I plan my essay effectively by: � Underlining the key words in the title?
� Carefully selecting an appropriate poem to link with the named poem?
� Drawing some kind of mind-map, chart or list?
Did I introduce my essay clearly by:
� Mentioning both poems that I was writing about?
� Referring to key words in the question?
Did I use PEE paragraphs by:
� Making clear points at the beginning of paragraphs?
� Backing up my points with a short quotation or phrase from the poem in quotation
marks?
� Explaining how the evidence proved my point?
� For a higher grade focusing closely on the effect of specific words in the quotation?
Did I compare the poems by: � Pointing out a similarity?
� Pointing out a difference?
� Using effective connectives and connective phrases?
Did I comment on the use of structural and presentational devices?
Did I comment on the use of language techniques?
Did I suggest different possibilities when interpreting the meaning of each poem?
How many times did I refer back to key words in the question?
Did I write an effective conclusion by:
Summarising my main points?
Referring back to the question?
Putting forward my point of view?
GRADE AND
COMMENTS
TARGETS
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Essay title:
Yes or
no
Did I plan my essay effectively by: � Underlining the key words in the title?
� Carefully selecting an appropriate poem to link with the named poem?
� Drawing some kind of mind-map, chart or list?
Did I introduce my essay clearly by:
� Mentioning both poems that I was writing about?
� Referring to key words in the question?
Did I use PEE paragraphs by:
� Making clear points at the beginning of paragraphs?
� Backing up my points with a short quotation or phrase from the poem in quotation
marks?
� Explaining how the evidence proved my point?
� For a higher grade focusing closely on the effect of specific words in the quotation?
Did I compare the poems by:
� Pointing out a similarity?
� Pointing out a difference?
� Using effective connectives and connective phrases?
Did I comment on the use of structural and presentational devices?
Did I comment on the use of language techniques?
Did I suggest different possibilities when interpreting the meaning of each poem?
How many times did I refer back to key words in the question?
Did I write an effective conclusion by:
Summarising my main points?
Referring back to the question?
Putting forward my point of view?
GRADE AND
COMMENTS
TARGETS
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Essay title:
Yes or
no
Did I plan my essay effectively by: � Underlining the key words in the title?
� Carefully selecting an appropriate poem to link with the named poem?
� Drawing some kind of mind-map, chart or list?
Did I introduce my essay clearly by:
� Mentioning both poems that I was writing about?
� Referring to key words in the question?
Did I use PEE paragraphs by:
� Making clear points at the beginning of paragraphs?
� Backing up my points with a short quotation or phrase from the poem in quotation
marks?
� Explaining how the evidence proved my point?
� For a higher grade focusing closely on the effect of specific words in the quotation?
Did I compare the poems by:
� Pointing out a similarity?
� Pointing out a difference?
� Using effective connectives and connective phrases?
Did I comment on the use of structural and presentational devices?
Did I comment on the use of language techniques?
Did I suggest different possibilities when interpreting the meaning of each poem?
How many times did I refer back to key words in the question?
Did I write an effective conclusion by:
Summarising my main points?
Referring back to the question?
Putting forward my point of view?
GRADE AND
COMMENTS
TARGETS
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Essay title:
Yes or
no
Did I plan my essay effectively by: � Underlining the key words in the title?
� Carefully selecting an appropriate poem to link with the named poem?
� Drawing some kind of mind-map, chart or list?
Did I introduce my essay clearly by:
� Mentioning both poems that I was writing about?
� Referring to key words in the question?
Did I use PEE paragraphs by:
� Making clear points at the beginning of paragraphs?
� Backing up my points with a short quotation or phrase from the poem in quotation
marks?
� Explaining how the evidence proved my point?
� For a higher grade focusing closely on the effect of specific words in the quotation?
Did I compare the poems by:
� Pointing out a similarity?
� Pointing out a difference?
� Using effective connectives and connective phrases?
Did I comment on the use of structural and presentational devices?
Did I comment on the use of language techniques?
Did I suggest different possibilities when interpreting the meaning of each poem?
How many times did I refer back to key words in the question?
Did I write an effective conclusion by:
Summarising my main points?
Referring back to the question?
Putting forward my point of view?
GRADE AND
COMMENTS
TARGETS
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EXAMINATION PRACTICE FOR WRITING SKILLS PAPER 1 AND PAPER 2 SECTION B
In these sections of the examination papers you are asked to choose, one, from a variety of
written tasks. Each task asks you to write for a particular purpose and a particular target
audience.
On paper one the purpose is to persuade, argue or advise and on paper two the purpose is
to inform, explain or describe.
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Key tips for writing task success.
� Plan your answer taking purpose and audience into consideration. (e.g.
formal/informal, for adults or teenagers etc.)
� Structure your writing clearly using appropriate:
o layout
o paragraphing
o topic sentences or connectives to act as signposts, especially at the beginning of
paragraphs
� Use a variety of sentence types and lengths such as:
o short and simple for impact
o longer lists for description or examples
o complex sentences with subordinate clauses in a variety of places: at the
beginning, embedded within the sentence or at the end
o rhetorical questions and exclamations when persuading
� Use a varied vocabulary including:
o varied connectives
o sensory description where appropriate
o interesting and precise verbs, adverbs and adjectives
o varied synonyms
o formal or informal vocabulary as suitable for purpose and audience
� Read back through your work every few sentences as part of your checking
procedure
� Check your grammar such as using “we were” not “we was”
� Check punctuation and spelling very carefully
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Task:
Writing purpose:
Target audience:
Yes
or no
Did I plan my writing effectively?
Did I structure my writing effectively by using appropriate:
o layout?
o paragraphing ?
o topic sentences or connectives to act as signposts, especially at the
beginning of paragraphs ?
Did I use a variety of sentence types and lengths such as:
o short and simple for impact?
o longer lists for description or examples?
o complex sentences with subordinate clauses in a variety of places:
at the beginning, embedded within the sentence or at the end?
o rhetorical questions and exclamations when persuading?
Did I use a varied vocabulary including:
o varied connectives?
o sensory description where appropriate?
o interesting and precise verbs, adverbs and adjectives?
o varied synonyms?
o formal or informal vocabulary as suitable for purpose and
audience?
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Did I Read back through my work every few sentences as part of my
checking procedure?
Did I Check punctuation carefully by:
o ensuring I used capital letters for names?
o ensuring I used capital letters at the beginning of sentences?
o ensuring sentences ended with either a full stop, question mark or
exclamation mark?
o adding apostrophes for:
� omission?
� Possession?
o ensuring I had used commas for:
� lists?
� to mark off subordinate clauses?
o attempting to include sophisticated techniques such as semi-colons,
colons, ellipsis and dashes?
Did I check my spelling carefully?
Did I check my grammar carefully by:
o ensuring I had used “were” and “was” correctly?
o ensuring I had used “there” and “their” correctly?
o ensuring I had used “should have” and not “should of” etc.?
o making sure my tenses were consistent throughout?
GRADE AND
COMMENTS
TARGETS
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Task:
Writing purpose:
Target audience:
Yes
or no
Did I plan my writing effectively?
Did I structure my writing effectively by using appropriate:
o layout?
o paragraphing ?
o topic sentences or connectives to act as signposts, especially at the
beginning of paragraphs ?
Did I use a variety of sentence types and lengths such as:
o short and simple for impact?
o longer lists for description or examples?
o complex sentences with subordinate clauses in a variety of places:
at the beginning, embedded within the sentence or at the end?
o rhetorical questions and exclamations when persuading?
Did I use a varied vocabulary including:
o varied connectives?
o sensory description where appropriate?
o interesting and precise verbs, adverbs and adjectives?
o varied synonyms?
o formal or informal vocabulary as suitable for purpose and
audience?
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Did I Read back through my work every few sentences as part of my
checking procedure?
Did I Check punctuation carefully by:
o ensuring I used capital letters for names?
o ensuring I used capital letters at the beginning of sentences?
o ensuring sentences ended with either a full stop, question mark or
exclamation mark?
o adding apostrophes for:
� omission?
� Possession?
o ensuring I had used commas for:
� lists?
� to mark off subordinate clauses?
o attempting to include sophisticated techniques such as semi-colons,
colons, ellipsis and dashes?
Did I check my spelling carefully?
Did I check my grammar carefully by:
o ensuring I had used “were” and “was” correctly?
o ensuring I had used “there” and “their” correctly?
o ensuring I had used “should have” and not “should of” etc.?
o making sure my tenses were consistent throughout?
GRADE AND
COMMENTS
TARGETS
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Task:
Writing purpose:
Target audience:
Yes
or no
Did I plan my writing effectively?
Did I structure my writing effectively by using appropriate:
o layout?
o paragraphing ?
o topic sentences or connectives to act as signposts, especially at the
beginning of paragraphs ?
Did I use a variety of sentence types and lengths such as:
o short and simple for impact?
o longer lists for description or examples?
o complex sentences with subordinate clauses in a variety of places:
at the beginning, embedded within the sentence or at the end?
o rhetorical questions and exclamations when persuading?
Did I use a varied vocabulary including:
o varied connectives?
o sensory description where appropriate?
o interesting and precise verbs, adverbs and adjectives?
o varied synonyms?
o formal or informal vocabulary as suitable for purpose and
audience?
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Did I Read back through my work every few sentences as part of my
checking procedure?
Did I Check punctuation carefully by:
o ensuring I used capital letters for names?
o ensuring I used capital letters at the beginning of sentences?
o ensuring sentences ended with either a full stop, question mark or
exclamation mark?
o adding apostrophes for:
� omission?
� Possession?
o ensuring I had used commas for:
� lists?
� to mark off subordinate clauses?
o attempting to include sophisticated techniques such as semi-colons,
colons, ellipsis and dashes?
Did I check my spelling carefully?
Did I check my grammar carefully by:
o ensuring I had used “were” and “was” correctly?
o ensuring I had used “there” and “their” correctly?
o ensuring I had used “should have” and not “should of” etc.?
o making sure my tenses were consistent throughout?
GRADE AND
COMMENTS
TARGETS
41
Task:
Writing purpose:
Target audience:
Yes
or no
Did I plan my writing effectively?
Did I structure my writing effectively by using appropriate:
o layout?
o paragraphing ?
o topic sentences or connectives to act as signposts, especially at the
beginning of paragraphs ?
Did I use a variety of sentence types and lengths such as:
o short and simple for impact?
o longer lists for description or examples?
o complex sentences with subordinate clauses in a variety of places:
at the beginning, embedded within the sentence or at the end?
o rhetorical questions and exclamations when persuading?
Did I use a varied vocabulary including:
o varied connectives?
o sensory description where appropriate?
o interesting and precise verbs, adverbs and adjectives?
o varied synonyms?
o formal or informal vocabulary as suitable for purpose and
audience?
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Did I Read back through my work every few sentences as part of my
checking procedure?
Did I Check punctuation carefully by:
o ensuring I used capital letters for names?
o ensuring I used capital letters at the beginning of sentences?
o ensuring sentences ended with either a full stop, question mark or
exclamation mark?
o adding apostrophes for:
� omission?
� Possession?
o ensuring I had used commas for:
� lists?
� to mark off subordinate clauses?
o attempting to include sophisticated techniques such as semi-colons,
colons, ellipsis and dashes?
Did I check my spelling carefully?
Did I check my grammar carefully by:
o ensuring I had used “were” and “was” correctly?
o ensuring I had used “there” and “their” correctly?
o ensuring I had used “should have” and not “should of” etc.?
o making sure my tenses were consistent throughout?
GRADE AND
COMMENTS
TARGETS
43
Task:
Writing purpose:
Target audience:
Yes
or no
Did I plan my writing effectively?
Did I structure my writing effectively by using appropriate:
o layout?
o paragraphing ?
o topic sentences or connectives to act as signposts, especially at the
beginning of paragraphs ?
Did I use a variety of sentence types and lengths such as:
o short and simple for impact?
o longer lists for description or examples?
o complex sentences with subordinate clauses in a variety of places:
at the beginning, embedded within the sentence or at the end?
o rhetorical questions and exclamations when persuading?
Did I use a varied vocabulary including:
o varied connectives?
o sensory description where appropriate?
o interesting and precise verbs, adverbs and adjectives?
o varied synonyms?
o formal or informal vocabulary as suitable for purpose and
audience?
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Did I Read back through my work every few sentences as part of my
checking procedure?
Did I Check punctuation carefully by:
o ensuring I used capital letters for names?
o ensuring I used capital letters at the beginning of sentences?
o ensuring sentences ended with either a full stop, question mark or
exclamation mark?
o adding apostrophes for:
� omission?
� Possession?
o ensuring I had used commas for:
� lists?
� to mark off subordinate clauses?
o attempting to include sophisticated techniques such as semi-colons,
colons, ellipsis and dashes?
Did I check my spelling carefully?
Did I check my grammar carefully by:
o ensuring I had used “were” and “was” correctly?
o ensuring I had used “there” and “their” correctly?
o ensuring I had used “should have” and not “should of” etc.?
o making sure my tenses were consistent throughout?
GRADE AND
COMMENTS
TARGETS
EXAMINATION PRACTICE FOR ENGLISH LITERATURE
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Here are the assessment objectives upon which the mark-schemes are based:
Candidates are required to demonstrate their ability to:
i. respond to texts critically, sensitively and in detail, selecting appropriate ways
to convey their response, using textual evidence as appropriate
ii. explore how language, structure and forms contribute to the meanings of
texts, considering different approaches to texts and alternative
interpretations
iii. explore relationships and comparisons between texts, selecting and
evaluating relevant material
iv. relate texts to their social, cultural and historical contexts and literary
traditions
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SECTION A – SET NOVEL Essay title:
Yes or
no
Did I plan my essay effectively by:
� Underlining the key words in the title?
� Drawing some kind of mind-map, chart or list?
Did I introduce my essay clearly by Referring to key words in the question?
Did I use PEE paragraphs by:
� Making clear points at the beginning of paragraphs?
� Backing up my points with a short quotation or phrase from the novel in quotation marks?
� Explaining how the evidence proved my point?
� For a higher grade, focusing closely on the effect of specific words in the quotation?
Did I comment on the structure of the novel?
Did I comment on the use of language techniques?
Did I suggest different possibilities when interpreting the meaning of the text?
How many times did I refer back to key words in the question?
Did I refer to the social, cultural or historical context of the novel?
Did I write an effective conclusion by: Summarising my main points?
Referring back to the question?
Putting forward my point of view?
GRADE AND
COMMENTS
TARGETS
47
SECTION A – SET NOVEL Essay title:
Yes or
no
Did I plan my essay effectively by:
� Underlining the key words in the title?
� Drawing some kind of mind-map, chart or list?
Did I introduce my essay clearly by Referring to key words in the question?
Did I use PEE paragraphs by:
� Making clear points at the beginning of paragraphs?
� Backing up my points with a short quotation or phrase from the novel in quotation marks?
� Explaining how the evidence proved my point?
� For a higher grade, focusing closely on the effect of specific words in the quotation?
Did I comment on the structure of the novel?
Did I comment on the use of language techniques?
Did I suggest different possibilities when interpreting the meaning of the text?
How many times did I refer back to key words in the question?
Did I refer to the social, cultural or historical context of the novel?
Did I write an effective conclusion by: Summarising my main points?
Referring back to the question?
Putting forward my point of view?
GRADE AND
COMMENTS
TARGETS
48
SECTION A – SET NOVEL Essay title:
Yes or
no
Did I plan my essay effectively by:
� Underlining the key words in the title?
� Drawing some kind of mind-map, chart or list?
Did I introduce my essay clearly by Referring to key words in the question?
Did I use PEE paragraphs by:
� Making clear points at the beginning of paragraphs?
� Backing up my points with a short quotation or phrase from the novel in quotation marks?
� Explaining how the evidence proved my point?
� For a higher grade, focusing closely on the effect of specific words in the quotation?
Did I comment on the structure of the novel?
Did I comment on the use of language techniques?
Did I suggest different possibilities when interpreting the meaning of the text?
How many times did I refer back to key words in the question?
Did I refer to the social, cultural or historical context of the novel?
Did I write an effective conclusion by: Summarising my main points?
Referring back to the question?
Putting forward my point of view?
GRADE AND
COMMENTS
TARGETS
49
SECTION A – SET NOVEL Essay title:
Yes or
no
Did I plan my essay effectively by:
� Underlining the key words in the title?
� Drawing some kind of mind-map, chart or list?
Did I introduce my essay clearly by Referring to key words in the question?
Did I use PEE paragraphs by:
� Making clear points at the beginning of paragraphs?
� Backing up my points with a short quotation or phrase from the novel in quotation marks?
� Explaining how the evidence proved my point?
� For a higher grade, focusing closely on the effect of specific words in the quotation?
Did I comment on the structure of the novel?
Did I comment on the use of language techniques?
Did I suggest different possibilities when interpreting the meaning of the text?
How many times did I refer back to key words in the question?
Did I refer to the social, cultural or historical context of the novel?
Did I write an effective conclusion by: Summarising my main points?
Referring back to the question?
Putting forward my point of view?
GRADE AND
COMMENTS
TARGETS
50
SECTION B – PRE AND POST 1914 POETRY
In this section of the paper you will have a choice of four questions. These questions may have
more than one part to them. In each, you will be required to write about four poems from those you
have studied. Two of these poems will be from the pre-1914 bank and two will be by either
Seamus Heaney and Gillian Clark or Carol Ann Duffy and Simon Armitage.
Carol Ann Duffy – Key Poems
POEM KEY THEME KEY TECHNIQUE KEY LINE
Education For Leisure (Higher and
Foundation Tier)
Havisham (Higher and
Foundation Tier)
Stealing
(Foundation Tier)
Salome
(Foundation Tier)
Anne Hathaway
(Higher Tier)
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POEM KEY THEME KEY TECHNIQUE KEY LINE
Before You Were
Mine (Higher Tier)
Simon Armitage - Key Poems POEM KEY THEME KEY TECHNIQUE KEY LINE
Kid (Higher and
Foundation Tier)
Hitcher (Higher and
Foundation Tier)
My Father
(Foundation Tier)
November
(Foundation Tier)
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POEM KEY THEME KEY TECHNIQUE KEY LINE
Mother any distance
(Higher Tier)
Homecoming
(Higher Tier)
Pre 1914 Key Poems
POEM KEY THEME KEY TECHNIQUE KEY LINE On My First Sonne
(Higher and
Foundation Tier)
The Laboratory
(Higher and
Foundation Tier)
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POEM
KEY THEME
KEY TECHNIQUE
KEY LINE
The Man He Killed
(Foundation Tier)
The Song Of The Old
Mother
(Foundation Tier)
Sonnet 130
(Higher Tier)
My Last Duchess
(Higher Tier)
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LITERATURE POETRY EXAMINATION PRACTICE
Essay title:
Yes or
no
Did I plan my essay effectively by:
� Underlining the key words in the title?
� Carefully selecting appropriate poems to link with the named poems?
� Drawing some kind of mind-map, chart or list?
Did I introduce my essay clearly by:
� Mentioning the poems that I was writing about?
� Referring to key words in the question?
Did I use PEE paragraphs by: � Making clear points at the beginning of paragraphs?
� Backing up my points with a short quotation or phrase from the poems in quotation
marks?
� Explaining how the evidence proved my point?
� For a higher grade, focusing closely on the effect of specific words in the quotation?
Did I compare the poems by:
� Pointing out a similarity?
� Pointing out a difference?
� Using effective connectives and connective phrases?
Did I comment on the use of structural and presentational devices?
Did I comment on the use of language techniques?
Did I suggest different possibilities when interpreting the meaning of each poem?
How many times did I refer back to key words in the question?
Did I write an effective conclusion by:
Summarising my main points?
Referring back to the question?
Putting forward my point of view?
GRADE AND
COMMENTS
TARGETS
55
LITERATURE POETRY EXAMINATION PRACTICE
Essay title:
Yes or
no
Did I plan my essay effectively by:
� Underlining the key words in the title?
� Carefully selecting appropriate poems to link with the named poems?
� Drawing some kind of mind-map, chart or list?
Did I introduce my essay clearly by:
� Mentioning the poems that I was writing about?
� Referring to key words in the question?
Did I use PEE paragraphs by: � Making clear points at the beginning of paragraphs?
� Backing up my points with a short quotation or phrase from the poems in quotation
marks?
� Explaining how the evidence proved my point?
� For a higher grade, focusing closely on the effect of specific words in the quotation?
Did I compare the poems by:
� Pointing out a similarity?
� Pointing out a difference?
� Using effective connectives and connective phrases?
Did I comment on the use of structural and presentational devices?
Did I comment on the use of language techniques?
Did I suggest different possibilities when interpreting the meaning of each poem?
How many times did I refer back to key words in the question?
Did I write an effective conclusion by:
Summarising my main points?
Referring back to the question?
Putting forward my point of view?
GRADE AND
COMMENTS
TARGETS
56
LITERATURE POETRY EXAMINATION PRACTICE
Essay title:
Yes or
no
Did I plan my essay effectively by:
� Underlining the key words in the title?
� Carefully selecting appropriate poems to link with the named poems?
� Drawing some kind of mind-map, chart or list?
Did I introduce my essay clearly by:
� Mentioning the poems that I was writing about?
� Referring to key words in the question?
Did I use PEE paragraphs by: � Making clear points at the beginning of paragraphs?
� Backing up my points with a short quotation or phrase from the poems in quotation
marks?
� Explaining how the evidence proved my point?
� For a higher grade, focusing closely on the effect of specific words in the quotation?
Did I compare the poems by:
� Pointing out a similarity?
� Pointing out a difference?
� Using effective connectives and connective phrases?
Did I comment on the use of structural and presentational devices?
Did I comment on the use of language techniques?
Did I suggest different possibilities when interpreting the meaning of each poem?
How many times did I refer back to key words in the question?
Did I write an effective conclusion by:
Summarising my main points?
Referring back to the question?
Putting forward my point of view?
GRADE AND
COMMENTS
TARGETS
57
LITERATURE POETRY EXAMINATION PRACTICE
Essay title:
Yes or
no
Did I plan my essay effectively by:
� Underlining the key words in the title?
� Carefully selecting appropriate poems to link with the named poems?
� Drawing some kind of mind-map, chart or list?
Did I introduce my essay clearly by:
� Mentioning the poems that I was writing about?
� Referring to key words in the question?
Did I use PEE paragraphs by: � Making clear points at the beginning of paragraphs?
� Backing up my points with a short quotation or phrase from the poems in quotation
marks?
� Explaining how the evidence proved my point?
� For a higher grade, focusing closely on the effect of specific words in the quotation?
Did I compare the poems by:
� Pointing out a similarity?
� Pointing out a difference?
� Using effective connectives and connective phrases?
Did I comment on the use of structural and presentational devices?
Did I comment on the use of language techniques?
Did I suggest different possibilities when interpreting the meaning of each poem?
How many times did I refer back to key words in the question?
Did I write an effective conclusion by:
Summarising my main points?
Referring back to the question?
Putting forward my point of view?
GRADE AND
COMMENTS
TARGETS
58
YEAR 10 ENGLISH EXAMINATION
ENGLISH PAPER 1 SECTION A (READING MEDIA AND NONFICTION TEXTS)
ACHIEVEMENTS 1.
2.
TARGETS 1.
2.
MARK/GRADE
ENGLISH PAPER 1 SECTION B (WRITING TO ARGUE, PERSUADE, ADVISE)
ACHIEVEMENTS 1.
2.
TARGETS 1.
2.
MARK/GRADE
ENGLISH PAPER 2 SECTION A (POETRY FROM DIFFERENT CULTURES)
ACHIEVEMENTS 1.
2.
TARGETS 1.
2.
MARK/GRADE
ENGLISH PAPER 2 SECTION B (WRITING TO INFORM, EXPLAIN, DESCRIBE)
ACHIEVEMENTS 1.
2.
TARGETS 1.
2.
MARK/GRADE
YEAR 11 ENGLISH EXAMINATION
ENGLISH PAPER 1 SECTION A (READING MEDIA AND NONFICTION TEXTS)
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ACHIEVEMENTS 1.
2.
TARGETS 1.
2.
MARK/GRADE
ENGLISH PAPER 1 SECTION B (WRITING TO ARGUE, PERSUADE, ADVISE)
ACHIEVEMENTS 1.
2.
TARGETS 1.
2.
MARK/GRADE
ENGLISH PAPER 2 SECTION A (POETRY FROM DIFFERENT CULTURES)
ACHIEVEMENTS 1.
2.
TARGETS 1.
2.
MARK/GRADE
ENGLISH PAPER 2 SECTION B (WRITING TO INFORM, EXPLAIN, DESCRIBE)
ACHIEVEMENTS 1.
2.
TARGETS 1.
2.
MARK/GRADE
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YEAR 11 ENGLISH LITERATURE EXAMINATION
ENGLISH LITERATURE SECTION A (NOVEL)
ACHIEVEMENTS 1.
2.
TARGETS 1.
2.
MARK/GRADE
ENGLISH LITERATURE SECTION B (POETRY)
ACHIEVEMENTS 1.
2.
TARGETS 1.
2.
MARK/GRADE