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Richart L. DeMier, Ph.D., ABPP and Meredith Veltri, Ph.D., ABPP
May 10, 2019
Columbus, OH 1
Forensic Report Writing
The 41st Annual Forensic Centers Continuing Education Conference
May 10, 2019Columbus, Ohio
Rick DeMier, Ph.D., ABPP
and
Meredith Veltri, Ph.D., ABPP
Brief Overview of the Day
Foundational Ideas Research Findings Conceptual Models Elements of the Forensic Report Avoiding Jargon Matters of Style
Financial Disclosure
I may mention a recent book Rick would receive about $3.50 per book
sold
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A Short ReportThe Defendant is a danger to others (high risk of property offenses and above average risk of sexual offenses). The most appropriate place for treatment in light of his mental disorder and his light of his mental disorder and his potential threat to public safety is in a secure psychiatric facility. The defendant is not competent to refuse treatment, and he should be subject to involuntary treatment.
FoundationalIdeas
Foundational Ideas
Understand your role Be responsive to the psycholegal
questionP t d t th d l i Present data, then draw conclusions
Link your conclusions to the underlying data
Write so you can be understood Tell the truth
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A forensic report is what you think and
Foundational Ideas
what you think and why you think it.
How do you know ?
Foundational Ideas
what you know?
Show your work.
Foundational Ideas
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“The quality of our reports is often the most tangible and visible measure of our professionalism.”
– Appelbaum, K.L. (2010)
“The only time the expert is in complete control of the information that is and is not presented is when writing the report As a result it is when report. As a result, it is when writing a report that one can clearly meet ethical obligations.”
– Otto, R.K., (2009)
High Quality Forensic Practice and Exemplary Forensic Reports These two go hand in hand, but the
presence of one does not always predict the other
It may be impossible to disentangle the y p gquality of one’s practice from the quality of one’s written work
But for purposes of this workshop, we will presume that you already have a high quality forensic practice
This workshop focuses on report writing
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A Silly ArgumentArgument
Functions ofForensic ReportsForensic Reports
Communicating One’s Professionalism
The report is the first impression The report communicates the expert’s
commitment to comprehensiveness, clarity and objectivityclarity, and objectivity◦ Stands in stark contrast to testimony
May refer to report during testimony
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Framing the Questions
Considerable latitude No single “right” format Examiner can choose an approach that
b f h i i di d best frames the issues in dispute, and . . . Facilitates presentation of their work in a
persuasive manner
Communicating Efficiently
The report documents:◦ The focus of the evaluation◦ Assessment techniques used◦ Data gathered and considered◦ Opinions formedp◦ Underlying reasoning
Sometimes retaining attorneys do not want a written report, for these very reasons:◦ They do not want experts to communicate what they
did to opposing counsel, or◦ They do not want experts to commit to opinions
they formed.
Memorializing the Evaluation
Reports are far more likely to provide the bases for decisions than testimony
The report stands alone as the enduring and tangible evidence of the results of the evaluationevaluation
Wettstein (2005): “A window into the forensic evaluation”
Over time, examiners misremember or forget
The report commits to paper details that would otherwise be lost to memory
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Complying with Legal Requirements
Know legal requirements for reports in your jurisdiction
Ohio Administrative Code 5122-29-07
Forensic Evaluation Service:◦ An evaluation resulting in a written expert opinion regarding a
l l i f i di id l f d b i i l d i legal issue for an individual referred by a criminal court, domestic relations court, juvenile court, adult parole authority, or other agency of the criminal justice system or a Ohio Department of Mental Health and Addiction Services (OhioMHAS) operated regional psychiatric hospital.
Complying with Legal Requirements
Each forensic evaluation report shall include:◦ Expert name and qualifications
◦ Name of the court or agency that referred the person
◦ Legal or referral question
◦ Identifying information including relevant clinical, social, criminal history (emphasis added)history (emphasis added)
◦ Duration and location of interview
◦ Description of collateral information
◦ Psychological/psychiatric data that addresses the legal issue
◦ Opinions and recommendations
Complying with Legal Requirements: OAC
Report shall be in non-technical terms and reasonable detail
Data shall be pertinent to the legal or referral question
Relevant collateral described to fullest extent possible
Opinions shall not be based entirely on self-report when collateral is available
Reports shall contain sufficient information to substantiate conclusions
Special caution for self-incriminating statements, information about those not being evaluated, or other material of a sensitive, personal nature not related to the issue for which the evaluation was requested
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A Note About Relevance…
Ohio Rules of Evidence, Rule 401:◦ “Relevant evidence” means evidence having any
tendency to make the existence of any fact that is of consequence to the determination of the action more or less probable than it would be without the evidence.
A data point is relevant when it leads you toward or away from an opinion
Committing to Opinions
While writing, the examiner must◦ consider all the information made available◦ identify key pieces of data◦ resolve or explain inconsistencies in data◦ form opinions that are relevant to the matter
This could be done without writing, but ... The very process of writing requires the
examiner to synthesize and integrate data and opinions, and rectify and explain inconsistent and contrary data.
Anticipating Testimony
Forensic reports provide the foundation for later testimony
Attorneys often look to the forensic report as the “starting place” for developing their as the starting place for developing their examinations of the expert
Even with careful preparation of testimony, the attorney is still likely to rely heavily on the structure of the report to shape the structure of anticipated testimony
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ResearchFindingsFindings
Data
Data
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aka:The SkeemThe SkeemDissertation
Skeem and Golding, 1998
Skeem and Golding identified three fundamental deficits in competency reports:◦ Failure to address competency-related
abilities◦ Failure to describe reasoning◦ Failure to use “forensically relevant
methods of assessment”
Skeem and Golding, 1998Failure to address competency related abilities
Most reports discussed foundational abilities, but not “the higher-order decisional capacities that lie at the heart of the ‘rational’ language of the Duskyof the rational language of the Duskystandard”
Doing so requires a contextual approach
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Skeem and Golding, 1998Failure to describe reasoning
Examiners’ conclusions can be organized into three categories◦ Defendant’s psychopathology◦ Competency-related abilities and deficits◦ Competency-related abilities and deficits◦ The link between the impairments and the
legally relevant deficits
Skeem and Golding found these crucial connections to be variable and poorly substantiated
Skeem and Golding, 1998Failure to use forensically relevant methods
Many reports used traditional clinical methods to answer psycholegal questions
Even when forensic assessment Even when forensic assessment instruments were used, none of the reports in the sample “detailed a concrete relationship” between test results and the relevant psycholegal abilities
Skeem, Golding, Cohn, & Berge, 1998 Experts coded reports to reflect report
content in 11 global psycholegal domains and 31 nested subdomains
When a defendant was considered impaired in a domain, experts judged the degree to which the report’s author linked the ppsychopathology to the identified deficit
Descriptions of the relationship were coded along an ascending hierarchy◦ Absent (no description)◦ Implied (by examples or quotes)◦ Asserted (without support)◦ Substantiated (with specific supporting data)
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Skeem, Golding, Cohn, & Berge, 1998
Found adequate description of reasoning regarding clinical findings . . .
. . . but poor description of reasoning regarding psycholegal conclusions◦ 34% of reports described no relationship p p
between impairment and psycholegal abilities◦ 36% asserted a relationship existed without
providing support for that contention◦ Only 12% discussed competency-related
abilities in the context of the specific demands of a defendant’s case
Practical Implications of Literature
An essential element of forensic reports is the description of the functional abilities of the person being evaluated, and the explicit link between clinical findings
d th h l l f l tiand the psycholegal referral question Ultimate Issue Issue: A red herring
ConceptualModels
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Grisso's Six Principles(Grisso, 2008)
1) Let the forensic question drive, guide, and limit the content of the report◦ To do this, you must understand what makes the
report forensic, and how it differs from other types of clinical reports
Grisso's Six Principles(Grisso, 2008)
2) Report what is necessary – Do notreport what is not necessary◦ Decide what is relevant to the psycholegal
question◦ Be able to justify inclusion and exclusion on the
basis of relevance◦ The amount of detail necessary will vary
Grisso's Six Principles(Grisso, 2008)
3) Sequence and describe information in a way that makes sense to the reader◦ Arrange information in a manner that will be Arrange information in a manner that will be
easy to follow◦ Adjust the structure of a report as necessary to
accomplish this◦ Use language your audience will understand◦ When writing, think about potential testimony
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Grisso's Six Principles(Grisso, 2008)
4) Separate facts from inferences and opinions◦ Facts can be verifiedFacts can be verified◦ Inferences and opinions reflect what is suggested
by the facts at hand◦ The inferences and opinions should be clearly
linked to the facts which support them
Fact/Inference Example It may be a fact that, after police were called to
a domestic dispute during which a husband held a knife to his wife’s throat and accused her of helping the CIA poison his food, she stated she wanted him removed from the home and jailedA i f h h f d f h An inference that the woman feared for her safety is supported by this fact
A conclusion that the man met the criteria for involuntary hospitalization is a psycholegal one, supported by such facts and inferences
Inferences and opinions should be clearly linked to the facts which support them
Grisso's Six Principles(Grisso, 2008)
5) Explanations involve showing why you think what you think◦ A large part of forensic work is education –
that's the natural role of an expertthat s the natural role of an expert◦ It is incumbent on the examiner to be as
transparent as possible◦ Help the reader see through your eyes◦ Connect the dots – How, specifically, did you get
from the facts to the conclusions?
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Grisso's Six Principles(Grisso, 2008)
6) Explain your rejection of other possible opinions and conclusions◦ Demonstrate that you were alert to, and actively
id d l i h hconsidered, alternative hypotheses◦ Explain why your data best supports your
conclusion◦ Explaining rejected ideas is an essential part of
the process of arriving at an opinion◦ Be transparent in your thinking
Structure of theF i R tForensic Report
It’s like a Rorschach
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Structure of the Report Grisso: Let the forensic question drive,
guide, and limit the content of the report For a report to be effective, there needs
to be an organizational structure that imposes coherence on the work as a imposes coherence on the work as a whole
There should be some reasonable logic to the sequence in which information is presented
There are several proper ways to structure a report
Melton et al. on Structure “Factual information and descriptive
material based on clinical observations and other procedures should be presented separately from the theoretical and inferential formulations h l k h l l d h l l that link the clinical data to the legal
referral question, with the former presented first.”
“This organization allows the clinician to ‘build’ a case, organizing the investigative data in a manner that invites the reader to reason along with the author.”
You are a Tour Guide
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Structure of the Report
Be free to vary the structure of your report as necessary to enhance the effectiveness of your communication◦ A very short report might not require y p g q
headings◦ In a complicated case, consider a section
early in report which summarizes opinion◦ Subheadings can make long reports less
cumbersome
Templates – AdvantagesCan help ensure the inclusion of all
necessary informationCan structure and guide reportsCan be especially useful for
d i th i k th t i t t reducing the risk that important information will be left out of a report
Can also guide decisions about how to sequence the presentation of information
Templates – Disadvantages
Can become beholden to template
Can decrease the amount of th ht th t i t d i i thought that goes into decisions about presentation and sequencing of information
May increase risk of inclusion of irrelevent information
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Elements of the F i R tForensic Report
Common Elements Referral Information Notification Sources Historical Information Behavioral Observations/Hospital Course Psychological Testing Diagnostic Formulation Response to Specific Psycholegal
Questions
Referral Question
This is the place to clearly state the
forensic purpose of the report
What is the psycholegal question?
How did it come to pass that somebody p y
wanted to know what you thought?
What legal standard did you employ in
responding to the question?◦ Cite statute if appropriate
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Referral Question
Include some identifying information◦ Name◦ Age◦ Case NumberH h d d?◦ How much do you need?
Cite the relevant statute or psycholegal standard
Notification
Understand the difference between consent and assent
Describe your explanation of the notification process, as well as the defendant's responsedefendant s response
ORC 2945.371 (J) No statement that a defendant makes in
an evaluation or hearing under divisions (A) to (H) of this section relating to the defendant's competence to stand trial or to the defendant's mental condition at the time of th ff h d h ll b d i t th the offense charged shall be used against the defendant on the issue of guilt in any criminal action or proceeding, but, in a criminal action or proceeding, the prosecutor or defense counsel may call as a witness any person who evaluated the defendant or prepared a report pursuant to a referral under this section.
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However… ORC 2945.39 Expiration of Maximum Time for Treatment for
Incompetency (2) On the motion of the prosecutor or on its
own motion, the court may retain jurisdiction over the defendant if, at a hearing, h f d b h f h f ll b l d the court finds both of the following by clear and
convincing evidence: (a) The defendant committed the offense with which the defendant is charged. (b) The defendant is a mentally ill person subject to court order or a person with an intellectual disability subject to institutionalization by court order.
However… ORC 2945.39
(B) In making its determination as to whether to retain jurisdiction over the defendant, the court may consider all relevant evidence, including, but not limited to, any relevant g ypsychiatric, psychological, or medical testimony or reports, the acts constituting the offense charged, and any history of the defendant that is relevant to the defendant's ability to conform to the law.
NotificationMore detail is better Poor: “The limits of confidentiality were
explained.” Better: “The nature and purpose of the
evaluation were explained, as were the limits of confidentiality. The defendant acknowledged those issues and appeared to understand them”those issues and appeared to understand them.
Even Better: “I explained the nature and purpose of the evaluation were explained, as well as the limits of confidentiality. The defendant attended to the explanation and asked relevant questions. He demonstrated his understanding of the information by explaining it in his own words at various points throughout the evaluation.”
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Future Use of Forensic Reports Federal government and many states have
rules about how competency and sanity reports may or may not be used
Most preclude their use as evidence of guiltB f f d h l d◦ Bifurcation of death penalty proceedings
This is an important component of informed consent
However, few reports indicate whether this component was explained
Notification inDeath Penalty Cases Go overboard in terms of a detailed
explanation Carefully explain the potential uses of the
report, including the potential for you to p , g p ybe called at sentencing, should the defendant be found guilty.
Example: “Although his statements cannot be used to prove the case against him, I explained there is no similar protection against the use of his statements at sentencing, should he be convicted, if he were to raise his mental state as an issue.”
Defendant’s Response
Many reports indicate that informed consent was obtained, but they do so in a very perfunctory manner:◦ “The defendant consented to proceed.”
What is often missing is an adequate description of◦ The defendant’s reaction and understanding◦ An explanation of your conclusion that it was
sufficient◦ How do you know what you know?
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Sources of Information Include all sources◦ Interviews◦ Collateral contacts◦ Psychological testing◦ Documents reviewed◦ Documents reviewed
Organization is key Level of detail is a matter of style◦ Some people count time and pages◦ But there are reasonable arguments for not
doing so
Include Missing Sources
Document sources of information you requested or tried to access, albeit unsuccessfully
This demonstrates good faith and gappropriate practice
This documents that efforts were made to perform a comprehensive evaluation
Acknowledge any resulting limitations of opinions
Implications for Credibility
Be transparent and identify the sources of key data upon which opinions rely
The reader of the report can then make an independent judgment about the credibility p j g yof the expert’s factual foundation
The reader of the report can determine the amount of weight to be afforded to opinions based on that foundation
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History
“Including in the report pejorative or embarrassing information that is irrelevant to the legal issue may demonstrate a completeness of the interview but it does so at the cost interview, but it does so at the cost of the client’s dignity.”
– Griffith et al., 2010
“Just the facts, Ma'am”
Historical section is a place for reporting factual information.
Be specific about the source of your facts. Attribute as much as possible to the source.
Impressions of others are appropriate for the historical section: “Clinicians at the state hospital described him as entitled and narcissistic.”
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Why are histories overinclusive?
Concerns about appearing comprehensive That is how we are trained Legal mandates; concerns about admissibility
of the opinionof the opinion Institutional policies
Behavioral Observations
Even more so than the background information section, the behavioral observations section lays the foundation for your conclusions regarding current mental status and diagnostic formulation. What did you see during the evaluation that led you to your conclusions?
Behavioral Observations
Behavioral observations are especially important in establishing malingering when the defendant's inconsistent behavior supports that conclusion.
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Psychological Testing
Psychological testing is an easy area to fill with jargon Jargon: A few words used to represent very complex
ideas “Significant elevation,” “Supplemental validity scales”Significant elevation, Supplemental validity scales
People other than psychologists sometimes ascribe magical power to “test results”
People believe psychologists can use testing as an x-ray of the mind to reveal a person’s most carefully guarded desires, motivations, deceptions, and other secrets
Psychological Testing
Present the rationale for each test and describe its function◦ Brief discussion of the purpose of each
testA k l d li i f h ◦ Acknowledge limits of each test
◦ Be mindful to test security Write a rationale for the tests you
chose in a manner that is accessible to legal professionals
To do this, you need to understand the tests you are using
Psychological Testing Should you offer test by test descriptions or “integrate” all test data?
We overestimate our abilities to integrate data
A test by test approach allows you to A test‐by‐test approach allows you to inform the reader regarding what tests and results are linked to which data or interpretations
A test‐by‐test approach leaves the psychologist less vulnerable to reporting only data consistent with the opinion
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Psychological Testing Report any deviations from standard
assessment procedures . . .◦ . . . Especially when the deviation can affect
test validity◦ Transparency enhances credibility◦ Transparency enhances credibility
Acknowledge that test results do not translate into psycholegal opinions
Report all test results Frank and non-defensive discussion of
data contrary to one’s opinion enhances credibility
Psychological Testing Should you report scores? If so, which ones?◦ What is the context of the evaluation?◦ Are the scores important within that context?◦ Will the scores be understood by the reader?y
Test scores are jargon There does not seem to be a consensus in the field
Readers may ascribe inaccurate information to specific results
But some circumstances demand specific scores
Psychiatric Medications Psychiatric? Psychotropic? Neuroleptic? Identify◦ The type of medication (antidepressant,
antipsychotic, medication to address potential side effects)G ◦ Generic name◦ Trade name◦ Dosage
The antidepressant medication sertraline (Zoloft), 100 mg daily
Specifically note long-acting medication
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Diagnoses are Jargon
More important than a diagnosis is the rich description of the person’s cognitive, emotional, and behavioral functioning at and around the time of interestThi i h i f i h i f l This is the information that is of value to those who seek the assistance of a forensic examiner
A narrative description of an examinee’s clinical condition is likely to be much more helpful than a diagnostic label
Consider Alternative Hypotheses
In many cases, more than one diagnostic possibility is considered
Clinicians typically go through a process of considering differential diagnosesDi i di i ibili i ll Discuss competing diagnostic possibilities, as well as your reasons for favoring one over the others
Be transparent in revealing why you chose one particular diagnosis instead of another, especially when the issue is a close one
Response to Psycholegal Question
Ideally, there will be no surprises here Lay out your data first, then draw inferences Logically explain your interpretations and
opinionsopinions Make your thinking transparent◦ So the reader knows not only your opinion, but
also how you reached that opinion
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Psycholegal Opinions
Some reports explicitly acknowledge that the determination is a legal one.
Do you need to identify your opinion as an opinion? Or can this be assumed?opinion? Or can this be assumed?
There are reasonable arguments on both sides of this issue
Relevancy‐Focused Format
Inspired by Reid Meloy
Proposed by Terry Kukor for Netcare
More efficient reports
◦ Typically shorter – a consequence not a goal◦ Typically shorter – a consequence, not a goal Focused narrowly on referral question
Format is similar to a legal brief
Positive feedback from referral sources
Relevancy‐Focused Format: Major Sections Reason for Evaluation Notification Evaluation Procedures and Data Sources◦ Data requested but not obtained◦ Adequacy of the data◦ Reliability of the defendant (e.g., presence or absence of impairment in ability to report data)
Forensic Opinion Data and Findings upon which Forensic Opinion is Based◦ Each issue is addressed individually
Data Not Consistent with Opinion
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Relevancy‐Focused Format: Addressing the Issues State the Issue – What’s the question?
State the Opinion – What’s the answer?
Support the Opinion – What are the data?
Forensic Analysis What do the data mean Forensic Analysis – What do the data mean for the legal question?
Relevancy‐Focused Format: Supporting the Opinion Information organized by source
◦ Self‐report◦ Mental status/Behavioral observation
◦ Collateral information
◦ Psychological Testing/Forensic Assessment Instruments
Example: Issue: Evaluation of whether the defendant
has a severe mental defect Opinion: It is my opinion that the
defendant does/does not have a severe mental defect.
Data Considered: This opinion is based upon the following:◦ Self-reported History:◦ Mental Status:◦ Collateral Information:◦ Psychological Testing:
Forensic Analysis:
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WordChoiceChoice
First‐Person or Third‐Person?
Neither is incorrect Some people think third-person writing is
haughtier and harder to read Others think first-person writing is too Others think first-person writing is too
colloquial and thus unprofessional Find a style that is comfortable for you◦ But first-person language is strongly
recommended!
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Referring to the Examinee
Use of formal language is recommended: Mr., Ms., Dr., etc.
Referring to the examinee by the first name seems inappropriately familiarpp p y◦ “Jeffrey” Dahmer, “Jodi” Arias
Use of first names with children is recommended◦ Shortly before the accident, Ms. Tompkins
graduated from kindergarten.
Word Choice Matters
Finding exactly the right word to convey your meaning can be worth the effort
Vary your words to maintain interest in the reportp◦ Avoid repetitive patterns◦ This can be challenging when struggling to
attribute all statements to sources◦ One possible solution is to organize by sources
Avoid Words with Prejudicial Connotations
Think about individual words and the connotations they carry◦ Admit◦ Deny◦ Deny◦ Maintain◦ Alleged◦ Refused
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Some Least Favorite Phrases
“appeared his stated age” “dressed in prison garb” “oriented times three” “suffers from” suffers from “rule out” “reasonable psychological certainty”
Reasonable Psychological Certainty
Some argue that the origin of this phrase is that it is a threshold issue◦ This is the degree of certainty required for the
opinion to be admissible
The trouble is its inclusion in reports and testimony as a matter of course
Consider Poythress’s 1983 article
Some of Lilienfeld’s least favorite words and phrases
Lilienfeld, S. O., Sauvigne, K. C., Lynn, S. J., Cautin, R. L., Latzman, R. D., and Waldman, I. D. (2015). Fifty psychological and psychiatric terms to avoid: A list of inaccurate, misleading, misused, ambiguous, and logically confused words and phrases. Frontiers in Psychology, Published online 2015 Aug 3. doi: 10.3389/fpsyg.2015.01100
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Some of Lilienfeld’s least favorite words and phrases
“Scientific thinking necessitates clarity, including clarity in writing.”
“An insistence on clarity in language forces d hi k d l d f ll students to think more deeply and carefully
about psychological phenomena, and serves as a potent antidote against intellectual laziness, which can substitute for the meticulous analysis of concepts.”
“Clear writing fosters clear thinking, and confused writing fosters confused thinking.”
Some of Lilienfeld’s least favorite words and phrases
Chemical imbalance Gold standard Acting outActing out And 47 more worth reading
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Trouble SpotAvoiding Jargong J g
Double Meanings Some words that mean one thing in
common usage and something far more exact and behaviorally grounded in psychology◦ Depression◦ Obsession
Report authors should recognize that unless the scientific meaning of such words is articulated, the readers will naturally resort to the meanings they know
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How to Avoid Jargon
Use plain English◦ Never use words like utilized or verbalized;
used and said will work just fine
When you must use technical terms, carefully define them
Explain terms and concepts in common-sense language and use examples
Plain English
• My mother never said, “Utilize your napkin!”• Parents do not instruct children, “Don’t
verbalize back!” My patient did not “demonstrate My patient did not demonstrate
tearfulness.” He cried. Pirates never made anybody “Ambulate the
plank.”
Explaining Technical TermsDevelop a repertoire of explanations for common terms
◦ Oriented◦ Form of
thought/Content of thought
◦ Delusions◦ Grandiosity◦ Paranoid Ideation◦ Affectg
◦ Tangential◦ Positive
Symptoms/Negative Symptoms◦ Hallucinations
◦ Affect◦ Suicidal Ideation◦ Suicidal Gestures
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Form and Content
Helpful way to explain elements of thought disorders. The form of one’s thoughts refer to how they think. Impairments in the form of thought include tangentiality, g g ycircumstantiality, disorganization, clanging, etc. Content of thought refers to what they think. This may reflect symptoms such as hallucinations and delusions.
Positive and Negative Symptoms
Psychotic symptoms are categorized as positive and negative. Positive symptoms refer to experiences that are present, but should not be, such as experiencing p ghallucinations or holding false beliefs. Negative symptoms refer to the absence of normal human experiences, such as the spontaneous production of thought or the experience of a full range of emotions.
Delusions
False beliefs which persist even in the face of contradictory evidence. For example, he appears to believe that his employer is a part of a vast and well-organized conspiracy intent g p yupon preventing him from becoming President of the United States.
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Trouble SpotIncriminating Evidenceg
Incriminating Evidence
There is a time to discuss the defendant’s statements about the offense-related behavior. That time is after the defendant has put his mental state at issue.p
Understand the risks associated with revealing this information prematurely.
The 1991 Specialty Guidelines Forensic psychologists “exercise extreme
caution in preparing reports . . . prior to the defendant’s assertion of a mental state claim.” They “avoid including statements y gfrom the defendant relating to the time period of the alleged offense.” (VI.G.1)
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Professional & Other Public CommunicationsSpecialty Guidelines for Forensic PsychologySection 11.04
“Forensic practitioners are encouraged to limit discussion of background information that does not bear directly upon the legal y p gpurpose of the examination or consultation. Forensic practitioners avoid offering information that is irrelevant and that does not provide a substantial basis of support for their opinions, except when required by law.”
Estelle v. Smith451 U.S. 454 (1981)
The Supreme Court decision limits the use of competency evaluation results only to the competency issue
Incriminating evidence may well be produced during a competency evaluation
Avoid “fruits of the poison tree” in your report (and perhaps even in your notes)
Miscellaneous StuffStuff
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Changing Completed Reports Forensic examiners are sometimes asked to edit or
change reports they have already submitted. Attorneys make such requests for a variety of
reasons◦ Sometimes the request comes because of errors the
report writer made – ranging from typos to report writer made ranging from typos to misstatements of facts, such as dates or events◦ Sometimes the request is in response to concerns that
information in the report is unfairly prejudicial or otherwise inappropriate
But, some requests are an attempt to get the report writer to exclude facts or change opinions that are to the disadvantage of the requesting party
Changing Completed Reports Little has been written about this issue Relevant forensic practice guidelines do not
specifically address it However, be careful Such practice might violate the general ethical Such practice might violate the general ethical
obligations of objectivity and fairness These obligations preclude a report writer from
rewriting the report to exclude facts or opinions that are not helpful to the party making the request (almost always the retaining attorney)
Changing Completed ReportsChange the report if it contains errors
or data that are otherwise inappropriate (e.g., incriminating statements made by a defendant during statements made by a defendant during a competency examination, particularly sensitive irrelevant information)
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Changing Completed Reports In the interest of transparency,
document, in some way, that changes were madeA ti “fi l” t i h d Anytime a “final” report is changed, a copy of the first version should be retained – this provides a measure of transparency that is important in forensic settings
Appendix A:Flesch Kincaid Flesch-Kincaid Ratings
Flesch-Kincaid Ratings Flesch Reading Ease and Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level
ratings are a means to measure the reading level which corresponds to what you have written
Easily accessible via Microsoft Word Target ranges:◦ Flesch Ratings of 40-50◦ Flesch-Kincaid Grade levels of 9-11
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Flesch-Kincaid Calculations in Word
How to Enable Flesch-Kincaid Readability Statistics
Click the “Office” buttonCli k “W d Click “Word Options”
How to Enable Flesch-Kincaid Readability Statistics
Select “Proofing”
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Your screen will look like like this. Let’s zoom in.
How to Enable Flesch-Kincaid Readability Statistics
These two boxes must be checked
How to Enable Flesch-Kincaid Readability Statistics
You cannot check Show readability
i i statistics unless Check grammar with spelling is checked
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How to Enable Flesch-Kincaid Readability Statistics
Click “OK”
How to Use Flesch-Kincaid Readability Statistics
Click “Review”
Click “Spelling & Grammar”
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A box will appear titled “Readability Statistics” Let’s zoom in
How to Use Flesch-Kincaid Readability Statistics
Pay attention to the FleschReading EEase score
Pay attention to the Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level
The Formula for theFlesch Reading Ease Score
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Appendix B:Common ErrorsCommon ErrorsCommon report-writing errors among those applying for board certification
Common Errors Identified in Practice Samples Grisso, T. (2010). Guidance for Improving Forensic
Reports: A Review of Common Errors. Open Access Journal of Forensic Psychology Journal of Forensic Psychology.
Available at www.abfp.com/certification.asp under heading “Guidance for Improving Forensic Reports”
Common Errors Opinions without sufficient explanations – 56%◦ Major interpretations or opinions were stated
without sufficiently explaining their basis in data or logic (regardless of whether the report’s data could have supported or sustained the opinion)
Forensic purpose unclear – 53%◦ The legal standard, legal question, or forensic
purpose was not stated, not clear, inaccurate, or inappropriate
Organization problems – 36%◦ Information was presented in a disorganized
manner (usually without a reasonable logic for its sequence)
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Common Errors Irrelevant data or opinions – 31%◦ Data and/or some opinions included in the report
were not relevant for the forensic or clinical referral questions
Failure to consider alternative hypotheses – 30%D t ll d f lt ti i t t ti hil ◦ Data allowed for alternative interpretations, while report did not offer any explanations concerning how they were ruled out
Inadequate data – 28%◦ The referral question, case circumstances, or final
opinion required additional types of data that were not obtained or were not reported, and for which their absence was not explained in report
Common Errors Data and interpretation mixed – 26%◦ Data and interpretations frequently appeared together
in a section that reports data Over-reliance on a single source of data – 22%◦ An important interpretation or opinion relied wholly
on one source of data (often self-report) when corroborating information from multiple sources was corroborating information from multiple sources was needed
Language problems – 19%◦ Multiple instances of jargon, biased phrases, pejorative
terms, or gratuitous comments Improper Test Uses – 15%◦ Test data were used in inappropriate ways when
interpreted and applied to the case, or tests were not appropriate for the case itself
Appendix C:The Four C’sThe Four C s
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The Four C’s
The Four C’s of Effective Communication Source: Kwartner, P., & Boccaccini, M.T.
(2007). Testifying in court: Evidence-based recommendations for expert-witness ptestimony (pp. 565-588). In R. Jackson (Ed.), Learning forensic assessment. New York: Routledge.
Recommendations for testimony, but with applications to reports
The Four C’s
Credibility Clarity Clinical Knowledge Certainty Certainty
The Four C’s: Credible
Logical, informed, wise, educated, scientific (Knowledgeable)
Truthful, trustworthy, honest, dependable, reliable (Trustworthy)( y)
Self-assured, well-spoken, confident, poised, relaxed (Confident)
Kind, friendly, pleasant, respectful, well-mannered (Likeable)
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The Four C’s: Clarity
Experts who communicate in a clear, comprehensible, and non-technical manner are more persuasive than those using complex terms and jargon p j g
An example from medicine: Jurors prefer experts who use terms such as “cancer of the breast” compared to those who testify about “infiltrating ductal carcinoma”
The Four C’s: Clinical Knowledge Judges and jurors prefer expert witnesses who
focus on clinical, as opposed to scientific, issues in their testimony
This appears to be related to lay expectations about the process most “doctors” follow when
k d b lmaking decisions about people People expect doctors to meet with and talk to
patients, and resort to use of specialized tests or procedures only when necessary
Even when doctors use tests, people expect the doctor to make a clinical decision based on the test results
The Four C’s: Certainty The ability and willingness to draw firm
conclusions is a desirable quality in an expert Attorneys view tentativeness as the
characteristic they most dislike in an expertB t i l fi l i lik l t b But, excessively firm conclusions are likely to be viewed with distrust, given the limits and uncertainties inherent in nearly all areas of science
This is consistent with our obligation to acknowledge limits of our opinions
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Appendix D:Trouble SpotTrouble SpotCommon Grammatical Errors
Common Grammatical Errors
“At a basic level, misspellings, typographical errors, and poor grammar suggest carelessness, if not a lack of respect for the reader Submitting a report that has these reader. Submitting a report that has these faults could be compared to submitting an amicus brief that has ketchup stains on it.”
– Appelbaum, K.L. (2010)
Common Grammatical Errors
Confusing word pairs◦ Accept and Except◦ Affect and Effect◦ Compliment and Complementp p◦ Comprise and Compose◦ Discrete and Discreet◦ Inferred and Implied◦ There, Their, and They’re◦ . . . and many more
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Common Grammatical Errors Apostrophes◦ Use for possessives◦ Use for contractions (But only use contractions in quotations)
◦ Its and It’s The contraction of it is is it’s The possessive of it is its, with no apostrophe “The drawback of the test is its high false positive
rate. It’s a significant drawback.”
◦ Worst I ever saw: Red delicious’ apple’s
Common Grammatical Errors Tense Consistency An important consideration for forensic
reports Choose the appropriate tense deliberately Tense may appropriately varyTense may appropriately vary◦ Past tense for prior conduct◦ Present tense as indicated in quotations: “Patient is complaining about side effects of
medication.”
◦ Future tense for predictions Defendant will remain competent if . . . Suicide risk will increase in the event that . . .
Writing Resources
The Elements of Style by Strunk and White The Gregg Reference Manual Purdue OWL (Online Writing Lab) Grammar Girl Grammar Girl
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