These logos are original logo ideas for our production company. Helen said she liked the top left one better than any of the other ones. This meant this is the logo we were going to use. Helen is a member of our target audience so her opinion was important to us. I however listened Helens feedback and created my own logo. I decided to call my production company Red Lemon as this name was very different to other production company's and it really grabbed attention of people in my target market when I asked them. Helens feedback really helped me in the production of my new logo. Without it I would of struggled to create a good production company logo. Something Dan said in his feedback really caught my attention. He said it was good that the film logo featured red. I took this feedback and put it into my production company logo “Red Lemon. When I ask other people what they think of the Red Lemon logo, they much prefer it to the New World Productions one. This means the audience feedback from Helen worked very well for me.

PRODUCTION COMPANY LOGO FEEDBACK

FILM LOGO FEEDBACKDan’s feedback was very helpful for me individually and as a group. One of the aspects about the first logo that Dan didn't like was the computer in the background. As Dan is a member of our target audience I thought it was a good idea to scrap the computer and just have the text. If you look below you can see how the logo has changed. One of the features Dan liked on the origional logo was the red blood as he thought it suited our genre. However, I decided to scrap this and change the text. I thought having a red hash tag in the middle of my logo would really suit my genre. This makes the hash tag part the horror aspect of the logo which is also true in my film. The social media aspect had to be portrayed in the logo some how and having it red shows the horror aspect of the logo. Dan’s feedback really helped me go from my origional logo to my new logo. Without Dan (a member of my target audience) I would have really struggled to go from my origional design to my new one. This shows how much audience feedback does for the design aspect to a project. Conor said he really liked the origional logo. I asked him to compare the two logos below and he was shocked at how weak the logo on the left looked compared to the logo on the right. This is why it sometimes good to ask more than one person.

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PLOT FEEDBACKEmily’s feedback was very helpful for us. It made us change some of the aspects of the plot because of some of the things she had said could be better. Emily is a member of our target audience so we thought it would help us if we listened to what she said. Emily said one of the factors she didn't like about our plot was the death scene. She believed as the tormenting happened online, there is no reason for the death to take place in school. She thought it was unrealistic. This meant we had to change it somehow. We made the school the set for when Scott was bullying Nathan and the park the setting for when Nathan murdered someone. After we did this we asked Emily about the changes we made. She believed that this was much more realistic as parks can be scary places so it suited the scene much better. Also, she thought that the school is the perfect place to film bullying scenes. Having Emily’s feedback throughout the time we were writing the plot helped us a lot. Without this information we may have made the wrong decisions about props, characters and settings used. Having someone from your target market was very effective for us and helped us massively over the course of the time it took us to write this plot.